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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: sweetynith

Hi pari,

First I want to congratulate fr new thread n successful of this amazing story. I dnt hv words to express feeling fr this story. One word is its "woowww". U r the writer I love most now. Simply awesome yaar. Renuka n harsh love,randhir caring towards sanyu made tear to come frm eyes. Dont do any breakups in their relation yaar surely my heart breaks :( .

N one thing yaar when u write songs just write movie name pls.. unable to find the songs. I read full story in 1 stretch. U r best always. Love u. Update asap dear.

love,
Nithu

aww thank u soo much dear,that means a lot to me
don't worry everything will be fine

yeah will do that the next time i write the songs
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: katheriene

Congratulations for thread 3🥳

Awesome update👏
Loved harsh & sanyukta's conversation😊
Sanyu is so bold,loved her attitude😊
Finally randhir is ready to fight for their love😊
Update soon

thank u soo much dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Part 50[lo half century puri hogayi😆]

He goes straight back to college and walks towards the class,on reaching the class

He finds vd sir taking the class and everyone including sanyu sitting there

Rd-may i come in sir

Vd turns to him

Vd-u may not,is this the time to come to the class rd,u r not allowed to

Sit in my class today

Vd he turns and again starts teaching

Rd-i m sorry sir

He goes from there to library

Vids-u had fight,right?

Sanyu-nahi to,kyu?

Vids-oh pls,meri shakal pe likha hai kya ki i m stupid

Sanyu-don't worry dear,teri shakal pe likha nahi hai,teri shakal hi aise hai

Vids mouth forms an "o"

Vids-huh,yeh sab taunts tune kaha se seekhe?meine to kabhi nahi

Suna yeh sab kehete hue

Sanyu keeps quite

Kaustu-u know its someone's love's effect[winks]

And they giggles

Vd-quite

They keep quite

Parth was continuously looking at vids

Jiggy-arrey parth bhai,class mein ho tab bhi vidhusi par hai apki

Nazar

Parth-kya karoo yaar,almost 1 month ho gaya use propose kiye hue

Abhi tak jawab nahi diya

Sahil-tu bol to raha hai propose kiya propose kiya,lekin kiya kaise

Yeh to bata

Hearing that parth blushes

Sahil-oey tu blush kar raha hai,oh teri matlab bohot bhayankar proposal tha

Chal bata

Parth-shhh guys baad mein bataonga

Soon the bell rings and everyone comes out,vd sir calls sanyukta

Sanyu-yes sir

Vd-when u meet rd,ask him to come to my cabin

Sanyu-yes sir

Vd goes from there

Sanyukta starts moving towards the library when advaid calls her

Advaid-hey beautiful

Sanyukta stops on her tracks and turns to him

Sanyu-look i m not in a mood,so just clear off

Advaid-hmm attitude haan,kiske dum par dikha rahi ho attitude apne bf ke

Jo tumhe avoid kar raha hai

Sanyu-get lost and who are u to interfere in our personal matter

Advaid smirks and moves towards her and traves his index finger through her face

Advaid-interfere to mein kar chuka hoon dear,apne boyfreiend se jake poocho

Ki kya woh mumbai sach mein konsi meeting ke liye gaya tha

Sanyukta was feeling disgusted at his touch and she without thinking

Removes his hand and slaps him,everyone in the corridor looks at them

And advaid was standing there in shock and anger

Advaid-u bloody bi**h

He raises his hand and was abt to slap but his hand was held in the

Air itself by a strong fist,the person turns him towards him and his

Right fist land on advaid's cheek and the intensity of that punch was soo

High that he fell on the floor and sees rd standing right next to sanyukta

Whose eyes were closed till now opens with a shock when she finds advaid

On the floor and rd standing there looking hell angry

Rd-don't u dare touch her

He takes advaid's collar and makse him stand up and punches him again

Rd-how many times i've warned u to stay away from my friends

[another punch on his stomach]what were to trying to do,huh

Hit her,with this bloody hand of urs,i will not let this hand

Touch anyone[he was twisting his hand]

All this while sanyukta was shouting at rd to stop but rd was in no

Mood to listen and was beating advaid black and blue and advaid's

Forehead and lips start bleeding,thats when parth,sahil and jiggy come

Along with the girls,they stop rd and some random guys comes and takes him

To the hospital

Parth-kya kar raha tha rd woh mar jata

Rd turns to sanyu

Rd[shouting]-tumhare haath kya aam todne gaye the ya uske marne ka wait

Kar rahi thi

Sanyu[crying]-rd woh mein...

Rd-kyu jhaasi ki rani sirf mere samne banti ho,usne agar tumhe kuch kiya hota to?

[clenching his fist and baring his teeth]

He punches the wall near him

Everyone-rd stop it

Sanyu[stopping him]-i m sorry

Rd just hugs her but sanyu doesn't hugs him back

Rd-stupid girl

Sanyu just breaks the hug and takes him to the medical room

Sanyu-thank u for helping me

Rd thought that she will bandage his wounds but instead she leaves from there

But before leaving she turns to him

Sanyu-and yes i m shifting to my hostel room today,ankit bhai did all the

Arrangements today and vd sir asked u to meet him

Rd just looks at her shocked not able to register what she said,the nurse was

Bandaging his wounds but he didn't allows her to finish and runs behind sanyu

Rd-sanyu stop

But she keeps on walking he finally grabs her wrist and pins her to the nearest wall

Sanyu-rd listen don't create a scene here,everyone is looking at us

Rd[shouting]-i m creating a scene,u r creating a scene,u are leaving me

Sanyukta,why

Without saying she drags him to the ground,on reaching the ground she leaves his wrist

Sanyu-chillao ab chillao jitna marzi chillao

Rd sits on the bench holding sanyu's wrist

Rd-u know sanyu my life was a fairytale with a fairy in it a few months back

But now i m a mess,i feel helpless,i feel angry on myself,i hate myself

Sanyukta,i hate myself and i know that u also hate me now,i m sorry

Sanyukta,i m sorry[he hugs sanyu's waist and rests his head on her tummy]

I know its not possible for u not to hate me but pls sanyukta don't

Leave me,u don't have to stop hating me just stay in front of me

Pls

For the first time in these months sanyu was witnessing this rd and she felt

Like kicking herself for taking her plan this much but the reason why she

Made such a plan was still not accomplished so she was not gonna let her

Rd feel the pain all alone,she knees down in front of rd and cups his face

She wipes his tears

Sanyu- u don't want me to leave u right rd

Rd nods like a baby

Sanyu-then tell me what happened in mumbai,i know u didn,t went

For any kinda captains' meet

Rd keeps quite

Sanyu-rd i m asking u smt,tell me rd

Rd was just looking at her and sanyu was looking at him and someone

Was looking at both of them from the window of his cabin and says

Vd-interesting veryyy interesting

How was it guys,i hope u liked it,pls do hit the like button and leave ur

Comments. I was missing vd sir today so added that master piece of his at last

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
ress
Unresss!!;
Pari it was
Awesome!!
Edited by holysoul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Congo shongo for golden jubliee
That's really great


Superb update

Whole gang enjoying
Boys teasing parth
Awww parth still blushing


That advaid I so wanna kill him
Bloody cheapster


Rd ne kya dhoya
He almost killed him


Sanyu doing all this to get her answers

Rd so vulnerable
I just hope everything gets sorted soon
Cnt wait
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: newmoon18

Congo shongo for golden jubliee
That's really great


Superb update

Whole gang enjoying
Boys teasing parth
Awww parth still blushing


That advaid I so wanna kill him
Bloody cheapster


Rd ne kya dhoya
He almost killed him


Sanyu doing all this to get her answers

Rd so vulnerable
I just hope everything gets sorted soon
Cnt wait
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

thank u soo much dear
yeah right,bechara advaidbura pita
lets hope for the best
will update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Hey pari... superb update dear bt very smalll...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Hey pari... congo fr half century. superb update dear bt very smalll...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
mind blowing updt
so much in one updt
first RD miss Vd sir's cls
and sanyu going to meet him that avaid comes
btu the lovely part is how Rd beat him black and blue
and sandhir's convo is really nice
updt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Awesome update
Hope everything gets sorted btwn Sandhir
Thnku for the pm

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