Virika FF: Forever and Ever - Thread 2... Ch. 14 - pg. 44

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Mansi

@MyKryan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

After so long you updated!

I Loved the update so much!

Very cute it was

"Look whose finally awake" Viren said bringing in their daughter inside the room.

Viren held both her hands and walked behind her as she took slow and steady steps towards her mom. Jeevika couldn't stop smiling seeing her husband helping their daughter walk towards her. As soon as she got closer to the couch Jeevika bent down to pick Gia up. She instantly kissed her little munchkin all over her face and Gia couldn't control her laughter.

These lines were my fav. Could actually imagine viren with gia and then with jeevika. 😃

Loved how jeevika taught her daughter to give flying kiss

Viren got up and carried Gia on his shoulders and headed out towards the door, but before he could even make it outside Vanshika walked in.

"Viren can you please get my granddaughter off your shoulders. She could fall" she said sounding angry at his antics.

Lol! This part was quite funny yet adorable!

Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Continue soon

Edited by MyKryan - 10 years ago

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

loved all the three updates

amazing

superb

too good

continue soon

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urmil

@urmil

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

so happy to get this updated...though i read earlier but was so engrossed in reading it that i forgot to like and comment and when again i opened it read it, then i noticed i forgot yo hit like...sorry for that...loved ur update...it seems like repetition...better i say beautiful and purrfect...loved everything ...i love viren and gia bonding...loved viren scolding jeevika and then vanshika scolding viren and jeevika laughing...thanks for pm...and one requst...plzzz try to update asap...u alwayskept us waiting for so long...this is my fav ff

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sushmakryan

@sushmakryan

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

i miss this story a lot

please update soon

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liveistolove

@liveistolove

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Such a beautiful update ❤️

Sorry for late comment..i am stuck with my final project so little busy these days..

Today got a little time and the first thing i am doing is reading your story and writing this.. 😊

Virika are as always adorable..

Funniest part was Vanshika scholding Viren and Jeevika having fun looking at it.. 😆

And the possessive viren is back.. 😆

Virika conversation about the future and viren not ready to let Gia go abroad for studies was the typical possessive viren style.. 😆

Jeevika know how to handle this possessive husband of hers very well..

Looking forward to read more adorable Virika in the coming chapters..

Keep writing 👍🏼

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Kays94

@Kays94

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

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millee18

@millee18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

😊

OKay so first of all. Hate you for ending it on that point.

How could you ?

u know i m still scared abt the Happenings at home!?

can you please update and let us know😳

Its very Scary! hope my Gia is fine😊

But this update was so mixed of emotions... got to see jeeviks's preggo side ! if she is 😆

have read it nth time till now and still cant get over it !

it was so cute yet funny 😃👏

thanks for updating and write next part now

Love ya

Cont soon

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Fairuz Maliha

@virikamaliha

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#88

awesome update..
the way viren take care of her just sooo sweet...
I just really hope jeevs is pregnant...
love the hospital scene and also blood test scene just sweet and cute...
I hope gia is fine..
u shouldn't stop here...
plzzz update soon plzz

Edited by virikamaliha - 10 years ago

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Simarpreetm

@Simarpreetm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Let me start by thanking u for this update.. N also saying tat I hate u for stopping where u hv stopped.. How could U do tat to ur readers. I Love how Viren teases jeevika for not being careful when she was walking around.. N he telling her if she walks on her own then she can get the test done first n then the sprain can be taken care of. But with this also he was careful tat jeevika doesn't stress too much n walked with her hand in hand. Calming her down coz she wasn't feeling well n was in not the right state for her test. He lifting her to the bed so tat the doc can check her sprain. Her loving the closeness btw them. Love it all. N now coming to the last part. The phone call n u keeping us guessing now what's gonna happen further.. Love how u suddenly stop to make the readers play the guessing game but I also hate u for doing tat to us. But I still love u Keeni.. Thank u a lovely update.. Will be waiting for the next one.. N it better be super soon.. <3

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Sameeha Anwar

@Sameeha.Tacker

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Dare something happen to my Gia! I will haunt u in your dreams. 😡

I just pray that my baby is safe and perfectly fine and if something happens to her, you will see the worst side of me!

But I can give u tight huggy for updating one of my fav story but only after heartbeat!!!!! They both are so so special to me.

Loved the update except for the last part of course! Viren is such a caring husband! Lucky jeevika 😳

Jeevika being stubborn?? Oh yes side effects of being pregnant 🤣

Really hope the test is positive because I have already considered her pregnant and mommy of two. Hope they have mannyyy Manny more kids and u give us more updates. Make sure u give us a romantic update soon because I still can't figure out how jeevika got pregnant!! 😆

DONT LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO GIA!! Do you get that in ur skull Miss.Karina Dargan??? I will stab you to death just before your birthday

Updateee sooonishhh

Advance happy wala budday 🥳