Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update di.
Who said it was bad? It was really gud.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing ...
Gud aliya left her parents ..!!
Aliya pregnant :)
Continue soon ...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was too cute..
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Aaliya pregnant I am also smiling gosh so cute
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its lovely..
Cute one..
Loved it..
Cont soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes, i'm back
Sorry for my sudden disappearance but i had exams n sum family problems.. Well u read thelast part n tannu it was ausum 👏
This is a v v v v short update .. Maaf kardena.. Taniya will continue iske baad


Zain : Aaliya .. Baby plz let me drive
Aaliya : no.. Mei chaalaa rahi hoon nuh
Zain : sambhal ke aaliya.. Kitni tez chalaa rahi ho*scared*
Aaliya : kuch nahi hoga zain.. Tum itna kyun darr rahe ho?
Zain : kyunki yahaan baat sirf meri aur tumhari nahi.. Yahaan baat hamarw hone waale baby ki hai.. Jispe mei ek aanch nahi aane dunga*aaliya stops the car*
Aaliya : tum itne serious kyun horahe ho zain??hamare baby ko kuch nahi hoga.. Allah nigehbaan hai.. Woh hamare baby mehfuz rakhenge*cups his face*
Aur by the way.. Mei akeli aurat nahi hoon iss duniya mei jo pregnant hai.. Hazaar aurtein pregnant hoti hai.. Aur agar sab ke husbands itne protective rahe toh hogaya baby*smirks*
Zain : what do u mean??*raises his eyebrow*
Aaliya : kuch nahi.. College jaana zaruri hai??*makes a puppy face*
Zain : kyun??tumhe kahaan jaana hai??
AaliYa : hamare bedroom*luks at him wid hot eyes*
Zain : din dahaade?
Aaliya : mere paas din dahaade karne ka liscense hai*wraps her arms arnd his neck n pulls him close..*
Chalna hai ki yahin pe?*winks*
Zain: bahut daring hogayyi ho tum.. Yahaan par karogi??*raises his eyebrow*
Aaliya : challenge mat karo
Zain : tum kar hi na..*aaliya kisses him hard.. She moves a lil n adjusts herself on his lap .. He holds her waist tightly n moans as she bites his lower lip*
Zain : aaliya koi*stammers*
Aaliya : kahaan tha nuh.. Challenge nat karna.. Yakeen huwa ya kuch aur
Zain : nahi. Chalo ghar.. We need to get back to homeASAP*grins.. Aaliya blushes n gets back to her seat*
Aaliya : ready Abdullah??*smirks*
Zaim : ready Mrs. Abdullah*aaliya starts driving*
Aaliya : zain nahi.. Plz let me concentrate.. Ghar jaldhi pahunchna hai ki nahi??*zain keeps giving her butterfly kisses in middle*
Zain : ghar jaana zaruri hai??yahi par
Aaliya :shut up..10 mins mei pahunch jaainge.. Uske tum sirf mere hoge*smirks*
Zain : i'm all yours baby*grabs her by her hair.. Turns her face n kisses her hard*
Aaliya : zain.. Stop.. Zain gaadi*kisses him back*

Zain : Aaliya... Watch out.. Gaadi aarahai hai..*aaliya leaves the stairing... THUD*
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Very nyc update
Loved it
Waiting fr next chap
Cont ASAP!
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Aweosme part !!
Loved it <3
Aliya bohot bold ho gayi hai :p
Continue soon !!!
Thnxx for pm :)
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Loved the update
do continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Thud.. yeh kaha phasa dia mujhe sumaiya? Yeh bhi koi baat hui? Matlab itne saalo baad (ok theek hai, mahine) baad update kiya hai, and yeh update di?

Chalo, i'm continuing.


Hope you guys can bear it. 😆


This is espically fr Anya (Sobtian..) and Priya (iluvuzaya)




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Continued..
City Hospital
Aaliya's POV




"Zain.." It was almost unbearable. It was like there was a hole inisde my heart. And the passing time just made it bigger and bigger. I had injuries, but it was Zain I was worried about. The doctors said it was.. that it was.. it crictical.


"Mrs. Abdullah?"


"Yes."


"Mr. Abdullah has a case of severe injury. He's hit his head. The injuries will not leave him any scars but the point is, Mrs. Abdullah, he's not responding."


Not responding? Shit!


"What do you mean by not responding?"

"Mrs. Abdullah, to recover, we have given him meds. We've given him vaccines but he won't want to come out of the condition. It's almost like he's afraid."

"Afraid?" Afraid? What does that mean?

"Mrs. Abdullah, it's just that he is afraid something might have happened. Something that'll hurt him, or someone he truly cares about and can't see being hurt."


Me! Zain!


"So what do we do now, Doctor?"

"We wait. 24 hour is the time that can be given for his recovery. If he doesn't come out of his state, then I am afraid.." His voice died out. Shit!

"Tell me, Doctor."

"I'm afraid he'll go into COMA." C-O-M-A! The word shook the hell outta me. I held on the wall behind me to stop myself from falling. No! No Allah! No! You can't do this to me. It's not even been a while of us together, you can't seperate us! I want to kill myself! Why the hell didn't I let him drive? Why the hell didn't I just go to college? Why the hell did I even come in his life? I wouldn't have been with him, but he would have been freaking safe!


"Is he-"


"No, Mrs. Abdullah. Now, whom do you need me to call?"


"I- I don't know. I'll ring my sister. Thank you, Doctor."


"We'll do our best. Good luck." He gently pat my head and then walked back into Zain's room. I lightly slid down the wall. My heart-wrenching cries filled the hospital. My life was in there, in that room, fighting for his life! And I, for the first time in my life, can't do anything. I can't freaking do anything!




"Hello?" I hear a voice say.


"Aisha di?"


"Aaliya." She says suddenly worried by my broken voice. "What happened? Are you alright? Is Zain alright?"


"No, Di, he isn't."


"Don't panic, Aaliya. Tell me, what happened." I narrate the story to her. All of it.


"I don't know what to do, Di. Please come here."

"Of course Aaliya. I'm on my way. I'll be there within 10."

"And don't tell Ammi n Abbu about this, please."

"Par Aaliya-"

"Please Di."

"Ohk." She hangs up.




"Aaliya?" I raise my head to see Di standing beside me. I was on the floor, my clothes all wet and dusted. Wet because of my tears. Wet because of my Husbands'- I shudder.

"Di." I launch myself into her arms.

"Oh Aaliya. You look horrible. It's all gonna be alright, baby. Allah pe vishwaas rkho. Woh sab theek kr denge."

"Kaise vishwas rkhu di? Mera pyaar mujhse durr chala jaa rha hai. Hmara baccha bina baap ke nahi-"

"Baccha? Aaliya? Tu pregnant hai?"

"Haan Di. Mujhe aapko yeh news aise nahi btani thi. Par ab kuch- Di aap kaho na Doctor ko. Kaho na ki kisi bhi tarah Zain ko theek kr de. Pls kaho na."

"Haan haan mei kehti hu Aaliya. Tu tension mat le. Mei abhi doctor ko bta ke aati hu. Tu yahi ruk. Tujhe kuch khane ke liye chahiye?"

"Nahi Di. Aap jaiye."

"Ok, I'll be right back."








"Aaliya?"


"Haa haan di?" Shit! I fall asleep.


"Shh it's ok."


"Zain! Zain kaisa hai di?"


"Usse hosh aa gya hai Aaliya. He's been asking for you jab se usse hosh aaya. Ja usse mil le. He's really worried. Usse lag rha hai you lost your child. And humne jab usse itna samjhaya ki you and your baby are safe, he said he wants to meet you immediately. Usse lg rha hai hum usse jhooth bol rhe hai. Jaldi ja." I run into the room almost immediately, not noticing whether Di is coming behind me or not. I need to see Zain, that's all!





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Over to you, Sumaiya. 😃



Thanks a lot guyz, this is total crap.
Romance writing mei Sumaiya rocks, not me!


-Tani.

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