MG FF || MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA || CHAPTER 12 - PG 39- 02May2015 - Page 14

Originally posted by: taahir004

Double Treats ...Simply Superb

Maan is certainly not interested in girls and this is something that Raj cannot understand
Roma liking Maan and he told her he already has a girlfriend while his gudiya overhears and misunderstands thinking Roma is Maan's girlfriend so she gets angry on Maan and shouts out she hates him which in fact disturbs him and his mother made him understand that his gudiya is still a child and will someday be matured and understand his feelings but for now he will have to understand .

The pre cap is hilarious

Originally posted by: kkmouli

Well I read everything in a hurry.. Right now I am outside typing from my phone..

I will go home and read it once again..😉

Ahhh thats fine..I guess I failed to give a hint for readers with this update.

Nop absolutely not as it is quite unexpected to not to get that extreme.. 😛😆 So it is quite a surprise in its own way..😉

I try but again ...i am new to this writing fictions. I will learn eventually. 😃

Well I am already writing a story now and planning to start a new one.. But thanks that you thought I could become a writer too..😆

Oh Wow thats cool.. I didn't know that you were a writer tooo...please give me the link I wanna read it though. 😊

Waiting..

😳

|| Chapter 7 ||

Maan looked left and right at hall, bedrooms, teracce searching for gudiya. She is nowhere to be seen or any other kids in mansion. Kaha gai sabb log

Maan passed the guest room wondering where everyone might have gone. He stopped suddenly hearing a whispers and some wrapper crushing sound coming from the guest room. He checks the door, it was unlocked and he pushes inside entering the room.

Bani, pari & aliya all three sat behind the couch and were busy at eating chocolate. They falied to notice maan and continued to talke while eating chocolate.

Pari "Tumhey kahase hey chocolate mili?"

Bani "Jadooo se " giggled at pari licking the melted chocolate from her fingers.

Aliya "Jadooo kaise kaise mujhe dekhavo"

Pari "Jadooo wo kasie?"

Bani " haan main na ek din study drawer main se hey chocolate mili ..aur agle din bhi ek aur chocolate mili...tabbse har roze ek chocolate milta hain mujhe..."

Pari "hmmm per hey jadooo kaise hoga..kahi hey gudiya ne tho nahi rakkha udar? Tujhe pata hain na agar gudiya ko pata chali tho wo hamey iss chocolate ki tarha khaa jayegi."

Bani "don't worry pari di...gudiya ko nahi malooom iss jadooo ki drawer ke bare main aur aap bhi matt bolna use. Aur aliya baby tum bhi nahi bolna"

Aliya nodes for a yes licking her fingers, eyeing at pari and bani's chocolate too.

Maan now learnt that why gudiya said she didn't get any chocolates which he has left for her everyday. He can't get angry on bani, pari or aliya because its not there fault. After all they are still kids. Maan left silently from there closing the door behind him.

Later at night, everyone has taken seat around the dinner table. Abhishek-Maya were back from their trip and joined them talking about their business progress and trip.

Gudiya was sitting between raj and vicky where maan took a seat between dev and karan exactly opposite to gudiya. Maan tried to talk with gudiya but everytime she either gives him a glare or runs away from him.

And then suddenly Harsh asked "Yash Maan ke London jane ki sab intazaam hogai?"

Everyone at the table stopped eating who didn't know about this news. A pin drop silence took over for whole 5 seconds. Specially two people at the table looked at harsh's face and then yash's to and fro. What London..

Yash "haa papaji sab intazaam hogai hain. Next week maine flight ki tickets book kiya hain. Hum aur amrutha maan ke saat jaarahey hain"

Dev "What? bhai London jaarahey hain? per q?" Karan & raj looked at each other confused.

Yash and amrutha looked at each other before answering him "Dev tumhare bhai ko humne London boarding school main admission karwadiya hain. wo waha padne keliye jaarey hain"

Dev almost cried jumping out of the chair "Papa ...maa I also want to go with bhai" moving closer to maan.

Harsh ordered bit sternly "Dev sit down"

Dev immediately sat down fearing his daadu. Its the tone that he better not disobey his daadu's command.

Gudiya's eyes filled up instantly listening to yash. She is angrier than before on maan. Abb London bhi jaaraha hain mujhe chodkey aur mujhe bunny ne bataya bhi nahi. Pehale mere cholocates ko uss chudail to dedi, abb mujhe mana bhi nahi rahey...main double katti..kabhi baat nahi karungi ..kabhi nahi. .

Vicky leaned closer to gudiya and whispered something her ear "yayyy abb maanbayya yaha nahi rahangey tumhey mere hathon bachane keliye. Abb kya hoga teri gudiya.. ha ha ha ha"

Gudiya couldn't sit there anymore hearing vicky's threat. She glared at him and eyed at the hot dal in a bowl on her plate.. she lifted it and silently poured the hot dal over vicky's lap.

Vicky yelped suddenly feeling the hot dal burn on his lap. Daadi "Vicky kya huwa? Why did you scream like that?"

Vicky wouldn't dare to tell what just had happened to him. Coz maan still sitting opposite to him and if gudiya tells them that he just threathened gudiya. Everyone including daadi will make him murgi for whole night.

Amrutha came to vicky seeing his face squeezed in pain and became all red "Vicky..tum aise shakal q banaya hain?"

Vicky "Kuch nahi maa.. galthi se maine apne updar garam dal giradiya" said gritting his teeth.

Amrutha "Kya kartehy rehtehy ho..." and took him washroom to clean and then to apply medicine.

Karan knew exactly what happened with vicky and who did that. He muffeled his laugh leaning into maan wishpering "Good luck to you maan. I hope you stay in one piece until you leave for London"

Abhishek and Maya decided that karan stays here untill he completes his 10^th and later for college he can go to London.

Harsh "Maan have you packed everything? If you want anything just tell your daadi or your maa, they will take you to shopping"

Maan wasn't interested in any shopping or happy with this London boarding school. He doesn't have choice but to obey them. "Ji ..ji daadu.."

Later at night, Maan was pacing in his room waiting for everyone to sleep so that he can go to gudiya's room to talk. She isn't listening or talking with him bas hamesha gussa karti rehati hain. Abb tho aur bhi gussa karegi meri London jane ki kabar sunkar.

That's it he couldn't stay one more second. He walked to the door to go out but suddenly the door banged opened making a loud thud noise. Maan took a step back, there stood gudiya crying, her eyes are bloodshot due to non stop crying, nose color turned deep shade of pink and now its running, her curly hair scatared all over the shoulder.

Maan never seen her like this all these years, in past she always fought with him, hit him, kicked him , shouted at him, screamed at him and even she cried but wo bhi gussese. But never like this. Gudiya looked like as she cried for long and her hiccups said how much is difficult for her to even say anything.

Maan was so worried looking at her"gudiyaaa kya huwa...aur hey kya haal banakey rakkha hain tumney apni"

Gudiya took a couple of steps forward slowly and then ran to him hugging his waist tightly mumbbling something still crying.

Maan didn't know how to react or console her. He was confused and felt helpless and angry at the one who is the reasion for her tears. Gudiya rubbed her cheeks on his chest still crying and mumbling. Maan can't see her crying like this, he felt miserable, struggling to handle the situation but he lost the inner trumoli hugging her back.

Maan let her cry for few mintues standing there. He didn't know how long both were standing like this. He tried to pull out of the hug but gudiya tightened her grip on his waist not letting him move still mumbling sniffling.

Gudiya"Nahi.."

Maan"Gudiya rona band karo" gudiya said something but maan can't hear her properly. Maan expected her to be angry on him, shout at him or punchs. But he didn't expect her to cry like this.

Maan"Gudiya bolo ka huwa" he asked slowly patting her head, setting her nesty hair.

Gudiya "mujhe chocolates *hiccups*nahi chahiye...mujhe *hiccups*gifts bhi nahi *hiccups*chahiye ...tum mujhe *hiccups*chodkey matt javoo *hiccups*..please *hiccups*."

Gudiya "main *hiccups* kabhi tang *hiccups* nahi karungi *hiccups* hamesha *hiccups* kehana manungi *hiccups* kabhi marungi nahi *hiccups* matt javoo *hiccups*."

Maan "shhh ...shhh"

Gudiya pulled back enough to look at his face "bunny *hiccups* matt *hiccups*ja ja javoo" she cried even more. Her small frame shook with her hiccups.

Her whole body is trembling. Maan held her small face in his both hands and wipping tears over an over again.

Maan "shhh rona nahi gudiya..chup hojavo.." he made her sit on the bed but gudiya didn't let him go away. She held his shirt in her small fist tight. Maan took out a tissue box from beside table drawer. He pulled a tissue paper from box. He wiped tears and her red nose with tissue and then made her drink water.

After taking few sips of water, gudiya shakes her head for no to drink more water but without another warning gudiya threw up everything coz of crying nonstop. Gudiya cried even more now looking at the mess she has done. "So-so-sorry bu-bu-bunny"

Maan looked at her scared face. He never seen her scared of him before. He wasn't worried about his shirt which has covered with her vomit or felt repulsive to any of it. He doesn't know how to make stop her crying. "chup ..ek dum chup." Gudiya stopped crying but her hiccups didn't die.

Maan picked her up and took her to his bathroom to wash her up and himself. He let her down at the sink and washed her face, hair and her shirt wherever the vomit has covered.

Maan looked at his shirt in the mirror and removed it throwing into the laundray. Maan stood infront of her only in his pants on. He took a towel from side hook, wetting it from water and to wiped her face.

Maan "gudiya ..tum yahi roko main abhi aaya..." Gudiya held his hand tightly fearing that he will dissapper. Maan held her face in his palms and said "main kahi nahi jaaraha hun gudiya.. tumhari kapde geele hogaya hain...main tumhareliye dusre kapde lene jaraha hun.. hmm ..teeky? bas main u gaya aur u aaya.."

After a minute, maan came back with change of cloths for both. He asked her to wear the shirt which is much bigger to her and walked out closing the door behind him.

Maan changed his cloths in bedroom and waited for gudiya to come out. After two minutes gudiya came out wearing his shirt. She walked slowly towards maan and stood infront of him.

Maan "gudiya tum yahi baito main abhi aaya"

Gudiya immediately held his hand "bunny matt javoo na London" she started to cry again.

Maan kneeled infront of her "yaar gudiya please rona band karo na. Main taqgaya hun tumhey manate manate..Please maanjavoo na"

Gudiya "pehale promise karo tum London nahi javoge"

Maan "per mujhe jaana tho parega na gudiya papa, maa daadu daadima sabb yahi chahate hain."

Gudiya "tho main bhi chaloongi tumare saat" sat on floor crossing her legs.

Maan also sat beside her on the floor " aise kaise chalogi... tum tho abhi bhi baby ho. Waha tumhari kayal koun rakkeyga?"

Gudiya "main baby nahi hun aur mujhe wo sabb nahi pata ...mujhe jaana hain bas. "

Maan "gudiya samajne ki koshish karo na. Jaha main jaaraha hun waha babies nahi jaasakthey. Jab tum badi hojavoge tab tum aasakthi ho"

Gudiya cried " mujhe pata hain tum apni girl firend ko lejarehy ho apne saat London."

Maan silenced her keeping his finger on her lips "chup ..ek dum chup"

Gudiya "dekha mujhe phirse dhantrahey ho tum" pouted at him.

Maan "main dhant nahi raha hun gudiya. Aur meri kohi girl friend nahi hain aur naahi maine kisiko thumari chocolates diya hain."

Gudiya "Sacchi? " Maan smiled at her tapping her nose tip"mucchi"

Maan got up and walked to his study table. Gudiya followed him behind trying to peep behind him. He opned the first drawer and took out a big plastic bag.

Maan turned back "aur hey rahi tumhari chocolates ...jo ek months se due hain. " said giving her the chocolate bag. Maan don't want to tell her about the chocolates he left for her everyday fearing what she might do to pari, bani and aliya knowing that they touched her chocolates..

Gudiya's eyes twinkeled and she jumped up smiling "chocolatesss? meriliye? Thank you ..bunny " she hugged the packet dropping on his bed hugging the chocolate bag.

Maan "ek hi din main katham matt karna." He sat beside her on bed thinking tho gudiya ki gussa meri chocolates na deene ki wajha hain. Main soachraha tha ki hey girl friend wali baath ko lekar mere upper gussa hain per hey tho gudiya hain, main bhi kya kya expect karraha tha.

Maan sighed looking at her lighter mood and now smiling. Gudiya sat up straight on bed "bunny.. mujhe bhook lagi hain"

Maan stands up offering his hand to her "challo"

Gudiya jumped up on bed with puppy face "London?"

Maan rolled his eyes "nahi kitchen"

Gudiya pouted and muttered "dusht bunny"

Maan "hmm? Tumney kuch kaha"

Gudiya " Godhiii " extened her both arms towards him with her most puppy face.

Maan shakes his head turning his back for her to climb on his back "Abb chale" gudiya hugs his neck tightly giggling.

In kitchen

Gudiya sat cross legged on dining table waiting for bunny to get something for her to eat.

Gudiya wishpered loudly "bunny ka karrahey ho...jaldhi aavo..Mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain."

Maan brought her a glass of warm milk and two slice of pinapple cake for both.

Gudiya screamed in exitment looking at the plate "pinappleee cakeee"

Maan closed her mouth "shhh shor matt karoo...sabb ko jagavogi ka"

Gudiya "sorry" said cutely grinning at him showing her front teeths minus one.

Maan brushed her hair playfully "abb chup chaap khaalo aur dhudh peelon. "

Gudiya eyed the cake and maan still not touching it. Maan knew exactly what she wants. He took the plate in his hand to feed her the cake. Gudiya took a spoon from his hand and fed him too. Both fed each other silently and maan made sure she finished her milk.

Gudiya was tired and due to lots of crying she dozed off immediately on dining table. Maan came back from kitchen after palcing the soiled plates in sink and looked at gudiya who was fast asleep over dining table..she looked so cute and calm sleeping like that on table. hey gudiya bhi na mujhse aur kya kya karwayegi.

Maan lifted her sleeping form in his arms and walked towards her bedroom. He placed her on her bed pulling the spread over to cover her up. She was still worried about his leaving and even in sleep she murmered "bunny matt javo" maan placed rabbi-bunny toy beside her. She immediately hugged her rabbi bunny close to her heart. Maan watched her sleeping for a minute before closing the door silently and he left from there thinking about bigger problem waiting for him tomorrow.

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Author's Note:

Hello Everyone

I promised an update yesterday(Sunday Night) but I was fast asleep last night 😳 . So here it is, an update on weekday. I took a half an hour break from work to post this update. hope you all will like it. Please excuse grammar and spelling errors. I was wondering about the number of likes and comments on this story and I am not sure whether to elaborate the story or make it fast phased story so I can finish it off in maximum 5 or 10 chapters. Anyhow let me know your opinions/suggestions.

Have a great week ahead to all.

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Jhaanvi

Next : PRECAPE(Next Sunday)

Her sudden movement accidently hit karan on his chin and dev shoved his fist in his mouth trying not to screame. Unknowingly gudiya kicked dev where she shouldn't have.

Dev groaned in pain "gudiya..agli bar please warning dedena. Aise surprises mujper bahut baari padegi.." Karan "Gudiyaaa " But gudiya is nowhere near to be found to hear or look at them.

Maan & raj both helping yash in study to arrenge the books in shelf by alphabetical order.

Raj made a boring face muttering "isse accha tho main woh boring movie hi dekhletha sabb ke saat. kaha aakey pasgaya main."

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Raj stoop up and walked at maan slowly like he is walking on ramp(catwalk) ..playing with his fingers twisting like a girl "Maan babu mujhe chotkar matt javooo ..main tumhare bina nahi jeesaktha."

Maan's eyes poped out and surprised what the hell is wrong with him?

Raj dind't stop there, he held maan's shoulder and pulled him closer keeping head on his shoulder "Maaan main teri bacche ki baap bannewala hoon.. tum aise mujhe chotekar matt javoo ...main tere bina marjunga" he sniffeld

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