Khaamoshiyaan- A Zaya FF (Chapter 6 on pg 21)Up on 23rd April! - Page 7

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I'm freakin loving it! Awesome !
Pls cont. soon love :)
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Wohooo both the chapters were amazing loved it
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Sorry riya for not commenting earlier
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Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

I'm freakin loving it! Awesome !

Pls cont. soon love :)
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Thank you soo much Ann!!!
Your comment means a lottt!😊
I'm trying to give an update soon but i still haven't completed writing the chapter...

Anyways, thank you very much for the comment!
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Originally posted by: ank_23

Wohooo both the chapters were amazing loved it

Now I m excited for the next chap😳
Please continue soon
And thanks for the pm


Thank you so much... Ankita, right???
I'm trying to give an update...

And welcome for the pm...😊
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Originally posted by: zayalove

Sorry riya for not commenting earlier
I m.really busy with exams preperations
But ur story soundd really really interesting

Pm me
Will definately comment after my exams
Lots of love

Alina


Its okay Alina!!
I can completely understand!
Thanks for ur lovely comment and at least taking time to comment...
Thank you, really...

And yeah, take ur time, its okayy...
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Hello guys...
I m updating the chap 3 in a while...
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Hello Guyss!
I m back with chapter 3...
Hope u like it...


Chapter 3


Zain entered inside with his friends. The hall was very beautifully decorated. Colourful and fragrant flowers hung on the pristine wall... The decorations were so salubrious... Zain just gaped at his surroundings, the chandelier hung from the ceiling flawlessly and it looked just... Exquisite. It was like an enigma for the awe-struck spectators.

"Kya decoration hai yaar!" Zain lauded, patting his friend and the so-called 'bakra' of tonight i.e. Zubair, on his back. "It's just... WOW!"

"Hai naa?" Zubair said, "Arey kaise nahi hota, meri pyaari, favourite saali, Aaliya ne saare decorations kiye hai! We all are also totally mesmerized... Chinta mat kar yaar, hum tere nikaah me Aaliya ko hi bolenge decorations karne ko!"

"Hat be! I ain't gonna marry! Marriage is so boring. I will live my life like this only."

"Zain, this is better said than done. I'm sure, when you will fall in love, even you will be excited to marry the mallika of your dreams."

"Bas, bas masterji. Hume aapka gyaan mat baatiye."

Thus saying, zain brushed it off with a laugh. No, he couldn't go in this area. Because deep down he knew, he knew love is dangerous. Suddenly, all the commotion in the hall came to an abrupt stop. Zain looked around to see all the heads staring in one direction.

"What is it?" he thought, and turned his head in the same way. And...
Lo And Behold!

Our Zain miyaan just kept on ogling. The ethereal beauty, Miss Aaliya Ghulam Haider was descending from the stairs. All except two people were staring at her. Who? Well, they were none other than Rizwaan and Zubair. Zubair, well, was more interested in staring his begum Ayesha and Rizwaan... read on... You will know soon!


After coming out from the initial shock, Zain enquired, "Oye Zubair, yeh kaun hai yaar?"

"Achha yeh... Yehi toh hai... Aaliya Haider. Meri sabse pyaari saali. Kitni cute hai naa?"

"CUTE?" Zain thought. "More like she is HOT and..." Stop it Zain! He realized that he had to stop his wayward thoughts or else he would still be on her... OKAY STOPPP!!!

Thank god that his thoughts were interrupted by Rizwaan. "Zubair dude, who is THAT?" He asked, pointing to another charming beauty with his chin.

"Achha woh! Woh Aayat hai. Sabse mastikhor. Usi ne toh mujhe kitna sataaya kya bataaun!" Zubair sighed. So yeah, Rizwaan was staring Aayat all the while.


Everyone then resumed their chatting and continued their respective tasks after a while except one. Well, this time it is Zain! Yes, he was just not getting enough of the enchantress swaying in front of him. Her docile body, having perfect curves at perfect angles and places, her sweet and attractive voice, her mesmerizing giggles which sounded like tinkling bells to Zain... Until now, his favourite music was Hard Rock, but after hearing to Aaliya's giggles, he knew he had to give it a second thought.

The way she walked, the way she smiled, the way she spoke, the way she made an annoyed face at Aayat God-Knows-Why, everything about her was just... simple, elegant and yes, he hated to admit it, but it was attractive.

Oh God, he definitely had to do something about this.


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"Zain, kahaan khoya hai?" Rizwaan asked, coming from behind and putting an arm around his shoulder.

"Arey yaar... Woh dekh na..." he murmured.

"Kya? Kya bol rahaa hai?" Rizwaan asked again, snapping his fingers infront of Zain's face, briinging him out of his Aaliya land.

"Ku-Kuchh nahi..."

"Zain, there is something wrong with u... Nikaah khatam ho gaya hai. C'mon."

"K-Kya? Nikaah ho gaya?"

"Haan... Kya kar raha tha tu phir itni der se?"

"K-Ku-Kuchh nahi. Achha sunna... tu bahaar mera wait kar. Mujhe zara Zubair se important baat karni hai. Mai thodi der me aaya."

"Okay." Rizwaan shrugged, confused with Zain's behaviour.


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So, kaisa tha?
Achha, bura, bakwass, worth all the chappals...????

Bataao plsss...


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