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Gisel

@Gisel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Ok! I started reading this...halfway through part 2...and can't control my smile...I'm supposed to be studying...if they see me with such a grin in my face, I'm screwed...hoping to read it soon...

One big doubt...if this is a aggregate of many vijay tv serials, shouldn't it be in "Vijay More Serials" Forum? Just asking :P

Good work Sush! & Abi too...

Solla mudiyathu, enum 15 minutes la full aiyum vasthu, next comment kuda poturupein! :P

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Gisel
Ok! I started reading this...halfway through part 2...and can't control my smile...I'm supposed to be studying...if they see me with such a grin in my face, I'm screwed...hoping to read it soon...
One big doubt...if this is a aggregate of many vijay tv serials, shouldn't it be in "Vijay More Serials" Forum? Just asking :P

Good work Sush! & Abi too...

Solla mudiyathu, enum 15 minutes la full aiyum vasthu, next comment kuda poturupein! :P

Whoa that's a surprise !! 😃

Thanks for your comment Gisel 😛

Ha ha ha ... Exams first... But glad you liked it so far... 😉

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Gisel
One big doubt...if this is a aggregate of many vijay tv serials, shouldn't it be in "Vijay More Serials" Forum? Just asking :P

We actually never thought about that... Until you mentioned it now... 😛

Well... First of all, we were never really familiar with that forum when we started the story...

Besides... there is more audience here only right... 😉

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Gayathri30
Inga eppo update?

Soon soon... 😛 (If you know the meaning of our 'soon'... 😆)

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Sutham appo na next year innu sollu😛

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Part 8 -

FYI : All parts are created with equal contribution from Abi and me!

-- All the friends were having a good time, that too now that everyone became friends with each other on New Year's Eve... --

-- Everyone was standing outside, just chatting... --

Bala : Dei... Nee ellam ennada Kadhal mannan? Oru ponna pesa theriyudha unnaku?

Vishnu : Ama ivangalluku Aishwarya rai , Kareena kappor,, Priyanka chopra nu girlfriend nu list vechi irukkanga paru...

Bala : Dei dei avangallam en range ku vara matanga da...

Vishnu : appdi partha un range ponne kedaikkadhe da... Vazhakka full ah bramachariya ve vazha vendiyadhu dhan...

Karthik : Dei dei... 11:58 pm aagudhu da... Two minutes left...

Janani : Hey super... Let's have a countdown from 10 and ore time la Happy New Year sollalaam...

All : Deal..

Vishnu : Here it starts... 1O... 9... 8...

Karthik : 7... 6... 5...

Azhagar : 4... 3... 2...

All three : 1!!!!

"Happy New Year!!!!!"

-- All start giggling about the countdown and enjoy the fresh moments of the New Year... --

-- After a while... --

Raji : Okay Guys... Naan kelamburen... Veetula wait pannuvaanga...

Lakshmi : Yeah, late aaiyuduchu... We should get going...

Dhivya : Hmm... we are leaving too... Vidhya polaama? Haripriya enga?

Haripriya : Inga dhaan irukken... Come let's go...

-- The boys come there... --

Vishnu : Enna pa ellarum kelambiyaacha?

Janani : Amaa pinna ingaye irukka solriyaa?

Vishnu : Ada yarara indha ponnu? Ippa parthallum counter kudthukitte irukku... Nee ellaru kittaiyum ippdi dhana illa enkitta mattum ippdiya?

Janani : Nallavangallta nalla vidhama dhan nadanthupen... Silla loosu kitta dhan ippadi pesuven...

Vishnu: Oh... Appdiya... kk...

Karthik : Dei ava unna dhan da loosu nu sonna...

Vishnu : Adinga... Ena enna partha loosu nu sonna?

Janani : Unna parthu dhan da loosu nu sonnen...

Vishnu : Seri pona pogudhu nu manichi viduren...

Janani: Naa unkitta manipuu kekkave illaye...

Vishnu : Irunthalum naanga manippom... Engaluku andha aalvu periya manasu irukku...

Lakshmi : Shabbahhaaa... Mudiyala... Late ayiduchu kellambalam...

Azhagar : Ama ivangal vitta ippdiye pesikitt poyiduvanga... namba kellambalam...

Vetri : Naaliku college la parkkalam... bye...

Azhagar : Ama ippadi povinga?

Vetri : Idhu enna kelvi? Eppadi vandhomo, appadi dhaan povom...

Azhagar : Unna poi ketten paaru... Enna sollanum... Sari sari... Naalaikku paarpom...

Karthik : Bye bye...

-- Everyone leave happily with the fresh mood of the New Year... --

-- Next Day in College... --

-- Raji is walking while Karthik comes behind her and taps her left shoulder but comes to the other side... As a reflex, she turns to her left to find no one and turns to the right and sees Karthik... He starts giggling... --

Karthik : Emandhaiyaa...

Raji : (Laughs) Adhellam ill--

Karthik : Pch... Othuko...

Raji : Sari fine... (Frowns) Idhe trick oru naal unnaku pannuren iru...

Karthik : Naan laam emaara maaten...

Raji : Paarkalaam paarkalaam... (Both laugh)

Karthik : Ama enna innaiku romba azhaga theriyura?

Raji : Adapaavi... Appa naa ivlo nallu azhaga illa nu solluriya?

Karthik : Adhuku adhane artham...

Raji stares at him...

Karthik : Moraichi parthalum unnmai adhu dhan...

Raji : Appdiya seri othukurom... Nanga azhagu illa nu...

Karthik : Good... Ipdi dhan unnmaiya othukanum... Also...

Raji : Hey Karthik... Anga paaru... (She points to a tree)

Karthik : Enna?

Raji : Pch... Anga paaru oru squirrel tree mela earuradhu kku it's struggling...
Karthik : Adhukku enna?

Raji : Nee ellam oru aalu... Pesaama vaa...

-- They both walk up to the squirrel and Raji picks it up on her hand... --

Raji : Hey it's got hurt...

Karthik : Amaa... Ratham varudhu...

Raji : Enna pesaama nikkuraa?

Karthik : Enna panna solra?

Raji : Straight ah class kku poi Lakshmi kitta first aid kit vaangittu vaa... Fast...

Karthik : (Confused) Hmm varen... (He leaves)

Karthik : (On the way) Paravala... She cares so much for a little creature...

Raji : Seekiram vaa...

Karthik : Indha first aid kitta lama

Raji : Thanks...

-- She starts treating the squirrel's leg... Ties it with a bandage and puts it down for it to go... --

Raji : Done... Ippo adhu seekiram heal aagum la... Adhaan...

Karthik : (Simply smiles at her)

Raji : Enna appadi paakura?

Karthik : (Just nods a no')

Raji : Sari... Ippadi ingaye ninnutu sirichutu irukaama seekiram class kku vaa... I am leaving...

-- She walks away... --

Karthik : Nee romba romba azhagu dhaan... Even at your heart...

-- In the classroom... --

Karthik : (Mindvoice) Cha.. Enna ponnu da ava... Oru chinna uyir mella kuda avlo anbaa irukkale... Romba azhagu dhan... Avala nenaichale ennaku edho feeling irukke... Ana pudichu irukku...

Vishnu : Dei ennada silent ah irukka?

Karthik : (No response)

Vishnu : Dei ennada aachu ivanukku?

Azhagar : Theriyalaye... Innaiku morning kudiyum normal ah dhaan irundhaan... Nadula Raji ah paarka ponaan la? I mean thirumba vandhu first aid kit laam vaangittu ponaane...

Vishnu : But adhukkum idhukkum enna sambandham? Sari iru, test panniduvom...

"Dei Raji unna koopiduraanga daa" Vishnu tells loudly...

-- Karthik comes out of the trance in a sudden shock... --

Karthik : Ah enga??

-- Vishnu and Azhagar exchange confused looks with a slight smile... --

Azhagar : Dei ennada aachu unnaku?

Karthik : Ennaku ennachu? Onum illaye... Seri raji enga koopiitta?

Vishnu : Dei adhu naa unnoda love dream kalaikkaradhukaga vitta pella da...

Karthik : Pongadang...

Azhagar : Adha vidu modhala... Raji pathi enna nenaichittu iruntha?

Karthik : Adhu eppdi da unnaku theriyum?

Vishnu : Ama idhu periya chidambaram ragasiyam paru... Yenda unn uyir namban inga kattu kathhu kathurom... Unnaku kadhulla vizhalla... Ana raji nu peru sonna udane avanga enga nu kekura... Idhulaye theriyalaya?

-- Karthik smiles... --

Azhagar : Ada chi... Sirichadhu podhum enna nu sollu...

Karthik : Ennaku edho mathiriya irukku da...

Vishnu : Dei naa appave sonnen la... Andha nayar kadailla ivanuku tea vangi kudukkadha nu... Ippa ivanuku vaayiru sari illama poyiduchu paru..

Azhagar : Illaye avaru kadai la ellame quality ya dhana irukkum... 2 naaliku munnadin iruntha dhellam vechikka ve mattaru...

Karthik : Enna da nakkal la?

Vishnu : Seri seri... Unnoda love story ya sollu...

Karthik : Love story lam illa... Idhu verum story dhan...

Azhagar : Seri da... Adha sollu...

--Karthik explains everything briefly...--

Vishnu : So mudinchu pona scene dhan un mandaikkula nee ooti parthuttu irukka?

Karthik : Ama... Ennaku romba pudichi irukku da...

Azhagar : Edhu? Raji yava?

Karthik : (Stares) Dei...

Vishnu : Pinna andha squirrel ah?

Karthik : Unga kitta laam poi sonnen paaru... Enna sollanum...

Vishnu : Unmai ah othuko da... Oru second nee attract aaniyaa illaiyaa?

-- Karthik looks away trying hard to control his smile... --

Karthik : Adhellam illa... Ippo road la cute ah oru baby ah paartha naa thonum la? Andha maadhiri dhaan idhuvum... Neenga nenaikura alavukku laam kedaiyaadhu...

Azhagar : Ada ada... Enna oru explanation... Irundhaalum nee malupura... Naanga namba maatom...

Karthik : Aiyeya... Idhukku mela naan inga irundhen naa ippadi mokka pottae enna kondruveenga... Me escapeee...

-- Karthik runs out of the classroom... VA sit there laughing... --

-- At the end of the day... RLJ go to their homes, pack all their stuff, get on a taxi and come to the place... --

Raji : Finally... Pudhu veetukku vandhaachu!!

Side View of the House

Entrance Interior of the House

Lakshmi : Yup... Happa naan varadhu kulla Amma vum Appa vum over advice and care... Ippadi irundhuko, samaikka kathuko, veedu neat ah vachuko... Shabbah...

Janani : Ingayum adhe dhaan... Appa oru pakkam advice, Maha oru pakkam advice, Bharathi oru side... Mudiyala...

Raji : Sari sari... Ivanga advice panninadha pathi pesinaa pesitte irukka vendiyadhu dhaan... Vaanga ulla poi uncle and aunty ah paarpom...

-- All three go inside to be greeted by their family friends, Uncle and Aunty... --

Uncle : Hey, welcome...

Lakshmi : Thanks Uncle...

Janani : Enna uncle, airport kku ready aaiyaacha?

Aunty : All packed maa... Will leave in an hour... Ungalukaaga dhaan waiting...

Raji : Thanks Aunty... Most importantly, indha house engala rent panna vittadhu kku romba romba thanks...

Uncle : It is the least we could do ma... I mean unga college pakkathula irukku, besides naanga US la poi settle aaga porom... So veedu shut aaiyu irukuradhu kku it is better for trustworthy people to stay right? Adhaan...

-- RLJ smile --

Aunty : And mainly the house should be neat... Adhu people irukka veetula dhaan irukkum... Not a house shut for years... Adhaan we implemented this idea...

Janani : Thanks Aunty... We'll make sure the house is neat... Anyway... Neenga eppo thirumba varuveenga?

Aunty : (Laughs) Adhu maybe once in a while for vacation... Otherwise... Paiyyan angaye irukkanum nnu solraan, so mostly there only...

Janani : Oh okay... That's good Aunty...

-- They all chat for a while... Later Uncle and Aunty leave to the airport... --

Raji : Veedu semmaiyaa irukku la... So comfortable...

Janani : Amaa amaa... Romba perusu veraa... Namba moonu peru mattum irukuradhu oru maadhiri bore adikum...

Lakshmi : But poga poga pazhagidum... Sari what's up with dinner?

Raji : Already Amma veetulaye kuduthutaanga... So ennaku vendaam...

Janani : Appo vaa namba light ah saaptu let's sleep...

-- The girls take a tour of the whole house and decide to take the right side of house... They took the master bedroom which had three beds... --

Janani : Indha side dhaan ventilation jaasthi ah irukkum nnu nenaikuren...

Lakshmi : Adha nee morning la dhaan decide pannanum... But this side looks more warm... So we'll take this one...

Raji : Hey ennaku first bed to the wall...

Lakshmi : Sari appo I am in the middle...

Janani : Fine, I will be towards the door...

-- All three sit on their respective beds and unpack their stuff to put in their cupboards... --

"Ch... ch... ch..."

Janani : Hey edho satham ketkala?

Lakshmi : Illaye... (All three listen keenly)

"Ch... ch... ch..."

Raji : Hey aama... (Nervous) Enna satham?

Lakshmi : (Scared) Oru vela pei ah irukkum oh?

Janani : Chi chi... Edhavadhu robbers ah irukkum...

Raji : (Panics) Robbers ah? Aiyayo ippo enna pannuradhu?

Lakshmi : Shhh... Be quiet... Silent ah attack pannalaam...

-- They go around upstairs silently and gather wooden rods... All three sneakily go downstairs and hide on both the sides of the door... --

"Ch... ch... ch... ch... ch..."

Lakshmi : Kittaka vandhutaanga...

Raji : Ennaku bayama irukku...

Janani : Shhh...

-- They hear the door unlocking... And all three get ready to point the rods towards the door... --

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~~~ Sush and Abi ~~~

Edited by Abinaabi - 10 years ago

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Gayathri30

@Gayathri30

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Heyyy guys

thanks for the update of this was waiting forever hahaha finally you update a million years later hehehee🤣

loved the update... janani simply love her character the way she comes with her comebacks and vishnu pavum paiyan hahahhaa

KR - awww so cute the entire squirrel scene was super cute shes an animal lover right? you guys showed that clearly.. :)

KVA - the three of them good combo and VA taking the mick out of K hahaha when he was thinking about R ... was funny hahaa

RLJ - three of them living together... super will defo be interesting to see now what happens... :) what was that noise? i have a doubt... but will wait till you guys update :)

once again thanks for the update :)

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Daffodilee

@Daffodilee

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Thanks for the update sush & abhi

loved it whole part .
carring a squirel differant idea cute one .boys kalachufying k 🤣 nice to read .

between house pic yaru select panathu superbb .

superb update friends

waiting for next parts update soon

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Abinaabi

@Abinaabi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: Daffodilee
Thanks for the update sush & abhi

loved it whole part .
carring a squirel differant idea cute one .boys kalachufying k 🤣 nice to read .

between house pic yaru select panathu superbb .

superb update friends

waiting for next parts update soon

Thanks a lot sis.. House pic lam select pannadhu sush dhan... Naa verum approval mattum dhan... 😆

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Rajee71

@Rajee71

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Nice update... Sushh & Abi... 👏

Happaaah, evlo periya veedu... Indha moonu perukkum...thaanguvaangala ?

Anyways, very nice house. Karthik maatikittana ? How sweet ...

Thanks for the update, Dears...