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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: --abha--
Wow!! Such an amazing ss...
Finally read it all ...omg u gave us 4 stories and I am addicted to all...
Kya karun ab wait kaise hoga...
Raman ka reaction uska character uski feelings sab janana h...abhi tak its all about ishu...

Raman ishu se pyar karta h? How will he take this? Who was kidnapper?
Waiting
Last part amazing yar...go ishu go show power of love...

Update soonish
Sry for late comment.
Thanks for pm

Glad you liked it 🤗
Kidnapper... Villain...sab baad mein..
An just focus on IshRa ☺️

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Hi Kutties... 😊

Here goes the next part...

Not proofread so ignore errors...

Chapter-3

I KEEP FALLING

"I keep falling...
I keep falling for you...
Like the rain fall...
Like a cannonball...

I was trying to take your heart...
Keep it in a cardboard box...
So when it gets hard...
You'll never be far...
And your love won't be lost..."

It has been three days since Raman gained consciousness. He is yet to know that he cannot walk. He thought that it is because of the weakness that he is not being able to move.

Ishita was there leaving all other business; beside his bed. She was thinking of ways to disclose to him about his condition. But then his soft smile...how can she smear that handsome face with a wry shadow! She not only kept mum but also didn't let anyone spit it out. She wanted to make him strong enough to face the hard times.

She picked up her mobile and washed her face making it look divine in freshness. He was ogling at her. He found himself confused of whether this Goddess is his in real!

"Raman...I need to meet the doc. Till then I'll ask the nurse to check on you", she said in a straight face.

"I don't want anyone else to check on me!" He said in his sexy huskiness.

She leaned over him and pecked his lips softly and replied, "I won't let someone even if you want Mr Bhalla..."

"How rude...!" He exclaimed making a puppy face.

In a puzzled tone, Why...for not letting other..."

Cutting her short, "No...but for that CHEE...KISS...!"

Astounded by his reaction, "You're sick...! You can't manage..."

With a smirk, "You're challenging Raman Kumar Bhalla..."

Softly in bits and pieces, "No...It's just that...I care...for you. Maybe...you won't be able to hold me...anymore..."

Chuckling at her thinking she is being dramatic "Let me get well soon. I'm gonna scoop you up in my arms and dance..."(flirtingly) "Till morning..."

"As the bridges fall apart...
I still find a way to cross...
And even if you are lost among the stars...
Your love won't go off..."

She couldn't find any way to hide her tears but in his bare chest. Huggjng him tight she cried her heart out. He was confused. Why is she behaving weirdly? What went wrong? Why a strong headed woman like her is crying...? While the questoons flowed in his mind, he patted her back to calm her down. She nuzzled her head on his chest causing her nose and lips brush him. He wriggled making her part from him and look at him accusingly.

"You always feels ticklish...everywhere! What is this Raman? How can I manage to hug you if you react like this?"

With a confused face he stammers to reply, "It is not that...! But...I'm feeling strange...like...I'm sorry but...I don't know if there is something wrong with me...or...I...Your touch...it...is not making me...feel it in the way I used to...feel...I..just...am not able to...to...feel...I...think..."

That's when she realised it. How long she will hide it. She stood up thinking how to handle him and uttered stammeringly, "Maybe because...I was not...close enough! Well...let it be...now I should go see the doc. Bye. I'll be here in ten.

She literally ran out there from his quizzical stare. He surfed the TV when Ishita receded from his sight.

BREAKING NEWS
RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA PARALYSED

The top business aura Raman Kumar Bhalla got paralysed after the fatal accident by his fiancee and business partner Miss Ishita Iyer. Now we got the report that The Bhalla empire will be under control of Miss Iyer who is not even leaving the hospital showing her concerns. But what we couldn't figure out is whether it is fake or real. The ongoing incidents clearly stands against Miss Iyer and we are not able to reach her to get a response...

When Ishita entered the room, she saw Raman staring at the TV; still and hard like a stone. She shifted her eyes to see some random news going on. But when the BOLD FLASHING NEWS caught her sight she closed her mouth with her palm and strode to him.

Tensely, I can explain Raman..."

Sternly, "I...don't want to hear anything..."

Hastily, "Please...you are OK...We are OK! And please don't believe the media...They are lying. I'm not trying to snatch your wealth...But you. I'm snatching you from everything...just trust me.."

Whispers to himself, "I know...I know you won't do anything unethical. And I did saw how hardworking you are..."

Sighing a relief, "Oh Raman...you scared me. I thought...you're gonna lash at me...fight...and will ask me to leave you..."

Looking at her, "No...I'm not asking you to leave...but..." Creasing his eyebrows, "why you're still with me?"

Casually, "Because I Lov..." Stops and continues after letting out an imaginery cough, "I mean...you're my would-be husband...I've the rights to nurse you...care for you..."

Angrily spites back, "I don't want a deva to be my maiden. I can find someone else!"

Shocked, "What the hell that means Raman?"

Infuriated, "Means I want you to leave me alone..."

In a strong tone, "Is it because you found that you are paralysed...that you cannot walk or satisfy my s*xual needs Raman?"

Beating on the bed with his fisted hand, "YES DAMN IT...! Can't you see? I'M NOT WORKING...! I'M NOT MOVING...!" Breaking down, "I...I...can't do anything on my own..."

Sat beside him and took his hand in hers, "Let me help you Raman...Let me be the one to do it all...I can't let you go...It is not physical always...It's not...I can't make you understand because I myself don't know what this new feeling is...I was on the edge of losing you...forever...But you see...YOU'RE STILL WITH ME! It's enough...just enough for me...Please don't ask me to leave...I can leave everything for you...I...I'll resign my post and will be with you...Just let me...What should I do Raman..to show you that YOU MEANS MY WORLD...!

"For me me me me it's in this...
But I need need need more of this...
Can't turn away, feel it push me...

Showing indifference and evading eye contact not to let her know what he feels, "Ishitaa...This is not some serial to do all these drama. Store it for someone else. And I know you won't mind leaving me at all as per your character!"

Ignoring his mention, "Say anything Raman...But I won't leave you at any cost. Because you know me well so do I. You know that I've never gone overboard with my ex. You know you're the first one who'd had me...And I DARE...YOU WILL BE TILL MY LAST BREATH!"

"I can feel you take my love...
And tangle it above the ground...
And if the strings are cut...
Nothing holds me up...
Nothing takes me down..."

FLASHBACK
NIGHT AT RAMAN'S ESTATE

Raman brought Ishita there after a conference. He had sugested of spending the night in a hotel but she refused it politely expressing her wish to stay in his estate bunglaw. It was an exclusive one with antique archetecture. Inside was an elegant hall covered in crystal. The glittering interior with a dim greeny-bluish lighting made it so romantic. Raman was enjoying Ishita's expressions seeing the same. After freshening up they talked sitting in the living room for a while and decided to call it a day.

"Why don't we share the same room?"

He was shocked out of his wits to hear her asking him to make love to her in an innocent tone but by a not so innocent question or suggestion. "Are you out of your mind Ishita?"

Why...? You won't be able to resist this sexy woman beside you?" She enquired running her fingers tracing his face.

"I really don't want to resist at alll...!"

With that he pulled her by her waist to him and took her in a soul stirring kiss tasting her in fulsome. Scooping her up in his arms he came to his room. They did share the night in the same room. She didn't seemed shy in front of him. But his touches did make her go red all over. She was a willing and sincere partner for him in every business; this was not exception.

"When I try to fall for from your candlelight...
I get lost in your maybe maybe...
I'm just falling...
When I try to hide from your love...
I can't deny with maybe maybe...
It's just my calling..."

He thought it is because of not having s*x for a long time that made her eyes go moistened. He was making out swiftly as he thought she is used to such intimacies. She didn't object him but let him have his way in her.

He was very well aquainted with the woman in Ishita through the media. And the way she talks boldly, made him confirm her flirty nature. Only thing he knew was for the time being she won't leave him. Because it is their family's decision. But the dampness felt on his thigh was a blow out of the blue. He never in his dreams thought that he wil be the first man to touch her. That was the moment he really meant his words to her on the other day, YOU'RE MINE...ONLY MINE

******FLASHBACK ENDS******

"Please let me be with you Raman...We can make everything fine...TOGETHER...Just...let me be with you..."

"I keep falling...
I keep falling for you...
Like the rain fall...
Like a cannonball..."

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Edited by Gaya3sb - 10 years ago

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Abi

@imabinaya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Wow...emotional..

Well written👏

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Gaya Ishu try not to tell him till he strong enough but fade had it own way. So he know from the media. From flashback it shown how they be together and it her first time that made him happy. From this point of truth i feel like Raman will change completely fro =m nice sweet guy to be stone heart guy and rude and tough for Ishu. he know this is the accident right hope he will not think it Ishu plan.Emotional plus suspense update please continue. Thank for the PM dear.🤗

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Phir se socha Kuch aur aur nikla Kuch aur 😉 I wish I could say that 😆 any ways super update what should I say I don't have words yar teri tareef karte karte sab Sahabd khatam ho Gaya 😉 thanks for pm

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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Sushma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Omg amazing..

humesha twist late ho..

ur too good gayatri ..

Please update soon

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janani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Brilliant work kanna:-D
some where raman is also doubting her?%-)
ishita in true sense ready to accept him ...she love him..she allowed him to touch her and she share her everything;-):-P:-(:-/:->

she is bold...raman is the first man to touch her.:-O:-O
Then y cant he trust her:-P

he is yelling ishita dnt act like a daily soaps:-@what he is doing ?he is also acting like same like ishita:->
IS HE TESTING HER?OR HE TRUSTING MEDIA?

Now he will change as a stone heart man and rude ,revenge and all...
This update is incomplete...i think so:-(

hoping for next update to disclose who is the master mind plan in raman's accident %-)%-)%-)

thanks for pm:-)

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Sonal

@...Forever...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

It was an awesome update di...

Very well written...

Emotional...

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abha

@..abha..

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Amazing yar...
But still confused
I think update need more words...
Basically raman pov...

But liked ishita boldness and her love...
She is standing by him and thats gr8...

But such a chotu update...
Update soonish
Update others too...

Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago