True Love Never Dies Collab SS TR_MN_KR (Hiral) & Pd786 (Praneeta) - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Interesting concept
CS is lovely
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Its seems very interesting
Different n exchange both couples
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Interesting :)

Continue soon :)
Thanx for the PM :)


thanks
will probably update today
you're most welcome
stay tuned
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: pinal_TaaRey

Interesting concept
CS is lovely
Continue soon


thanks a lot
i m glad you liked my idea
will probably update today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: anum_6

Its seems very interesting
Different n exchange both couples
Continue soon


thanks
i m glad you liked my concept of exchanging couples
will probably update today
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Today iam waiting for your update parneeta uff kithna bada naam hain tera nick name kya hain
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: R.sailaja

Today iam waiting for your update parneeta uff kithna bada naam hain tera nick name kya hain


haan haan till night i'll update
mujhe likhna hai, abhi vahi likh rahi hu
kuch bhi bula its ok
maybe pranee or pari are the common ones
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Guys I am really happy with the response we have got
thanks a lot people.
Note : The person i.e. Hiral or me who will write the update, will comment on your replies.
so this time also I will comment.
Next chapter will be written by Hiral.
Here you go with chapter 1...

CHAPTER 1

It was Monday morning. A girl was sleeping in her bed dreaming about her prince charming. It was weird she could she him riding on a horse but could never see his face. This was the nightmare which was haunting her since her childhood. She always tried to believe that her prince charming was none other than her boyfriend but she failed miserably. Her mind would have a tussle with her heart about this and always her heart won. Her heart could never accept her boyfriend as her soul mate, her prince charming. She was dreaming when she heard a voice...

Voice : Taani, Get up sweetie.

Taani : Randhir, please naa baby. Let me sleep for 5 more minutes. Please...

Randhir : We are getting late for college. You know right, first lecture is going to taken by Vardhan sir and he hates us when we are late.

Taani (wakes up with a jolt) : Shit how could I forget this is my favourite lecture. What's the time?

Randhir : Its already 7:30 am and the lecture starts at 8:00 am.

Taani : Give me 15 minutes. I'll get ready and we will leave. Thanks for waking me Rony.

Randhir : Hurry up and welcome Pooh.

At the same time...

A guy was sleeping in his bed dreaming about his princess. It was weird he could see her playing veena but could never see her face. This was the nightmare which was haunting him since his childhood. He always tried to believe that his princess was none other than his girlfriend but he failed miserably. His mind would have a tussle with his heart about this and always his heart won. His heart could never accept his girlfriend as his soul mate. He was dreaming when he heard a voice...

Voice : Rey, Get up.

Rey : Sanyu, Let me sleep for 2 minutes more.

Sanyukta : Okay fine. You keep on sleeping and I'll go to college to meet VP sir and tell him that our GS is planning to vacant his position and replace it with the AGS.

Rey : Sanyu please naa.

Sanyukta : Ohh God Rey, how can you forget that VP sir had called both of us to his office and meet him about something important.

Rey (jerks out from the bed) : Shit, how can I forget? Sanyu you should have woke me up earlier. What's the time?

Sanyukta : It already 7:30 am and we have to reach at 8:00 am.

Rey : I'll get ready.

Sanyukta : Okay great. I'll serve your breakfast.

Rey : Why? Where is Ramu kaka?

Sanyukta : He is gone with aunty to the market. Now hurry up, we are running late.

Rey : I'll be ready in 10 minutes.

Both the pairs get ready and leave for their respective colleges.

At FITE...

Randhir and Taani reached the campus at 7:50am.

Taani : Thank God, 10 minutes are remaining.

Randhir : Thank me first . If I wouldn't have rushed the bike naa then we would surely be late.

Taani : Yeah my dear sweet Rony. That's the reason I love you naa.

Randhir : Yeah right Pooh, you love me just because I help you reach here on time.

Taani : Rony, I didn't mean that.

Randhir : I can see how much you care for my feelings, Pooh. I'm hurt.

Taani had seen him smirking.

Taani : Fine Rony. You also leave me and go.

Randhir : Pooh, I'm sorry.

When their sweet cute fight was going on, there group of friends had arrived there. They were standing there waiting for them to finish.

Jiggy : Bhai, if you guys are done with, can we go to class?

Randhir : How many times have I told you to be away from me and don't ever try to form any relation with me. Got it?

Jiggy : Yeah right, you are sweet only with Taani, the rest of us are dead right? We try to become your friends and you always insult us.

Taani : Guys, stop it. We all are friends and Randhir, he was just kidding. You didn't have to take him so seriously. Lets go to the classroom. Vardhan sir may arrive anytime.

At St. Louis...

Sanyukta : Luckily we reached at 7:50 am.

Rey : See sweetie heart, you were saying we will be late but we are on time.

Sanyukta : By chance.

Rey : You can't doubt my bike riding skills.

Sanyukta : Yeah right.

Sharon : Hey guys!!!

Rey : Hey siren!!!

Sharon : What did you say?

Rey : What?

Sharon : You called me siren. How could you, Rey? How could you?

Sanyukta : Say sorry, Rey.

Rey : Just because my soul has told me, I am sorry Siren.

Sharon + Sanyukta : REY!!!

Rey : Okay okay sweethearts, don't shake the foundation of the college by shouting.

Sanyukta : Chalo lets go to VP sir's cabin.

At FITE...

Vardhan sir entered the classroom and all the students were silent as if there was a curfew.

Prof. Vardhan : Okay guys, I have a news for you all. We being in top 3 colleges have got an invite from "THE ADVENTURES" for a trip of 4 days and 3 nights to Jaipur. We would be residing in a palace "RAJ PALACE". We will be visiting different sites for educational visits. We will be leaving tomorrow morning at 6:00 am.

All the students were excited and started to howl loud in happiness.

Prof. Vardhan : Okay guys, quiet now. Randhir and Taani you both being the student representatives will help the management during the trip.

Randhir + Taani : Okay sir.

Taani felt weird when she heard the name of the palace "RAJ PALACE". She just shrugged it off.

Everyone was excited and ready to party hard after completing so many tough tasks and assignments given by Vardhan sir.

At St. Louis...

Rey and Sanyukta entered in VP sir's cabin.

VP sir : Okay guys, I have a news for you both. We being in top 3 colleges have got an invite from "THE ADVENTURES" for a trip of 4 days and 3 nights to Jaipur. We would be residing in a palace "RAJ PALACE". We will be visiting different sites for educational visits. We will be leaving tomorrow morning at 6:00 am.

Both of them were mentally dancing.

VP sir : Guys, since you are the GS and AGS, you will help the management during the trip.

Rey + Sanyukta : Sure sir.

Rey felt weird when he heard the name of the palace "RAJ PALACE". He just shrugged it off.

Sanyukta : Okay Rey, I'll go and type the notice and you put it up on the notice board.

Rey : Yeah sure. Till then I'll contact them for some information about the trip.

Sanyukta : Fine.

As soon as the notice was put up, everyone was excited and started planning the trip with their groups.

Finally, it was morning. Many were desperately waiting for this morning. It was 5:30 am and most of the students had arrived.

At FITE...

Randhir : Taani, make sure everyone is here.

Taani : Yeah sure Randhir. You check whether all the arrangements are perfect.

Randhir : Sure.

At St. Louis...

Rey : Sanyu, check if all the arrangement are done perfectly.

Sanyukta : Yes GS sir. You check the attendance.

Rey : Yes boss.

Finally it was 6:00 am. All boarded the bus. St. Louis students were in bus no. 1 and FITE students were in bus no. 2. The time to depart for the journey had come.

Lets see what this journey brings on...


Precap : Bus journey filled with fun and much more.

Edited by pd786 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
RES
UNRES
Yay me first🥳
Sweetie U write awesome
Awesome chapter👏👏
Loved it
Taani ka dream haayee
Rey calling Sharon Siren🤣
Wont tell u to update soon as it is my duty now😆😆
Luv u
Hiral
Edited by TR_MN_KR - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice update taani dream was filmy but very nice she is so sweet taani and randhir their bond was like best friends not lovers its according to rey and sanyu rey be dreaming good ithink taarey are dreaming for eachother so dono couples same trip pe iam eagrly waiting for their meet so well written frist chapter hiral&pari do continue soon and pm me
Edited by R.sailaja - 10 years ago

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