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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey LM another brilliant piece of writing 😊
Loved Martha and RV conversations 😆
Thnk god ranveer HV a motherly figure to advice him wisely rather than amba dhikro typstyps 😕
Loved ur descriptn of snowfall 😛 snowfall r certainly so gud.
Ur chp acts like a balm compared to current torture of CV throwing CID in aashiqui.
Sry to ask BT when is d next updateupdate 😉
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dvprt418.py

Hey LM another brilliant piece of writing 😊
Loved Martha and RV conversations 😆
Thnk god ranveer HV a motherly figure to advice him wisely rather than amba dhikro typstyps 😕
Loved ur descriptn of snowfall 😛 snowfall r certainly so gud.
Ur chp acts like a balm compared to current torture of CV throwing CID in aashiqui.
Sry to ask BT when is d next updateupdate 😉
Tc




Thank you so much dear! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️



Martha was always the motherly figure that I wanted IshVeer to have. 😳😳 And I'm happy that you enjoyed the snowfall description. 😛😛



I always find it overwhelming when you all find this story as a relief from the tedious track 😆😃



I'll try to update as soon as I can. Though the update will be a little late this time. So my most sincere apologies in advance.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey LM... nice update... 👏 👏
ur title was most most apt... it did revealed lot of secrets... Martha herself is owner of library... 😲 😲 never thought something like this but it was a good revelation... bt why she used his vote... 😲 😲.. bt now hopefully they r getting it back so future seems good... 😊 😊

Martha's past is really really painful... and the worst part is she wanted to reconcile with David but couldn't... she rightly said that she could see her mirror image in Ishani... these two idiots are about to repeat her story bt thankfully they got support from the three saviours... 👏 👏...
loved ranveer and marthas conversation in the end... their mutual understanding is really out of this world and the way he said.."You should never have waited in the first place."...wowww... u know ur story is making me to believe in this...

and ishveer last scene was beautiful... they certainly changed a lot... bt daredevil..seriously... 🤣 🤣
Ishani's description of snow suits him quite well... u wrote it so beautifully...
waiting for next... update soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Riya and MM, I'll try to update this by today. 😆😆 Sorry for the delayed update though.
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Originally posted by: NidsJ

Hey LM... nice update... 👏 👏

ur title was most most apt... it did revealed lot of secrets... Martha herself is owner of library... 😲 😲 never thought something like this but it was a good revelation... bt why she used his vote... 😲 😲.. bt now hopefully they r getting it back so future seems good... 😊 😊

Martha's past is really really painful... and the worst part is she wanted to reconcile with David but couldn't... she rightly said that she could see her mirror image in Ishani... these two idiots are about to repeat her story bt thankfully they got support from the three saviours... 👏 👏...
loved ranveer and marthas conversation in the end... their mutual understanding is really out of this world and the way he said.."You should never have waited in the first place."...wowww... u know ur story is making me to believe in this...

and ishveer last scene was beautiful... they certainly changed a lot... bt daredevil..seriously... 🤣 🤣
Ishani's description of snow suits him quite well... u wrote it so beautifully...
waiting for next... update soon...

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Thank you so much, dear! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked the chap. ⭐️⭐️
Yep, Martha being the owner of the library was a pretty good surprise na? 😉😉 But I'm glad that you liked it. 😛😛 Regarding why she used Ranveer's vote, I'd mentioned this in response to the same question earlier that she was unaware about the actual consequence of the library getting shut. Shwas under the impression that turning the library into a monument would only help heighten the rich history of the library and on a personal note, it was a highlight for her unsung love story with David. It was only once the decision was out did she realize what she had actually done. 😕😕
Yep, that was pretty much why she did connect with Ishaani so much. I think it was during the third chapter that I'd written that Martha and Ishaani were women who shared a similar past (ie. before Ranveer again returned back to Ishaani's life). 😛😛 So, I'd pretty much planned this in advance. 😆😆 And yes, these three people are the voices of reason in IshVeer's life.
This conversation was something certainly very interesting for me to write as well. That line was actually an indicator to what Ranveer has been through personally, so he could relate to David pretty easily. 😛😛
Yep, that scene was actually playing out before my eyes. 😳😳 They have indeed changed a lot, but as I say, some changes happen for the best. 😃😃 That daredevil thing was ROFLROFL
And I'm glad that you liked the snow description. It was certainly one of the most unique things I've written so far. 😳😳
I'll try to update the next chapter either by today or tomorrow. Sorry for the delayed update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 43: Traditions of Modern Christmas

A/N: Hey there everyone! :D :D Here's the next update. :D

Happy Reading! :D :D

Ishaani opened her eyes, cuddling herself deeper into her blanket as she felt the chilly weather make her shiver. Slowly slipping out from the bed five minutes later, she looked at the time and realized that she'd overslept by a margin of two hours, the time being 9am. Quickly putting on her slippers, she made her way to the washroom, while Ranveer still slept on, snoring softly.

Changing herself into a warm pullover and a pair of jeans, she descended down the stairs after fifteen minutes and gasped. The house had been transformed whole. The house now had the appearance of a magical castle, icicles covered here and there on the ceilings, while green and red streamers ran throughout the several different panels of walls, baubles hanging from them beautifully. A large Christmas tree stood in the center where the sofas and armchairs would usually be, and the tree was sumptuously decorated with baubles and candy sticks, while several gifts stood below.

Ishaani could only look about the place in awe as she wondered what beauty the living room would hold in the nighttime.

She looked around the place and saw Martin hurriedly entering the house, rubbing the palms viciously against the other to get heat. He saw Ishaani staring around the living room in awe and spoke softly.

"You like it, madame?"

"Martin, this is stunning!" Martin let the colour creep up in his face and smiled at Ishaani sweetly. The latter smiled before her brows furrowed up in confusion. "But when did you do this?"

"Once everyone went to bed. Its our Christmas tradition. The other helpers and I quickly put about the decorations once everyone is off to bed and make sure to have it all done by 3 in the morning. It works as a surprise in the morning." Ishaani looked impressed and spoke again, awe evident in her voice.

"What about the manpower?"

"I divide the helpers in 5 groups of 8 people each. We manage to get the job done in unison." ishaani chuckled and Martin grinned.

"You make this sound like the elves helping Santa Claus."

"Something like that, yes." Ishaani shook her head and Martin spoke happily. "Wait till you see all the other rooms as well." Ishaani looked bewildered before her eyes widened in surprise.

"Other rooms?"

"Why yes, madame. All the rooms are decorated. Except for your and monsieur's room." Ishaani looked stunned before she whispered excitedly.

"Martin, this is amazing! I mean, really, this is just... wow!" Martin smiled at Ishaani enthusiasm.

"Madame, you are being most kind. Would like to see the igloo and the snowmen?" Ishaani mouth fell in a perfect 'O' and she questioned with childish excitement.

"We have an igloo and snowmen!? Show me!"

"Very well, madame. Just put on an extra pair of gloves. It's really chilly outside." Ishaani quickly rushed up to her room and put on the extra pair of gloves, making sure that Ranveer's sleep was undisturbed. Descending quickly to reach Martin, who was waiting for her by the door side, she smiled at him and he lead her out to the garden.

The garden was exactly the same with it's sheet of blanket snow, except that now a huge igloo stood in the between and Ishaani couldn't help but admire the craft with which it was built. Around it stood three snowmen like sentinels, and Ishaani chuckled whole heartedly. Walking close to the snowmen, she realized that they were dressed identically, with an old maroon overcoat covering their bodies partially, while a mauve hat stood on their heads. A carrot sufficed for the nose, while buttons were arranged vertically over the body. Two twigs were used as hands and two gigantic buttons made for eyes. A smile was carved on all the three snowmen, so that they actually looked welcoming.

"Martin, this is indeed magical!"

"I'm glad that you liked it, madame." Ishaani gave Martin and bear hug and exclaimed gleefully.

"Liked it? I love it! But you must tell me Martin, who started this tradition?"

"Actually, it was I, madame. You see, as a kid, I was always handed the responsibility of decorating the whole house single-handedly. My Roi's house was just as big as this one, so I'm accustomed to it. On my first Christmas with monsieur, I decorated the house without asking monsieur. I was most afraid that monsieur would get angry, but it was the first time I ever saw him have a genuine smile on his face. It was then that I mentally decided that this tradition was to stay."

"Yes. Ranveer always liked things like these." Martin nodded and continued happily.

"Every year, I would be rewarded by monsieur's heart-warming smile. There was nothing more important to me than that. This will be my fourth Christmas with monsieur, and still his face remains the same shocked and mystified one each time he sees the decorations, as though he had indeed travelled into a magical land. Ofcourse, this year he has you. I've seen monsieur smile like that nearly every day since you've returned back into his life and its treat enough for me and Claudine. And given that this is your first Christmas with us, I thought it a befitting way to introduce you to our Christmas tradition." Ishaani looked touched and spoke softly, her voice filled with emotion.

"Martin, thank you."

"For what, madame?"

"For being family." Martin smiled and the two of them made their way back to the house. Ranveer had just descended the stairs and yawned softly, looking about the place in fascination. Seeing Martin and Ishaani, Ranveer smiled.

"Gee Martin, you've outdone yourself this time." Martin gave Ranveer an embarrassed look. He was about to reply when Claudine entered the hall, a huge smile on her face.

"Mon cher, c'est magnifique!" Martin walked over to Claudine and hugged her, kissing her head. Ishaani noticed that Martin and Claudine were already dressed up for their shopping tour and Martin confirmed her assumption.

"You ready?" Claudine nodded her head and Martin turned to look at them. Ranveer smiled innocently and spoke.

"It's alright, Martin. Go. We'll manage get started then." Ishaani nudged Ranveer and he coughed softly. "I mean, we'll be alright. Martha will be coming over for lunch." Claudine snorted while Martin shook his head.

"Monsieur, Claudine and I should be back from the shopping by 4 in the afternoon."

"Alright, but make sure you buy the kids some awesome clothes." Claudine and Martin smiled and left the house, while Ranveer and Ishaani heaved a sigh of relief. Ishaani turned to look at Ranveer and slapped his shoulder.

"What on Earth were you up to? You'd have spoilt the whole plan!" Ranveer rolled his eyes at her and waved his hand airily.

"I said that on purpose, so that they don't doubt us and give us extra time." Ishaani narrowed her eyes dangerously.

"Ranveer-"

"Oh come now, lets not debate and argue over this. It's Christmas Eve!" Ishaani understood the dropping of the matter and sighed. Ranveer smiled at her and pulled her into a hug. "So tell me, how did you like this?"

"It's brilliant! Why didn't you tell me about this before?"

"Well, I wanted it to be a surprise. Its how we celebrate Christmas. 24th at home and then 25th in the igloo."

"Seriously? The igloo?"

"Yeah. Sounds insane, but its fun. What about you? Do you have any specific tradition?"

"Yeah. I spend every Christmas with the children of the orphanage. It feels good." Ranveer nodded at her understandingly and Ishaani looked hesitant. "I've been meaning to ask you this. Will you accompany me to the orphanage this year? For the full day?"

"But I-"

"I know that, sweetheart, but I can't. Those kids look forward to seeing me every year. I can't disappoint them. But I can't disappoint you either." Ishaani noticed Ranveer's crestfallen face, which he quickly camouflaged a moment later.

"It's alright. I don't like breaking my pact to Martin and Claudine either, but I don't see what can be done either." Ishaani shook her head.

"No Ranveer. I know what this means to the three of you. It's alright. You don't need to break your promise. I guess, we won't be able to celebrate it together afterall." Ranveer gave Ishaani a lost look before speaking.

"Maybe. Maybe not." Ishaani looked at him and smiled sadly.

"Want to have lunch in the igloo?" Ranveer smiled at her and replied gently.

"Sounds good."

Martin and Claudine returned back in the afternoon and the house was taken into a storm with the shopping bags. Their dampened spirits improved by their lunch in the igloo, Ranveer and Ishaani now involved themselves completely over the clothes the Martin and Claudine had brought for the babies and smiled, Ishaani cooing over some of the outfits, while Ranveer smiling stupidly away.

Ranveer and Ishaani had both managed to convince Martin and Claudine to buy the other paraphernalia of the babies later on and managed to spend the next three hours deciding and debating on what would be the gender of the babies. The conversation proved to be both fruitful and useless, as Ranveer and Claudine ended up betting over the gender of the babies, Ranveer saying that it was to be two girls, while Claudine stating that it would be two boys.

Tired of the debate, Ishaani and Martin moved ahead to decide the names of the babies, but that didn't prove too helpful either. Finally wrapping up everything and making their way to their respective rooms, the four of them came back for dinner, while the helpers served them a sumptuous meal. Martin made to get up to serve, but Ranveer pulled him down to the chair, his eyes a clear message to Martin.

After dinner, the four of them were enjoying desserts, sitting on the sofa set that was not placed to the corner of the living room, when Ishaani heard several children shouting and talking excitedly. Keeping her plate of Strawberry Shortcake aside, she quickly got up and walked towards the living room, before she was swarmed by several children at one time.

It took Ishaani a moment to come to terms with what was happening before she realized that they were the children from the orphanage. All the children came and hugged her in swarms, while Ishaani smiled at them lovingly. Looking towards the door, Ishaani saw Ranveer talking to the dean of the orphanage and smiled, tears brimmed in her eyes.

She quickly kissed the children and directed them to the dining room, making them all sit down and having the helpers serve them dinner. Ishaani mentally thanked her stars that the dining room was spacious enough to accommodate 70 children in one go. She helped the helpers serve the food, Martin and Claudine now helping her out. She sighed contentedly seeing the children eat, before she saw Ranveer leaning against the door post and giving her a loving look. She slowly walked up to him, her mind still in a daze.

"Ranveer, how did you-"

"I figured that we needed to build a new tradition. Besides, there's nothing better than having children home for Christmas. Lots of children. The dean was happy enough to give the children a new atmosphere for the day. She has also given me a list of things that needs to be taken care of but I figure that you'll manage to do that. After all, I did get the kids home on the part assurance and I would take care of them and partly because, well, you are my wife." Both of them smiled in common understanding before Ishaani remembered something.

"But what about-" Ranveer got the gist of what she was asking him and cut her politely.

"Oh don't worry. Luckily for us, the kids range from between 5-15 years old. So we can accommodate three per room. For the smaller ones, we can have four sleep together. We do have above twenty rooms ready and well decorated."

Ishaani walked up to him and pulled him away from the dining room. She looked at him teary-eyed before he hugged him tightly, Ranveer holding her closely to him. He could make out that her voice was shaking with emotion and could feel her body shaking slightly in giddy happiness.

"Thank you."

"Always." Ishaani nodded her head on her shoulder and pulled herself apart so that their head touched each others'. Ishaani kissed him on the bridge of his nose before she whispered back.

"So, can we fit in the igloo tradition tomorrow? Just the four of us?" Ranveer nodded his head happily, before he smiled.

"Oh yeah, we can fit that up certainly."

Phew! :D Got this done at long last! :D I know this update isn't that good, so my apologies in advance. :( Sorry for the late update though. :( :(

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D

Edited by LadyMeringue - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey LM, what a beautiful way to celebrate Christmas! Loved it thoroughly! Loved Ranveer for being such an understanding husband! But of course our Ranveer has always been like that! ain;t?

What beautiful chapters u write... Why don't the CVs take a cue from you and give us some such scenes instead at the crap that is being thrown at us all the time!

Edited by fan.matsh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey LM this as fantastic 😳 😳 😃 Just loved it ! I really loved how the celebrated cristmas and Ranveer 's gesture was just Really loved it , it was really a cute chapter 😳 😳

Please update the next one soon 😳 😳 Big hug 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
The first thing I want to ask is that why our dear couple were sleeping till 9 AM?? Snow affect or highly active nights? 😆

Martin-Ishaani totally giving me bro-sis feels, young shy bro and proud old sis type.

Its Christmas ! tbh I never celebrated it, my place is more about a month worth of Durga puja holidays and weekend of new year 😆 but i want to, hopefully in near future. The decoration description felt like I was there in mansion, Ishaani and RV was so happy.

The moment Ishaani mentioned orphanage I knew RV going to bring the kids to mansion, and he did just that. So considerate.


Can we get a scene where RV and Ishaani buy baby clothes/baby thing for M-C ?? Please???

Waise so not related to FF, but it's only a place where I can rant . . . I don't get onscreen Ishaani at all!! After talking to Devarsh ( I guess ?) she finally realized RV can't be Ritika's baby's dad? wth? Did she honestly think earlier there was a possibility of that? After the talk she was seven shades of guilty to hurt RV? where did her 'sacrificing epic love for god knows whose greater good' leave now? Now she's actually contemplating while earlier Baa was shouting on top of lungs to not go ahead with marriage. The angst just increased tenfold and for no reason! Hmph!

Update soon and thanks for pm.

Riya
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Originally posted by: fan.matsh

Hey LM, what a beautiful way to celebrate Christmas! Loved it thoroughly! Loved Ranveer for being such an understanding husband! But of course our Ranveer has always been like that! ain;t?

What beautiful chapters u write... Why don't the CVs take a cue from you and give us some such scenes instead at the crap that is being thrown at us all the time!




Thank you so much, dear! I'm so glad that you liked it.😃😃 And yes, our Ranveer has always been like this - compassionate and understanding, putting other people's needs above his own. 😛😛


And thank you for your kind words sweetie.⭐️⭐️ I'm happy that the chapters can bring a smile on your face. 😳😳

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