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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow dear
Awesome part
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Wow dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
Conept is superb
prologue is fantastically written
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Character Sketch is really beautifully written
but not mention who is rajesh malhotra??????
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Part 1
awesome start dear
i don't like it
i love it
Riya's family is so loving
Really good way to sleep with books
her grandpaa is so friendly and nice
loved the way aisha and riya support roshni
rajesh said no for divorce
really full proof plan
liza is
ariya meet was awesome 
really according to prologue really different from each other

Edited by SweetSheru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 2
its as awesome as the first one
actually i did comment with the first one 
but its not posted i was unknown to that 
till i got ur scrap
So arjun's and riya's family 
in the mandir
riya missed her exams 3 times
really shocking
but she kept trying 
thats good
Obviously car belongs to Arjun
and that man too
Wish iss baar na miss kare
update soon
Edited by SweetSheru - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

 

Part 3:-

Riya(yell):-tum..?

She had ware helmet.. She remove her helmet.. N the man sitting on driver sit get shocked..

Man(yell in shock):-tum..?

Riya glare him angrily..

Yes..u guys guess it right..the man is none other than Arjun..

Arjun:-tum..?tum meri gadi me aise kaise zabardasti Gus gayi..?abhi ke abhi utaro..meri gadi se..

Riya(in mind):-hey bhagwan..iss puri duniya me ek yahi insaan mila tha tumhe meri help ke liye bhejane ko..?

Arjun(waving hand in front of her,irritedly):-hey..sunai nahi de raha kya..?meine kaha utaro meri gadi se..

Riya(in mind):-hey bhagwan kaise situation me dal diya..lekin kehte he na ke kaam ho toh gadhe(donkey) ke bhi pair pakadne padte he. Muze bhi yahi karna padega..

Riya:-dekhiye..plz muze mere college tak drop kar dijiye plz..

Arjun:-dekho..mere pass aise faltu ke kam ke liye time nahi he..

Riya:-plz..plz..meine 4 times apni exams miss ki he..iss baar nahi..

Arjun(shocked):-4 times exams miss ki?

Riya:-ha..iss baar nahi kar sakti mein meri exams miss..plz..give me lift..

Arjun:-sach me exams ke liye hi Jana he na tumhe...?kahi apne bf ke sath kisi hotel mW toh nahi Jana..?

Riya glare him angrily..

Riya:-tum..meri help karne wale ho ya nahi..?

Arjun sigh irritedly..

Arjun:-kaha Jana he..?

Riya told her college address..

After some time Arjun stop his car in front of her college..

Riya come out from his car..

Riya:- thank u..waise ek baat batao uss din jis ladki ko tumne dhoka diya tha..(she was talking about Liza)

Arjun(cutting her in mid):-meine usse koi dhoka nahi diya tha..

Riya:-har dhokebaz aadmi yahi kehta he..by the way thanks 4 the lift..

Saying she went inside college..

Arjun(angrily):-ek toh meine usaki help ki..upar se ye ladki muze taunt marke chali gayi..agali baar woh jab mere same aayegi toh khair nahi usaki..

Saying Arjun started driving towards his office..

Here Riya inside college..

Riya chit chatting to her friends..

Riya:-oh..guys.. Come on itni tension kyo le rahe ho exams ki..?

One of riya's friend:-riya..tum toh aise bol rahi ho ke tumhari sari padai ho chuki he..?

Riya:-woh toh he..iss baar toh distinction pakka he..

Another friend:-oh guys.. Chit chat baad me karege.. Chali..sirf 20 minutes reh gaye exam start hone me..examination hall me jate he..

All nodded.. N started taking out their hall ticket cum ID card..

Riya too started searching her hall ticket..

Riya:-oh shit..

One friend:-kya hua..?

Riya:-mein meta hall ticket car me bhul gayi jisne muze lift di thi..usake car me..

All friends(yell together):-no..not this time..again..

Riya:-don't worry guys..mein lekar aati hu..aap sab exam hall me jao..

One of her friend:-r u sure..?

Riya:-yes..u guys go..

All her friend left for exam hall..

Riya call aayesha..after 2-3 rings aayesha pick up phone..

Aayesha:-ha..Riya bolo..

Riya:-jaldi se apne bhai ka number muze message karo..

Aayesha:-bhai ka number??kya baat he ri..?kal tak toh mere bhai ko bafa akdu aur khadoos,battmiz bol rahi thi..?aaj mere bhai me itna interest..?

Riya:-uff aayesha mazak ka time nahi he..meri gadi kharab ho gayi thi..mein exam ke liye late ho gayi thi..lift milk woh bhi here bhai se..aur mein apna hall ticket usake gadi me bhul gayi..

Aayesha:-hey bhagwan..tu fikar mat kar..mein tuze bhai ka number bhejti hu..

Both girls cut call..within a minute Riya receive arjun's number from aayesha..

 

Riya call Arjun..

Arjun is driving towards his office.. Saw unknown number calling him..he irritedly receive call..

Arjun:-hello..? Kyon bol raha he?

Riya:-oh.. Hello..mera I'd card tumhare gadi me chut gaya he..

Arjun realize who is speaking..

Arjun:what..the..?

Riya:-mera hall ticket..

Arjun see at his co-driver sit..he saw hall ticket fallen near it..

Riya:-plz..meri 20 minutes me exam suru hone wali he..

Arjun:-what the hell is this..?ek toh tumhe lift di usake wajah se mein already late ho chuka hu..upar se ye tumhara bata drama..

Riya (yell angrily):-dekho meri exam..

Arjun:-oye..chillao mat..aa raha hu mein..

Arjun cut phone n started drive towards riya's college..

Within 5 minutes his phones buzz again..

He irritedly receive the phone...

Arjun:-ab kya he..?

Riya:-abhi kitna time he..?

Arjun:- dekho agar tum aise hi muze phone karke disturb karti rahogi toh I will take more time..

Riya:-lekin meri exam..

Arjun :-Mein bas 5 minutes me waha pahoch jauga..

Riya:-tumhari gadi Zara tez chalao..woh car toh bailgadi se bhi jyada slow chalti he...

Arjun(angrily speed up his car more):- how dare u..?

Riya:-  yaha mein apni exam miss karne ke kagar pe khadi hu aur tum muzpe gussa dikha rahe ho..?

Arjun:-tum phone cut karo..I m reaching there..

He cut the phone..but he have to stop car abruptly..

Because traffic police stop him..

He come out of his car..

Police:-ye aap kaise car drive kar rahe he..?itni speed se..?aur woh bhi phone pe baat karte hue..?

Arjun:-I m sorry..sir..its very urgent..USS ladki ki exam..

Police:-wah..toh gf ka bhi chakkar he..?

Arjun:-woh meri gf nahi he..isaka hall ticket mere car me chit gaya he..if I won't reach on time..

Police(cutting him in mid):-ye sari explanation tum police station me dena..

Arjun:-lekin..

They don't hear Arjun seal his car..n took him to police station..

Here in college..

Riya is waiting for Arjun.. But he don't come..she call him repeatedly.. But he could not even able to answer to her calls as he was with police..

Here time get over..n Riya could not give her exam..she get teary..n get very angry on Arjun..

She come back to her home..

Here in police station Arjun somehow manage to convinced them..they finally leave Arjun.. Arjun come out of police station..

Arjun look to watch..

Arjun(in mind):-shit..USS ladki ka exam toh start ho chuka hoga..bechari..

Arjun's brain(angrily):-bechari..?koi bechari-vechari nahi he woh..usake wajah se hi meine traffic rules tode..aur ussike wajah se muze..muze..Arjun suryakant rawte ko police station me aana pada..I aware..agar woh ladki fir se same aayi toh..I will..nor leave that girl..

Saying he left for his office..

Here at arjun's home:-

Arjun's dadi is lost in her thoughts..

Aayesha come n saw dadI lost..

Aayesha:-dadi kya hua..?aap kisi soch me dubi he..?

Dadi:-bas..Arjun ke bare me soch rahi thi..beta..

Aayesha:-arjun..bhai ke me kya soch rahi he aap?

Dadi:-Monday ko meine Arjun ke liye ek puja rakhi thi..usake baad usse ek chit bhi nikalwayi..usane likha tha ke Arjun ko jaldi hi usaki sacchi jivan sathi milane wali he..woh ladki Jo Arjun ke liye hi bani hogi..

Aayesha:-ye toh acchi baat he na Dadi..fir aap itni pareshan kyo he..?

Dadi(mutter):-kash meine Jo socha tha woh sach hota..

Aayesha:-kya..?

Dadi:-kuch nahi beta..

Aayesha:- accha Dadi aap rest lo..mein kitchen me ma ki help karti hu..

Saying this aayesha left to kitchen..

Dadi's mind drifted in past..

Flashback:-

Sanjana(arjun's Dadi) is busy in reading book..suddenly she saw suryakant who is hurt his coming inside home with the help of her brother..

Sanjna(worrily rushes to them):-hey bhagwan ye kya hua..?

They call the doctor..doctor come n does bandage of suryakant..

Doctor leave..

Sanjna:-suryakant..beta..ye sab kaise hua?

Suryakant:-ma..kuch gundo be muzpe hamla kar diya tha.. Agar mama ji sahi time pe nahi aata toh shayad me Bach hi nahi pata..

Sanjna turn to her brother..

Sanjana:-bhaiya..mein aapka ye ehsaan kaise chukaugi..?aapne khud ki jaan khatre me daal ke mere bete ki jaan bachayi..

Sanjana's brother:-ye kya keh rahi ho sanjna..muze ek taraf bhai bolti ho..aur dusare taraf ehsaan ki baat karti ho..ye toh mera farz tha..

Sanjana:-thik he toh fir aapko meri ek baat manani hogi..

Sanjana's brother:-kya?

Sanjana:-naina(Suryakant' s wife)pregnant he..aur meine suna he aapko bahu bhi pregnant he..agar naina ko beta hua..aur aapko bahu ko beti.. Toh ham inn dono ki shadi karayege. Manzoor?

Sanjana's brother(happily):-manzoor..

Suryakant n naina too happy with this decision..

Flashback end .

Sanjana(arjun's Dadi):-naina ko beta hua.. Mera pita Arjun.. Lekin usse pehale hi aap aur aapki family ye city chodke ja chuka the.. Kyo ki aapke bete ko promotion milk thi aur woh DCP ban gaya tha.. Lekin usake baad hamara contact tut gaya..ab aap sab kaha he..?aapke bahu ko beti hui ya beta..?koi khabar nahi..kash ham mil pate..aur mere Arjun ki shadi aapke poti se hoti..kash..

She took deep breath to call control her tears..

At riya's house..

Riya come inside house..her grand father reading news paper..

Riya's dadaji:-Riya..beta..tumhari exam itne jaldi khatam ho gayi..?

Riya(angrily):-uss idiot.. Akdu,sadu..bas***..insaan ke wajah se meri exam miss ho gayi..

She imagine Arjun in newspaper..she snatch the paper from her grandfather's hand..n tear off it..

She angrily march to her room.

Riya's ma:-hey bhagwan..kya hoga iss ladki ka..?iss baar bhi exam miss ki..

Riya's dadaji:-Riya se jyada muze toh uss insaan ki fikar ho rahi he jiske wajah se usaki exam miss hui..pata nahi isaki kya halat karege agar woh firse usake same as gaya toh..

Riya's room:-

She is throwing her stuff here n there in anger..

Suddenly her gaze fell on a photo frame on table..

Tears rolled down from her eyes..

Its a photograph of her n her father..

She hold it in her hand..

Her mind drifted in past..

Flashback:-

A school going girl come to her father running.. N show him trophy in her hand excitedly n happily..

Girl:-daddy..dekhiye meri trophy..muze interschool debet competition me first prize mila he..

Her father:-Riya..my baby..wow..its awsome..

Riya:-daddy pata he mere teachers itne khush the na..u know what they said..Riya se debet me koi meet hi nahi sakta..

Her father smile..

(Ha bhai Riya se debet me koi meet hi nahi sakta..issiye toh bechara Arjun ri ke samne kuch bol hi nahi pata..lol..)

Her father:-I m proud of u my sweetheart..tum me ek bacche lawyer banane ki sari qualities he..aur tum ek acchi lawyer bano..yahi mera sapna he..

Riya:-I promise u daddy..mein aapka aapne zarur pura karugi..mein ek acchi lawyer banks dikhaugi..

Her father hug her..

Flashback end..

Riya(while crying,n looking to photo):-I m soory daddy.. Meine aapka aapka pura nahi kar pati..mein aapko diya hua promise pura nahi kar pati..iss baar bhi meri exam miss ho gayi..I m sorry daddy..I m not a good daughter..I m not..

Precap:-

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Uff riya phirse exam miss kiya..
Awesome update
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Posted: 8 years ago
awsome

nice update

oh no!!! riya ne phirse exam miss kardi

i can just imagine what will happen whan ariya will meet again

wo to arjun ko chodengi nahi

plz cont soon