MG FF || MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA || CHAPTER 12 - PG 39- 02May2015 - Page 17

Part 6 - Nice part .. Geet angry on Maan bcoz she heard him saying roma is his gf .. wow Maan toh tu gaya ab

Part 7 - Awesome part .. Geet is so cute .. she was angry on Maan and when she got to know that he is going to London she got more angry .. Geet crying and Maan consoled her lovingly .. do update soon .. will be waiting

I think this time I am late in commenting..😛

superb update

Lovely update...
Maan Geet r so cute... Geet doesn't allow maan to go to London but he has to go for further studies
Maan manofying Geet...he told her that she could go to London when she old enough
& he has no girlfriend... Gvn her lots of chocolates & saved his sisters from Gert's anger...hahaha
Precap is interesting

Update soon

|| Chapter 8 ||

Couples of days passed in lighting speed. Gudiya still sulked around over maan's leaving. Daadi and amrutha also helped maan in his final packing and shopping. Daadi packed some home made snacks for maan, telling him every once in an hour to eat properly on time, study well aur kisi gori ke taraf tho ankh utakar dekhna bhi matt.

Dev "bhai aap papa q nahi kehatey ki aapko boarding school nahi jaana hain" said miserably walking behind maan who was packing his books.

Maan "dev you know that I can't do it" putting a plaster over the box.

Dev frowned at maan's reply "bhai mujhe maths homework main koun help karega? Aur vicky se koun mujhe bachayega? Aur aur main aapko nahi jaane dhunga" dev blocked him.

Maan rolled his eyes "pehale gudiya.. abbi tum? Hatto mera saamne se"

Dev "per bhai""

Maan "dev mere jaane ke baad tumhey vicky aur aliya ka kayal rakkna hoga. Aur maa papa ka baat ko kabhi thalo matt. Daadu & daadima ko tang nahi karna. Samajmain aaya?"

Dev "bhai" he wiped his tears before maan sees it. But maan knows that dev is sensitive and he can esily get hurt.

Maan pulled him into a bear hug. "aur mujhe roze email karna matt bhoolna"

Dev "Kabhi nahi ..bhai main nahi bhoolunga" rubbing his wet eyes smiling.

Daadi was busy on phone talking with someone. Gudiya saw daadi and smiled blinking her eye lashes couple of times dramatically.

Daadi looked at her hmm madam ko kuch tho chahiye warna itni maasoom shakal

Gudiya "Daadi ..aapko patha hain ..brij bayya London main akely rehthey hain aur kittnnnaaa saaraaa khaam kudh karna padtha hian. Aur aap hain jo bunny ko waha bejrahey ho..agar bunny ko booker aagay tho koun unka kayal rakengey ? "

Daadi never thought from that angle. Gudiya saw daadi lost in her thoughts.

Geet "aap soocho daadi bunny tho booker main tadaptey kaapthey huwe ...bechara bunny ko kitni problem hogi...hain na?"

Daadi lost in thoughts and in trance nodes for a yes, Gudiya is literally doing victory dance watching daadi. Gudiya is almost succeede in brainwashing daadi.

Gudiya "main kehrahi thi ki aapna bunny ko boarding school bejo hi matt. Une hey pey rehaney dijiye na daadi" said with her most cute pleading puppy face.

Daadi again nodes for a yes, but immediately nodes for a no. Hey ladkhi bhi na kisiko bhi apne baath manvalegi..oohhh mujhe isse bachkey rehana parega. Surat se tho bilkul massom si pari jaisi per seerat se tho baapre baap bilkul devil hain..vicky ko bhi side maregi. Maan kaise isse jailtha hain bagwaan hi jaane

Daadi smiled at gudiya understanding her mind game "Gudiya aapkey bunny hain na bahut samajdhaar hain aur apna kayal wo kudh raksakthey hain." daadi left her alone there when she got a call.

Gudiya "hey daadi bhi na bahut smart hain bilkul bunny ke tarha...abb main ka karu"

Gudiya walked into dev and vicky's bedroom ploting her next strategy - mission abort - bunny chale London.

Pari, bani , dev, karan, aliya, dev and vicky everyone watching a movie with great concentration. Gudiya made herself comfortable between dev and karan keeping her head on karan's lap and legs on dev's lap on couch. They were watching DDLJ movie where Raj (shaharuk khan) goes to India to stop Simran's (Kajol) marriage. Gudiya who was watching movie, suddenly she sat up straight remembering something. Her sudden movement accidently hit karan on his chin and dev shoved his fist in his mouth trying not to screame. Unknowingly gudiya kicked dev where she shouldn't have.

Dev groaned in pain "gudiya..agli bar please warning dedena. Aise surprises mujper bahut baari padegi.." Karan "Gudiyaaa " But gudiya is nowhere near to be found to hear or look at them.

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Maan & raj both helping yash in study to arrenge the books in shelf by alphabetical order.

Raj made a boring face muttering "isse accha tho main woh boring movie hi dekhletha sabb ke saat. kaha aakey pasgaya main."

Maan heard him and wacked on his head glaring. That made raj to shut up.

Yash smiled "maan ..raj ..after arranging these books you both can leave. " saying this yash left them alone there to finish up their task.

Raj sighed and jumped on near couch. He was quite for a minute lost in thinking. Maan looked at him "kya soachraha hain" asked him keeping the books in shelf.

Raj frowned and leaned forward on the couch "maan you are leaving to London in three days. I never thought I would ever say this to you"

Maan " hmmm?"

Raj stoop up and walked at maan slowly like he is walking on ramp(catwalk) ..playing with his fingers twisting like a girl "Maan babu mujhe chotkar matt javooo ..main tumhare bina nahi jeesaktha."

Maan's eyes poped out and surprised what the hell is wrong with him?

Raj dind't stop there, he held maan's shoulder and pulled him closer keeping head on his shoulder "Maaan main teri bacche ki baap bannewala hoon.. tum aise mujhe chotekar matt javoo ...main tere bina marjunga" he sniffeld and wiped his non existant tears.

Maan's jaws dropped opened hearing raj. "Kya?" they heard a thud noise at the door. Ramau kaka was looking at them mouth wide open and the try he brought snacks and juice for them on floor now. Maan and raj were still had their hands on each other shoulder. Both looked at each other and pushed each other back saying.

Maan "Nooo"

Raj "ewww no way"

Ramau kaka was watching them mutely with an odd expression on his face.

Maan and raj both "kaka aisa kuch nahi hain" raj "wo hmmm hum drama ka scene practice karrahey the" defended himself. Maan was emarassed at the situation. He glared at raj promising him silently that he will kill him for this later.

Ramu kaka didn't say anything. He just looked at them suspiciously and bent to collect the soiled try and broken glasses. Kaka left them alone scrathing his head and looking back again and again.

Maan smacked on raj's head "Sudharjavo warna ek din isse drame ki chakkar main teri such much main band bajjayegi"

Raj "ouch..main tho mazaak karraha tha. Tum hamesha seriously q rehtha hain...thoda masti vasti bhi karlo.. jab tak tum yaha ho" raj's face became serious all of a sudden.

Raj "But yaar I will miss you.." maan looked at best friend raj's gloomy face. He never seen him like this even in worstest of situations. He was the one who always takes everything sportively.

Raj's eyes became moist but he wiped his eyes before maan sees them. He tried to smile and lighten up the mood "accha hain tum jaarehy ho...warna kohi bhi ladkhi mujhe ya karan ko mudkey dekhebhi nahi jab tum hamare saat rehthey ho tho..." maan was silent, he knew raj was not serious.

Maan "Raj ..I will miss you too yaar" maan hugged him feeling emotional and raj too hugged him back. But a loud thud sound, someone falling down made them to jump apart and turned to the source of noise. There lies ramu kaka was on floor unconscious he came back with another set of juice glasses for them but seeing them hugging each other shocke kaka.

Maan and raj rushed to unconscious ramu kaka. Maan bent down trying to wake him up. But raj understood why kaka fainted and he started to laugh like a lunatic. Maan looked at him with glare indicating him to stop laughing.

Maan "shut up raj...har waqt mazzak...get me a glass of water"

Raj was still laughing "you do know why kaka has fainted" raj brought glass of water from study table.

Maan "shut up raj " he sprinkelled water on kaka's face. Ramu kaka gained his conscious and sat up straight away looking at both with wide eyes. Maan "kaka aap teektho ho? Heylijiye paani peelijiyega.." maan made him drink water and helped him to stand up.

Kaka looked at both intently hoping what he is thinking its not true... maan baba aise.. nahi nahi asie nahi hosaktha...

Maan & raj both helped him with the tray picking up the scatterd glass piecies into the tray. Kaka didn't let them touch it and he will send someone to get it cleaned.

Raj was still laughing looking at maan but maan just ingored him while busy at arranging the last set of books into the shelves.

Raj got bored watching his boring task "maan ..Chalo will go watch Bruce lee movie with karan"

Maan "you go I will come in 10 minutes ...I have few more books to arrange" Raj left him there and ran to dev and vicky's bedroom where all kids are gathered around watching movie.

On the way gudiya bumped into raj shriking "Ahhh gudiya dekhkey nahi chalsakthi ka?" raj stopped her from hitting floor.

Gudiya asked him panting "rajbayya bunny ko dekha...wo apne room main nahi hain.."

Raj "he is in study..Arrenging books..." he said in hurry walking away and shouting "use tang matt karo warna wo aaj hi baagjayega"

Gudiya ran to study not wasting a single second ignoring raj's taunt. She must hurry before she forgets what she wants to do with maan. Maan was busy at reading a book which caught his interest while arranging it. He turned around hearing gudiya's heavy footsteps running into him.

Gudiya hugged him suddenly hiding her face in his stomach. She never hugged him like this before without a warning maan took a step back due the force of her hug.

Gudiya mumbled into his stomach. Maan pulled her head up "what?"

Gudiya said looking up at his face"mujhe shaadi karni hain"

Maan's eyes widened and he asked again just to make sure "Kya kaha tumney"

Gudiya takes out a ring from her short's pocket; it is a plastic toy ring usually comes with Barbie doll set; a fake Solitaire is sparkling on top.

Gudiya "mujhe shaadhi karni hain wo bhi abhi" tugs his hand dragging him out.

Maan was amused "gudiya tumhey pata bhi hain ..shaadi kya hoti hain aur kaise hoti hain?"

Gudiya "mujhe sabb pata hain.. DK(dev khurana) ne mujhe bataya hain shaadi kaisi hotui...abb chalo na..."

Maan cursed dev knowing him well what he might have told her and how gudiya understood it. Maan stops her "gudiya roko...per tum kiske saat shaadi karna hain"

Gudiya got irritated due to maan's unnecessary questions "mujhe rahul ke saat shaadi karni hain..abb chalo na bunny"

Maan asked immediately angrily "Rahul koun?"

Gudiya rolls her eyes "Anjali ka rahul"

Maan scratched his head wondering what she is trying to say "Abb hey anjali koun?

Gudiya "kuch kuch hota hain wala anjali aur rahul" says innocently with a pout.

Maan laughs at her cute antics and squeezes her round cheeks lightly. "Nautanki "

Gudiya "chalo na bunny .. hum shaadi karte hain"

Maan's eyes pops out "hum? You mean me and you?"

Gudiya comes close to him twisting her plastic ring in her hand "haa mujhe tumse shaadi karni hain" waahh meri gundi.. tumhi aise propose karsakti hain

Maan takes her innocent face in his palms and looks at her doey eyes. He wants to understand what she is thinking and why she wants to get married even though she doesn't have a slightest idea of marriage or husband-wife concepts. He himself is in dilemma about his changing feelings towards gudiya and not fully aware of the deeper meaning of marriage and relationships.

Maan "Accha hey batavo tum mujhse shaadi q karna chahathi ho"

Gudiya frowns at his question "q ki mujhe bhi london jaana hain...apne bunny ke saat"

Maan rolls his eyes "per shaadhi karne ki jaroorat ka hain.."

Gudiya starts to cry "you are going London leaving me here and mamma papa daadu daadi wouldn't let me go with you if I don't marry you. That's what they showed in that movie..." gudiya lost somewhere remembering the movie.

"And how will I get my chocolates and teddies if you go to London faaarr away from me? Aur pata hain pari di kehrahi the ki jab aap London javoge tho mujhe bhool javoge...aur aur aapse mera peecha chutega.. pata nahi aur kya kya bolrahi thi "

Maan curses pari and dev for implanting unnecessary doubts and crazy ideas into her innocent brain.

Maan wipes her tears with his hanky "per shaadi aise nahi hotain gudiya.. maa paa daadu daadi aunty uncle sabb ko batana parega na...aur tum abhi bhi bacchi ho shaadi keliye..aur mujhe bhi bahut saara panda hain...aur"

Gudiya didn't let him finish yanking his hands off from her face angrily "you don't want to take me with you ..thats why you are not marring me..I hate you...javo main mujhe baat nahi karni " she snaps at maan turning to run but maan holds her waist from back before she takes off.

Maan picks her up placing her on high study table "aisa nahi hain gudiya...samjneki koshish karo baccha"

Gudiya says angrily "aisa hi hain...I hate you ...main katti hoon bunny se...mujse shaadi matt karna aur London ko bhi matt lekar jana...chaddo wo rahul accha hain mereliye"

Maan teases her "Anjali ka rahul?" but gudiya have a surprise for him.

Gudiya was super angry on bunny for not agreeing to marry her "Nahi mera rahul..rahul Sharma...wo bhi London main hain..I will marry him and he will take me to London"

Maan gets angry hearing her say mera rahul ..it should be mera bunny mera maan ..Not some aire gaire's name on her lips. He doesn't want to know who that ullu da patta rahul Sharma is... He moves back from her making space between them. "tho javo...jakar karlo usise shaadi..." maan shouts at her for the first time. He was unable to explain his storming feelings inside him and she wouldn't understand it either.

Gudiya's eyes fills up hearing her bunny shouting at her "Katti...you shouted at me...mujhe baat nahi karni..." She tries to get down from the high table but it is too high she can't get down without his help.

Gudiya shouts at him "neeche uttaro mujhe.." extending her small chubby arms towards him, tears flows nonstop.

Maan felt bad for shouting at her, he shouldn't have gotten angry knowing her well. She is still a kid and half of the time she doesn't have a slightest clue how it affects him her innocent words all the time. He closed his eyes feeling helpless. He remember his maa's words about being understanding, being patience with gudiya.

Gudiya jumps off the table when her bunny didn't help her to get down hurting her legs. She sits on the floor holding her ankle "ahhh meri tang..."

Maan rushes to pick her up, and takes her to his room. He makes her sit on the bed and goes to bring the balm to apply on her sprained ankle.

Gudiya couldn't stop crying coz one, her bunny is leaving, two, he don't want to marry her. Three, her tang is paining too much. And four her nose is running, she needs to blow before it floods out.

Maan applies balm on her ankle slowly and gives her his hanky to blow up her nose. As usual she blew her nose and hands back the hanky to him. Both were silent waiting for each other to talk first. Maan gives her a chocolate as a sorry for shouting at her. Gudiay accepts it but didn't smile. Maan's eyes caught the something sparkling in her hand.

Maan "hey kya hain gudiya" pointing at a ring in her hand

Gudiya looks at a ring in her hand and at him at once "bunny hey mujhe pehanado " gives him a ring.

Maan didn't question her future worrying about her crying. He does exactly what she asked him. He puts the ring on her small ring finger.

Gudiya grins at maan looking at her ring on finger. Then remembers she needs to put a ring on bunny's finger too. She takes out another ring from her front pocket; it was exactly alike her ring but no Solitaire in it, just plain white band.

Gudiya "bunny apna haat do mujhe"

Maan gives her his left hand . but gudiya asks him to give right hand.

Gudiya struggles to put ring on his middle finger but it's too tight for him

Maan "gudiya hey ladkiyon ki ring hain..main ine nahi pehan sakta.."

Gudiya "chup" give him a glare to shut up.

After trying numerous times she puts in on his pinky finger and sighs happily. Maan looks at her with confusion and then at his ring on pinky finger.

Then gudiya kneels on bed to reach his face. Maan watches her this weird behaviour, jaroor iski kohi prank hogi.. he leans away from her back on the bed trying to keep as much as distance from her.

Gudiya leans on him slowly puckering her lips for a kiss with her eyes closed. She doesn't have a idea what she is doing bas as per the movie she saw on tv that day and also dev said they need to kiss each other after exchanging rings then only it is considered the marriage is complete. Uff this is so simple...but kiss kaha dena hain

maan "gu-gu-gudiya tu-tu-tum kya karrahi ho" asked her gudiya was almost lying on him and maan was on his back on bed.

Gudiya "shhh disturb matt karo..i need to concentrate on kissing you ..."

Maan eyes widens in surprise "ki-ki-ki-kiss" maan wraps her small waist holding her in place..Not to move her further. he is sensing some weirdness within him due to her nearness. He started to sweat feeling warm and fuzzy. Gudiya was oblivious to his uncomfortable; she wiggled to get free from his hold.

Gudiya "bunny chodo mujhe ..I want to kiss you...warna hey shaadi adhoori rehjaeygi"

Maan froze hearing her say shaadi somthing "shaadi...adhoori..kya" gudiya used that chance to kiss him on his lip with loud smooch sound. It was a sweet innocent peck, her wet rosey lips felt so soft and delicate on him but maan felt millions of neurons rushed through his brain giving him a jolt and his heart pumped blood to all his body parts making him warm and red all over. He wanted to hug her but he shouldn't, he wanted to kiss her, but he couldn't; he want her to kiss him again and again, but he mustn't think like that, not yet. He was blown away by just a simple peck on his lips. He started at her wondering what this special feeling is. Some parts of his body felt the tingling sensation making him breath harder. Gudiya was unknown to all these she just stared at his wide surprised eyes with her big eyes, slowly her smile widened.

Gudiya sits on his stomach placing her both hands on his chest "hamari shaadi hogai..meri bunny se shaadi hogai...now I can go london with you...no one will stop me from going with you...yay...main sabb ko batakey aathi hoon...aur mujhe kittna saara packing karna hain..." she gets up over him standing beside his bed. Maan was still lost in new sensation trying to understand his body reactions to that kiss.

Gudiya ran to door but came back to him and gave him a kiss on his left cheek "I don't hate you and katti cancel..." she ran out grinning jumping with happiness. She is married to her bunny, now she can proudly say she is married and she can stay with her bunny forever. Oh how she will demand lots of chocolate and oh Disney land, she & bunny will live in that princess castle which see saw on photos, the one her brijbayya sent them. And most importantly Bunny will be always with her.

Maan watched her smiling jumping over the moon "ek dum jalli hain..kya kari main iska" he dragged the pillow under his head and hugged it tightly closing his eyes grinning, savouring yet another experience of new feelings invoked by his gudiya. He was totally ignored about shaadi, ring and kiss. Kiss? KISS? RING? SHAADHI? What shaadhi? Maan sat straight recalling gudiya's words and her telling everyone about their jhoota shaadhi and daadi..DAADI..!! "shit...gudiya ...you will get me killed by daadi today.." he didn't waste a second there and ran out hoping to stop gudiya before she blurts out everything.

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|| Author's Note ||

Hello Guys,

Looks like no one is waiting for the update hmm? Anyways I read all your comments and replied back. I am honestly glad and happy to read your lovely-beautiful comments. I read it repeatedly and feel touched for that I thank each one of you who liked and commented. I have a single update today coz I was so sad hearing the news about GHSP forum locking down but later I came to know it was a nasty april fool prank played by IF moderators. I will try to give one more update in middle of the week but no promises, be it a surprise.

Speaking of surprise, I promised a surprise in my previous updates. So here it is, A MG One Shot " SHE WOLF". hope few of you already read it but those who have not read take a look at it and let me know how is it? No single comments please. Be liberal at words yaar, don't be kanjoos makki choos.

I know I am not a very grippy writer and I am trying to make my story as much as interesting and entertaining. You may have read the similar concept but I promise my story is entirely unique. Ingore the mistakes and please press like button with a looonnnggg comment. Have a great week ahead to all.

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Jhaanvi

Next:

1. Gudiya angry

2. Bunny Bumps to Bella

3. And Lots of Leap

Hai me first tepee 😃🥳. Wonderful update.geet ka dimag kya chalthe hai. First went to dadi almost worked but got dadi sense last min n plane failed . Raj is hellorius n Ramu kaka nearly got heart attack. Dev n Maan seen adorable. Maaneet moments r awesome. Geet Maan se shadi Karle our kiss be. Now want to see how Maan will stop his gundi to spill their lil secret. Busy so less comment .

Originally posted by: susm

Hai me first tepee 😃🥳. Wonderful update.geet ka dimag kya chalthe hai. First went to dadi almost worked but got dadi sense last min n plane failed . Raj is hellorius n Ramu kaka nearly got heart attack. Dev n Maan seen adorable. Maaneet moments r awesome. Geet Maan se shadi Karle our kiss be. Now want to see how Maan will stop his gundi to spill their lil secret. Busy so less comment .

Amazing dear.so maan will go soon to London n doing all pecking. N here gudiya is trying to manipulate dadi'd mind so she can stop her bunny to go. But dadi understood her intentions so she ignored her words. Omg maan and Raj's part was hilarious. RamuRamu kaka fainted after.seeing their so called romance. Gudiya's one more try to go with maan to London. She asked maan to marry her so she can also accompany him. By doing lot of drama finally in her style by exchanging.rings they get.married N not to forget that kiss. Although it was just gudiya's planning to go with her but somewhere all this printed in maan's heart. I am wondering how would maan stop geet saying all that.marriage stuff. Waiting for next dear