asya_kabhi ff 'Dilwale Dulhania Lejayenge' THREAD2 POSTED - Page 30

Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Read all the chapters at one go. A fresh and different story. Can be slightly lengthy.

Waiting for the next part. Just loved it so far.

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update
Asad fulfilled his dream to open the hotel on his parent name. Zoya entry with spotlight was wonderful. Asad compliment for zoya made Tanveer blood boil. Asad wanted to propose her but she left. Waiting to know the reason why she left. I think so its bc of Tanveer. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow. ..thanks for the pm...must say u was left utterly surprised by this ff...It has been beautifully written and the chemistry between asad and zoya is amazing..

I have read all chapters and can easily say that it has been a journey that has been built up by the longing of love and find there soul mate whom they can love truly...I see that asad is attracted to zoya simplistic nature and she loved his sharp persona...

I really enjoyed the way they are struggling to except there feeling and must say that tanveer is both the vilian and the cupid in the story after all her interference is what's going to help cause the union to happen...

I must say that I felt sorry for zoya in the last chapter and the separation of 7 days wow must have been though...you planning to share a flashback?

Hope he proposes soon and I must say I look forward to reading the next update...till then happy writing and please don't make the story to sad...

Brilliant writing by the way...take care raaz

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I luv this ff inspired by DDLJ.Zoya a Punjabi girl n her Boss Azad r in luv with each other,but they didn't confess.Will they b confess 2 each other b4 zoya leaves 4 Punjab?u have described DD:LJ songs on Asya very well.loved d d pics u used.plz cont putting pics in all updates.this is my 1st asya ff.waiting 2 c if asad comes 2 Punjab 2 win over zoya n her family like SRK did in DDLJ.i'm excited.plz update soon

Originally posted by: maha70

Waiting for Long Update...😳

Update Soonish..🤗

here you go people, the most awaited part

now i need the comments😛😛😛😛😛

CHAPTER 10 Confession and surrender

Zoya could not take it anymore and ran to the terrace letting her tears fall. He was so close to Tanveer and they were behaving like lovers and suddenly she remembered billy's venomous words.

"he's mine. he has always been leading other girls but in the end he returns to me only because only i could make him happy. you would not know how to keep asad happy. You are a too naive and breakable little toy and he is a passionate and wild lover. you would know how to entertain him. he'll leave you like trash"

she cried and cried over her incomplete love...over her fate...over her failure...and her broken heart.

"I thought i'd found you here, the meteo did not announce rain today though there's a flood in here"

i tried to stop the salty river at once "what do you want"

"well hello to you too, miss farooqui...okay...let's get to the point ...why are you crying?"

"why do you care" i spat

"i could ask you the same question, zoya. why do you care seeing me with Tanveer or any other girl, are you jealous???" he started walking in front of me and i could just move backwards scared.

"i...iii don't know what you are talking about"

"why does it pain you so much seeing me close to another woman" he continued in slow strides like a hungry wolf

"why do you find little excuses to come to me, why do you cry when i shout at you or ignore you"

By now i was pinned to the railing and angry as hell. So he did notice everything my pain, my tears, my love, my eagerness to him...

"why zoya...just tell me why"

"BECAUSE I LOVE YOU DAMMIT" I shouted with all my might "I love you so much and you don't care." i cried trying to hold my weight to the railing and crying like a broken dam.

He made me stand up and wipe my tears with his thumb and kiss both my eyes. i sigh contented. then he kissed my cheeks, my nose and my chin.

"i love you too you silly girl. and i do care "

i open my eyes shocked and blink many times..he was smiling at me

"zoya say something now."

"you love me...but how can you love an ordinary and average girl like me. we have nothing in common"

"we have...a a beating heart that is connected from so long.." he said pointing to our hearts. "we were made for each other and realised only now... actually i had, when i had seen you for the first time, i knew you were mine...only mine." he said joining our forehead and closing our eyes

i stood still till he said "this is forever zoya...we are forever"

and i could not stand that and hug him fiercely smiling and thanking allah miya. i could hear his musical laugh. he broke the hug and look at me intently. Something was now bothering me.

"if you realized this, why haven't you admitted that you're in love with me before? "

Tracing my face with his fingers he said "i wanted you to realize your feelings that you were so bent upon putting in a grave so that you would never question this again "and i could just shiver and his words and sigh.

slowly he bent forward. he let his eyes wander over my face, ... i smiled, closing my eyes and letting my head roll to the side. ... He bent to kiss my jaw and i trembled"slowly, almost carefully"he then lifted his mouth and place it on top of mine. we both grasp heavily. He reached out and cradled my chin in his hand and bent over and ... sank into each other, joined by our lips.

slowly he increased the pressure between our lips and started to nibble my upper lips after several moments of gaining back my senses i follow his lead and nibble on his upper lip when he did the same to my lower. after a few minutes

We both pulled away from the kiss, and stared at each other; brown eyes meeting ...our first kiss under the stars on this hotel's terrace will be engraved in my memory.

Blushing like a red rose, i smiled and slowly leaned in to kiss him again and again. and under that millions of dazzling stars i knew that i had given my heart to my boss, Asad Ahmed Khan and i will be forever be only his.