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Rihoo Haws

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hiyyaaa Kidooo...

Congratulation for commenting ur very first OS ;)

Let me tell u in short that it was sooo beautiful and awesome one...

I just love it from the beginning to the enddd...

Aur siggie maine blog pe already dekh liya and in FB too...

It's awesome too...

Now lets start a quick tour in ur OS...

Kyunki raat ke 12 bhaj gaye hai and I need to sleep haahha...

Chalo chaloo aage badooo...

U choose to start the story from where Riddhima has gone in search of Armaan...

I must say u have turn the story beautifully giving a hope of ray to Riddhima that Armaan would be coming back in her life when he recover by leaving that letter and making Armaan wear the payal before leaving...

Armaan was willing to fight with his diseases for Riddhima seeing how she has come in search of him...

Letter was written superb... each and every word touch my heart...

After reading the letter, Riddhima has change just with the hope that her Armaan would come back as he promise for her, for their love...

Riddhima started to live her life with a smile on her face and seeing her smiling and change of behavior, everyone was happy... :)

But no one knows the reason behind her smile was only HER ARMAAN...

Oh god, I so hate this SID... Can't he go and die somewhere...

Hamesha aajaate hai muh uta ke Riddhima ke peeche peeche...

Woh usse itna pyar karte hai toh taunt maar kyun raha hai... Riddhima koh uske khushi ke liyeh chod kyun nehi dete...

Pyar toh Armaan karta hai Riddhima se, Riddhima koh koi bhi takleef nehi dene ke liyeh usne khud koh Riddhima se dur kya...

Aur yeh duffer Sid, baar baar aajaate hai apna kamina pan dikhate...

Hayye, Rahul and Muskaan is together...

Even Anjali confess her love to Anjali... Wah bhai wahhh... Yehi huvi na baat...

Old gang is the best in DMG always... Without them DMG is nothing na hehehe...

Okey okey back to the story...

Muskaan and Rahul came to meet Riddhima before they leave to further medication of Rahul...

Accha huva Rahul realized that nothing can be impossible when love of their life is with them...

Lolz, muski toh hai hi sherni... Accha hua usne Sid koh sun diya kamina kahin ka hahaha...

Armaan paas ho aur Riddhima koh Armaan ke paas hone ka ehsaas na ho aisa toh kabhi ho hi nehi sakte...

Armaan aur Riddhima doh naam zarur hai but un dono ke dil aise jhud gaya hai woh kabhi bhi kahinpe bhi ho, ek dursre ke aahat koh mehsoos kar sakte hai...

yeyyy, Armaan is backkk...

Lekin woh sahi waqt ka inthizaar kar rhaa hai...

Lekin yeh Sid ke kamina pan enough nehi ta kya yeh Shashank da budda bhi shaamil hogaya...

Uff yeh log acche maut se nehi marengee...

Tohda bhi rehem naam ki cheez nehi haina in dno ke andar...

Riddhima aur Armaan koh dur karne ke liyeh yeh log itna cheap plan bana ya ufff...

Finally,AR met in basketball court...

hayye, Riddhima kitni khush ti... Aur khushi se behosh hogayi... Uff yeh ladki bina...

Accha huva Armaan ne jaldi jaldi hospital le gaya...

Oh god Shashank ne toh sab kuch barbaad kardiya...

Usne Armaan koh aisa dikhaya ki woh Riddhima kh chod ke chala gaya phirse...

Song sequence was superb Kido... Kash Armaan ne Riddhima koh bolne ka moka diya hota...

poor Riddhima koh bhi kitna kuch sehna pada in kamine shanshank and Sid ke wajahse...

kitna jhut bolte hai... chee chee chee...

Accha huva Riddhima ne chodke bhaag gaya... Nehi toh yeh log pata nehi kya kya karenge Riddhima ke life ke saat...

Months past and one day AR again met...

Bhagwaan bhi doh pyar karne walon koh kab tak dur rakhenge ek dusre se...

AR conversation was superbbb Kido..

It was so emotional when Riddhima break down in Armaan arms telling how Shashank and Sid plan to separate them...

Armaan ki wajahse Riddhima waapas jane ke liyeh ready huvi...

hayye, confess kardi and Riddhima kiss him to shut him and tell him how much she loves him and believe how much he loves her...

Lekin yeh Kamina Shashank toh apne harkat se baaz nehi aaya na...

Har koshish ki dono koh dur karne ke liyeh but at last... Riddhima ne uske mind mein kuch sense daal hi diya hahaha...

Love how Riddhima spoke for her love and their love...

Shashank bhi last mein maangaye kyunki Armaan aisa kiuch bhi nehi karna chaahta ta Shashank ke manzur ke bina issiliye dono ne decide ki ab is last baar Shashank nehi maane toh woh ek dusre se alag hojaenge...

End mein sab kuch tik huvaaa...hayye...

It was so so sooo cute OS Kido...

Love it...

and Love u more... Muwaahhh

take care <3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: RihooHaws
Hiyyaaa Kidooo...
Congratulation for commenting ur very first OS ;)
Let me tell u in short that it was sooo beautiful and awesome one...
I just love it from the beginning to the enddd...
Aur siggie maine blog pe already dekh liya and in FB too...
It's awesome too...

Now lets start a quick tour in ur OS...
Kyunki raat ke 12 bhaj gaye hai and I need to sleep haahha...
Chalo chaloo aage badooo...

U choose to start the story from where Riddhima has gone in search of Armaan...
I must say u have turn the story beautifully giving a hope of ray to Riddhima that Armaan would be coming back in her life when he recover by leaving that letter and making Armaan wear the payal before leaving...
Armaan was willing to fight with his diseases for Riddhima seeing how she has come in search of him...
Letter was written superb... each and every word touch my heart...

After reading the letter, Riddhima has change just with the hope that her Armaan would come back as he promise for her, for their love...
Riddhima started to live her life with a smile on her face and seeing her smiling and change of behavior, everyone was happy... :)
But no one knows the reason behind her smile was only HER ARMAAN...

Oh god, I so hate this SID... Can't he go and die somewhere...
Hamesha aajaate hai muh uta ke Riddhima ke peeche peeche...
Woh usse itna pyar karte hai toh taunt maar kyun raha hai... Riddhima koh uske khushi ke liyeh chod kyun nehi dete...
Pyar toh Armaan karta hai Riddhima se, Riddhima koh koi bhi takleef nehi dene ke liyeh usne khud koh Riddhima se dur kya...
Aur yeh duffer Sid, baar baar aajaate hai apna kamina pan dikhate...

Hayye, Rahul and Muskaan is together...
Even Anjali confess her love to Anjali... Wah bhai wahhh... Yehi huvi na baat...
Old gang is the best in DMG always... Without them DMG is nothing na hehehe...

Okey okey back to the story...
Muskaan and Rahul came to meet Riddhima before they leave to further medication of Rahul...
Accha huva Rahul realized that nothing can be impossible when love of their life is with them...
Lolz, muski toh hai hi sherni... Accha hua usne Sid koh sun diya kamina kahin ka hahaha...

Armaan paas ho aur Riddhima koh Armaan ke paas hone ka ehsaas na ho aisa toh kabhi ho hi nehi sakte...
Armaan aur Riddhima doh naam zarur hai but un dono ke dil aise jhud gaya hai woh kabhi bhi kahinpe bhi ho, ek dursre ke aahat koh mehsoos kar sakte hai...
yeyyy, Armaan is backkk...
Lekin woh sahi waqt ka inthizaar kar rhaa hai...

Lekin yeh Sid ke kamina pan enough nehi ta kya yeh Shashank da budda bhi shaamil hogaya...
Uff yeh log acche maut se nehi marengee...
Tohda bhi rehem naam ki cheez nehi haina in dno ke andar...
Riddhima aur Armaan koh dur karne ke liyeh yeh log itna cheap plan bana ya ufff...

Finally,AR met in basketball court...
hayye, Riddhima kitni khush ti... Aur khushi se behosh hogayi... Uff yeh ladki bina...
Accha huva Armaan ne jaldi jaldi hospital le gaya...

Oh god Shashank ne toh sab kuch barbaad kardiya...
Usne Armaan koh aisa dikhaya ki woh Riddhima kh chod ke chala gaya phirse...
Song sequence was superb Kido... Kash Armaan ne Riddhima koh bolne ka moka diya hota...

poor Riddhima koh bhi kitna kuch sehna pada in kamine shanshank and Sid ke wajahse...
kitna jhut bolte hai... chee chee chee...
Accha huva Riddhima ne chodke bhaag gaya... Nehi toh yeh log pata nehi kya kya karenge Riddhima ke life ke saat...

Months past and one day AR again met...
Bhagwaan bhi doh pyar karne walon koh kab tak dur rakhenge ek dusre se...
AR conversation was superbbb Kido..
It was so emotional when Riddhima break down in Armaan arms telling how Shashank and Sid plan to separate them...
Armaan ki wajahse Riddhima waapas jane ke liyeh ready huvi...
hayye, confess kardi and Riddhima kiss him to shut him and tell him how much she loves him and believe how much he loves her...

Lekin yeh Kamina Shashank toh apne harkat se baaz nehi aaya na...
Har koshish ki dono koh dur karne ke liyeh but at last... Riddhima ne uske mind mein kuch sense daal hi diya hahaha...
Love how Riddhima spoke for her love and their love...
Shashank bhi last mein maangaye kyunki Armaan aisa kiuch bhi nehi karna chaahta ta Shashank ke manzur ke bina issiliye dono ne decide ki ab is last baar Shashank nehi maane toh woh ek dusre se alag hojaenge...
End mein sab kuch tik huvaaa...hayye...

It was so so sooo cute OS Kido...
Love it...
and Love u more... Muwaahhh
take care <3

Heyaaa rihoo di...

love u di for this

glad u loved it...

hehee siggy is aweesome bt not than siggy of urs...

Kk lets start...

heehee yaa right aur yaah ab raat kai 2 baj rahe hai...

sleep tight di...u know u r really worrying...apna khyal nahi rakhti iss tension mai...

Yess...I really don't like CVs for this...

glad u found it beautiful di..,

hehee...mee to wrote that letter in one goo...And withheart

i love those payal wala love soo much...

Haahee...Armaan had alwz been the reason ofnher hapoiness di...

Mee too hate him...di he should not go smwhr...plss someone take him to a river and throw thr...

Heee...ab kameene kameena pan nahinkarenge toh kya karenge di...

Yess RAMUS r together...yaa di...anjali confess her love to anjali..yeh kyaa hai...chalo its kk...

yess DMG old gang tabhi toh DMG hai...humari old gang naa hoti toh dmg kaise banta...

Yess..,rahul had been an idiot in the show...heehee...patiyala di kudi hai...sid ki kameena panti ko ek yeh aur ek armana hi toh jhaad sakte hai...

Hmm...armaan aur ridhima ek dusre kai ehsaas sai ek dusre kompehchaan lete hai...sahinwaqt...yess

Shanky khusad...kameene pan ki hadd hotinhai...,truly...hehee

AR basketball court mai mile toh feel ati hai di...dinshe was shocked..behish toh hona hi tha.,.jyada khushi handle nhainkarpayi...humari ridzi...

Shanky paagal...glad u love dthe song..seq di...Hmm par shayad jo hota hai ache kaimliye hota hai...

I wanted ridz to run away...hehee...truly iss shanky aur sid ki tih...

Yess...i was scared thtthis convo anyone would like or not...

gald u loved the convo di...

armaan samjhdaar hai ridzinsai jyaada yeh baat maanni toh padegi...

hehee...u know its my first moment written...i was soo nervous in writing this ki yeh acha jayega yaa nhai...jabki k7ch nahi tha...hehee

Ab shanky kuch na akarta toh ridzi ko hi sense daalni padti...

yeh logo nhai toh puri tarahAR ko alag karne ki thaan rakhi hai naa...

yess...ab toh shanky ko manana tha...

AR relation was pure soo i just wanted to givevthe touch of thr puure relation...

THEEK TOH HONA HI THA DI

afterall

AR r made for eachother together nad alwayz...

Glad u foind it cuute

Sooo happy u luved it...

and I Love U tooo

muuwaaahhh

with love

only ursss KIDDO

Edited by sanjudmgian - 10 years ago

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San

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Here is my FS

AR FS - Baatein Yeh Kabhina

Hey guys its me first time writing a FS...This story contains real convos in the start bt later all is my imagination...soo do not bash it in any form...

Yeh kahani hai do doston ki jo ek dusre kai best frnds thai aur kab unme sai kisi ek ko usse pyaar ho gaya pata hi nahi chala...

Dono humesha ek sath thai par kismat nai unhe alag kardiya...

Yeh hai unki pyaar ki daastan...

Girl to her pen friend who is also a girl(both are of same age)

Day is propose day

Girl- yaar m feeling very sad

Girl2- kyon kya hua

Girl- nikki yaar mere ko na aaj kisi ki bohut yaad aa rahi hai

Nikki- ridz bata chal hua kya

Ridz- vo actually mujhe pyaar ho gaya hai

Nikki- toh acha hai naa lekin yaad kyon aa rahi hai

Ridz- vo uska transfer ho gaya hai

Nikki- toh phone no hoga baat karle

Ridz- nhai hoga yaar uska ghar ka no tha lekin ab vo chala gay i don't hv any of his no.

Nikki- chal koi baat nahi

Ridz- vaise tujhe lagta hai ki dosti pyaar uo sakti hai

Nikki- haan ho sakta hai i had seen many cases...meri bua and fufaji ka hi case le lai...both studied at the same skul aur fufaji ki taraf sia love aur bua ki taraf sia arrange

Ridz- aww yaar shoo guud

Nikki- class mai kisi sai puch

Ridz- nahi yaar sab mujhe tease karenge

Nikki- toh fb par dekh naam kya hai mai dekhti hoon

Ridz- dekh liya...uska naam armaan hai

Nikii- chal yara koi baat nahi

Ridz- vaise bhi koi fayeda nahi he doesn't love me

Nikki- yaar zaroori thodi na hota hai ki jisko pyaar kroge vo milega

Ridz- i know yara love is very painful

Nikki- its yaar atleast u hv many of his and urs good memories

Ridz- hmmm

And she drowsed in her and armaan's memories

**FLASHBACK**

its the day how they met...

they met at basketball court and as she was short heighted he named her muchkin and as he loved peanuts she named him peanut (i loved M & P of AWOTB... SORRY SHRUTIKA DI)

at instance they became best of friends...

They were the best friends amd people would in skul would used to talk abt thr frndship...

they used to share each and everything...

once thr was a skul trip...

they played all along with friends

and thts how 12 years passes she doesn't bt wht she knows is that she loves him a lot...

**Flashback end**

Nikki- mera ganna gane mann kar raha hai...dill sambhal jaa zara phir mohabbat karne chala

Ridz- u know jiss din i came to know he loved my friend i just told him he should be happy and i started to ignore him

**FLASHBACK**

Love was i the air...she never found herself soo happy..

she is in love

todays he decided that she gonna tell him tht she love him

and then comes her best friend armaan

armaan- hii riddu

ridz- hii armi...kaisa hai

armaan- mai bohit khush hoon aur tujhe jab bataunga tu bhi khish ho jayegi afyerall u r my best friend

ridz- mujhe bhi baat akrni hai par pehle tu bata...kyaa baat kya hua jo itna khush hai

armaan- vo voo..voo..acctua...acctually m..m..mai..maire...maireko nn..nn...naaa

ridz- kya tu tu ttu mai mai mai kar raha hai...jo bata jaldo bata nhai toh mai jaa rahi hoon

armaan- arre yaar...i am in love

ridhima was going bt stopped in her way

ridhima turned- kk..klk...kyyaaa tuu..tujh...tukhe pyaar hogaya (speaks with tears in her eyes)

armaan- hmmm...

ridhima- hugged him and said m sooo happy for u bt bata who is the lucky one

armaan- its anji

ridhima- anji as in anjali

armaan- yuppsss right!!!

ridz- m really happy for u (said while hugging him) cahl ab mai chalti hoon

AT HOME

ridz- kyon kyon aapne mere saath aisa kiya...i love him aur aapne (while sitting besides french window looking at the sky)its soo hard to be away.

NEXT DAY

ridhima went to skul bt not with armaan.

armaan cake running behind

armaan- muchkin stop...muchkin yaar whr r u going

bt she ignored him...he comes to her

armaan- muchkin tumsunn kyon nahi rahi

ridhima- aisa kuch nhai hai peanut. its just ki today i need to go early

armaan - bt todau u didn't even talked to me properly yaar

ridhima- tujhe aisa kyon lag raha hia...chal mai jaati hoon...byeee

armaan- hmm byeee

like this many days passed. she started to ignore him. she doesn't want to show her feelings to him .

**Flashback ends**

Nikii- tujhe aisa nhai karna chahiye tha

Ridz- hmm he got a little hurt and tried to keep in touch with me...par then i moved to other class and that was teh perfect opportunity to ignore him...woh mujhe classmate kai through notes,letters,msgs bhejta tah bt i didn't rply aur phir uske baad he stopped and then one day i saw him and my frnd whom he loved together at lunch...and i was sad but happy 4 them.

**FLASHBACK**

Armaan and Ridhima came face to face bt this time armaan ignored her...

ridhima thought- he is hurt...m sorry armaan bt i can't do anything

Song- yeh hosla (sanam pe)

YEH HOSLA KAISE JHUKE

YEH AARZOO KAISE RUKE(2)

(thr sections had changed thy r in diff classes...

one girl to ridhima- ridhima yeh lo

ridz- yeh kya hai

girl- armaan nai tumhare liye bheja hai

ridz- ohhh

armaan had written- muchkin kya hua naraaz hai kya...maine kich galat kiya sorry yaar...plsss baat karle

bt ridhima she kept the paper in her book and moved out of the class...

armaan thought tht ridhima would say smthing bt they saw eachother and he was abt to say smthing when ridhima moved without giving him any acknowledgement.)

MANZIL MUSHKIL TOH KYA

DHUNDLA SAAHIL TOH KYA

TANHA YEH DIL TOH KYA

(she was staring the sky at night which was all filled with black clouds just like her pain in her eyes...

like this days were goin on...

another day armaan's frnd comes- ridhima plss take it yeh armana nai bheji hai

ridhima- hmm thnku

armaan had wrote - ridhima plss batao maine kya kiay..mujhese baat karo...m missing my best frnd muchkin...

ridhima thinks- m soo soory armaan bt i need to do this)

TUNING...

RAHA PAI KAATEN BHIKHRE AGAR USPAI TOH PHIR BHI CHALNA HI HAI

SHAAM CHUPALE SURAJ AGAR

RAAT KO EK DIN DHALNA HI HAI

RUTT YEH TALL JAYEGI

HIMMAT RANG LAYEGI

SUBAH DHAL JAYEGI

TUNING

YEH HOSLA KAISE JHUKE

YEH AARZOO KAISE RUKE(2)

(its been couple of months they r not talking armaan send letters for her bt she stays mum.. one day armaan's frnd who sees his condition tell ridhima

armaan frnd- ridhima armana aur tum dono kai beech mai kya hua mujhe nahi pata hai bt he is missing his best friends yaar...comeone baat toh karlo

ridhima- hmmm...i will talk later..byeee

one day in interval she sees hum sad nad with glum face bt when he sees her his eyes shined like diamonds...bt wht she ignored him again

at home ridz lookin to sky- armaan kaise khush ho gaya tha aaj par mai kya karu agar mai bahi usse dur nahi hui toh it would be really hard...par kya yeh sahinhai nahi nahi yeh sahi nahi hai...kal mai usse baat karungi

next day

bt now its vise versa...he is ignoring her nad he keeps in ignoring her

ridz to herself- ab mujhe kyon bura lag raha hai maine bhi toh usse ignore kiya tah..bt ab mukhe usse baat karni hai...

she went to him in interwal

as she entered the canteen

she noticed armaan and anji eating food together

she was broken...then decided to burry her feelings inside herself now)

**Flashback ends**

Nikki- uska naam kya tha? Teri frnd ka

Ridz- anjali and uske baad he didn't contacted me

Nikki- ohh bt baat nahi hui baad mai

Ridz- uske last day of skul everyone met him bt not me one part of me just wanted to go and shout to him that i love him par usse alvida nahi keh payi coz my ego came in between

Nikki- aww its kk yaar....

Ridz- jab mai usse byee bolne jaa rahi thi tab tak he had left already

Niki- cahl ronna mat abhi aki liye byee...need to go baad mai baat karenge

Ridz- done. vaise tu aur muski aur ***** ** toh hai jinse mai yeh sa share karti hoon

nikki- tune hum teeno ko sab kuch bataya

ridz- nahi yaar muskaan is still left

nikki- mai usse bataungi theek hai na

ridz- chl theek hai...

to be cont...

heyaa guys this is my first FS not only mine bt also smone other bt couldn't tell the name

and convo excluding flashback is purely real

hope u guys like it

with love

sanju & ********

Edited by sanjudmgian - 10 years ago

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@ishra-rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

its superb, amazing, ultimate, awesome...👏

beautifully written sanju

jst luved it..❤️

m amazed u remember all those scenes in which arman protected ridhima...👏

keep writing sanju...

nd sorry for reading it late.😳...

thank u soo much for pm..😃

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San

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: ishra-rocks
its superb, amazing, ultimate, awesome...👏
beautifully written sanju
jst luved it..❤️
m amazed u remember all those scenes in which arman protected ridhima...👏
keep writing sanju...
nd sorry for reading it late.😳...
thank u soo much for pm..😃

love u sooo much for such a lovely cmnt...

told u no sorry or thanku

will keep writing pakka

with love

sanju

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sanarujub

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Thanks for the pm ...continue soon

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Fiction-Lover

@Fiction-Lover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Res**

Sanju

Awesome start

Its really interesting

Apana hero kaha gaya hain yar ridzi missing him

anji hmmm kabab me haddi

Nikki ridzi sweet convo

Nikki supporting friend

Continue soon

Love ya

Edited by mishti_forever - 10 years ago

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Amazing start !!!
Loved it ...
Armaan loves anjie :(
Feeling very bad for ridz !!
Very intresting ..,,
Continue asap ...!!
Thnxx for pm :)

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palak sharma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

hey nice story
its really interesting but i don't like ridhz ignoring armaan when he is trying to talk to her so desperately
he tried or do so much efforts but her ego
superb start loved it
thanks for the pm
continue soon yaar
bye tc love u