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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatKiKali

Kri superbπŸ‘πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

Shaggy n sanskari abla nari🀣Jo dekhta hai woh hota nahi jo hota hai woh dekhega nahiπŸ˜‰
Romi ka rangeen past.. its same here tooπŸ˜‰
Smart RKB
Rinki ko mihir ki behen banayaπŸ˜†
I soo loved ishita's charecterisation here - thoda khatta thoda metta thoda daring typs😊
I even loved d ekta typical - yeh roka nahi hosakta dialogueπŸ˜‰
Seriously? Ramupa?πŸ€£πŸ˜‰
N IIN!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†Ohh god I had a laughter sessionπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Thank u kri babyπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

Baby 😲 🀣 Nooo, its mine.. πŸ˜†
Edited by -Samutha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update ishita is solid boss loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Samutha-

Res
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Krii.. 🀣 What u want me to tell..πŸ˜†
I really laughed like a mad.. 🀣
Shagun aur sankaari.. OMG.. I was imagining that scene.. Result I again I became a certified mental.. πŸ˜†
Ramupa.. Nooo πŸ˜†
Totally an hilarious one.. 😳
My Kri.. Yur writing is the reason for my happiness πŸ˜‰
Do write more..


AC ki fan ho tum...Bhool gayi? Ussi pe has rahi ho? 😲

Che che...Kaisi dhokebaaz fan ho yaar?πŸ˜† Poor Shaggy... Ek choti si koshish usse sanskaari dikaane ka aur yeh reaction... Shagun toh AC ke saath hi teek hai...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatKiKali

Kri superb πŸ‘πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

Shaggy n sanskari abla nari 🀣 Jo dekhta hai woh hota nahi jo hota hai woh dekhega nahi πŸ˜‰
Romi ka rangeen past.. its same here too πŸ˜‰
Smart RKB
Rinki ko mihir ki behen banaya πŸ˜†
I soo loved ishita's charecterisation here - thoda khatta thoda metta thoda daring typs 😊
I even loved d ekta typical - yeh roka nahi hosakta dialogue πŸ˜‰
Seriously? Ramupa? πŸ€£πŸ˜‰
N IIN!!!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Ohh god I had a laughter session πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
Thank u kri baby πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰


Aap Ishima ko manoge lekin Ramupa ko nahi? Kyon? Double standards practice kar rahe ho?πŸ˜†

Amrita's dialogue in Rinki's Shaadi inspired me a lot u see...

That's a lovely comment Aishu...Thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Samutha-

Baby 😲 🀣 Nooo, its mine.. πŸ˜†


Really girls...sana I am calling nish...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -Samutha-

Baby 😲 🀣 Nooo, its mine.. πŸ˜†


Meine to aise hi kaha baby.. πŸ˜†
Nishu kaha ho tum? Teri baby phirse tujhse cheating karrahi hai πŸ˜†πŸ€£
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatKiKali



Meine to aise hi kaha baby..πŸ˜†
Nishu kaha ho tum? Teri baby phirse tujhse cheating karrahi haiπŸ˜†πŸ€£


Exactly she is even searching for her...
U both damn...Kribha rocks...lol...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for PM.
It was Brilliant part.😊
In this,Raman Part was Just Awesome,I likes it.😊
Mihir confusion was so Cute.😊
Ishra conversation about the plan was so Interesting.😊
Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.
PriyaCherry.

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Posted: 11 years ago
haai? how come i missed this story,... thanks kri... got ur pm... pata nahi kese miss ho gaya...read all of them at a go,,, lovely,...continue soon
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Simmi knocked the door again...

Simmi: Raman... Kya kar rahe ho? Ladkiyan bhi itna samay nahi lenge...

Raman: Do minute di...

Simmi: Jaldi aao yaar...

After Simmi's exit,

Raman: Bye Ishita...

Ishita: Aise hi jaoge. Kapde toh change karke jao... Warna neeche log poochenge itne der Mihir ke saath kamre mein kya kar rahe the...

Mihir: Ishita...

Ishita: Kya? Mujhe shak nahi ho raha hai. Logon ko hoga...shayad.

Raman: Ok then...I'll be back in a minute...

After getting ready,

Raman: Chale...

Ishita: Neeche jaate jaate idea ko badal mat dena...Ladki ko dekhke...

Raman: Chup chap andar baito yaar.

Downstairs,

Mr.Arora: Raman puttar itna der kyon kar raha hai... Kahi usse humari Shagun bitiya...

Toshi: Nahi nahi... Shagun bitiya kinni pyaari bachi hai... Meri bahu banne ki har gun hai usme...

Shagun: (in a low voice) (To her mom) Are you crazy? Mujhe iss chidiya ghar mein phasana chahti ho? That loud woman Toshi, crazy Simmi... Ya, Raman is fine. Phir bhi...

Mrs.Arora: (In a low choice) Chup kar...Shukar hai itne bade parivaar mein bahu banne ki mauka mil raha hai... Tumne college mein jo kiya, uske baad...Just shut up. Shaadi ko hone do.

Shagun: (In a low choice) Mujhe laga Ashok mujhe apnayega. Lekin... ROMI...

Toshi: Kya hua puttar? (Noticing Romi) Romi...aa jao. (To Shagun) Tu Romi ko pehle se jaanti hai...

Raman: Haan ma...Same college... Isliye maine bulaya Romi ko... Kyon Shagun?

Shagun: Jee...Raman...Jee

Romi: Ramanji? Shagun...tum aise kaise...

Shagun: Its ok Romi... Meri rishtha tay honewala hai... Roka horaha hai...

Raman: Main bhaag toh nahi raha hoon yaar... Do minute pehle baat kare?

Mrs.Arora: Shagun won't be comfortable...

Raman: Kya aunty? Aapke aankhon se saamne hi baat karne wale hain... Just two minutes...

Shagun: Ok

Raman and Shagun walked towards the corner of their hall way and settled on the dining table.

Shagun: So...You know it?

Raman: Excuse me?

Shagun: Jyada naatak mat karo Raman. Fine...Forget it.

Raman: Shagun?

Shagun: (Placing her hand on Raman's hand) Come on yaar... Ashok was my past... I mean tumhare zindagi mein bhi aisa kuch hua hoga na...Let us forget all that...

Raman: Ab yeh Ashok koun hai?

Shagun: What? Romi ne...

Raman : Romi is my best friend. Lekin Ashok koun?

Shagun: Koi bhi nahi...

Raman: Shagun yaar... Yeh tumne meri dil dukha di... I wanted to get married to you but you have another man in your life?

Shagun: No No Raman...That was a misunderstanding...

Raman: Sure? Ashok...

Shagun: Yes... Ofcourse... Ashok... My friend. Romi aur mera jagda hua. Toh mujhe laga Romi kuch ulta seedha... Its ok... Leave it na.

Raman: Thank god... Kyonki mumma ko toh tum itni pasand aa gayi... Mumma toh tujhe bahu banake aaram se settle hone ki plan tak bana liya... Ofcourse...Bahu bann rahi ho... Kaana pakaana, ghar ki saaf safaayi... Saara kuch tum sambhalogi...

Shagun: Sab main sambhalungi?

Raman: Haan yaar...Tum toh itni sanskaari bhi ho... Mumma teri poora dhyan rakhegi... Tumhari mom ne kaha ki tujhe parayi mard ko dekhna pasand nahi hai... Matlab... Kisiko aankh utaakar tak nahi dekhti ho tum. College mein bhi aise hi thi na? Ashok toh dost hai na?

Shagun: Bilkul

Raman: Toh mumma bhi tujhe aise hi sambhalegi... Waise bhi humare ghar mein bahu betiyon ko ghar ke bahaar nahi jaane dete...Guards ke bina... Safety ke liye.

Shagun: Bodyguard?

Raman: Haan...

Shagun: Aur kya kya hota hai iss ghar mein?

Raman: So sweet...Abhi se tumhe sab kuch jaana hai...

Shagun: Yeh maid sar dhakke aise...

Raman: Shaadi shutha hai humari Neelu. Driver ki biwi hai. Toh sanskaar yehi hai na. Tumhe toh pata hoga...

Shagun: Lekin Toshi aunty...

Raman: Voh iss ghar ki badi hai... Rule makers can be rule breakers yaar... (Seeing Shagun's raised eyebrow) Iss ghar mein...

Shagun: Tumhe...I mean aapko bhi yeh sab pasand hai... Yeh sab toh purane jamaane ki baat hai na...

Raman: Bilkul nahi...Main videsh mein padke zaroor aaya hoon lekin bolte hain na...Phir bhi dil hai hindustaani...

Shagun: Haan...Lekin acha hai na... SPA vaghera jaate waqt bodyguard bhi hoga toh...

Raman: SPA? Kya bol rahi ho Shagun?

Shagun: Kyon?

Raman: SPA koun jayega? I mean iss ghar mein... Simi di aur Rinky di toh haldi chandan se hi kaam chalate hain...

Shagun: Natural therapy...Very nice... Chale?

Raman: Yes...

Toshi and others were eagerly waiting for their opinion when Raman announced.

Raman: Ma... Mujhe Shagun pasand hai...

Toshi: Good good...Yeh toh changa hogaya... Chalo ji...Roka...

Shagun: One second... Kisine mujhse poocha?

Mrs.Arora: Shagun beta... Sab kuch ho raha hai na...Tum...

Shagun: For god's sake...Mom...Will you please shut up?

Toshi: Yeh kaisi baat kar rahi hai teri ma se?

Shagun: And you...Old lady... Stop bossing around. Tum meri koun lagti ho?

Raman: SHAGUN... Hold your tongue... Ma hai voh meri... Tameez se pesh aao warna dafaa ho jao...

Shagun: Aur nahi toh...Kisko tumse shaadi karni hai?

Toshi: Shagun...Yeh kya keh rahi ho?

Mrs.Arora: Shagun...

Shagun: Mom... Main yahaan aane ke liye isliye haan kaha kyonki Ashok ke baad mujhe ek ameer ladka mil raha tha. Lekin yahaan toh... Yeh ghar nahi school hai... Sar dhakke chalo, SPA mat jao... What's all this?

Toshi: Kya? Aise kisne...

Raman: Ma...Aap bhi...Poocho Ashok koun hai?

Toshi: Haan... Yeh Ashok koun hai?

Shagun: That's none of your business. Mujhe aapke puttar se shaadi nahi karni... I'm leaving...

Mr. And Mrs.Arora started running behind Shagun...

Mrs.Arora: Shagun...Shagun...

Raman: (Breathing a sign of relief) Chali gayi...

Simmi: Kya?

Raman: (With a sad face) Chali gayi di... Mujhe chodke...

Simmi: Tumne kya bola usse? Tumne kuch kiya na?

Raman: Ma...Dekho na... Maine toh haan hi bola tha na...

Simmi: Phir bhi... Kya baat kar rahe the?

Raman: Yehi ki ma humare liye bahut important hai aur unke tareeke se yeh ghar kitna acha chal raha hai aur...

Simmi: Sach bolo...

Toshi: Oye...Chup kar tu... Pareshaan ne kar mere puttar ko. Bol raha hai na... Acha hua uski asli gun humare saamne aaya. Ab kisi aur...

Raman: Karo aap. Taaki voh bhi mujhe reject kare...

Toshi: Aisa nahi bolte mere puttar...

Raman: Kitne ache mood ke saath aaya tha... Socha tum logon ke saath enjoy karoon lekin yeh... Ladki ne reject kar diya...

Rinky: (In a low voice) Yeh Raman itna naatak kaise karta hai?

Mihir: (in a low voice) Ishita ke sangati ka asar...Aur kya?

Raman: Main jaa raha hoon...

Saying so, Raman left that place with a sulky face and Mihir followed Raman. After reaching their room,

Raman: (Knocks) Ishita...Kholo...Main Raman...

Ishita opens the door and both of them gets inside.

Ishita: Kya hua?

Raman: Sab sort out hogaya... Ab tum chale jao... Mere drama ke side-effects ab hoga... Poore baraat ab yahaan aayega.

Ishita: Ok ok...(Hugs Raman) Bye...

Raman: Kaise jaogi?

Ishita: Jaise andar aayi, waise...

Raman: Dhyan se...

Mihir: Sach mein yaar... Iyer uncle ko ladke ki kami mehsoos hi nahi hone degi humari Ishu...

Raman: Inhi adaaon pe flat hogaya mein...

Mihir: Raman...I think they are coming... Shuru karte hain... (In a loud voice) Raman, leave it yaar...

Toshi: Kya hua?

Mihir: Raman jyada upset hogaya. Usse Shagun genuinely pasand aa gayi... Love at first sight aur yeh...

Toshi: Toh kya hua Raman puttar...Bhool jao...

Raman: Itne aasan hai kya?

Rinky: Toh kuch din ke liye Shaadi ki baat nahi karte...

Toshi: Tujhse kisine raah nahi poocha Rinky...

Raman: Aap dono ke beech...

Toshi: Usse chodo... Iss Shagun ko bhool jao na...

Raman: Itne jald...Thoda waqt toh...

Toshi: Teek hai... Koi iss ghar mein kuch din ke liye shaadi ki baat nahi karega... Khush?

Raman: Khush kahaan? Usse toh Shagun apne saath lekar chali gayi...

Mihir: Aunty...Main Raman ko sambhalunga... Don't worry...

Toshi: Teek hai...

Everyone left that place apart from Simmi...

Raman: Kya hua di?

Simmi: Mujhe yeh sab drama kyon lag raha hai?

Raman: Aisa hi lagega...Aap hi lekar aaye the na...Shagun ki rishtha... Mujhpe bharosa mat karo aap...

Param: (From somewhere) Simmu...Ananya ro rahi hai...

Simmi: Baad mein dekhti hoon tujhe...

After Simmi's exit,

Raman: Simmi di se toh bachkar rehna padega...

Mihir: Kya kiya tumne Shagun ke saath? Dhamka diya?

Raman: Yeh sab purana hogaya...Kuch naya try kiya... Romi ko saamne rakhke...

Raman narrated everything to Mihir who listened to everything with a open mouth...

Mihir: Brilliant...

Raman: Voh toh main hoon... Romi se pata chala ki uske jaan SPA pe hai...Toh teer chalaaya aur teer nishaani pe lag gayi... Usne khud apne muh se sach ugal diya... Ab mein free hogaya... Agar usse dhamki dene ki koshish kiya hota toh voh mujhe vaapas dhamki degi... Ki mujhe yeh rishtha kyon nahi chahiye... Ab khatam ho gaya

Mihir: Lekin Raman... Kuch strike hua kya?

Raman: Kya?

Mihir: Jo tumne Shagun se bola, usme aadha sach toh hai... Matlab, Toshi aunty ek perfect bahu ko toh chahti hai...

Raman: So?

Mihir: Do you think our Ishu fits in that category?

Raman: Why? Don't you think so? She's a nice girl...

Mihir: I know...Nice hone mein aur Toshi aunty ki bahu hone mein difference hai...

Raman: Kya bad bada raha hai tu?

Mihir: Ishita is not Perfect bahu' material...

Raman: Even I don't want her to be one... Mihir, tu jaanta hai... Ishita toh topper hai... I want her to be professionally successful... Uske haath mein pen aur laptop dekhna chahta hoon bhartan nahi...

Mihir: Toh Toshi aunty?

Raman: Ma bhi important hai... Mihir, don't get confused... Filaal mere dimaag mein koi bahut bada planning nahi hai... Main pehle unn problems ko bhagaana chahtha hoon, jo mere saamne hai... Shagun ko bhaga diya... Ab Subbu... Uske baad mumma ko manane ki tareeka sochna padega. Itna tension ek saath nahi le paunga... Kal...yaad hai na...

Mihir: Yes...

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