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Posted: 10 years ago
Really happy dear 😊...waiting to read update
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Originally posted by: akkub.92

Really happy dear 😊...waiting to read update


try to type the update today
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Posted: 10 years ago



Part 11

Geet bina baat tune maan ko naraaz kr diya

Wo bhi us sameera ke liye

Abhi toh sb kuch thik hone laga tha

.

Ho sakta hai

Mein galat hu

.

Maan se jaake baat krti hu

.

She goes to his room & sees, he already sleeps...

******

Next day, geet prepare his coffee and go to his room ... he already wake up.

Geet : maan aapki coffee

Maan take the cup from her & take the sip.

Geet : maan

Wo mujhe aapse baat krni thi

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Maan : hmm

Geet : jo maine kal raat ko kaha

Maan : geet kya tum is topic ko chod nhi sakti

I don't understand why you thinking wrong

How I make you understand

Geet : meri baat toh sun lijiye

Maan : geet get ready fast

She held his wrist & came close to him, then hugged him by waist...

Geet : sorry

.

I hurt you

Maan : geet

It's ok

.

Tumhe mere vishwaas pe vishwaas hona chaiye

Geet : hmm

I believe you

Now please smile

He hugged her with one hand & said "nice coffee"

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Two more days passed out happily...

At night sam call maan...

Sam : hello maan

.

Maan kaha busy ho aajkal

Maan : sam nothing

Little work load...

Geet not know, with whom he speaking, geet that's a perfect time of payback...

Mujhe yaha akela chodke palampur jaa rhe hai na

.

Abhi btati hu

Maan : am going palam

One week ka trip hai

Sam : achanak

Maan : wo meeting hai

.

Geet hugged him from back & put the ice cube in his shirt...

He feels chill & held her hand then pulls her in front...

Sam : maan

Aur sb kaisa chal rha hai

.

He tries to take out the ice, but geet held his free hand...and with another hand , she start roaming the palm on his face slowly - slowly...

Sam : Maan

Geet touched his lips... another side maan lost in her touch , he not know when his fall on carpet...she realize what she doing, she stop in mid & before she take hand back, he encircled her waist & pull more closer...

.

Sam : maan

.

Geet grip loose from his hand, she feeling shiver in body... blush came on her cheek... he pick her chin & make to see her in his eyes...

Sam don't get any answer, she cut the call...

Maan : geet ye sb kya tha

Geet : wo

.

Mein

Maan : geet am listening

Bolo

Geet : wo payback tha

Maan : payback for what

Geet : aap mujhe yaha akela chodke khud waha jaa rhe ho

Maan : so what you want

Geet : I want to your side

Maan cupped her cheek with one palm and pressed a tender kiss to her forehead.

Maan : bs itna si baat

Geet : aapke liye hongi

Mere liye nhi

Maan : pack your bag

Geet : mujhe kaha bej rhe ho

Maan : you going with me..

Geet excitedly hugged her & kissed on his both cheek...

She closed both eyes... for avoiding oddness he say you look pretty cute, he told her with a soft smile...

She dipped her gaze from him, he only grinned seeing her shy, her eyes widened in surprise as he pressed a kiss to her cheek ... he left...

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Main jaan ye vaar doon
Har jeet bhi haar doon
Keemat ho koi tujhe beinteha pyaar doon

After few seconds, she fall water on head...

Geet : barishhh

She sees above & sees maan standing on sofa & this water is his work...

Geet : maan ye kya kr rhe hai aap

Maan : payback

Jo tumne kiya whi mein kr raha hu

She pick cushion and threw on him...

Maan : geet today you gone

Both start running from one side to another side... at the end maan held her , and both fall on carpet...geet on upper side...

Saari hadein maine meri, ab maine tod di
Dekar mujhe pataa awaargi ban gaye

She pressed her face into the hollow of his neck hugging him tightly... Geet closed her eyes as she felt his hands tracing her back...

Haan hasi ban gaye
Haan nami ban gaye
Tum mere aasmaan
Meri zameen ban gaye


he turn her, now geet beneath him...he admiring her face, her face adored with cute smile, her red cheek, lips...

Maan : geet

She opened her eyes, and feel something in new in his eyes...he bent & kissed on her cheek , then his lips trail from her ear with butterfly kisses down the side of her neck, her hands tightened on his shoulder pressing her nails...

Geet : maan

.

I love you

please have a look - Ye Dil kya kare

Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
When will you update part 11...waiting dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: akkub.92

When will you update part 11...waiting dear


half type huya hai abhi

utna hi du
chalenga
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update😊
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jasika08

Awesome update😊

waiting for next update


say some thing new please

waise thanks 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_21


half type huya hai abhi

utna hi du
chalenga

Thanks for the update its really nice at last they are getting close and understanding each other lovely now can't wait to read about there trip...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loved it..

loved maaneet payback game...
and maan forgot sam in geet naughtiness...
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Posted: 10 years ago
ohhh such a lovely part...

awww... some one said I LOVE YOU... but who may be maan... love thr moments

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