ch52 pg 124 - hate me today, love me tomorrow 2

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#441

Originally posted by: riaka
Omg both confessed. It's not a dream right.
Loved the update. Please continue soon 👏

Hmmm😉

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#442

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
Welcome back
I'm glad that you're feeling better

Wow!!! this chapter warm my heart😊

I am so happy for RagNa

Raghav was giving Kalpi what she asked for even though the thought of Kalpi leaving him kill him slowly. Kalpi getting all worked up seeing her Raghav in pain was awesome

I love that moment they spend before Kalpi asked Raghav if he mean what he said...

Aww Raghav was so happy that his Kalpi don't want to leave him😆

Superb update. I love it

Oh and I reread all the edited chapters and they are all amazing

Thank you :)

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: Jaz_
Welcome back! Glad you're doing well. I know how tough it is to recover from a pesty back (been there!).

Excellent update!!!!!! I re-read all the chapters yesterday to refresh myself since it's been a while and I sort of lost the plot. This FF is truly outstanding. Waiting on the next update, at your leisure of course😊

Thanks it is quite an emotional ff.

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Priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#444

FUZZZ! Welcome back!!!! love the chappy a usual! Kalpi is really amazing and strong in all ur ff's! Loved it when she says it coolly that she didnt want to leave him!

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premap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#445

lovely update. Thanks. Reread the whole story as I lost touch with this story. Missed out for sometime. Well written.

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Nisha VS

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Posted: 10 years ago

#446

Awesome update loved it. but too short 😕.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#447

Chapter 39

Ragav places a hurried peck on Kalpi's forehead and quietly leaves their bedroom not wanting to wake her from her sleep. Being a light sleeper, Kalpi stirs from her sleep, calling out as Ragav reaches the door, "don't leave without having breakfast. Wait up... I am coming."

His hand on the door knob, he stops, turns, his gaze filled with pride and love as he watches his six month pregnant wife walk towards him... Caressing her womb, she looks at her womb and says, "good morning."

He moves to the side, letting her pass, his fingers automatically tucking the loose strands of hair behind her ear, says, "you grow more beautiful with each day." His hand resting on her womb, love shining in his gaze, he says in a voice filled with emotion, "I love you so much."

Laughing, she pushes his hand away, walking towards the kitchen, says, "you have a meeting you can't miss... Come have breakfast." Grinning sheepishly, Ragav follows after her.

Suddenly he drops to the floor, his chest hurting... His head hurting... Perspiring profoundly... Ragav quickly loosens his tie and opens the collar button of his shirt, gasping for air... he shouts out for Kalpi. Panicking as darkness takes over.

Kalpi rushes over to him, engulfing him in a hug, panicking...not sure what to do... All she knows is she needs to hold him... As the minutes go by... he calms down... The darkness disappears... The pain disappears... They remain in the same position... Him resting his head on her lap... And she caressing his head. Trying to sound strong, Kalpi says, "the attack is over... Phew." Ragav responds by taking her hand into his. Kalpi continues, "Ragav please see a doctor. I couldn't bear it if..."

Turning around, seeing the worry in her eyes, Ragav says reassuringly, "Kalpi nothing can harm me. With you by my side... I am invincible." He tries to stand up, but Kalpi holds him back, saying, "don't go." "Kalpi I have an important meeting," Ragav responds. Shaking her head, not letting go of his hand, she repeats, "don't go."

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Ragav rushes home excited, he could not believe that he had missed the momentous moment. His daughter had come to the world two weeks early. His Avantika... Avni in short... Chuckling he strides out of the lift and along the corridor, as he recalls Kalpi muttering over the phone last night, "how was I to know our little angel is in a hurry to meet her papa."

Balancing a huge bouquet of flowers and teddy in one hand, he unlocks his front door. Suddenly he drops to the floor... Chocking... Gasping for air... Panic settling in at the ferocity of this attack. Unable to call for Kalpi... Ragav's heart cries out against the darkness that takes over... No... No... I need to see my wife and daughter...

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A girl sneaks into her bedroom when she notices her mother is occupied. Unfolding a worn out photograph. Tears fall as her eyes thirstily takes in the image of the man who broke her heart to a thousand pieces. To the man who never loved her nor cared for her. To the man she had lost her heart and soul to. To the man her heart called husband. When and how she had given him this title, she didn't know. All she knew was that her heart had chosen him. Worried that her mother would walk in, she quickly completes the rituals of Karva chauth. Breaking her fast in his name as she quietly prays for his long life.

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"Welcome back to the land of the living, Mr Singhania," a nurse calls out, smiling as she notes down his vitals. Disoriented, his heart heavy, he asks, "where am I?"

P.s: anxiously waiting for feedback.

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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sweet1308

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Posted: 10 years ago

#448

Awesome update

Wow rag get attack n his daughter is here

Update soon

Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

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Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#449

Omg what the 😲 rags has problems kalpi had a dtr what happened? 😕

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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Jaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#450

OMG!! Raghav didn't get to meet his baby nor Kalpi and Kalpi thinks Raghav ditched her?!?!😲. Did Raghav go into a coma? Seems like when he fainted years has passed by as the daughter I assume has grown up. Heartbreaking! The thought of their separation, misunderstandings cropping up about each other's absences ...emotional 😭. You can't leave us hanging at such a point...Please another update? Anxiously waiting what happens! this chapter was a complete surprise ...didn't see it unfold this way at all. Also I noticed you showed time progression in your story (i.e. Kalpi being pregnant), any reason for it? Just curious. Hope you're not wrapping up this ff (or am I reading to much into it 😕).

Thanks for the update!

Edited by Jaz_ - 10 years ago

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