Kya Tumhe Haq Hai? #2 / now pw free thread check pg 152 / 10 Feb 17 - Page 39

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lovely update sonia how ru dear haal chaal thik hai ok back to ur marvelous update geet bechari apne baccho ko sambhalte sambhalte ho gai dukhyari poor thing twins ko handle karna kitna mushkil hai upar se bachhi pe asse mat pooch bechari ko gira diya geet scolded one to both started crying awww shoo sweet loved it love their bonding aran and manaya r so cute and adorable tense environment bhi happy anur energetic ho jata hai kids were enjoying their starters even I did but I looks like peace was not in geets destiny as maan entered the same restaurant as both collided after 6 and half years where geet recognized him but he didn't she froze seeing maan in front of her geet came back only to find manaya missing she was lost and crying for geet when she found maan and maan also couldn't keep his eyes away from her but msk ki eti hai to attitude bhi unhi ke tarh hoga she actually gave him money in turn for using his phone lovely lets see doosre mulakat kasi hoti hai
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Posted: 10 years ago
KHURANA KE LIYE KHURANA

HE HE HE


lOHA KO LOHA HI MAR SAKTHA HAI


GUD PART DEAR

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Posted: 10 years ago
geet having tough time handling 2 kids at same timeall 3 enjoying their dinner n concert
geet collapsed with maan
he didnt recognize her
but she did n was so shocked
manys missing
geet in tears searching her
n maanyas meet with maan..rofl..2 titans collided..
loved maanys so much
nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Not sure if Mann remembers Geet
But Geet is shocked
Bonding between the siblings seems strong.
Waiting for more interactions between father and daughter.
Thanks
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Wating fr d clash of titans
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Offoo !!!! Yeh today kab aayega ;)
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Kya Tumhe Haq Hai











Maanya waved 100 rupees note in front of Maan which was nothing less than adding fuel to the fire..How a small girl could dare to mess up with Maan Singh Khuraana..She was waiting...still waiting for his response."Uncle...am waiting !!...give me your phone...Maanya ki Mommi bahut worried hogi..." Her attitude had turned out to be request...A 5 year old little girl's innocence...for how many hours she could mark her own words not to cry...


"Mommi...mommi"rubbing her eyes she screamed aloud..Maan Singh Khuraana quite possible he didn't know how to handle kids.? How to cope up with this world? He knew just one solution for all 'Money' which he had no limit. Emotions..relations all matters nothing for him.


"Chup bilkul chup...kyo chillaa rahi ho...Fine give me your mother's number.. I dial her from my phone...tum baat kar lenaa..." Irritated Maan at last dropped his weapons in front of Maanya...Even Addi he cleared his glasses many times..as it was hard to believe Mr. Maan Singh Khuraana was on his knees due to a five-year old girl.


" Maanya ko darr lag raha ha.Maanya k Dai-daa aur Mommi dono ko bulaao " Much scared girl she was trembling due to fear...pledged in front of Maan...Why he was getting attached to this little girl ?...Why he couldn't put his real side in front of her ? Why he was mum ? He had no answer for this...Maanya gave her Father's number first and Maan dialed it...Vicky who was on his way back to home after meeting his friend..He stopped his car at side of motorway...It was unknown number but still he picked.


" Hello !!!" surprised Vicky answered...


" Dai-daa...dai-daa...Maanya.." It was getting hard for little baby to communicate She was shivering in fear..Crying aloud...Own daughter's just one word was enough for Vicky to understand that his child was in need at the moment...She was in any serious problem...


" Maanya...mera bacha...baby kya hua...kahan ho aap ...bollo bache kahan ho aap..." Much disturbed Vicky requested her to speak up...


" Dai-daa...Maanya kho gayi...humko darr lag raha hai..aap aa jaayo...wo new walla rest-rest hai na..."sob"-sob"-" breathing heavily she uttered...


Maan he was observing all like a silent spectator and Addi he also smelt bit change in Maan's behaviour...


" Beta rest-rest...okey first stop crying my brave girl ..now tell me koi badda hai aapke aas pass..." Vicky was confused what's meaning of rest-rest...so instead of Maanya it was much better if some one big/adult could talk to him.


"Yes Dai-daa..!!..Uncle hai...jinka phone humne liya hai.."Innocently she nodded like her father was in front...


"Give phone to uncle..." Vicky commanded his girl...


" Uncle hamare Dai-daa n aapse baat karni hai...peeezzz" she forcibly handed phone to Maan and he unintentionally rested it on his own ear.." Hello ..yeh kya aapki beti hai ? "


" Yeh aawaz...bhai !" Amazed with familiar voice Vicky thought " Pehle meri bachi ki hifaazat zaroori hai is aawaz ki pehchaan se..." he mumbled " Ji she is my daughter...If you can please tell where are you ..main abhi aa raha hu wahan..." Vicky requested keeping all things apart...


This restlessness was not on one side but on both ends.If Vicky felt ...Maan also felt same after hearing his long-lost brother.Maan Singh Khuraana a stone hearten it was hard to expect some feelings from his side...How could he reveal his emotions after hearing this voice !! Without letting Vicky or even Addi to judge him he replied call very calmly...Telling Vicky the address and exect location."Sir please ...agar aap meri beti k pass 5 minutes reh sakke..main abhi aa raha hu..Aur raaste main iski mommi ko bhi inform kar deta hu.."


" huh " Maan approved to be there for some time...He cut phone.


" Uncle abb aap hamari Mommi ko bhi phone dial kar dejiye..."Maanya requested again...


" But your father told me that he gonna inform your mom..." Maan said who was not willing to dial again...


" But its my duty too..Humne apni mommi ko problem main daalla hai..instead of one call I will pay you for two calls" Little girl said answered seriously...


"Just shut up.What your family think of me !.I am not a social worker.I am a businessman ..Kabhi tumhare father tumhari look after k liye keh dete hai...kabhi kuch kabhi kuch..." Irritated Maan... steamed up now...


"I think its more than enough now...Kahi Sir is bechaari bachi per he na saara gussa nikaal de...Go Addi go..." screatching his head Addi ran toward that vanue ...Where Maan andMaanya war was still on.


"Addi where were you ?" Maan burst on him...Addi made so many excuses in front of Maan to get rid of his wrath...Maan who was not familiar with fact that Addi had watched every scene over here...he again narrated things to Addi...


" He he he...beta aapko mommi se baat karni hai...he he he...main lagaa ker deta hu number bollo beta..." Addi offered Maanya his phone...


"Aap humko phone de dijiye hum kar lengay..humko dial karna aata hai..." she spread her hand for phone...


Finding no solution Addi gave her own phone..Before Maanya called Geet...Vicky already had informed Geet...so when her mommi gave her assurance...poor baby she felt more relaxed...


" Uncle hamari Mommi aur Dai-daa dono aa rahe hai..humko lene...aab humko darr nahi lag raha..." Wiping her eyes Maanya cheered up...


First time Maan felt what relations means just a little assurance from Vicky and Geet brought an innocent girl back to life." Abhi wo aaye bhi nahi...aur tum itni kush kyo ho..." maanquestioned..


"Agar unhone kaha wo aa rahe hai...wo 5 minutes main aa jaaegay...Hamare Dai-daa cheater nahi hai...Mommi careless nahi hai..wo to hum he table se uth gaye thay...it was my fault...You know how much she is worried...Uncle aapke bache kho jaaye aap bhi aise he worried hogay fir..." she asked in one go...But what she asked and what it meant for Maan even Maan was not aware...


" What...mere bache..? " Totally black from thoughts Maan said...


" Kyo aapke bachche nahi hai...sabhi uncles k bachche hote hai..Hamare Dai-daa bhi aapke jitne big hai...unke two babies hai...aapke nahi hai.." She gave her self created logic...


"Mere bachche..." he mumbled...


" Haa aapke bachche " she repeated...."Just like me...and my brother ..you know I also have a twin brother..uska naam Arhaan hai....but we call him Aran...aur Hamara name Mannat hai...per sabhi with love Maanya kehte hai..." She grinned


" Mere bachche..." Maan he was getting impatient...restless...totally sweaty...


" Maan Sir...Maan Sir...r u all right..? "Addi asked for his well being..." I think you should go home...Is bachi ko iske parents ko main hand over kar dunga.." he suggested...


" Nahi Addi..her father gave her responsibility to me...so its my duty now...I will wait..." Maan rejected his offer...


" Ji Sir as you wish..." Addi shrugged his shoulders


Maan made Maanya sit on near by bench till some one comes there to take her... Even Addi called manager of the resturent..Security head too...


After 15 minutes

Maanya found her mother coming toward her from far away...Manager...security head were also with her...Overwilmed girl ran toward her mother..


" Mommi...mommi..." Geet she set on her knees...Holding sleeping Aran with one arm and with other she hugged her tiny daughter tightly...


"Mera bacha..aise karte hai bache mommi k sath...bollo...how much scared I was you know..." kissing her innumerous times she questioned...


"Sorry mommi...Maanya aapko dekhne gayi thi...aur hum he kho gaye...I promise Mommi ...I ll not do like this again...and you know mommi that uncle helped me alot..."Apologisingly she looked back and pointed her finger where she was with Maan...But at this moment no one was there...


As Maan found Maanya in secure hands with her mother ..he took not a second and with Addi left the place...All were surprised but security guards approved that the man who was sitting there had left in his car...After five minutes Vicky also reached the place...


"I am sorry Vicky...akele saath le kar aayi aur care bhi nahi kar sakki" Geet regreted...


" Sorry for what Geet !!..Why you are saying so..yeh sabh tumhara he sikhaaya hua hai..k aaj hamari beti hamaare pass hai....You forcibly made them learn the telephone numbers address..even this id card jo inke galle main hai yeh idea bhi tumhara tha...No one could ne better mother than you...okey...So cheer up " Picking Maanya in his arms he said...


After completing some formalities..they were about to leave.When manager stopped them for appology.Vicky and Geet didn't want to stretch all this more so they found it better to leave this matter here...Geet she was mentally disturbed so Vicky found it better to take her and kids in own car.So manager also offered the service and hotel staff drove Geet's car back to home.


When they reached home both kids were sleeping peacefully resting their heads on their parents shoulders...Giving all worries ...all pains to their parents...Vicky he had already called Dai Maa before reaching home...three of them were happy to find their kids totally alright...


But things were not all well for Maan.Destiny had brought him to the same threshold where he turned his back six and half years ago and never looked back again...Why first he clashed with Geet than Maanya made him realize a basic fact of life emotions...feelings...He was not able to sleep for whole night...


Next Morning

Around 7:15

Khuraana Mension

New Delhi


Nakul and Deepak they were busy in loading luggage...Savitri Devi and her middle grand son Dev they were going to Punjab by next flight


" Daddi jaldi keejiye...Flight 9:00 ki hai...for Amritsar..."Dev yelled...


" I am ready beta...But what about NainTaara..kya kahe-gay unse...? " Daddi questioned...


" Daddi don worry about here...She is already out of India for one month...so no need to worry about here...Keh diya hai...k kissi deal ko final karne k liye Banglore jaa rahe hai...I can't tell her about this visit in direct manner...Also our relation is just for name sake ...where she is...where I go...kissi ko koi farak nahi padta...so let it go..." He sighed in grief and held his Daddi from hand directing her toward car...

Back in Ludhiana

Vicky find it much better to keep kids today at home and he narrated whole last evening's incident to Principal...She permitted kids a leave for the day.


"Main ghar per reh leti bachon k saath but this project is so important...however Vicky please drop me..I am not in mood to drive..." dishearten she requested ...


" Okey lets go..." Vicky as usual said yes...


If I write more you guys feel bore so its better to stop here now..Tell me how it is...

Sonia😳





Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update.
maanya is safe
maan feels a connection towards her
Edited by shalu1786 - 10 years ago
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Me commented on Blog

Lucky to be second here

Jaise loha ko loha kaatha hai

vaise hi Maan khurana ko maanya khurana hi thod sakthi hai


gud one

geet and vickys sense abt of the voice??????



Edited by mishtib - 10 years ago

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