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😆 babbie.. don't get upset.. wish dona a happy b'day!!😊
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Ahh...nice teaser..
Now it going to be like Mann ke bouncer ball pe maanya ka sixer...

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Di ,will u update today !!!!!
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read the parts 10 & 11...

Maan back to Amristar for business matter... n even dadima n dev hav not met him these years...



Geet is still feeling hurt wen she thinks of the reminders of their in-laws...


Maan n Geet almost meet in the car parking area... but missed n seeing the teaser it must be like Geet sees Maan there...


even the kids hav met Maan in the restaurant n they r definitely not in gud terms with one another...
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First dose on the way

Happy Birthday Dona 😳


my mind is flowing now let me post bit by bit..



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Originally posted by: Sonia.KN

First dose on the way

Happy Birthday Dona 😳


my mind is flowing now let me post bit by bit..



🤗🤗\chal mera good night
aur ha aapke res k bech me rukawat k liye khed hai 😉😆😆
kal milti hu
bye bye good night sweet dreams
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Chapter 12

For Dona



To tackle kids while shopping especially twins..totally like opposite poles to each other was enough to drive Geet insane.She took a deep breath when Maanya and Aran finished off their shopping "Hey Babaji yeh 2 samples aapne mere liye he rakhe thay...uper se Dai Maa inhe kuch kehne nahi deti..." She mumbled looking upward busy in her talk with Almighty



" Mommi now wind up your conversation with Babaji...we are too hungry " Aran held his mother from wrist and started to drag her toward driver's seat.Till now she was busy placing shopping bags in the back of car...Geet almost lost her balance when a stone hit her toe.. somehow she grabbed Car's door.




"Aran..Aran...behave like a good boy...aise drag karte hai Mommi ko...Abhi mommi ghir jaati fir..." She twisted his ear as a quick reaction which she realized afterwords when Aran screamed aloud due to pain..







"Mommi its paining..."-sob...sob"-...mooom-mi...mo-mo-mi"" His overflooded eyes couldn't hold tears ..which rolled down to his cheeks..



Even if both kids owned totally opposite personalities...They tease each other , they mess with each other...but they couldn't bear other's pain...With Aran first cry Maanya also felt the ache her brother beard..In the next moment she was also crying aluod.."Mommi...mommi...peeez forgive Aran...usko pain ho raha hai ...peeezzz.mommi" sobbing Maanya begged her mother holding her dupatta...






Geet already had left her son's ear before Maanya asked.That was a sudden reaction like any mother who wanted her kid to behave in good way.


In a jiffy Geet embraced both kids tightly "I m sorry beta...so sorry mera bacha Aran plz chup ho jaayo baby...Maanya dekho baby Mommi sorry hai..." She kissed both kids' cheeks wiped off their tears.They were still sobbing...Their tears were out of control.



"Mommi...Aran is a good boy...Its mistake mommi...maine mischief nahi ki mommi... sachi..." He put his tiny arms around his mother's neck..who was still on her knees while pacifying her kids..Adoring their repetition of mommi- mommi again n again

"Yes Mommi ...hamara bhai good boy hai..." Little girl second her brother and from other side she encircled her mother with her tiny arms.





"Buttering Mommi now..huh..." Chirp of smile came to Geet's lips as she found her kids getting normal...an the bond both share...It was also necessary to make them realize this small incident could have turned out to be big accident "Aran baby if Mommi did wrong...Aap ne bhi wrong kiya na...aise co-incidently ho gaya...but bache try to be careful...gar mommi ko..ja kissi aur ko bhi injury ho jaati fir...Its not good..." She lovingly squeezed his cheeks Took promise from both kids to be careful next time...


" Promise Mommi like Aran...Maanya is also Dai-daa's good girl..." She placed her tiny hand on her mother's palm to give her a promise.



" Dai-daa's good girl...is Maa ka kya. !!! .Dai-da aur Big Daddi k he bache ho." Geet thought and nodded her head.Lifted up both.Placed Maanya at front seat adjusted her belt and Aran to the back.

When they reached Italian restaurant it was around 8..Besides there was a concert ..but not that much rush around as it was more like a private programme for some selective people.Or for those who paid high for VIP enteries.She was lucky enough to get pass from Tanu otherwise whole plan might have been cancelled otherwise.


" Mommi this is the same Rest-rest na new walla !" Maanya questioned her mom innocently when Geet stopped car in Parking ...Hearing Rest-rest Geet burst in laughter but somehow she controlled so that her daughter didn't feel bad..

" Maanya its restaurant beta...say rest-au-rant " Geet corrected..

" Uff mommi...its too tough...Maanya is okey with Rest-rest...I m not in mood to learn now..." Pouting her lips Maanya denied to repeat it..


" Acha ...aab challo.." She locked her car...Gripped their tiny wrists tightly in her both hands.

At security counter a female guard fully dressed stopped three of them...it terified the little kids when checking was going on...

"Police Aunty humne chori ne ki...humko chod do."on the verge of crying Aran rubbed his eyes when guard was checking Geet's purse.

Suddenly serious environment turned out to be lite..Everyone over hearing Aran started to laugh..." Nahi Beta hum aapko kuch nahi kahegay...na he aapki mummy ko...Aaap kitne cute baby ho.." Gaurd lovingly rolled her hand over Aran's face.

" Beta...aunty is for our help...okey ..she ll not say any thing to us...so don cry." Geet told kids what the guards were doing and then smile came back to their faces.Whole the staff were waving to kids when they left security area.




Inside restaurant waiting staff directed Geet and kids to the table 5 booked for same pass no 5.

" Wao Mommi its lovely !!!" Looking around overwhelmed Aran couldn't control his excitment. This was a restaurant of its kind...first in the town...so a totally new experience for kids too...

"Ya Mommi look at the flower decoration ( not floral decoration as she is little kid) haina mommi " touching flowers on the table Maanya's eyes twinkled in happiness..



Geet was enjoying every bit of her kids cute attics...But they were at a high-class restaurant so she had to put bit control over them "Okey babies u loved na... mommi will bring you again...if you ll behave like decent kids...look around how people are sitting and enjoying their delicious food..."

" Yes Mommi we r decent and mannered kids .." Maanya approved her mother's words and both kids sit silently on chairs .Geet ordered for starters after knowing kids choice.

Cheese Garlic Flat Bread




Patato Wedges




Tomato Cream Soup




Fruit Yogurt Dip




Pomegranate orange mixed fruit drink






Kids were happily enjoying their starters when the host for today's programme announced the arrival of famous singer Sameer Kher...It was like a dream came true.Geet never thought to meet him.He was like a favorite singer for any other admirer..


Sameer first thanked the organising committee .for wonderful welcome...for all lovely admirers and then started to sing his famous songs...Listening to his songs smart kids estimated that he was the one ...their mother liked to listen..

" Mommi yah Uncle to aapke favorite songs gaa rahe hai na..?." Aran asked..

" Yes baby ...he is same uncle...u r not liking baby to be here...?" She felt like her kids might feel bore in between this concert for adults...But opposite to it Kids were enjoying as the food was wonderful...She felt relaxed.

But the peace of mind was not the part of her destiny...It was her destiny entered through the same door she entered about an hour ago...With same attitude...neck raised high in a pride to be one of most successful persons in whole country..Just a little change instead of formals he was in Casuals today.Waiting staff showed him the way to booked VVIP Table.Yes it was the same restaurant Saroop booked for him...
















It was getting late .After wonderful main course and tasty desserts Aran was feeling sleepy ...Geet decided to go back now but before going she had to use washroom. How to leave kids alone ?..Also couldn't take them along to the washroom.So she called the attendant and requested him to look after kids for a while...He also assured to take care of kids..

Maan with Addi he almost finished their meal too..A boring person like Maan was not enjoying Sameer's melodious songs...When some one requested him to sing a superhit song and he started..In between this Maan got an urgent call from foreign client and he was not hearing properly so he also moved toward washroom...Gents and Ladies washroom were separate but in same direction..



song

Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan...






She was in hurry to get back to her kids and he was in hurry to attend the call...But really the reason of their urgency was this or else...The 6 and half-year long wait for which she was still waiting but what about him ?...

Wiping her hands with napkin ...without looking around she was almost running toward kids and Maan resting phone on his ear he was busy in talk...


A sudden collision

He lost his balance and next moment his phone was on floor in two pieces...Even this time Geet she hit against the edge in wall..Instead of Maan who was almost getting blastic while picking his phone...She felt sorry till now his face was down "So sorry...I was in hurry..." she apologized



" Dekh kar nahi chak sakti...?" he yelled glaring her...





Tu meri neendo me sota hai

Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai
Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai
Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka

Mere dil ki duaayein hain..
Teri galiyan... galliyan teri, galliyan..
Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan
Teri galiyan...galiyaan teri, galliyan..
Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..



She froze over there..Not able to believe her eyes...words were not coming out of her throat...If she recognised him...If he felt something ...Maan he was not able to understand awkward her behaviour...




" Hey Madam !!! are you turn insane..? Statue statue khel rahi ho...per mere pass time nahi hai...you mad woman..." Shouting near her ear he left and Geet came out of trance..."Patta nahi kahan kahan se aa jaate hai..." blubbering cursing her...he moved from there



She was still in shock .What she saw...was that a truth or illusion of her eyes...

"6..1/2 (six and half) saal main dil aur dimaag se nahi gaye...ha aankhon main tasveer jaroor dundhli ho gayi hai... Agar yeh Maan he hai...Fir se kyo laut k aaye hai.?..Per kyo soch rahi hu inke baare..jab koi rishta he nahi..na he ek saathi na he ek pitaa"


"Pitta !!!...mere bachche...they are alone " She thought about kids and ran away ...

Maan he decided to go back and he also left vanue...Things were not good for Geet ...When she came back to her table...Aran was sleeping placing his head over table and Maanya she was missing...She looked around...She was not any where...In greed to get more tip attendant had skipped from the table .


When Maanya found Aran dozing and Geet was getting late poor little girl left in search of her mother...Instead of washroom by mistake she moved out of main door toward car parking...As other families were also coming and going so no one doubt that Maanya was roaming alone and was missing...

"Mommi ...mommi...Maanya has been lost...mommi.." she sobbed...bit scared in darkness of night...



When the internal security came to know about Maanya first the cheif of staff scold that careless attendant and also assured Geet that they gonna find out her daughter... " Meri bachchi...meri nanhi c bachi...usko andhere se darr lagta hai..." she thought while wiping her tears....She helf her sleeping son in her arms resting his head on her shoulder and started Maanya's hunt.

Maan and Addi they were in parking waiting for the hotel staff to bring their car.

Maanya was wandering here and there...till now staff hadn't reached here.."No Maanya is a brave girl...Hum nahi roye-gay...I can't be lost...I have my mommi and dai-daa's number...my home address on my id-card...which mommi and dai-daa always put around our neck while going out..." She wiped of her tears...





It was her luck and her determination too...when she found Maan standing far away...Addi was not there he was busy on phone...A chirp of smile came to Maanya's lips ..she thought something... and ran toward Maan...


He was in his thoughts when felt a tug at his pants...He looked back a little girl with angelic features were standing there...Having lots of hops in her eyes...Surprisingly he couldn't move eyes away from her...

Maanya : Uncle !!! Aap humko aapna phone dengay ?...



Maan : Kyo kis liye ?



Maanya : Hum kho gaye hai..humme apni mommi ko phone karna hai ?


Maan : What u have lost...? Lagti to nahi..and you are not in tears..?


Maanya : Kya jo kho jaate hai ...unka rona jaroori hai..I am a smart girl..I know my mommi's number...and c I have an id card too...my address is on it..my dai-daa made this for us...(she shows id card dangling around her neck)Chalo jaldi kijiye humme phone dejiye ... Hamari Mommi bahut worried hogi


Maan : Shut up girl ..itni bad-tameez ho...you know who I am..? (Angrily he rebuked her)



Maanya : Humme nahi jan-naa kon hai aap...Hum Maanya hai ... Maanya Khuraana..Even my mommi always keep money in mine and my bro's pocket in any need...Aap call k paise le lainaa...(she shows him 100 rupee note)





Far away standing Addi was giggling in low tone.." Khuraana k liye Khuraana.. he he he...Maan Sir aab boliye...aab kya hoga aapka..." he gave donkey laugh...








I m tired can't write more I think its enough for now...This update is for Dona on her birthday...Thats why I m posting here on IF for all readers and my pm list is also to be updated...Hope u will enjoy and give me comments...This was the much awaited encounter...


Sonia



Tense liberties always here





Some buddies might have left from pmz sorry for that ...coz I m in hurry to be in office but before that fulfilled my comitment..like Zida...Preeti...HansiniDevi ...n Saro...plz for regular updates u can send me buddy request...thax and don forget to comment...
Edited by Sonia.KN - 10 years ago
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part 12
nice update...
poor geet do namone ko sath phasi hui 😆 aarav n manya are poles opposite...bechari geet pagal ho rahi hai...
loved aarav n manya's bond..they are too cute...ek ko marne se dusre ko bhi dard hota hai...
these two kids loved each other very much...
both kids are expert in buttering mommy 😆
rest rest 🤣 manya is really cute,...
awww aarav security guard se darr gaya...poor baby...
geet n kids enjoyed their time in restaurant...they enjoyed concert too...
boring maan 🥱
maaneet banged geet running for her kids n maan for his phone!!
yeah well maan se isse zyada expect bhi kya kiya ja sakta hai 😡
pehle geet pe chllaya phir chala gaya...geet is too shocked too see him here...
n here manya went too search geet but she went to wrong road...geet is scared to finding manya...
manya is scared but she is intelligent too...
manya n maan met wow what a zabazrdast meeting...
loved manya's answer 😆 maan ko kate ki takkar milegi manya se 😆


Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it. Sara sab khana dekh kar, Im feeling hungry.
Maanya is too cute.

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