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Posted: 10 years ago
nice updates
poor maan he cant understand why geet is saying shes priya
n his investigation isn't giving any clue either
like how priya was lost in maan for while there shows she still feels the energy they had even though she cant name it
n her connection with maahi is totally of a mother no doubt
why Adi saying its not geet 😕
now daadi has seen priya I hope she sides with maan
looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: YaSha0512

nice updates

poor maan he cant understand why geet is saying shes priya
n his investigation isn't giving any clue either
like how priya was lost in maan for while there shows she still feels the energy they had even though she cant name it
n her connection with maahi is totally of a mother no doubt
why Adi saying its not geet 😕
now daadi has seen priya I hope she sides with maan
looking forward to seeing whats gonna happen next
thanks for pm


thanks dear

updating today
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 10

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Priya : Mr. khurana

Sorry to disturb you

Hearing her voice, he turns to see her, but he not liking she

addressing him Mr. khurana nor maan...

He takes step towards her...

Priya : wo mein yaha aapse

He come so close to her & whispers near ear " tum mujhe kbhi

disturb nhi kr sakti misthy"

Priya : misthy

She takes one step back; try to maintain little distance...

Priya : mr. khurana

Mera naam misthy nhi

Priya hai

Maan : don't call me Mr. khurana firstly

Am Maan for you?

Priya : for me

Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha hai

Am going

He pulls her by wrist & encircled hand around his waist...

Maan : don't go again

Mt jaayo misthy

She sees some pain in his eyes, why she feeling pain seeing him in pain...

Maan : tum mujhse durr kyun jaa rhi ho

Kyun tumhari aankho me mujhe apne liye wo ehsaas nhi dekhte

He caressed her cheek ...

She lost in his voice & whispers his name "Maan"

Maan : ha jaan

Firse bola na mera naam

Before he hugged her, Deepak came...

Deepak : sir Maahi

Deepak also shocked to see geet in front of own.

Maan : kya huya maahi ko

Deepak

Tum bol kyun nhi rahe

Deepak : geet madam

Maan : mahi ko kya huya

Priya : mahi kaha hai

Deepak : apne room mein

Maan held priya hand & take her to khurana mansion ...

Priya not able to take more step ...

Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe

Why am not able to give name of this feeling

Ye kaisa connection hai

Maan : kya huya misthy

Tum ruk kyun gyi

Before priya says some, maahi voice interrupt both.

Maahi coming down from stairs & crying continuously...

Daadi : maahi beta

Ruko

Maahi : dadda

.

p...a.ss jaana

maan : mahi dada yaha hai

maahi sees priya here

she taking fast step from stairs...

maan : mahi beta aram se

dada yhi aa rhe hai

priya : mahi whi ruko

maahi stops in between..

now daadi notice priya

daadi : geet

priya came near to mahi & scoop her in arms...

priya : mahi beta

aap kyun ro rhe ho

mahi : m...umma

daadi come near geet , try to touch her, before she touch , priya

goes near to maan.

Priya : mahi ka room kaha hai

Maan : upar

Priya : chaliye

She need rest

.

Aap doctor ko caal krliye jaldi

.

**********

Priya placed mahi on bed, try to stand, but mahi held her finger...

Mahi : n..a

Priya : mahi mein yhi hu

Phle aap rona bnd karu

.

Priya wipes her tears & kissed on her all face...

Priya : ab ek aur ansu nhi

.

Maan doctor abhi tak aaya kyun nhi

Isse kitan tej fever hai

.

Maan : geet relax

Bs doctor aa raha hai

Priya : relax

Aap kissi se ek bowl mein pani aur ek cotton ka kapda lane ke liye khi

Maan : hmm

********

Priya placed wet cloth on mahi head, and changing in between.

Doctor came and checked mahi & give some prescription...

Doc : medicine dene se phle isse kuch khilaiye

Maan : she not taking any thing

Priya : maan apne mujhse phle kyun nhi kaha

Meri bachi

Doc : Madam relax

Priya : hmm

*********

Priya make sleep mahi & go down stairs...

Maan also go behind her...

Maan : tum kaha jaa rhi ho

Priya : kitchen kaha hai

Mujhe mahi ke liye soup banana hai

Maan take her into kitchen, and she lost in making soup for her...

.

.

Priya : mahi beta

Aankhen kholo

Mahi snuggles more close to priya, priya scoop her & placed her

in lap, & try to make eat some soup, after struggling half hour,

mahi eat something, then she give medicine to her...

Mahi : m..umma

Priya : mein yhi hu

Aap so jaayo chalo

**********

After meeting , sid, sushant go to see her priya in garden, but she

not seen anywhere, after asking from servant , both know about

priya goes to khurana mension...

********

Sushant : priya bte

.

*******

Priya : dad

Wo pareshan ho rhe honge

.

Par mein mahi ko kaise chodke jaayu

.

She goes downstairs...

*******

Priya : dad

Sushant : waise aap yaha kya kr rhi thi

Priya : wo mahi dad

Usse bhut tej fever hai

.

Aapko pata hai

Wo kuch kha bhi nhi rhi thi

Maine usse itni mushkil se soup pilaya

Aur bs abhi medicine di hai

.

Sushant : toh ab hum chale

Priya : dad

Mahi bich mein uth gyi

Aur mujhe nhi dekha usne

Wo rone lagengi

Kya please mein yaha ruk jaayu

Sushant : ase aap kaise kissi aur ke ghar mein rh sakti hai

Maan : Mr. Sighaniya I have no problem

Ya yaha rh sakti hai

Priya : dad

Ab toh Mr. Khurana ne bhi ha khdi

Please

Mein mahi ko ase nhi chod sakti

Sushant : take care beta

Par aap mujhe kal subh wapas hotel mein chaiye

Priya : yes dad

*********

Daadi : maan ab aap hume kuch batayenge

Ye geet ko priya kyun kh rhe the

Aur wo hum ase kyun dekh rhi hai

Maan : ye toh mujhe bhi nhi pata daadi

Wo maahi ki pass rhti ha

Par mujhse dur

Adi : daadi hum batate hai

.

Daadi wo priya Sighaniya hai

Dr. Sushant ji ki beti

Unki sakal jaroor geet se milti hai

Par wo geet nhi hai

.

Yhi baat hum maan sir ko smjhane ki koshish kr rhe hai

.

Daadi ab aap hi inhe smjha sakti hai

Daadi : maan bte

Maan : daadi koi maayne ya nhi

Wo geet hai bs

Sasha : Mk

Try to understand

Maan : one day I prove this

Sasha : Mk

Khi aap us ladki ko hurt na krde

In sbme

Maan : I never hurt my love

Sasha

*********

Maan : geet

.

Geet

Maan placed hand on her shoulder...

Mein tumhe kbse bula raha hu geet

Priya : Mr. Khurana

Am not geet

Am Priya

Aapko ye baat smjh nhi aati kya

Maan : toh tum geet nhi ho

Priya ho

Right

Priya : yes Mr. khurana

Maan : so leave us alone

Mahi ko apni adaat mt daalo

Tum toh chali jaayongi

Mein usse firse akela kaise smbhalunga

.

Go back to your house

Priya : aapne kaha tha mein aaj yaha rh sakti hu

Maan : sure

Tum rh sakti ho

In guest house

Priya : Mr. khurana

Mein mahi ke pass rahungi

That's final

.

Maan : wo meri beti hai

Priya : wo meri bhi

Maan : tumhari bhi

Priya : beti jaisi hai

.

Mr. khurana

Mein nhi jaanta

Aapko mujhse kya problem hai

But please

Km se km aapni beti ke baare mein toh sochiye

Aapki beti bimar hai

Aur is waqt usse meri jaroorat hai

.

Maan phone buzzed.

******

Maan : bolo

Detective : sir jb priya india aayi thi

Toh unka yaha accident ho gya tha

She is so critical; surviving chance is so less...

Maan : then

D : then her parents Mr. sushant & her sistr Ridhima take her

back to paris..

.

Maan : she survive or not

D : no idea sir

Maan : iska kya matlab hai

D : sir jitna bhi sources se pata chala

Uske baad priya

Kbhi kissi se nhi mili

.

Yhi koi 8 months se unhe bahar khi aate jaate huye dekha gya hai

Maan : ye accident kb huya tha

D : December 2012 mein

Maan : uske baad unke pariwaar se wapas koi india aaya

D : yes sir

Dr. Sushant

Wo yah ape special koi surgery ke liye aaye the

Maan : around

D : around March 2013 mein

.

Par sir

Maan : par kya

D : sir wo aaye toh bs ek surgery ke liye the

Par wo yaha india mein ruke 15 days tk

Maan : I want to know each & every detail

Wo yaha itne din ruke toh kyun

aur koi information mile toh mujhe batana

D : sure sir

******

Maan go back to room & see pleasant side, his life sleeping

peacefully... he imagine this moment every day, but it became

reality after whole 2 years...

********

Next morning, priya don't want to go , left mahi alone, but she

have to go, her father waiting her...

She hurriedly left for kitchen make milk for mahi & take her to the

room...

Priya : Mr. khurana

Maan sleeping peacefully on couch, her voice break his sleep...

Maan : ha

Priya : ye priya ka milk hai

Jb wo uthe toh usse pila dena

Ab uska fever utar gya waise toh

Par koi problem ho na

Toh mujhe call kr dena

Mein usse smjha dungi

.

Ab mein chalti hu

.

Mujhe aapse kuch puchna tha

Maan : bolo

Priya : mahi ki mumma kaha hai

Maan want to tell her, you are her mom, but not know why geet

behaving like this...before saying anything, he want to confirm

this, she is my geet ...

Maan : wo hume chodke chali gyi hai

Priya : wo ase kaise chod ke jaa sakti hai aap dono ko

Aapne rauka nhi honga unhe

Maan : rauk hi toh raha hu

Par tum smjh kha rhi hu

Priya : aap kya kh rhe hai

Smjh nhi aaya mujhe

Maan : leave it

Tum jaana than a

Jaayo

Before going priya kissed on mahi forehead, then she left...

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Posted: 10 years ago
yeyyy me 1st..
wonderful update as usual..👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Geet oops priya having strange feeling nwhile entering km
and she taking good care of maahi
maahi calling her as mumma
bechari baby
hope the mystry unfolds soon
i am in love with this story :)
Plzz update nxt part soon di...

and di today 3rd may not april...plzz change it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's amazing. Maan was coming close to geet and geet also lost in maan. There Terrence broke when deepak informed maan about mahi's health. maan went back to see his daughter along with geet. Geet was taking care of mahi like a mother. She can feel some emotions in her for maan and Mahi but still she is not ready to hear anything. Maan is sure that she is only her geet not priya. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago


Beautiful Update

😃now she won't go back bcoz of Mahi..
it's really hard time for Maan.. geet paas hoker bhi dur hri..
Maan digging roots .. lets see what come..?
waiting ..
Love it ...😃

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nyccc updatee
geet takin care of maahi
maan confused
mmm
luvdd it
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update..
Geet taking care of maahi..maan try to tell her who she is but geet is not ready to listen..maan digging out past..hope he get to knw soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww how can a mom stay away form her child and vice versa mahi recognizes her mom too ,,,,but only geet cannot...waiting for maan to get all facts about priya/geet ...

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