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Posted: 10 years ago
Shoot Me !!! LM !!

Ranveer as a sharp shooter and has fascination for Iron Man suit ! 😛😛😛

hey bhagwan !! Kya Kya dekhna baki hai !!
And I thought we knew the long list of skills he already has !! 😉😉😉😉

Joking aside, lovely update dear !! They are enjoying themselves and I actually feel sad that their trip is ending soon.. as if my own vacation is getting over. 😕

Can't wait to read about the mysterious conversation that made him angry...!!

Your FFs are a savior..


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456

Hey LM

I am writing this chupke chupke, if my teacher sees what I am actually doing in the class 😆😆

Coming back to the chapter 😃 It was lovely , I liked there conversation , but I really want to know who Ranveer talked to on the phone 😃😉

Aww Ranveer know 's how to shoot , and Ishani is impressed 😳🤗

Don't apologize dear , because we all IshVeer fans can understand that it is hard to find inspiration nowdays 😕 But dear please continue writing , your story is keeping us sane 🤗

Love you ❤️❤️




MM, you are one risk taker. 😆😆 Bhala school meon koi aisa karta hai kya? 😆😉 But I'm proud of you. 😆 Don't take that as encouragement though. 🤣


I'll be revealing about the person in the chapter after the next, though it isn't that much of a surprise. 😳😳


Thats was really some on the spot craziness on my part. 😲😆😆


I'm happy that my story can help a bit to keep you sane. 😃 Thank you so much MM. 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it. ⭐️⭐️


Love you too! ❤️❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Phew took me long enough to read all 28 chapters, bt i finally accomplished. Before my review, I need to shout out this -


HOW CAN YOU HATE IRONMAN ISHAANI??????


Ironman is like, my fav, and then Omnitrix. Atleast she could hv taken Omnitrix, huh donald duck🥱I am all for disney bt hey, that was some insult to my fav comics😆


Coming to your story, like everyone said, the writing is flawless. The story just goes so easily, anything that comes in next chapter doesn't feel like surprise or twist, it feels like natural outcome, like it was meant to be.


So both of them left country and all the baggage behind and found each other. When Ishani appeared i was like how on earth she could be alive if she died, and felt you were basing this story to another universe and not on serialverse, but then it was all explained slowly. RV's cold indifference made me think he was gonna be furious with her for this death-trick, but then OMG his attack😲 like Ishaani I also freaked out, thought the guy had heart attack or something.


And Ishaani, seriously like she smacked that Bitch Eve/Eva (?) in the later chapter, he needed to smack her as well. I get her pov but it was time she sees that they are better with each other andye kayanat humesha saazish kar rahi hain in dono ko milane ki. And boy, did he made her realize. They took it slowly, redoing all phases which they all skipped in their relation thanks to TRP hungry CVs and their idiotic twists😆 Friendship, trust, communication, ye sab to pehle hi tha, but all those MUs stripped these out. I liked how they slowly started talking, going through their insecurities, dark fears, all MUs and rewrote their love story. RV's patience and Ishaani's acceptence was portrayed beautiful and not a bit OOC.


I liked it how you kept it strictly platonic and I should give kudos to other readers to who were not demanding these two to jump in bed together the moment they met. RV's quote where he said there are two types of lovers, platonic and soulmates, made so much sense. They fit in every way, and they finally understood it.


I adored Martin and claudia, the latter is like the strict Headmistress to the naughty boy when RV was sick 😆 You also approached the issue of social hierarchy and his insecurities about his kids, and TWINS😳 Ishaani's reply to his fears showed how far she had come. That Moca in cafe, RV's confession about telling everything to Martin during one drunk state and accepting it, then that clown show, it told they both went through self development while they were apart, which was needed for both of them. When they finally came together, they were ready, on a spiritual level.Baaki ka rasta saath chal lenge ye dono😳


The Vegas thing was so funny😆that homo adult show and RV want to go to strip club 🤣 and he invited Ishaani and her reaction😆🤣 that vodka competition, at least they won money. You know when I read they didn't get married I remembered one Olicity (Arrow) FF I read, where they two also thought they drunk married in Vegas but they didn't. Like most of readers of yours I want them sober and happy during their rewedding.


The rings they gave each other, Ishaani's gift to him, the writing and their feelings were portrayed simply yet beautifully. I thought she might propose him you know😆 the gifts might be simple, but they struck some deep strings in RV's heart.


I was thinking 28 chapters passed and no family drama, looks like family intervention coming up next



I confess I am not a avid follower of the show, actually not a follower at all. I caught bit and pieces when Ishaani and RV finally cleared all MU and then he got shot. That day I saw Arjun Bijlani there and decided to check this forum to see what happened, that's how I came across this FF. Thankfully I did, afternoon passed and I read such a heart touching brilliant story.

Do continue soon. And stretch it as long as you want to, we are loving it😆

With best wishes,

Riya



PS Really don't bother to send me PM. I am mostly inactive in IF. I will check the FF once a while of my own and will drop some comment. Infuriating yes, but well that;s me, in all my glory😆


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: matsh

Shoot Me !!! LM !!

Ranveer as a sharp shooter and has fascination for Iron Man suit ! 😛😛😛

hey bhagwan !! Kya Kya dekhna baki hai !!
And I thought we knew the long list of skills he already has !! 😉

Joking aside, lovely update dear !! They are enjoying themselves and I actually feel sad that their trip is ending soon.. as if my own vacation is getting over. 😕

Can't wait to read about the mysterious conversation that made him angry...!!

Your FFs are a savior..




Thank you so much Matsh! 🤗🤗 I'm glad that you liked it so much! ⭐️⭐️


Matsh, that was some really spontaneous additions. 🤣🤣


I really feel so happy writing them like this that I feel sad myself that their trip is coming to an end. 😭😭 But since I feel hapoy enough to let out a spoiler, there is still one more surprise. 😉😉


I'll be letting out the details of the conversation in the chapter after the next. 😳😳


And I'm glad that I can bring a smile to your faces. 😃😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





MM, you are one risk taker.😆😆Bhala school meon koi aisa karta hai kya?😆😉But I'm proud of you.😆Don't take that as encouragement though.🤣


I'll be revealing about the person in the chapter after the next, though it isn't that much of a surprise.😳😳


Thats was really some on the spot craziness on my part.😲😆😆


I'm happy that my story can help a bit to keep you sane.😃Thank you so much MM.🤗🤗I'm glad that you liked it.⭐️⭐️


Love you too!❤️❤️



Finally home :D

In my self defence , yeh tumhari story or forum ka kamal hai 😆 😆 I am way to addicted to your story and forum 😉 😉 My teacher almost caught me yaar 😛 I was terrified , but my friend saved me 😃

I will definitely take that as encouragement , yaar chori chupke tumhari story parhna apna maza hai 😉

I have a thought of who it could be , but I will wait to see what happens 😉

Please update soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Phew took me long enough to read all 28 chapters, bt i finally accomplished. Before my review, I need to shout out this -


HOW CAN YOU HATE IRONMAN ISHAANI??????


Ironman is like, my fav, and then Omnitrix. Atleast she could hv taken Omnitrix, huh donald duck🥱I am all for disney bt hey, that was some insult to my fav comics😆


Coming to your story, like everyone said, the writing is flawless. The story just goes so easily, anything that comes in next chapter doesn't feel like surprise or twist, it feels like natural outcome, like it was meant to be.


So both of them left country and all the baggage behind and found each other. When Ishani appeared i was like how on earth she could be alive if she died, and felt you were basing this story to another universe and not on serialverse, but then it was all explained slowly. RV's cold indifference made me think he was gonna be furious with her for this death-trick, but then OMG his attack😲 like Ishaani I also freaked out, thought the guy had heart attack or something.


And Ishaani, seriously like she smacked that Bitch Eve/Eva (?) in the later chapter, he needed to smack her as well. I get her pov but it was time she sees that they are better with each other andye kayanat humesha saazish kar rahi hain in dono ko milane ki. And boy, did he made her realize. They took it slowly, redoing all phases which they all skipped in their relation thanks to TRP hungry CVs and their idiotic twists😆 Friendship, trust, communication, ye sab to pehle hi tha, but all those MUs stripped these out. I liked how they slowly started talking, going through their insecurities, dark fears, all MUs and rewrote their love story. RV's patience and Ishaani's acceptence was portrayed beautiful and not a bit OOC.


I liked it how you kept it strictly platonic and I should give kudos to other readers to who were not demanding these two to jump in bed together the moment they met. RV's quote where he said there are two types of lovers, platonic and soulmates, made so much sense. They fit in every way, and they finally understood it.


I adored Martin and claudia, the latter is like the strict Headmistress to the naughty boy when RV was sick 😆 You also approached the issue of social hierarchy and his insecurities about his kids, and TWINS😳 Ishaani's reply to his fears showed how far she had come. That Moca in cafe, RV's confession about telling everything to Martin during one drunk state and accepting it, then that clown show, it told they both went through self development while they were apart, which was needed for both of them. When they finally came together, they were ready, on a spiritual level.Baaki ka rasta saath chal lenge ye dono😳


The Vegas thing was so funny😆that homo adult show and RV want to go to strip club 🤣 and he invited Ishaani and her reaction😆🤣 that vodka competition, at least they won money. You know when I read they didn't get married I remembered one Olicity (Arrow) FF I read, where they two also thought they drunk married in Vegas but they didn't. Like most of readers of yours I want them sober and happy during their rewedding.


The rings they gave each other, Ishaani's gift to him, the writing and their feelings were portrayed simply yet beautifully. I thought she might propose him you know😆 the gifts might be simple, but they struck some deep strings in RV's heart.


I was thinking 28 chapters passed and no family drama, looks like family intervention coming up next



I confess I am not a avid follower of the show, actually not a follower at all. I caught bit and pieces when Ishaani and RV finally cleared all MU and then he got shot. That day I saw Arjun Bijlani there and decided to check this forum to see what happened, that's how I came across this FF. Thankfully I did, afternoon passed and I read such a heart touching brilliant story.

Do continue soon. And stretch it as long as you want to, we are loving it😆

With best wishes,

Riya



PS Really don't bother to send me PM. I am mostly inactive in IF. I will check the FF once a while of my own and will drop some comment. Infuriating yes, but well that;s me, in all my glory😆


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Oh my! This review is huge! 😆😆😆
First thing's first. Ishaani never struck me as a person who would be interested in robots and aliens. 🤣🤣🤣 And its a co-incidence that you are a Iron Man and Ben 10 fan too. 😆😆😆 I was never a Disney fan, to be honest, and Ishaani does seem to be among those type of girls who believe in wishful fantasies. 😛😛
I'm glad that you liked the story. The progress of the story is something I've been very cautious about and I usually weigh out the scene pretty carefully to see whether it matches the character's response in reality and not go completely OC.
Seeing the way the CVs have butchered their love story and the characterizations in their love for TRPs, I atleast got the point straight that Ranveer and Ishaani could never be together unless and until they don't rectify their flaws and give their relationship another angle all together. That attack thing was something that came to me because I know the kind of person Ranveer is. If you ask me, I've always thought their re-union of face to face to be something along these lines.
Sorry for freaking you out though. 😆😆
Yep, that Eva totally had it coming for her. And yep, as you said, they had those elements in their relationship back as friends, but it kept diminishing steadily until their relationship had no base at all. Re-establishing that was a must and I'm glad that you liked the way I wrote it. 😳😳



As several of us believe, Ranveer and Ishaani's relationship was never about the physical aspect and more about their spiritual connection. 😃😃
Martina and Claudine are my two proud creations and everything related to them makes me smile. I'm glad that you loved the character development they managed to achieve by staying apart. It was something they were both in need of. 😛


Vegas has been pretty interesting for me on the whole to write. And I'm glad it's come out that well. 😳😳 Amd I wanted those surprises to have a nostalgic element more than anything else. The casino part was crazy fun to write as well. 😃😉


All that I can say from the review that you have written is that you have an excellent understanding of the characters and their emotions in spite of not being a regular or avid follower. You have made very astuteassumotions about the several points I've wanted to portray in the story and I could not have been happier. And your guess on the family intervention is an very interesting one as well. 😉

This story does have a long way to go still. 😃 And thank you so much for such a heart warming review. It totally made my day. 🤗🤗


Loads of love,
LadyMeringue ❤️


Ps. No worries. Read and comment whenever you feel like it. 😛😛
Edited by LadyMeringue - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MM123456


Finally home :D

In my self defence , yeh tumhari story or forum ka kamal hai 😆 😆 I am way to addicted to your story and forum 😉 😉 My teacher almost caught me yaar 😛 I was terrified , but my friend saved me 😃

I will definitely take that as encouragement , yaar chori chupke tumhari story parhna apna maza hai 😉

I have a thought of who it could be , but I will wait to see what happens 😉

Please update soon 😉




Kya yaar tum bhi. Marwaaogi mujhe bhi ek din apne saath. 😆😆😆


I'm interested to see whether your guess is right or no. 😉😉


I'll be updating soon enough. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue





Kya yaar tum bhi. Marwaaogi mujhe bhi ek din apne saath.😆😆😆


I'm interested to see whether your guess is right or no.😉😉


I'll be updating soon enough.😃



Don't worry LM 😉 I will make sure that I don't get caught , plus if I do I will just use my charm 😉 😆 😆

On a seriouse note , don't worry apart from talking with my friends , reading your story chupke chupke I do studie 😉

I am really excited to read the next , I really can 't wait to know if I guess right or not 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 29: Aerial Pop-Ups

A/N: Hey guys! Here is the next update. :D :D

Happy Reading! :D

Ishaani sat in the living room, tapping her feet irritably. She had been sitting on the couch for the last fifteen minutes and Ranveer was still in his room.

"Oh, c'mon! How much longer?" Ishaani stared at the door to Ranveer's room angrily as Ranveer's voice ensued, an apologetic tone in it.

"Just a minute!" Ishaani slapped her head and yelled back, barely managing to stifle a yawn alongside.

"You've been giving me that answer for the past 15 minutes! Just get out already or I'm going to pull you out by your ear!"

"Alright, alright! I'm done!" Half a minute later, Ranveer exited his room in a navy blue jacket, white T-shirt and beige corduroy pant combo and Ishaani cocked up an eyebrow in his direction.

"Seriously? Getting into this took you 15 minutes?" Ranveer looked flustered and Ishaani crossed her arms.

"Oh don't be silly. I couldn't decide on what to wear." Ishaani cocked her eyebrow up at him suspiciously and Ranveer hastened to continue. "I mean, I wanted to wear something good. It's not every day that you go for a hot air balloon ride now, do you?"

Ishaani continued to stare at him and his gaze faltered.

"What's going on?" Ranveer coughed uncomfortably, while Ishaani gave him an expectant look.

"What do you mean?" Ishaani shot him an exasperated look and Ranveer shuffled his feet.

"You've been acting weird since yesterday, ever since you sent that stupid collectible by courier." Ranveer smiled at the irritation in Ishaani's voice at the memory of the Iron Man suit but controlled himself, seeing as Ishaani let go of another yawn swiftly.

"No, I haven't." Ishaani narrowed her eyes at him and he tore his eyes away from her.

"Come on. Out with it." Ranveer spoke quickly, perhaps a little too quickly, setting Ishaani on the trail.

"Oh Sunny, you're just overthinking stuff." Ishaani gave him a mock impressed look and spoke in a dead-pan voice.

"Huh. And I thought that overreacting over me wearing that orange dress was normal." Ranveer rolled his eyes at her while Ishaani clicked her tongue in disapproval.

"Sunny, you know well enough that you look much more amazing in this yellow dress. Sunny looks... well, sunny!"

"Ha. Ha. As much as I appreciate the compliment, trust me, 5 in the morning is not a good time." Ranveer threw his hands up in the air.

"Sunny, it's a sunrise balloon ride. What do you expect?"

"You could have atleast told me before shaking me up awake like that! Besides, why on earth did you have to go in for the sunrise ride? We could have gone for the sunset one as well."

"Well, it's a surprise. So don't get all cranky. Besides, it's our last two days in Vegas. Be happy." Ranveer waved his hand in the air while Ishaani understood the curt dismissal of the topic.

"Fine. But this better be worth the wait." Ranveer's eyes widened in surprise momentarily and Ishaani was quick to catch on to it. She however, chose to remain silent except for letting out a small growl of frustration. Ranveer shrugged his shoulder simply and gestured her to make her way to the door.

Ranveer and Ishaani reached the spot within another 15 minutes from where all balloons were to take off. They walked up to of the pilots and the manager, who were busy in an animated chat. The pilot and manager saw Ranveer and gave him a broad smile, which only seemed to puzzle Ishaani more.

"Ah Mr. Vaghela! All the preparations are done. And you're in luck. The weather is perfect and the air cool. It should be a fun ride." Ranveer smiled meaningfully at the two of them and Ishaani felt slightly irked at her sleep being disturbed so rudely for the same. Ranveer quickly walked over and signed the waiver form and returned back to Ishaani.

"Here's the form. Sign it."

"What is it?"

"It's a waiver form, disclaiming that should anything happen to us during the ride, it's entirely on our risk and not the company's."

"What?"

"It is standard procedure, sweetie. Doesn't mean anything is going to happen." Ishaani gave Ranveer a disgruntled look and signed the paper while Ranveer looked at her happily. Handing over the paper to the manager, Ranveer walked back towards Ishaani while the pilot walked up to them.

The pilot led the two of them into the carrier and took his position. Ishaani stared around as her sleep finally washed away and was replaced by curious excitement. The pilot gave Ranveer a thumbs up as he started the helium in the engine. Ishaani stood by Ranveer's side as the balloon took off slowly, soaring through the air effortlessly and the view of Vegas came up before them.

The sky was still dark enough that the city lights remained on and Ishaani felt the same feeling of euphoria in her heart again. She looked towards Ranveer, her irritation from before rapidly fading away and pulled his arm around her shoulder. Ranveer smiled at her as he cuddled her, both of them enjoying the cool air whipping their faces.

"Liking it so far?" There was a strange deja vu about the question that Ranveer just asked her, but she could not put her finger on it. She simply looked at him and smiled.

"It's beautiful. But how come you went for the Sunrise Balloon Ride?"

"I felt it would be something memorable to both of us. Starting off in the dark and getting off at light." Ishaani smiled and stared ahead, her mind taking in the view before her. The balloon had now passed over the Red Rock Canyons and had taken a turn around the suburban city.

Ishaani looked at the city lights before her happily as she could see the sky changing its colours from indigo to purplish-blue. She knew that dawn was still half an hour away but it felt extraordinary. Ishaani could mentally define this experience as being stuck in a limbo between night and day.

Just as she was about to mention how beautiful the night lights looked from above, the view before her blacked out. She recoiled for a moment, afraid of what had happened and her voice trembled slightly.

"Ranveer?" Before he could reply, some part of the lights returned in front of her eyes. What she saw next however, stole her breath away. The lights that had reappeared were in the form of a huge heart for nearly a minute, before the complete set of lights returned back.

She turned her attention towards Ranveer, who was looking at her keenly, a shy look on his face. Ishaani looked at him, her eyes glistening with tears, as the skylight around them steadily grew lighter.

"Ranveer, what-?"

"I know it's pretty corny, but I couldn't help it."

"So this is why you were so anxious for everything to be perfect." Ranveer gave her a simple look and she clasped her hand over her heart.

"So how did you like it?"

"I... I don't know what to say. This is so overwhelming."

"Then let me do the talking." Ranveer got to his knee and Ishaani stared at him, stunned. "Ishaani, I don't need to tell you since when I've loved you and from how long I've loved you. You know that. You know the whole story. But that's the past; book we've closed together. In these five months that I've re-lived life with you, I just want to tell you that you've made me fall in love with you every single day. In the three years of our separation, I only though about how I could hate you or detest you for what you did, yet when my eyes met yours for the first time after our years of loneliness, all I could think was 'How could I ever hate you?'"

"You're the reason I live. You're the reason why I pull every breath. You're the reason why living makes me feel alive. I made a fool-proof plan for our new story and it has worked just how I wanted. We established trust, friendship and communication between us. Now I want to establish love. I think the two of us have been ready to move past the friendship phase since long and take our relationship to the next level."

Ishaani stared at Ranveer transfixed as the first rays of the now rising sun broke through the horizon.

"I love you. And I know I'm stupid enough to confess this way, but I just want you to know that you are to me what the first rays of sunlight are to the night. I just want to make you my own for eternity."

"Ranveer, I-"

"Shhh. I know. That's why I'm proposing to you, not for wedlock, but for being my love. Will you be it?" Ishaani looked stunned for a couple of moments as the sunlight hit her face in full force, before she whispered softly, tears now openly streaming from her eyes.

"Yes. Yes, I do accept to be the love of your life. I love you, too. And I want to be yours for eternity as well." Ranveer got up and let his lips claim Ishaani's softly, as he could feel her lips trembling against his own. He hoisted her into the air as his arms caught her waist securely and her arms were around his neck while their lips met with a passion such like they never knew.

Gently bringing her down again, both of them smiled at each other for several minutes. The ring over Ishaani's finger sparkled strongly in the sunlight and a teardrop fell from her eyes over the heart.

Ranveer slowly pulled her chin up, so that they were staring into each other's eyes.

"Don't ever let another drop of tear come between our hearts." Ranveer rubbed the tear tracks from her face and held her close to him. "We're done with this. We're done with crying over everything. I only want you to know happiness with me. A smile is all I ask in return for my anguish."

Ishaani smiled at him and let his lips cover her own once again as they slowly felt the same excitement grow inside them, a strange warmth tingling their nerves. Yet somehow they felt the difference this time, for there was something magical about the way their lips met and parted, where every time a strange bubble of elations burst in the pits of their stomach.

Separating from each other slowly after savoring their moment, Ranveer looked at Ishaani, a blissful oblivion fading away everything else from his view.

"I love you." Ishaani put her hand over his heart now and felt it thumping through her fingers. She smiled and looked at him.

"I think you have my answer as well, given that it's my heart beating within you. But just so you know, I love you, too." Ranveer gave Ishaani a warm smile as the balloon now glided over the Red Rock Canyon once again.

The balloon descended after another ten minutes and came to halt at the same spot from where it took off. Ranveer and Ishaani left the carrier hand in hand, a warm smile on their faces. The manager walked up to them and smiled.

"Sir. Madam. Allow me to lead you towards our small marquee where we organize our breakfast meals for the flyers." Ranveer gave him a cursory nod as the manager led the two of them to the marquee. Several small tables lay there and the manager led them over to one of them.

Ishaani and Ranveer sat comfortably as a waiter walked over to them after five minutes, two glasses of champagne on it along with the customary breakfast of bacon and eggs and a plate of Belgian waffles. Ranveer raised his glass in toast towards Ishaani and she smiled and did the same.

"To the next level."

"To the next level."

Ranveer took a sip from his glass of champagne and Ishaani did the same. Ishaani had barely taken a sip when she had a weird expression on her face. She kept down the glass and peered inside it. Confused, she took the fork and put it inside the glass, removing the foreign object that had touched her lips. She stared stunned, however, when she realized that it was a ring.

Ranveer stared at her keenly, watching every expression minutely before Ishaani turned to stare at him and laughed. Ranveer looked abashed.

"Seriously, Ranveer? The world's most clich method of proposing?" Ranveer flushed and Ishaani smiled. "Well, I like it. I'm pretty corny that way." Ranveer heaved a sigh of relief and gave her a warm smile.

Ishaani handed over the ring to Ranveer and he cleaned with the tablecloth. Ishaani stared at Ranveer intently as he removed the previous ring from her finger and slipped on the new one. The new ring was similar to the first, except that the new ring had two hearts with diamonds embedded in it and a thin band of silver running around.

"Honestly speaking, do you intend for me to have an entire collection of rings by the time we reach the altar?"

"Something like that, yes," chuckled Ranveer. When Ishaani gave him an incredulous look, he smiled and continued. "The first promise ring was the sign of established trust. This one is established friendship. So by the time we reach the altar, you'll have rings enough to symbolize all the different bases of our relationship that we achieved."

"But what if something goes wrong?"

"Then these rings will show you the light." Ishaani smiled at him, comprehension dawning over her as Ranveer gave her a loving look.

"You're the most amazing person I've ever met."

"Mutual sentiments." Ishaani chuckled and Ranveer continued. "But we can save that conversation for some other time. For now, Bon Appetit!"

Weee! :D :D This update got done much sooner than I anticipated. :D :D

Constructive criticism will be more than welcome and sorry for any typos. :D :D

Edited by LadyMeringue - 9 years ago
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First of all thank you so much for such a fast update 🤗 🤗

Coming back to the chapter , this was such a sweet and lovely chapter 😳 😳 Just like Ishani I did not see the proposal coming (not for marriage ) , but it was really

I liked the start , that was so funny and realistic of Ishani to behave like that but then the surprise did wonders 😳 😳 The way you described there kisses 😳 😳 But what stole my heart in this chapter. was Ranveer 's proposal he might fall in love with Ishani everyday here I am falling in love with him everyday 😳 😳

But LM I want to know who Ranveer talked to on the phone with 😆 😆 The suspence is killing me 😆

Please update soon ❤️

PS : Love you ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Edited by MM123456 - 10 years ago

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