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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vj3072

Who is clicking the photo? 😕 worried for Astha. don't worry buddy our hero is der na to rescue his girl😉😆
OMG poor Niranjan even university days he was bald 😆 . yup buddy he is, i made him like dat😆
getting very interesting waiting for next chapter ...thks for the pm 😃. you're welcum vijji😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you karuna😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhumjhum

Hi Vijji fantastic update 👏. thank you jhumi😊
Like Ashlok Tom n Jerry fight they r best for each-other 😉. yeah thatz wat makes them cute and adorable buddy😉😊
Like Astha Shlok also deny for marriage & NA know about it n he also want them to marry so I think he going to use that promise for Ashlok marriage I think so 😃. you guessed that right, he'll use that promise to make them one😊
Anjali as rowdy in collage 😆 can't believe but they 4 really share a strong bond of friendship. yes buddy they do share a great bond and they were just like family😊. and coming to anjali i delibrately pictured her character in dat way cuz i was appalled wen i first saw niranjan beating anjali😡 after aashlok wedlock in the show😊 since that day im waiting for a chance to write something like this wer anjali bend him on his knees😆
Thanks for PM dear n waiting for next update 😊. you're welcom sweety😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Subhashiniii

wow Anjali totally behaved so different when she is in collage

she bend the knees of niru infront of her😆. ofcourse buddy our baba deserves that😉
Arey yaar when will astha Shlok relise their love😕. soon vry soon😊
Hope anyone come between Ashlok. letz see😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you siham😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 7

They both changed their clothes and aastha brought a tray with a glass of milk and a cup of coffee and some snacks. She gave the milk and snacks to ashwini and had her coffee.



There was a knock on the door. Ashu go and open the door said aastha and took away the tray into kitchenette and dropped them into the sink. She got out from the kitchen and found the tution students in the hall. She went towards them and checked everyones school dairy. She made them to do their HW according to the dairy. She observed ashwini, she already opened her book and started reading. Aastha too opened her books and started preparing for her exams. Its was her daily routine. She daily gives tuitions and studies her subjects too, simultaneously.


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She was standing near the dining table and chopping the onions. He looked at her and slowly neared her, she did observed him from the corner of her eyes but didn't raised her head. He did one circumbulate around the table a took an apple from the bowl and slowly neared her again. She showed him the knife with which she was chopping the onions and gestured him to stay away or else she would stab that knife into his paunch without raising her head. He understood that she was angry on him and left from there.


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Two hours later all the students showed the HW to aastha and left from bharadwaj house. Ashu go and study in our room, papa will come said aastha and send her to their bedroom. She then went into kitchen and started preparing dinner. She was rolling the chapattis. Her mobile beeped. Its a msg from shlok "hello AR watz up" she replied him and resumed her work. It beeped again. Msg from shlok. she ignored this time and concentrated on cooking. It beeped again how many times 1,2,3,4... but she ignored that completely.



She kept her mobile in the kitchen and went to terrace and brought all the dried clothes that she washed this morning. She neatly pressed them and went to upstairs to keep them in their wardrobe, whilst her mobile was constantly beeping in the kitchen.


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He was leaning to the wall with an apple in one hand and mobile in another hand constantly staring at niranjan who was working on his lappy. He observed varad coming from his eve jog. Varad was too shocked to see the atmosphere in his own house. Basically his house always fills with noices, shoutings and hubbub everywhere. But today it was calm and peace. He observed his baba who buried his nose in lappy with headset in his ears. Then at shlok who busy swiping the screen of his smart phone. Sam and swethu was no where to be seen. Something is fishy he thought and went towards shlok to catechize the reason.



Shlok wat happened where is ayi. He turned his head back and showed anjali who was standing near the dining table. At that instant varad observed anjali wiping her tears. Shlok why is ayi crying? Shlok got confused and looked at anjali yes she did wiped her tears cuz she was chopping onions. Probably his dada didn't saw the plate and onions which his ayi was chopping. Shlok's mind already started working with rapid speed. He thought bout how to use this situation. "Bike" his mind screamed. Yup he got an idea to enmesh niranjan his baba.



He turned his face and looked at niranjan who is busily working on lappy. Shlok i've asked you something answer me why ayi is crying. Dada wo.. wo... actually wo.. wo wo kya hai shlok tell me why ayi z crying varad asked. Actually dada baba ne ayi ko datha. Lekin kyu? Mujhe bhi nahi pata dada. Yeh dono abi tak bahut jagada kiya. Baba ne ayi pe haath bhi utaya. Shlok added mirchi, masala every thing and made it spicy. Varad clenched his jaw and fist and went towards his baba and stood before him.



He was soo engrossed in his work that he didn't realised varad presence. Few minutes later he raised he head and noticed varad throwing disgusting looks at him. Kya baat hain beta? Baba i didn't expected this from you. Niranjan removed the headset from his ears, oh this actually beta every thing is updating right and we need to update too. What? Yes beta and moreover i've seen the office employees doing the same. Seriously beta it gives you lot of pleasure and you can for forget all your frustration and pressure. We can work easily with no one around to disturb us. You too try this beta infact i would say Every men should follow this.



Baba are you non-compos-mentis(latin word means insane)? How can you do this? If you think ayi is an unchaperoned then you're completely wrong baba. Im with my ayi said varad with full of iracund in his voice and left from there. Saying that niranjan was confused would definitely an understatement. Beta listen, even im with your ayi said niranjan from behind which falled deaf ears. He was still unable to comprehend as to why varad z behaving like this. Listening to music is a crime? From wen? And why did anjali got into picture in all these. Its a matter of small headset. And here my son gave me an earful. But why?



Shlok already started smirking as his plan is taking good shape. Good no no its beyond good his mind screamed by doing bhangda.



Varad stood beside anjali and started wiping her tears. He cupped her face "ayi plz don't cry. I can't see you crying for the person who won't cares for you. Go ayi plz go and pack your clothes. Were're not staying here" said varad emotionally. Kya im crying, why would i cry? I know ayi shlok said every thing to me. Wait wait, what did he said. He said that you and baba altercated and baba raised his hand to slap you... what? Shut up varad. How can you believe him? She took a deep breathe Im still unable to comprehend how did you became doctor idiot anjali said unable to control her irritation.



Varad now cupped his mouth as he understood that he was trapped by his brother. Wer is shlok anjali asked? Varad stretched his hand and pointed his finger at the pillar indicating that shlok was standing there. Anjali glared him. Today he made more than enough drama in the house. First he denied wedlock with aastha, then enmeshed her infront of his baba and finally She recollected those words "i wish i would have born to some charwomen" blurted by him this evening. Thats it she closed her eyes and vented out her pent up iracund by casting the eggs onto him which were placed on the dining table.



1,2,3... she continuously casted the eggs onto him without realising that shlok already escaped that when she casted the first one onto him. But wer are those eggs. Both anjali and varad cupped their mouths when they saw the eggs. But wer? Yeah der it is on niranjan's bald head. Yuck... Yolk was oozing from his head covering his whole face. There varad and anjali were worrying and here shlok was laughing his ass out by clicking niranjan's pics. Baba smile, open smile said shlok by clicking his pics. He already uploaded his baba's pics in his fb and showed the no.of likes that his pics getting. Niranjan's blood was already boiling and this thing is like adding fuel to fire.



Shlok observed niranjan facial expressions and said "baba you're looking choo cute". Niranjan tried to come fwd "hey baba stay der and don't dare to come near me, it reeks yuck..." shlok you're behind his right? "wow baba how intelligent you're, im proud you my dear baba and baba let me tell you its just a teaser, if you won't get me a bike then i'll show complete film. Just imagine baba something big blasting on your bald head". Niranjan closed is eyes shut trying hard not to envisage that, but shlok words were strong and sharp, it was as clear as crystal. He opened his eyes and screamed "ANJALI".



Here both niranjan and anjali got into wraggle where as shlok constantly checking his mobile inbox whether aastha replied to his messages or not. But to his dismay there is no aastha msgs. He checked her num in rejected list whether he by mistake added her num to reject list. But no her num is not added to reject list. He simply dialed her num but she is not picking up his call. "What happened to her, why is she not responding to my calls. I hope every thing is fine der, even dadi ma z not at home with them" he thought and started worrying for her.


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She stretched her legs on divan and watching the tv. She totally forget that her mobile is in kitchen and it continuously beeping. She was too engrossed in watching tv that she didn't realised that she didn't locked her door and someone has entered into the house and was watching her. He slowly started moving towards her. He was now two feets away from her, just one feet. Done boo... he shouted scaring the hell out of her.



You here? Why are here at this time my papa will come now just leave she said by pushing him out. She started worrying. Hey you, listen to me he said by coming closer to her, he was just few inches away from her. She opened her mouth to shout, but he closed it tightly with his palm. He slowly bend towards her and whispered in her ears "i won't fear to anyone not even to your papa". She tried to get out of his hold but he was huge and extra large for he. She used all her energy and pushed him away from her.


IM NOT YOUR HEART BUT I MISS YOU,

IM NOT YOUR FAMILY BUT I CARE FOR YOU,

IM NOT YOUR BLOOD BUT IM READY TO SHARE YOUR PAIN

BECAUSE

IM YOUR STUPID FRIEND

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 8

Shlok leave now, my papa will come. First tell me why are you not replying to my msgs and my calls. That is when she realised that she forget her mobile in the kitchen. Oh sorry shlok i forget my mobile in kitchen she said and rushed into kitchen to get her mobile. Shlok now tell me why are you here? Don't tell me that you're here cuz i did not respond to your msgs. Ofcourse aastha, im here for the same reason, you know how worried im, he grabbed her by her shoulders but not in a tight grip "Next time aastha don't you dare to neglect my msgs" he said. Chill shlok i won't do this next time, i promise she said. He is still the same, she thought.



Ok you leave now, go she said and dragged him towards the door. Don't worry aastha i'll manage papa, he said and sat on divan. He started laughing when he noticed that she was still watching pogo in this age. He snatched the remote from her hand and started changing the channels continuously. He did stopped changing the channels when a particular channel caught his attention. Yup der it goes FTV. Shlok' she screamed her lungs out. Chill aastha in this age we need to watch channels like this not cartoons like that he said. She unable to control her irritation switched off the tv.



Now it was his turn to shout at her. Shlok chup ashu is at home, atleast don't do this infront of her. He smirked at her, "oh so miss aastha rani, you too want to watch channels like this but you're avoiding yourself cuz of ashwini right. What? Don't hide aastha, feel free to share your feelings with me. Pagal ho kya? She said and tried to leave the hall but he caught her hand and made her sit beside him.



Bolo na aastha thum bhi yeh sab dekhna chatiho na. Tujhe bhi pasand hai na yeh sab dekhna he said with some mischevious glint and some unknown spark in his eyes. Shut up shlok she said and tried to move again but this time he didn't stopped her instead got up and tried to switch on the tv but she stopped by grabbing him by his shirt collar and in the process they both fell on the divan. He on top of her. He tried to get up off her but his chain got stucked with her chain causing him to fall again on her.



He very well knows that her tiny body was crushing very badly underneath his. So he slowly turned and changed the positon by catching her waist. Now she was on top of him. She is busy in removing the entangled chains whilst he is busy in observing her, without blinking. She looked at him when she felt his breathe on her temple. Their eyes met. Few seconds later he broke the eyelock "Ogling at me aastha" he said huskily. What? Itz k i won't blame you. Every girl finds me hot and handsome, you're one among them. But you giving me attention and ogling at me is something different.



Oh Mr. Shlok agnihotri wake up. Stop day dreaming. FYI im not ogling at you. And secondly itz your misconception that you think all girls find you as handsome but the fact z you're not. What do mean aastha. I mean wat i said and wat you heard. Oh so you won't find me handsome? No not in any angle she said and tried to get up but he pulled her towards him causing her to fall on him again. She again tried to get up but he wrapped his arms around her petite frame.



Shlok leave me, let me go stupid. So aastha whom do you find handsome? Why does it matters to you? Question to question is not answer aastha, just answer my question. Whatz making you to think that i would answer your question. He smirked at her, "answer" aastha. He very well know the answer but still catechized her. She very well know that he z mulish and won't let her go till she answer his question so she gave up wriggling in his arms.



She looked at him and answered his question "MAHESH BABU". So you ogle at him. Yes. Shame on you aastha he is married and father of two kids. So wat? So you find him a married man handsome but not me. Yup and i would loved to be his second wife atleast for one day.



He looked at her intently with shocked expressions on his face. Probably it was the first time she talked boldly. He removed his hands which were holding her. She knew that he was shocked with her talk and so she did smirked. He let go of her and both soon composed themselves oblivious to the fact that someone had already clicked the photos of their togetherness and kept them safe as a solid proof.



He sat on the divan and opened her notes which she prepared for her exams. Oh you already started preparing he said by leaning on the divan's pillow like a nabob. Yes was her reply. He looked at her and said something in Marathi continuously. She knit her eye brows as she don't understand Marathi. Now she started to speak in telugu continuously which he doesn't understand. Hey stop it pagal ladki. Won't you know that i don't understand telugu. Exactly Mr. Shlok agnihotri won't you know that i don't understand Marathi she riposte.



So learn Marathi, it helps you in future. Oh really can you elobrate how does it helps me and FYI Mr.shlok agnihotri im not planning to marry a Marathi guy and im not at all interested in becoming a maharastrain. Acha so whom do you want to marry he catechize. She thought for minute "Someone who is good at heart, who cares for me, especially he should be teluguite and should be settled in hyd". And he should be an insane right? Shlok... she casted a pillow.



Ok ok im sorry can you plz get me some water? She went into kitchenette to get the water. Though he didn't like her choices regarding her partner but still he was unable to comprehend the reason behind his insecurity. He went near the photo frame and smiled at her. Manju maa aapki beti aastha rani bigad gayi hai, lekin mein usse sudharoonga he said.



Pehle khud ko sudharlo came the voice from behind. Arey aastha you. Yes me, are you expecting some other girl? No no why would i except other girl in your house he said and took water glass which she was holding. She was looking at him. What? Drink the water and leave she said.


TRUE FRIENDS SAY GOOD THINGS BEHIND YOUR BACK AND BAD THINGS ON YOUR FACE

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't know about shrenu, but im a crazy fan of Mahesh babu😊, according to me he is the only hero in telugu industry⭐️. I like every thing about him. His simplicity, his smile, acting everything⭐️. Im such a hard core fan of him that i won't miss his single interview, teaser and not even his ads😉.He is a versatile actor and he always encourages his co-workers and new comers👏. He always makes his costars comfortable with him. He is the "MOST DESIRABLE MAN OF 2013"⭐️ in all over india👏.

And while writing that part, goose bumps were getting on my skin and im blushing profuesly and grinning like an idiot😆

Though everyone knows about Mahesh babu but still i cant stop my self from posting his pics here😉.

He is a hero not just on the screen but in real life too😊. Not many people knows about his personal life other than his fans😊. And as a fan of Mahesh babu im sharing this with you guys, he donates 30% of his income to orphanages and old age home👏. After i got to know this news, the respect and love towards him in my heart has increased multiple folds❤️. And im proud to be his fan😊😉, "Mahesh mania". I just wish and pray for all the success in his life and longevity. He is just awesome⭐️👏.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the pm viji😃u made my day😉
Ausum update👏😊
CH 7 was just ausum,I was laughing like anything🤣 naughty shlok😉😆
Poor niranjan😆😆
CH 8 was good love to see shlok's concern towards astha😳😃
Both of them pulling each others leg😛😆 true freindship😃 so sweet😃
Thanks for the update😃 forgot nice post on mahesh babu😃
Update soon😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow double dhamaka update Vijji loved it 👏 👏.
Shlok so naughty all time nagging behind NA poor dad such a funny n normal family moments 😆 😛. Ashlok r real soulmate both r made for each-other 😳. Shlok is really caring about Astha he get scared when she don't attend his call n msg when he came to her home both start fighting n fall in divan haan remembering Ashlok chair scene 😉 😉. Hmm Shlok trying to know Astha's love interest n get little bit dishearten when she told about her dream men hmmm jealousy good good very good 😉 😛 😆. Who's clicking their pic? Who's this mystery person 😕? I thoroughly enjoyed your both update dear & I like Mahesh Babu saw 1/2 films o him but he's very cute looking hero n he's a great person too ppl this side attract me more than his/her outer beauty 😃. Thanks for PM n waiting for next update buddy 🤗.

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