~Pyar mein twist~ (Link to thread two added)

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Shivika Agarwal

@shivika838

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Posted: 11 years ago

#441

I loved it😃

ohho rd scared sanyukta!!

diary??

Eagerly waiting😛

lovely work👏

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Shivangi garg

@gargpurvi85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#442

Hey.. Not fair.. 😭

Ittu sa update?? 😕

Hope that next update is longer..

Do update next part soon.. m excited..

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sumana.shesha

@sumana.shesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Awesome update :)

Loved it :)

Update soon :)

Thanx for the PM :)

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#444

~Chapter 14~

After that trench wala nd elevator wala incident,randhir was just willing to know that what sanyukta feels for him...so he started reading her dairy's photocopy ... He was a bit hesitant,but he kept whole hesitation aside and start reading

1st page
Hello my new friend,i am so happy k mein dairy likhna start kar rhi hoon aur wo bhi sirf kanu ki vajah se because ye usne mujhe gift ki h. mein papa k sath rehti hoon par kabhi mujhe papa ne ye realise nahi hone diya k wo ek single parent h.. wo mera bohat dhyan rakhte h ...and baki meri kanu h na mere pas meri dadi maa khin ki.. she is mah best friend..luv u soo much kannu

2nd page
Today i am soo soo happy k kanu ko karan milgya..uska bf jise wo bohat
pyar krti h... bt mere se kam.. because mein sbse zada important hoon uske liye baki sab bad mein.. karan is a nice guy... bas mujhe bhi mera prince charmin jldi se jldi mil jaye

3rd page
yar ye karan aise ajeeb way mein kyun behave karta hai mere sath... kanu k sath jab bhi khin jata h to mujhe bhi bulata h.. mere sath pics click krwata h.. i dnt like him at all

4th page
Ye karan kaisa cheap insan hai isne kanu ko use kiya mere close ane k liye... isne kanu ka fake mms banwaya but mein bhi sabak sikhayungi ise

5th page
today i am going on a mission.. karan ko sabak sikhane ka mission.. mein usse wo mms delete krwa dungi.. mujhe kanu k liye use sabak sikhana hi hoga

6th page
god.. why u did this,jo insan meri lyf mein ata hai wo door q chla jata h mujse.. pehle mom aur ab kanu.. ab bas mere koi friends nahi hai.. bas ab mujhe boys aur relationships se door rhna h..aj k bad kbhi dairy
bhinhi likhungi..

There were 3-4 blank pages and after that,there were some pages on which she had written her feelings

aaj pure 2 years k bad dairy likh rhi hoon... pta nhi kyun aj bohat man kar raha tha k kisi se batein share kroon... aaj randhir ne mujhe propose kiya and usko reject krne k bad bhi he cared for me..(a smile cameon randhir's face) aj jb usne mujhse baat ki to lga k koi apna h mere sath.. jb usne mujhe hug kia to bs mera man kh rha tha k time yhin p ruk jaye ...he is a nice guy...( he was blushing now) pta nhi kyun mujhe ajeeb sa lag raha h why i am liking randhir's attention... why i talks to him aur wo bhi itna zada.. i am confused about my feelings... khin ye love to nhi... no no please bhagwan ji ye kya horha h mujhe... mujhe mere drems par apni study par focus karna hai

Randhir was reading sanyukta's dairy... from which he can easily understand that sanyukta is confused about her feelings.. and after that wat he read.. he was really shocked... he was looking rubbing his eyes and reading it again & again the next page...

aaj jb mein aur randhir trench mein fase huye the to kuch aisa hua jisse i am sure about my feelings... randhir ka wo innocent face bar bar meriankhon ka aage
araha h... He was looking so damn cute, sleeping while keeping his head on my lap ...at that time,i felt stange sensations in my stomach ... I wanted to kiss his cheeks and move my fingers in his hair... i was just lost in him par use kya jaldi thi uthne ki... thodi der aur nahi so skta tha kya... jb usne mujhe lift kia to ek ajeeb sa curent pas outhua body mein se... aur jab mein us par giri to bas aise lag raha tha k waqt yahin ruk jaye... ab mujhe samajh agya h k i am in luv with him now i cant live without him

randhir was blushing after reading all this..

Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi,
Kismat Pe Aaye Naa Yakeen
Utar Aayi Jeet Mein,
Jaise Chaand Utar Ta Hai Kabhi
Haule Haule Dheere Se
Gun Guni Dhoop Ki Tarah Se Tarango Mein Tum
Chhoo Ke Mujhe Guzari
Ho Yuh Dekhu Tumhe Ya Main Sunoo, Tum Ho Sukoon Tum HoJunoon...,
Kyun Pehre Raat Aayi Tum
Kaise Mujhe Tum Mil Gayi, Hooo..,
Kismat PeAaye Naa Yakeen, Hooo...
Main To Yeh Sochta Tha,
Ke Aaj Kal Kuch Bataane Ko Fursat Nahi
Phir Bhi Tumhe Banaake Woh
Meri Nazar Main Chadh Gaya,
Ruit Pe Duaa..Aur Ban Gaya

but now randhir was thinking that what happened to sanyukta in elevator..why sje didnt said all this there.. he turned the nxt page...

I love him alot.. and wo bhi mujhse bohat bohat pyar karta h... i cant live without him... ye mein kya soch rhi hoon.. meri lyf mein jo bhi ata h wo dunia se door chla jata h.. aur randhir mein tumhein nhi khona chahti... so tumhein mere bina jina sikhna hi padega...

R(In mind)-Dont you worry sweet heart hum dono jaldi hi sath honge and its my promise... mujhe kuch to karna pdega.. i want to listen these threewords from u...

He smiled and started thinking that what he have to do to make her say those three magical words which makes anyone feel heavenly 😉

So now,time for comments
Longer comments for long part
waiting for your comments 😉

P.S- See the banner guys,its mentioning two most important characters of story,who will totally turn the story 😊

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 11 years ago

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sonali mishra

@Shivi_forever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#445

Thanks for pm

Awesome update👏

Sanyu also loves randhir😊

Wanna know how randhir will make her confess it

Waiting for it

Edited by katheriene - 11 years ago

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Heavenly_Dreams

@Heavenly_Dreams

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

quite long tamatar !!
sanyu loves rd but scared to tell him ...
karan such a chepo !!!😡
poor kannu !
rd blushing blushing ..hmmm.nice ...
update asap ...
doodh :)

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Nidhivsharms

@Nidhivsharms

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Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Superb update 😛
i m waiting 4 sanyu's confession
but i guess it won't be that easy 4 rd

Edited by Nidhivsharms - 11 years ago

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Anushka

@anudoll

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

I couldn't stop smiling while reading this update
It was so good

Just want sanyu to confess now!

Mujhe kyun lag raha hai Ki koi naya twist aane wala hai

Jo bhi ho
Update soon