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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456

Hey LM

This is a really good chapter LM 😳 😳 I really loved how Ranveer and Ishani made them understand , especially Martin and Ranveer's conversation was really good 😉 Sorry for the late reply 😭 😭

Really can 't wait to read the next chapter 😳 😳 Don't apologize , we can understand , thank for giving us to now fast updates 😳 😳

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Thank you so much, MM! 🤗🤗 I'm so glad that you liked this! ⭐️⭐️
Yeah, Ranveer and Martin's conversation was something I've written from my heart, so I'm glad that it turned out well enough. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow. I've already written it up, but just need to make a few changes. 😃😃 And my updates may be a little fast now, but once University starts, updates are going to be very slow. 😆😆
Ps. When are you going to post the next chapter of Always and Forever?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much dear. 😳⭐️
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LM, this chapter was as usual amazing. Good to see Martin and Claudine together now.
And now we have these Love Experts. Lovely people.
Ishani and Ranveer's life experience has med them so mature, isn't it? It's always amazing to see in your story how the two understand each other without even saying a word and yeah, complete each other.
Lovely update. And hopefully your result was good. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue


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Thank you so much, MM! 🤗🤗I'm so glad that you liked this! ⭐️⭐️





Yeah, Ranveer and Martin's conversation was something I've written from my heart, so I'm glad that it turned out well enough. 😳😳




I'll be posting the next chapter tomorrow. I've already written it up, but just need to make a few changes. 😃😃And my updates may be a little fast now, but once University starts, updates are going to be very slow. 😆😆




Ps. When are you going to post the next chapter ofAlways and Forever?



Really dear the conversation was really good , now I understand why 😉 Because it came from the heart 😉

Woow , can 't wait for read it 😉 even if I have to read it chupke chupke at School like today 😆 😆

Good Luck with Your studies , I have full faith that you will do amazing 🤗 🤗


Oh dear , I will try to update ASAP 😉 But having a lot of stress with School lately so have not been able to Write , but I have a lot of ideas let see what happens 😉 Hopefully you all will like it ❤️ Really sorry for the late updates recently 😭 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow LM.. what a hearty conversation u wrote... 👍🏼
we can actually feel martin's emotions and insecurities.. and ranveer slapped him..?? he don't want to see the repetition of his story.. that's why... 😊
love their bonding.. they both understand each other so well...

and 1 tention and suspense is revealed and solved in 1 update.. wow... always love this speed of urs.. 👏 👏 👏

n last part was a surprise not only for him but for us also... and u made it hot... 👏 👏

so ishaani turning wild... and blushy blushy ranveer...

bt u know ur mention of that wild cat dialogue reminded me of their actual scene from the show... jab pehle ranveer ne ish ko junfli billi bola tha to vo sherni ban gai thi... pata nai is baar kya banegi... 🤣

waiting for ur update.. update soon.. 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

LM, this chapter was as usual amazing. Good to see Martin and Claudine together now.
And now we have these Love Experts. Lovely people.
Ishani and Ranveer's life experience has med them so mature, isn't it? It's always amazing to see in your story how the two understand each other without even saying a word and yeah, complete each other.
Lovely update. And hopefully your result was good. :)

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Thank you so much, Elvish! 🤗🤗 I'm really happy that you liked the update. ⭐️⭐️ And yeah, Martin and Claudine are together at long last. 😳😳 Our love experts are lovely certainly, but they are going to have their own testing time soon enough and that's when they'll know how far have they come and what have they achieved in their relationship so far. 😆😆
Ranveer and Ishaani have certainly matured a lot in their three years of separation and aloofness. And them together just completed each other, just like how their hearts nursed themselves the moment it connected with each other's again. ❤️❤️ And understanding each other is something that just comes to them naturally enough.
Thank you so much once again and yeah, my result was good. 😛 Now just admission tensions are on. 😭😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456



Really dear the conversation was really good , now I understand why 😉 Because it came from the heart 😉

Woow , can 't wait for read it 😉 even if I have to read it chupke chupke at School like today 😆 😆

Good Luck with Your studies , I have full faith that you will do amazing 🤗 🤗


Oh dear , I will try to update ASAP 😉 But having a lot of stress with School lately so have not been able to Write , but I have a lot of ideas let see what happens 😉 Hopefully you all will like it ❤️ Really sorry for the late updates recently 😭 😭

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I'm really glad that you liked the conversation. 😳😳 And thank you so much dear. 🤗🤗
It's alright dear, studies always comes first and then this. 😃😃 We can wait for this aaram se. No issues. 😆😆 And don't apologize dear, we all understand. 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NidsJ

wow LM.. what a hearty conversation u wrote... 👍🏼

we can actually feel martin's emotions and insecurities.. and ranveer slapped him..?? he don't want to see the repetition of his story.. that's why... 😊
love their bonding.. they both understand each other so well...

and 1 tention and suspense is revealed and solved in 1 update.. wow... always love this speed of urs.. 👏 👏 👏

n last part was a surprise not only for him but for us also... and u made it hot... 👏 👏

so ishaani turning wild... and blushy blushy ranveer...

bt u know ur mention of that wild cat dialogue reminded me of their actual scene from the show... jab pehle ranveer ne ish ko junfli billi bola tha to vo sherni ban gai thi... pata nai is baar kya banegi... 🤣

waiting for ur update.. update soon.. 🤗 🤗

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Thank you so much Nids! 🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️
And I'm glad that you could connect to Martin and Claudine's emotions. That was my main motive in this chapter and I'm glad that I could pull it off. 😃😃
Yeah, one tension is solved in this update, both another bigger one is on the way.
Yeah, that part was a surprise for me too. 😛 Ishaani is indeed a wild cat and even I had that same scene in mind when writing this. 😉😉
I'll be updating this right now. 😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 33: Swept Away, I'm Stolen

A/N: Hey guys! Here is the next update. :D :D

Happy Reading! :D

Ranveer stood in front of his wardrobe, trying to decide what suit he was going to wear for today's meeting. He rubbed his chin in confusion when he heard a light knock on his door. He said an absent-minded 'Come in' and Martin entered the room. Ranveer gave Martin a smile while the latter gave him a sheepish look.

"Monsieur, I got the file you were asking for."

"Thanks. Martin, which suit would look good over a plum-coloured shirt and grey pants?" Martin remained silent for a few minutes before he replied back.

"A grey coat?"

"Oh yeah, sounds perfect." Ranveer removed a grey coat from his wardrobe and kept it on his bed, along with his other attire. He looked at it for a moment before he gave it a nod. He looked towards Martin, who had already kept the file on the coffee table and was standing silently.

"Does Monsieur want anything else?"

"No, nothing. I think this should do." Ranveer nodded his head but saw a hesitancy in Martin's eyes. He smiled knowingly and spoke kindly. "Sit."

"No, Monsieur, it's alright. You are busy... I can come back some other time as well."

"I still have fifteen minutes on my head. Relax." Martin nodded slowly and took a seat on the coffee table and Ranveer occupied the other.

"Monsieur... I just wanted to thank you. For what you and Madame did for Claudine and me. We are both really grateful." Ranveer rolled his eyes as he saw Martin twisting his fingers in anxiety.

"Martin, how many times do I have to tell you to be a little more informal than that? Besides, what exactly are you thanking me for? For helping you or slapping you?" Martin chuckled and Ranveer gave him an embarrassed look.

"Monsieur, I deserved it. I was indeed a prat, so why must you feel bad?"

"Well, you have a good point as well." Martin and Ranveer shared a common look of understanding and both of them got up and gave each other a hug. Separating after some time, both took their respective places back on the table and smiled.

"Monsieur, I wanted to talk to you about something else as well."

"Thought as much. What is it?"

"It's about Madame." Ranveer looked confused and asked Martin carelessly.

"What about her?"

"Have you told her about what's happening at Neapolitan City?" Ranveer's smile faltered and an uneasy look replaced his features.

"No I haven't. Not yet."

"Monsieur, I know I don't have any right saying this," Ranveer gave Martin a glare and the latter quickly proceeded with the next part of his sentence, "-but I think you should tell Madame about this. You will have to tell her sooner or later anyway."

"I can't get myself to do it."

"Monsieur, Madame and you have been through a lot of turmoil in your relationship. Now that things are finally going perfect between the two of you, I don't think that you should hide this from Madame." Ranveer gave Martin a guilty look a spoke softly.

"She won't be able to take it."

"She won't be able to take it any time you tell her. But you must be reasonable, Monsieur. You're betraying her trust by not telling her. And now that Madame trusts you so blindly, please don't fail her trust." Ranveer widened his eyes in fear and spoke hesitantly.

"I'm not failing her trust. It's just... she's been through a lot and now that she's finally getting some happiness, I can't take that away from her."

"But having her live in false security is far more wrong than pushing her into real danger."

"Martin, I... I don't know. You know, every day I think that I'll tell her everything about it but her once smile makes me go against my decision. I always think and make excuses that maybe things won't go as bad and I don't have to tell her anything at all. Then I'm knocked back into my senses and I feel guilty and treacherous that I didn't tell her about it and decide to do it the next day. But I never can."

"Monsieur, you are a practical person. You told me the odds yourself."

"I know. That's why I also know that I'm running out of excuses now."

"Monsieur, I know you don't want to break Madame's heart. But you will have to tell her someday. Besides, it's best that she learns about this from you directly rather than from indirect sources. It'll break her trust from over you. And trust me, Monsieur, hell hath no fury like the scorn of a woman."

Ishaani roamed about the library, a trolley in her and a booklist alongside. They had to donate books to Vari's public school for their annual fair and Ishaani removed the books one by one and placed them steadily. She was going to lift off a few books from the Western section when she saw Mr. Ambrose walking towards her.

"Oh hello, Mr. Ambrose. How are you doing?" Ishaani smiled brightly at Mr. Ambrose and the latter gave her a small smile in return.

"Nothing's really good these days, dear. But I love seeing your spirit and dedication to the library. Gives us all hope to fight." Ishaani's smile faltered and she now looked bewildered.

"Gives us all hope to fight? What are you talking about, Mr. Ambrose?"

"Oh come now, dear. I'm talking about the library, ofcourse! Don't you know that the library is going to shut down?"

"What?" Ishaani gave him a disbelieving look and Mr. Ambrose looked confused.

"Didn't Mr. Vaghela tell you about this?" Ishaani felt her breath get hitched in her chest and barely managed to throw out the next words.

"No, nothing. What's happening around this place anyway? Nobody tells me anything these days!"

"I'm surprised that Mr. Vaghela hasn't told you already. But I can understand. This was supposed to be known only by the trustee members and the owner until the verdict was out and given that it isn't, they were right not to tell you." Ishaani felt her blood freeze at the thought of what exactly was going on and how much was being hidden from her.

"Mr. Ambrose, please. Just tell me what's going on over here." Mr. Ambrose sighed and continued.

"Technically speaking, you are on a need-to-know basis. I shouldn't be even telling you this. But since I let slip the fact, I think it'd be unfair to not tell you the whole thing now. It was during the time you were in Vegas. The Government wanted to make the library the part of the National Historic Monuments, because the library will be turning 53 this year. The board had to take a unanimous decision. It was a 50-50."

"What happened then?"

"Mr. Vaghela returned back a week later and his decision would mark whether it was for or against. Mr. Vaghela gave it in favour of the decision." Ishaani stared at Mr. Ambrose dumbstruck, as she felt her world collapsing around her. She could not believe that Ranveer would have given his decision in favour of the library being shut. Her voice barely rose above a disgusted whisper as she spoke accusingly.

"How could he? How could he do such a thing?"

"Ms. Parekh, you must not be this harsh. Even I and Mrs. Brandt were for the decision. It's why Mr. Vaghela cast his vote in favour too. But we were double-crossed. None of us knew that converting the library into a monument would mean the actual shutting down of the library. The moment Mr. Vaghela found out about it, he used his veto power to challenge the case."

"I can't believe that you all... would... would agree for such a thing." Mr. Ambrose had an uneasy look on his face and Ishaani felt ill.

"Sweetie, you must not be this judgmental now." Ishaani couldn't think about anything else except for the fact that the library was going to shut down and Ranveer had kept her away from the truth.

"And Ranveer didn't tell me a damn thing!"

"Now, now, honey, you must give him credit. He has been putting day and night together to save the library. But frankly speaking, the odds don't look good enough and I don't think that Mr. Vaghela's money and goodwill are going to be enough. Not this time." Ishaani felt numb as she stared at Mr. Ambrose fearfully.

"When is the verdict coming out, Mr. Ambrose?"

"Today. At 4pm." Ishaani stared at him dumbly before she nodded her head.

"What happens if we lose?"

"The library shuts down. Probably by the end of the next month." Ishaani stared at Mr. Ambrose teary-eyed and spoke with anguish.

"How could you all let such a thing happen? How could you all do this!? This is absolutely wrong! Wrong!" Mr. Ambrose gave her a guilty look and sighed.

"Sweetie, we were all at fault here and we are guilty as charged, you have that. But we're trying to do our best now. I can understand that you are in shock and you loved this library a lot-"

"Loved this library? This library is my home! My refuge! How could you all take this away from me? How could Ranveer have let this happen?!" Ishaani felt hot, angry tears escape her eyes and she did not bother wiping them away. Mr. Ambrose gave her a sad look.

"Honey, I know it's devastating. Mrs. Brandt and I have given 25 and 30 respective years of our lives to this library each as well. And Mr. Vaghela revolved his entire life over here. But we must not play the blame game over here. We are all at fault and we are all sorry that it had to come to this. But maybe this is what destiny had for us." Ishaani gave Mr. Ambrose a heartbroken look and he patted her shoulder consolingly.

"Go home, darling. You need to calm yourself down a little. You can have the rest of the day off today."

Ranveer returned back home, his heart heavy and his mind still reeling with the final verdict. He knew that he had to break the news to Ishaani for there was no point in delaying the inevitable. He slowly made his way up to her room and knocked on the door. When no reply came back, he opened the door and saw Ishaani sitting on the bed, a stony look on her face.

Ranveer knew that something was drastically wrong, for Ishaani's face was red and puffy and her mascara was smudged badly.

"Ishaani? What's wrong?"

"Nothing's wrong. Not according to you anyway." Ranveer knew that Ishaani was in a dangerous mood and knew that it was the worst time to tell her about the library. Yet somehow, he knew that he had to get it done with in that moment. Taking a deep breath, mentally hoping that Ishaani took it decently, he spoke hesitantly.

"I need to talk to you about something." Ishaani cocked her eyebrows up coldly and Ranveer felt an unknown fear creep within his heart.

"What is it?" Ranveer couldn't frame his sentence clearly for he could see cold anger in Ishaani's eyes, something he had never seen before.

"I... uh... I..."

"Let me save you the trouble. Is it about the library being shut down?" Ranveer gasped and instantly understood the reason behind Ishaani's sour mood, while the later stared at him sarcastically. Ranveer could hear Martin's words from earlier in the day ringing in his ears and he knew that Martin had been right.

"Ishaani, please. It's not like you think it to be." Ishaani curved her lips upside down in a mock impressed manner and Ranveer tore his gaze away from her icy ones.

"Oh, really? Then please explain yourself. I'd love to hear what you have to say for yourself."

"Ishaani, we all made a mistake. But you must understand-" Ishaani's eyes suddenly flickered and Ranveer was glad to see the coldness leave them.

"Look, this can wait. I want to know about the verdict first. What happened?" Ranveer gave Ishaani a heartbreaking look before he whispered slowly.

"We lost. The library will be shutting down next month."

This update got done much quicker than I was thinking! :D :D I know, I know this is a big bomb. But please no throwing anything at me. Pretty please. :)

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D :D

Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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I hope Ishani takes this in her stride! Pls make her more intelligent than in the serial and a little more matured that she and RV can get through this unscathed, pls...😕

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