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Posted: 10 years ago
You nailed it !
The path of true love is never easy and Yagyas questions are really so gut wrenching...
But what answer can Arjun give? There was no answer to his silence at certain points in their life... Agreed he might have gone through pain also but that is not an answer to her questions...
The only thing they can do is accept that and if possible move on...
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Posted: 10 years ago
what an update Devranijee😭 u truly described the pain nd anguish so brilliantly😭 I m still spellbound nd with teary eyes😭 u truly nailed it👏


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bluesky10

Beautifully written

The way you showed pain in your words was
Awesome
Arjun cried
Both are in pain
But hope he will try to bring her out of this
Which is eating her soul
Thanks for you wonderful update


Thanks a lot, darling! He will!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nadine_lopez_48

Yagya u made me cryy 😔
I'm like a fool now..

but I always love to be a fool when It comes to your updates!😆
So sweet dear...you choose the best songs and write the best updates with them👏
Yagya's questions at the end was something which I sometimes wonder..WHY ARJUN???
Update Jaldi karo!!!!!!!!!!!! you made us wait too long..not fair!!!😡😡


Thanks a lot, dear! I am really honored!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: LiveYourDream

You nailed it !

The path of true love is never easy and Yagyas questions are really so gut wrenching...
But what answer can Arjun give? There was no answer to his silence at certain points in their life... Agreed he might have gone through pain also but that is not an answer to her questions...
The only thing they can do is accept that and if possible move on...


Thanks a lot, Mamta! He can give no answer! I can't think of any answer! I don't know if I will justify the next update or not! I am scared!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

what an update Devranijee😭 u truly described the pain nd anguish so brilliantly😭 I m still spellbound nd with teary eyes😭 u truly nailed it👏



Thanks a lot, Jethanijee!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 59


"Tere Hi Ishq Mein..."

Silence.

Unlike all those times in the past, today there was a silence because there is no answer for the questions that were posed in front of him.

Unlike all those times in the past, today Yagya was asking him for answers to her and not to the world.

But did she hear the rhythm of pain resonating from the strings of his heart?

Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...

His path was long forgotten. His long was long forsaken. But his silence was never accepted.

" Yagya, I might not be able to go on the path of answers, but I will surely forget the path of silence. And today I will speak, Yagya. Please don't stop me. I truly love you a lot, in fact I love you more than myself. You are the treasure I can never afford to lose. But..." came the painful whisper from Arjun much to Yagya's shock.

How long had she waited for this confession to take place?

Now that it happened, all she could do was, cry.

Cry for the boundless love they shared for each other.



Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

" But My love is not so selfish that I will force you to be with me. I make you free from all the thoughts, all the promises, all the vows you made to me. I free myself from my support today." said Arjun, making the biggest decision of his life.

Indeed, he had truly showed the definition of love to everyone. Love never means taking. It only means giving.

But in this love of theirs, they had sacrificed themselves, their thoughts, their desires and in fact even their love.

Their love was something too profound, something beyond the mere mortal's definition of love. It was something too divine and underlying to understood.

Today, yet again Arjun had shown to the world and to his world, his Yagya, the extent of his love for her.

" Arjun" came out a faint whisper from Yagya who was shocked by what Arjun had told her.

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro raha hun main

" No, Yagya. Please don't stop me, at least not today. Don't be concerned about me. Without you, I will not die, right? But I will not be able to live too. I mightn't became a Devdaas but my wish to become Yagya's Arjun would be left unfulfilled." said Arjun, in a painful voice while sobs choked down his voice.

Yagya never knew that this was the extent of Arjun's love for her.

She never knew that distance from her had left him a pawn in between death and life. He could neither die in pain nor live in love.

The very thought of this depth of pain, made her heart wrench.

While Subhi was shedding uncontrollable tears, Govind could only smile seeing the love of these three for each other.

He knew everything would be alright and perfect. But the cost of that perfection was so much that it managed to wrench the Almighty's heart too.


Waqt bhi thehara hai
Kaise kyun ye huaa
Kaash tu aise aaye
Jaise koi duaa
Tu rooh ki raahat hai
Tu meri ibaadat hai

" You know Yagya, you are my solace. You are like my unspoken wish granted. I hope I could replay and rewind those times I spent with you. But you know, my only wish would be that, if you come back. Even if it is to give me pain. Even if it is to torment in my mind.

Come back, even if it to extinguish the last candles of my hopes and expectations for I have been longing for you since ages forgot.

But Yagya, please accept the depth of my love. Please do not let my silence cloud my love in your eyes." said Arjun, in a lifeless voice, which had the potential to make even the celestial deities' heart wrench in pain.

Yagya was too much in pain and shock to even cry. Her eyes were now red with pain.

The only difference was that today his pain added to her pain as she embraced his pain with open hands.

Will this separation take place?

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I dunno if I did justice to this update. For the first time, I think I didn't do proper justice. Please do let me know of your views!

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Edited by Yagyaseni - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Resss...
Mahabharat is my favourite show .. And shaheer amd Pooja are one of my favourite actors... So excited to read a fiction about them ...
😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Such a beautifully written chapter Yagya!👏
The update was so heart wrenching! I absolutely loved it!😊
It was wonderfully penned and I loved the way that you let both of them speak their heart out and vent all the pain!
The way Parth expressed all his feelings was truly fantastic!
I just hope that this leads to a new beginning and that the pain is forgotten!😃
Waiting for the next chapter!
Edited by 8520NK - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was divine 👏
I loved the way arjun broke his silence and told yagya what she is for him...
his confession was very much needed..
what's yaga going to do now ...
I just hope they won't separate 😒
yagya u wrote the chapter beautifully.. it has directly touched my heart..
I just love ur writing skill... Thanks a lot for giving us such a soulful update... 👏
continue soon 😊

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