AASHLOK SS: Friendship Part 9 updated - Page 9

Originally posted by: pooja186

update s just awesome dear
like d egg scene omg its too funny dear
and now ASHLOK scene was well written
totally nice update as usual

Originally posted by: vj3072

Shlok a happy go lucky guy...very naughty...story is getting delicious but worried abt the guy who is busy clicking her photo 😕 hope Astha's father wont treat her bad after seeing the photo...hope he understand his daughter and their (Ashlok) friendship...

Pls no BIG misunderstand between the family 😭

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR VIJJU 🥳

Originally posted by: pooja186

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY DEAR VIJJU 🥳

PART 9

Shlok you leave now she said and pushed him out of the house. Too bad aastha im your guest yar, hav you forget "Atithi devo bhava" he said. Shlok i don't know anything you just leave my papa will come now. kk atleast say gud ni8 yar. k bye gud nite she said and closed the door on his face.

Two minutes later there was a knock on the door. Shlok if itz you then i'll doom you with my bare hands she mumbled and opened the door. He got inside and she thanked all the gods in the heaven for perfect timing. How was your day papa? Gud. K papa you go and fresh up i'll set the table she said and went into kitchen.

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All are having their dinner in a complete silence. Apart from shlok's silly antics. How are you feeling now beta niranjan catechize swetha. Im fine baba. Itz just viral fever baba, swethu take the med which i've given you and you can go to school from tomorrow said varad. K dada she said and started eating. Anjali observed sam, he z hardly touching his food. Sam eat beta. I have no appetite he said. Every one over there knows the reason behind his silence, the eve incident and the most imp thing z everyone supported ashu not him and tht is the thing which he was finding difficult to digest.

Shlok go and bring my med kit said varad. Why dada? Some one here needs an injection so that they can feel appetite. There is no need of any injection i'll finish this said sam and completed his food less than 5 mins. I feel like sleeping, gud nite he said to no one in particular and rushed to his room. Shlok smirked at anjali and niranjan. And you shlok, varad said causing him to stop that arrogant smirk. Yes dada. You need the injection most not sam. Don't forget to visit hospital tomorrow said varad sternly. Now swetha smirked at shlok. he raised his brow oh swethu baby stop smirking and hav your dinner he said and every one resumed their eating.

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She served chapatis in three plates and placed a small bowl of curry beside chapattis. He took one morsel of it and stopped eating when he felt the same taste inside his mouth.

"she was sitting on the sofa with full of iracund waiting for him since one hour.He slowly went near her and closed her eyes from behind. Aravind i know its you she said and started to leave without even glancing him .He stopped her by holding her hand. She was draped in a beautiful white saree with embroidery work on its broder, green bangles on both hands, red bindhi b/w her brows, vermilion on her forehead, small nose stud and a small chain which he had gifted on her bday and only mangulsutra around her neck with no extra jewellery and no makeup. she was mother of his child and pregnant with his another child but still, She was elegant and looking stunning. He don't have any idea that why she wore that saree and why she got ready soo beautifully. Manju whatz wrong. Nothing aravind. He know that she was angry, but why? He thought for a 1 whole minute and remembered that it was their marriage anniversary. He felt bad that he totally forget bout this day.

Damn me i don't even brought a single rose for her on this occasion. He cursed himself and his work. He slowly turned her towards him and made her look into his eyes "Manju im sorry, plz forgive me he said and kissed her on her forehead, and took her into a warm hug". Thats it, all her anger with in her vanished, what more a women can expect from her man. She felt fortune that she got the unconditional love from her man.

She don't want to create any ado now as she want to celebrate this day with her man. Manju taday i want to give what ever you wished for, he said by cupping her face. No aravind i've everything with me most importantly you and now i wished bupkis but just to be in your arms. Manju im soo sorry that i've forget this day but i promise from next year i will celebrate this day only with you, no office and no work he said and embraced her. little did he know that it was his last anniversary with his ardhangini " Manjula devi bharadwaj".

Few minutes later, she broke the embrace "aravind im ravenous"oh im sorry manju you go and set the table i'll meet my ghudiya rani. Aravind wait i've already set the table and aastha is sleeping don't disturb her she stopped him. Is it? But one kissy i promise i won't disturb her he said and rushed to their bedroom.

There he saw little aastha sleeping peacefully on the bed, he slowly tiptoed into the room and kissed her temple by caressing her hair. Manju stood at the doorway, observing the love and affection that he was showing on their little beautiful princess he observed manju and came towards her nd wiped her tears. Aravind will you love aastha the same way even after she grows up. Yes manju not only aastha, but you and my another baby too he said by caressing her six month foetus.

Ok now shall we have dinner he said and they both went down stairs where she already set the table. She served chapatti to him. He first feed her by his own hands and then took a bite, it tasted different but good.manju is this aloo paratha? If so then why it is not tasting like the one anjali prepares he catechized. relax aravind itz not aloo paratha. Then? Actually i've learned to prepare aloo parathas this morning from anjali but instead of aloo, i've added yam to that she said. oh is it. Why don't you like it? No manju its good really good"

Papa what happened? Why are you not eating? Aastha voice brought him back to real world. Aastha have you added yam in the chapatti? Yes papa. Don't you like it. Aastha don't prepare this chapatti next time he said and resume eating. Papa' ashwini called out his name. Hhhuu... he made a voice without raising his head.

She hesitated first then "Papa me and my frenz were planning to go for a movie, even sam is coming" she completed in one breath. She got no response from her father. Papa' she again called out his name. Aravind simply took his mobile and dialed agnihotri's house. Niranjan picked up the call.

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Hello aravind how are you? need to talk with sam he said coldly. Niranjan connected the call to sam's room via intercom. "Hello papa Namaste" said sam. Aravind catechize sam exactly what ashwini said. Sam thought for few minutes and grabbed the opurtunity to enmesh ashwini. So he simply said "no papa we didn't planned any such thing, infact we are tenth standard now, and we need to concentrate on exams other the outings, right papa said sam. "Yes beta you take care now gud nite" said aravind and disconnected the call.

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Papa what did sam said ashu asked excitedly "Ashwini giving birth to you is a sin but im making you to study considering it as my responsibility. But if you're expecting extra previlages from me and if you want to roam outside, you're free to leave my house and can live your life the way you want to, but don't use the name which i've given you" he said sternly. Thought he don't mean what he said but it did damaged an innocent heart for no mistake.

Ashwini without any word, left the table and rushed to her room with tears in her eyes. Aastha got up and was about to go to their room. Aastha eat.., if she feels hungry, then she'll come on her own, no need to cajole anyone, he roared. Aastha don't feel like eating, how can she when her own sister is starving.

He left the table after having his dinner. Aastha made a plate for ashu and went to their room and saw ashu laid on bed weeping. She went towards her and started to feed her sis, but she refused. Aastha felt bad probably it is the first time, ashu refused eating. Aastha can starve, can live without eating, but ashwini, she can't. Starving is not her cup of tea actually.

Di why giving birth to me is a sin? Aastha felt a pang, she knew why her papa blurted that, but she don't have the heart to explain the reason to her sis. She took her sis into a warn hug and said something soothing in her ears to ease her pain. Ashwini cried,cried nd cried a slept in her arms. Aastha realised that she is sleeepin so she stroked lightly on her cheeks so that she would wake up. Ashwini refused to eat but she cajoled her, somehow managed and made her sis eat the food.

She felt bad to see ashwini like this. Never did she thought that her sis refused eating. Its all cuz of her papa, why he has blurt that in front of her sister. She was filled with some unknown iracund, and without thinking she rushed to her papa's room. Wer he was busy talking to a photo frame.

"Papa aap aise kyu huye?' wer your etiquettes aastha? Don't know to knock the door before gettin in? Papa why you have say all those infront of ashwini? Don't you know she is crying. Aastha its late, go and sleep. No papa answer my qu... aastha leave he barked scaring the hell out of her. One more thing aastha, i don't owe any kind of explination to anyone. She without any word rushed to her.

Once she got into her room, she locked the door and cried her heart out. She watched her sis sleeping form and covered her with a quilt and kissed her temple. Then she took the notepad from her bag and wrote something and enclosed it in an envelope. Prayed to the photo frame of her mother. Like every other day she drifted into sleep with tears.

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He woke up to the alaram sound. He stopped the alaram and went towards the photo frame."Good morning manju maa, till now i've made aastha happy as i promised you. bless me manju maa to continue the same in the future too" he said with join hands and went out for his morning jog.

NOTE: Im not happy with the news of EPB goin offair. I cried regarding the same first, then felt resigned. Like shrenu said good things comes to an end and so EBP too. Im not at all happy with the comments im getting for this story either. Now i can relate to all the writers frustration regarding feedback. Writers works hard to prepare the story and in return if they won't get any feedback it irks them to the core... same here, my situation too...

So im thinking to stop this story guys...cuz my stupid mind is creating more of this story and i have every intention to turn this story into FF. But i'll stop it here, keep this story safe with me and put this story in shrenu's next show. And guys plz don't think that im giving up, im just giving in, cuz im not ending this story but im just stopping it. I hope i'll meet you guys there in shrenu's next show forum.

Thank you for them who z commenting. Love you all🤗

Very sad to read your remark... 😭 I do understand your feeling on the respond but in life there is always ups and down...hope u continue for yr loyal follower.

Part 9...so sad to see both gals are going thru hatred frm their own father...hope he realise his mistake soon...

Sam wants to revenge Ashwini in all way and he done it...waiting for the day he learns how bad he have treated her.

Thanks for pm...my humble request pls continue... 😃

First Happy bday🥳🤗 viji my sis😃

First of all belated Happy Birthday Vijji 🥳🥳.


Now come to your update n message Vjji we all r feeling same but truth is life never stop for anyone or anything. Writing is your hobby u love to write do things for your own satisfaction not for others & i can understand your irritation also but believe all might be in same shock state so don't have heart to reply but they will reply. I hope u will continue this story n finish it in this forum as u write it for Ashlok naah 😊.

Btw emotional update Arvind still living in his past n i think Manju died to deliver Ashu that's why he said those cursed words but that was totally unjustified for a child 😡. Arvind should come out of his past n live in present with his daughters they also have rights to get their father love. Thanks for PM & I hope u will consider your decision. Take care don't be so broken 🤗

😛 oh Sweetie don't worry about EBP ..really good things are going to come end oneday