Can You Trust Me? - A ZaYa SS Chap 10 and 11, Page 27, 17th June - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...


No di srry agar bura laga.
U didnt hurt any1



Nahi baby bilkul bura nahi lga.

Mei toh doc hu na, accha bnne waali hu

Par it's ok. Bilkul theek h. M nt hurt. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

amazing chp
beautifully written
aww...their dance
loved it
do cont asap plz !



Thank you. :)
Glad u like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago


I will today or tomorrow, promise. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Vaguely, I had a dream last night. A very different one. I imagined there was this big big haweli kinda house. And there were all those dav actors of mine. Harshad, Preetika, Fawad Khan, Parth Samthaan, etc. etc. And then my mom woke me up! I was internally shouting on her. Bt I dare do it.!


Here you go!


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Aaliya's Appartment
Late night
Aaliya's POV

Hmm, this is way above my level. Look, I luv Zain. I know that! But until now all I hear about love is that the guy and gal fall in love and they break up. As I turn through the pages of Zubair Ahmed's reports, I imagine Zain leaving me. I shudder. I push away the thought from my head, I don't like to think abt such negative things. I take out my cell.

Where are you?
I miss you. I'm cmg for you.
Don't go anywhere today.

Zx


I squirm. This guy doesn't know that his late night visits are nt hid by my parents. My Dad, Ghulam Haider, just pokes his nose into every single detail of me. He talks to my neighbours everytime he visits me. I like him visiting. but not the tell-me-if-you-have-a-crush part. I mean, hello Dad? Crushes are in schools! I have turned frikin 25! I am a doc for god's sake. You still thing I'll have a crush, that's it? Grow up, Dad! Ideally I should have told this to Mom. Mom, Shabana Ghulam Haider, is totally freakin out since I left. I dare miss one day, one call. My thoughts are interrupted by a huge thud. I turn around, ZAIN!

"Are you crazy or what?" I shout. "Did you just climb the pipe to reach to my room? Zain, it's so high. Normal people, unlike you, use a godam door! Try that, pls."

"I love you, too." He blows me a kiss as he approaches me. I keep stepping back. Nah, m nt gnna fall into your charms this time, Abdullah!

"Don't." I whisper.

"Don't what, Miss Haider?"

"I know what you are trying to do, Zain. Don't." I stare into his brown orbs. I turn around suddenly and pick my file, my back to him. I am about to turn around when suddenly he holds me from my back, his front pressend against me, I breathe heavily. "I wanted to talk to you about Zubair Ahmed. His case files, they state that- um.. he wasn't drunk. Zain."

"Not drunk?"

"Nope, not a single sip. He was suffering (not giving the name of the disease)." I murmur, "But there is still a risk, Zain."

"What?"

"Zain, Zara. Look, Zubair had suffered from 'it'. It's a generation passing disease. Zara may also fall into it. We have to get her treated."

"But how, Aaliya?"


To be continued...
Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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"I don't know. Look, Zain, Zara has asthma. In this case, if the disease harms her, it'll harm really bad. I can't afford to lose his daughter too. Look, I got to save Zara. Please, Zain."


"Don't worry, Aaliya, we'll save her."







Sanjeevani Hospital
12 o'clock
Aaliya's POV


This is so freakin' crazy! Aaj hi join krna tha inn dono ko? Rehaan Khan and Rida. Like seriously! Zain will be fuming if he sees me dancing with Rehaan. Bt wait a second! I can be fuming too! He is also gonna dance with Rida!


"What the hell do you think you are doing? I told you freakin' white roses need to be put up there. And you are good for nothing! Go get the damn flowers!" I turn around at Zain's shout. Oh god! Yeh hai mera Zain, ghussa kisi aur pe nikal rha hai.


"Can I have a minute, Zain?" I ask him.


"No, can't you see Aaliya? I'm busy."


"I'll not be long. Please?"


"Alright." He sighs, "You! Bring the white roses! When I'll be back I need white roses there! Dr. Kirti will not say anything to you, but she'll kill me! Got it?"

"Yes, Sir."


"Good." He turns to me. "Shall we?"


"After you." I smile. He shakes his head. Oh Zain, why are you so angry?






Firescape
Zain's POV


How can I freakin' relax? Guys, don't you see yourself? It's like a rule! Aaliya and Zain ko problems ke upar problems dete raho! This is freakin' crazy! How can I relax? And that poor guy, I did shout enough for my own good. Is he gonna complain to Dr. Kirti? Well, I hope not.


"What is wrong with you, Zain?"


"What is wrong with me? I'll tell you what is wrong with me. Today, in just 3 hours infact, some freakin' jerk is gonna hold you in his arms! Hold what's mine! And this is not all, he is gonna dance with you! Dance! So yeah, probably that's what is WRONG with me!"


"You can't fuss about it, Zain. You only told me we don't tell anyone about our relationship. So what now, huh? If you hadn't been like this, if you hadn't adviced that we don't tell anyone about our relationship, if you hadn't made me hide the thing I am the most happy about today from my friends, so yeah, maybe this fuss wouldn't have been there!


"Look Zain, I know this is hard. But we can't do anything about it! Rehaan is gonna just dance with me! I'm not going to let him make a pass at me, Zain. You gotta trust me!"


"I trust you, Aaliya. More than anything-"


"Then believe me, Zain."


"I do. It's just- I don't trust that jerk."


"I don't trust her, too."


"Who 'her'?


"As if you don't know, Rida!"


"Oh.. she's joining today?" I smirk. Ahaa! Jealousy!


"What do you want me to think is the reason you're smirking?"


"I don't know. What do you want to think?"


"Aaliyaa!" Riddhima calls her. Shit!


"What do we do now?" She asks me.


"What the hell do you think we are gonna do? Go."


"She'll see you,"


"If you don't go now, Aaliya, she's gonna come inside. Go! Now!"


"We're not done yet." Saying that, she runs out of the firescape.


"I'm glad!" I shout after her. I can 'not-be-done' as long as you want! ;)






4 Hours Later
Aaliya's Appartment
Aaliya's POV



What am i gonna do? I am an hour late! I check my dress. I am wearing a plum dress with matching heels. I've put my hair straight falling down my back. I remember Zain's compliment on my hair, how it looks when it's open.


Zain!


Why is he not here?


Isn't he gonna pick me up?



"Yo Aaliya!" I run to the window at the voice. It's Pia. Oh god! Thank you.


"Yeah, I'm coming." I shout. I'm so gonna kill you tonight Zain!




"Hi dear." Piya gives me a quick hug.


"Is Riddhima here?"


"Nope. She went with Armaan."


"Oh. Is that so?" We laugh.


"Chalo, let's go." I get in her car in the passenger's seat. She slips in beside me.





Finally. You're so going down tonight, Zain. 😉
Edited by harshadcrazyfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great chap...👏
I love to read more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: fariya98

Great chap...👏

I love to read more😊



Thank you. M glad u like it. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kya dream tha. Lovely..
Nyc chappy.
Haawww! zubair ko kya hua.
Update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sobtian...

Kya dream tha. Lovely..
Nyc chappy.
Haawww! zubair ko kya hua.
Update soon.



Thank you, Anya.
Zubair will b fine. I assure you.
I will try mah best. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved d chappy
cont soon !!

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