DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
congo for s 2 👏
nice & different concept 😛
Pls send me the link & do pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
Congo for the new story di
Interesting stry and character sketch
both are spoil brat...it will be superb to see maaneet in this stry :)
Pls give me blog link di :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
congoo for season 2
\i loved previous season
i m in
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
haila.. 👏new story of maan Geet... love u dear...👍🏼

it seems both Maan & Geet r spoiled brats.. .ab maza aayega..

eagerly waiting for next update...

thnx for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
exited..
both are badass...now let's see their clashes..😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Congrast on new season of DT
looking fwd..cont soon
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DARK TEPMPTATION #2
PART - 1


Curly hairs strands,clouding her face,as she laid exhaust after her last encounter. Stretching her arms over satin sheet,she forced to pull herself. One jerk and the most beautiful face on earth appeared from the clouds. Her drowsy intoxic eyes, sharp white nose, dimpled white creamy cheeks,an epitome of beauty,can fuel any one's desire. But to grab her wasn't easy. Her last night bed warmer was slept near,holding her waist. She just glance him and flinch off his hand,to free herself. Coming out of bed she moved to washroom. Splash water on her face so she get forced herself to awake. Her generous curves need to covered. She glance and searching her exclusive designer one piece outfit which laying at some corner of the room.


Wearing them again, she moved outside. Its 5 am. Cloudy atmosphere,still dark all around and chilled air caressed her cascading hairs covering her bare back. She took a few sip of from the bottle of wine after jumping behind the wheels. Then she lignite her cigarette before her car run madly on the long roads of Paris.


At 6:30 am her long luxurious car entered in the premises of a palace like mansion. After crossing a long path way her car stopped and automatic door of garage open. Well dressed servant came and open door for her. She come out to move inside the mansion and her servant parked the car inside to stood in the que of cars. Even a car showroom not having this count of cars standing in her garage.


She had to pass a long way to her room waiting for her. But in between pair of eyes having a pain,regret, and disgust waiting for her. Isn't that she wasn't aware,but tried to escape as her head is spinning and she surely don't need any argument this moment.

"Geet.." A sharp voice ristricted her next raised step. Her eyes clenched hard and fingers curled into fists and her sharp nails pierced into the soft skin of her palm. She inhaled and releases sharp.


Turned around and found glaring eyes waiting for him. Stern face, knotted brows,same expression she faced almost daily. "Uncle spare me this time. We can talk later."she tried to avoid him.


"ya ofcourse and when the right time is come? I just cant tolerate your behaviour any more. When will you understand that you are Handa Heir and this empire needs you. But instead of this you just involved in shamless activites,disrespecting our values and name. What you want to prove?" He yelled on her which indeed dont affecting her.


"you are my Uncle so kept on that only dont tried to be my Father. Here you are my guardian till i get everything on my name. So keep in mind i am not answerable to you." she was rude and offensive. Misbehave was her style. No one was able to tamed her till now.


"ya right. I am your guardian and this is my responsibility to make you a perfect Handa heir. Geet you are a girl and this kind of lifestyle not good for a girl of reputed family. I just dont want to use that word,but only those women can live life this way for money." her loose talk broke the boundary of his patience. She disrespects and not ready to listen to him.


"i dont care,who think what about me." she replied briefly and took a pace steps towards her room.


Her Uncle,Sunjay Handa,younger brother of her father was the leagal guardian of Geet after her parents died. Since they died he took care of her and business. But he too failed to raise Geet with values every parents wants. Geet was the only child of Handa's,a reputated name of Paris. One of the richest tycoon of the town. Her Father Ruderpratap Handa and mother Avantika Handa died in a plane crash when she was only 11. After them Sunjay become her legal gurdian. But Geet was born arrogant and stubborn. She never listen to his word. A complete spoiled chick. Till now Sunjay used his power and money to cover up her activities,but all night clubs and there creatures knows her and her devlish nature. She got what she want. Every boy desired her but only she had the power to choose,not boys,who are just options for her.


Sunjay was tensed as he wants her to marry with a boy of their status and having a good values. But its not easy. Though he shut the mouth of media but all well known of them was aware about her.


"where are you?" while leaving smoke Geet asked to the person on the other side of the call. Person answered and she commands. "come here to meet me and to in 15 mins."



As she commands that girl entered in Handa Mansion. "you are late darling." she glared glacing her wrist watch.


"i am sorry i am sorry Geet. Wo Freddy k chakkar me late ho gaya." She explained in meak voice. Nerveousness was still there.


"what? Sasha dont tell me that you are still struck with your 5 month old boyfriend." her eyes grew dark as she shot a look to her. Sasha was her only friend. Friend is not a correct words actually. Geet dont made friends. She was her follower like.

Geet Handa born to rule,not to make friends. She love dominating others. Sasha is close to her then others. "dont give me a look." she requests.


"if you dont have a care for your reputation then atleast care for mine. You are my friend and from last 5 months you are stick with the same guy." She was not sure weather Geet was shocked or angry. Or both.

"but Geet he is good in bed." She told her defensively.


"dump him right now. Dont you now,never give importance to anyone except yourself."Geet adviced her and she looked at her.


Did she really believe that? This was the only question banging inside her mind. "did you hear what i told you?" Geet asked in a cautioning way to which she nodded her head in a pace. "Sasha men are like tissue papers,dont carried a used one for so long." Geet commands and sasha staring at her fierce and ravenous face. She cant denied her so its a obvious command for her.



Geet never felt to attach anyone. She wnats to live freely the way she demands.




Note: hi guys. So here is first part of DT#2 for you.

1. Now ownwards all parts I am going to post only on my blog.

2. Each and every readers who hit like and comment on the post, will get the PW only. I need both Like and comment.

3. Only those who are interested can give their reply and tell me. And those who are not free to leave and no need to made a post.

4. I will share PW with only those who genuinely interested and give proper feed back. I don't mind with less no of readers but I want proper feedback on each and every part.


Thank you Guys.. waiting for your reply.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awesome start just love it
waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
you said it will be on blog
but it will be woohoo
wow she is different
spoilt brat
with no one to put her on right way
and am sure maan is just like her
if not worse
but did she have to be smoker
she does know right smoking will ruin her beauty
wow so she believes men are like tissue
kya khayal hai inke
geet being grey isnt new
but this side is i guess
well if men can be why cant women
but what about the handa empire
that what am thinking about
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Posted: 10 years ago
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so geet is spoil rich bart, has no moral values and thinks man as an tissue paper,use it and throw away,dont bother reputation of handa's,don't care what people say and dont listen to her uncle very rude arrogant and slirt girl
she wants Sasha not to cling one man for long throw away after each use,she believes in my choice no one has right to say anything to her ,who will accept her for marriage in their senses knowing who she is?
i think i read something like before but end was very tragic,maan was good boy fall in head on heel in live with her but this girl was changing her partner like tissue paper and when she really fall in love with him it was too late to come back from where she reached and in end she dies,but maan cant forget her he didn't got marry and pass his life in her memory dont know the name of story.

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