MG FF || MANGALYAM TANTUNANENA || CHAPTER 12 - PG 39- 02May2015 - Page 12

You are definitely one amazing writer dear..

Don't worry you will make an extraordinary ff..

I wish u all the luck..

Besides GF is nowhere less than a family..

You will make as many friends and family as u can..😃

Yes!! I am waiting to see how the bond between all the kids grow along with their age..

Joint family itself means helping and staying with each other through thick and thin. Joint family doesnt mean just staying under one roof. It is much more..

I will be glad and always ready to help you and give u suggestions whenever u need or whenever I feel like suggesting something good..😃

Eagerly waiting to see the unique and mysterious maneet of your ff..😉

Hahaha.. Well then update soon.. Can't wait to know your surprise.. But after looking at the characters and the faces u have given I felt geet would be paired with someone else other than maan in the beginning.. Now I forgot the name of the person.. Lol.. But then it is ur mistake u have given one huge family..😛😉😆

Same goes with Sameera I thought she would be paired up with some else not maan I mean she won't go behind maan as many of us felt but then again I forgot the name of that person.. I have to go and check once again..😛

You are lucky dear because you became a part of Geet Forum which is nothing less than a family..

Trust me you will get one huge family in the form of some amazing friends ..😃

Edited by kkmouli - 10 years ago

Yes!! I am waiting to see how the bond between all the kids grow along with their age..

Joint family itself means helping and staying with each other through thick and thin. Joint family doesnt mean just staying under one roof. It is much more..

As I have not lived with any family, whatever i write is purely my imagination. so pardon me if any of my scenes sounds cliche. 😆

|| Chapter 5 ||

Its weekend; Maan, Karan and Raj have been studying since three hours continuously without break. All three has been shifted to outhouse until the exams are not over.

Raj was stuck at some algebra problem. He was scratching his head to solve it for last one hour. He looked at maan and karan's head down working on their next problems. "How come you both can solve this and not me?"

Karan "that's because we both pays attention in classes rather than flirting with girls and always talking about cricket alike someone" pointed his pen at raj.

Maan just rolled his eyes and continued to solve the problem.

Raj "That's not true" defended himself. Suddenly he remembered something "Arre yaar maan I forgot to tell you something"

Maan raised his eyebrows questioning him whats that "Hmmm?"

Raj "Roma ne tumhareliye ek letter di thi. I forgot to give it to you" he searched his bag to get the letter out.

Maan "Roma? Wo koun hain?" asked raj in confusion.

Karan started laughing and raj also joined him. Karan "Yaar maan seriously mazaak matt kar. Tum ROMA ko nahi jhaantha? "

Maan "I am serious karan. I really don't know who this roma is."

Both karan & raj stopped laughing raj "Nooo waaayyy"

Karan "You can't be serious." Karan asked him seriously this time. "Are you really that blind? Or ignorant to your sorrundings?"

Maan "Now you two are not making sense at all. Cut the crap and let's study"

Raj "Ahhh maan you are so arrogant you know that. How come you don't know roma...the most famous girl in our class..Not only in class she is the post famous girl in our school too. And she is a maal yaar. Ohhh kya lagthi hain jab wo smile karti hain"

Karan " And she gave you a red flower on valentians day. Don't you remember?"

Maan just shrugged his shoulders indicating that he has no idea who is that. He remembered that day he got 20 some roses of different colours and most of them were red ones given by girls of different sections and grades.

Maan "I am not sure. I got 20some roses. How do you expect me to remember? I never asked them. So no big deal"

Raj "Nooo shit" sittign strainght. "you are kidding right?"

Karan "No he is not"

Raj "where was i?"

Karan "Mister you were flirting with 8^th grade girls."

Karan "And that teena ... wo chinky(Chinese decendents) types.. also gave him a flower that day"

Raj "What?? Usse tho chodhdiya hota...Maan you are one lucky ba--- I mean Boy"

Maan looked at raj irritated "Issmain lucky kya hain"

Karan rolled his eyes "Maan seriously are you that stupid or just taking scope? Look at your self...Every girl at school drools over you even that new maths teacher Ms.Sheela. And you know that computer teacher Mrs.iyer she always gives you an extra attention in class." At 14 maan has put on some muscles on his bones coz of doing regular workout at gym and playing sports.

Maan "that's not my problem." replied with attitude.

Raj "Whatever.. here is the letter. Peecha hai padgai thi wo." gave him the letter.

Karan "Oye oye someone got his first love letter. Abb tho roma banjayegi maan ki girl friend" Teased maan giving hi5 with raj.

Maan sanapped at them "Shut up both of you." Maan tore that letter into small small pieces without reading it.

Karan and Raj both "Ouch..!!"

Raj "That hurts"

Raj steched his arms and legs "arrreee yaaar ...agar wo letter mereliye hothi tho.. baath hi kuch aur hothi..."

Karan "seriously maan you need to losen up a bit. Pick one of the girls and spare others to us."

Maan "I don't want one coz I don't need one. Now will you both stop this nonsense?"

Raj "You mean to say ...you are not interested in a GIRL? Or any other girls?" asked him curiously.

Maan just glared at him not bothering to answer him. Karan looked at raj wondering what he is intent to say.

Raj took one step back "Maan I was wondering...Are you hmmm that? Woo I mean ...do you like guys?"

Karan understood what raj just asked him "Raj... If I were you ...I will run for my life..." and started to laugh loudly. Raj too joined him looking at maan's blank expression.

Couple of seconds later Maan "What?? ... Oh you are so dead...Rajjj I will kill you" and walked at raj.

Raj jumped over the couch and ran out fearing of his life. He knew that maan will make me as a punching bag today.

Couple of weeks later, Last exam day at school

Maan, karan and raj were bidding goody byes to all their friends' exchangeing mail addresses and phone numbers to keep in touch. Maan thought this might be his last meeting with friends and in this school.

One of their classmates came to them "hey buddies whats your plan for holidays?"

Karan became quite hearing about palns for holidays "Hmm nothing much anurag. We haven't thought about it yet" replies karan.

Raj saw few girls waving at him and he excused himself waving back at them grinning "guys I remembered something... will be back in 10 minutes.."

Maan "Raj..5 minutes and we are leaving. Dev, vicky, gudiya, pari and bani are waiting for us. Remember Today is their result day"

Raj "yeah yeah I know. 5 minutes "raj winks at maan and leaves towards the group of giggling girls.

Karan got busy with others talking and maan left alone standing at the corridor watching everyone mutely. Its more than 10 mintues since raj and karan were talking. They are no where to be seen in crowd, so maan thought about picking up his siblings, gudiya and karan's siblings.

Maan saw karan talking with teena, he walked to them. Teena smiled at maan coyly but maan ignored her just like always "Karan I am going to pick them up. You wanna come?"

Karan smiled reluctantly "Yeah sure...Bye teena. You have my number ...call me" he signalled call me sign at her and left with maan.

Maan & karan both walked to primary school building which was next to auditorium. They were about to climb the stairs but then Maan heard someone calling his name and turned over to look at the person. It was a girl came to them running.

The Girl was breathless and huffing "Maan" took a couple of deep breaths before speaking again "Maan main kabse tumhey bularhi hoon. Didn't you hear me?"

Maan have seen her before but he couldn't recall her name or he never paid attention to this girl coz he didn't find it important. "Em I didn't hear you but why were you calling me?"

Karan smiled at the girl knowing exactly who is she "Hi roma..how was your exams?"

Roma "It was fine but not as good as maan and you. He always tops and never let anyone take that place." she gave a menancing look to maan and smiled colyly at him.

Maan was silent hearing their talks. Both stopped talking when maan didn't say anything.

Roma looked staright at maan "wo I wanted to talk with you about the letter and us."

Maan couldn't understand what exactly she wants to talk about and what letter. He has completely forgotten about the letter he tore into pecies two weeks ago without reading it.

Roma looked at karan hesitatingly. Karan took the hint that they need a privacy to talk. "Maan I am going to pick up aliya first. You pick up others," Karan left them alone and walked to first floor.

Maan crossed his arms over his chest standing in full of attitude. "What you wanted to talk about?" looking directly at her.

Roma's face was flushed; she couldn't meet his eyes "Wo you didn't answer to my letter? I was waiting for your reply to my letter since last three weeks."

Maan kept silent still looking at her bent head. He doesn't know what to say to her since he has tore the letter without reading it. His face is unreadable and looked at her blankly.

Roma "Maan Maan what happened?" she asked him lookin at his balnk look.

Maan decided to be honest with her clreaing his throat "Honestly I didn't read the letter. Due to exams I didn't get time to read and I lost it somewhere"

Roma "Oh I see. Wo main" She said bluntly "I really like you maan. And I want to know you better that's what I wrote in that letter" she was shy and blushing by now.

Maan stood there dumbfound whats this girl is talking about. He wasn't interested and he is getting late to pick up his siblings and gudiya from their classes.

"Look rama"

Roma corrected hi "Roma"

Maan "roma.. I am sorry but i am not interested"

Roma felt like someone just slapped her straight. She was so confident that maan will fall for her looks and popularity. Of course she was one of the most beautiful girl in the school. But she was wrong in judging maan singh khurana. Her friends made a bet on maan that he won't fall for her infact Maan never gave a second look to girls at school. At first she took the bet lightly and wrote the letter. But as the time passed, she oberseverd maan at school closely and she started to have feelings for him. Actually she fell for him in real. But maan just broke her heart saying no. Still she has to try.

Roma "but maan whats wrong with me. Am i not beautiful? Am not a girl enough for you?"

Maan's irritation grew more he talked with her. He kept silent coz he don't want to say anything mean to her.

Roma "you have a girl friend?"

Maan immediately said yes coz he knew there is no other way to stop her following him "Yes ..yes I have a girl friend so please. I am sorry rama"

Roma "Roma"

"Sorry roma. I do have a girl friend and I really like her." Maan left a relief breath but it didn't last long when he saw gudiya jumped out of the piller fuming at him. He met her accusing big big dovey eyes shooting dagars at him.

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Author's Note:

Hello Everyone

How are you all? hope you all might be okay. Well I am one day early with update. I am updating two chapters today coz I have some important work tomorrow. If possible I will update one more chapter tomorrow night i.e., Sunday night.

I will be waiting for your comments so don't forget to press like and comment. I had a lot of energy and time put into this updates hope I may get more than a single word or a single sentence comment. I thank each one of you whoever liked and commented. I love reading your super long comments. I read it as many times as i can and it makes me happy. The surprise part is still not ready yet, but I will make it worth waiting. Till then bye guys.

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Jhaanvi

Next: Update (see below)

|| Chapter 6 ||

"Sorry roma. I do have a girl friend and I really like her." Maan left a relief breath but it didn't last long when he saw gudiya jumped out of the piller fuming at him. He met her accusing big big dovey eyes shooting dagars at him.

Few mintues earlier

Geet came out of her class jumping and smiling "
Vicky vicky I am the topper of the class 3. Yayyy"

Vicky "yeha yeha don't forget I am also the second topper and only 2 marks different between us. So jaada udoo matt"

Geet wacked on his head "Bandar..you are just jelous of me"

Vicky "Ow ..badi gundi.. main jelous ? wo bhi tumse? Ja ja zara teri chehara aina main dekho. Badi aahi jelous karwani wali...wewawewa" vicky mocked her wacking back.

Geet "Viccckkkyyy I will tell bunny that you hit me"

Vicky stoped immediately "I didn't hit you. I just touched you like this" he again touched her head softly this time..

Geet "Liar ..I will tell bunny that you called me gundi again"

Vicky is now scared of geet's threat "gudiya ...you heard it wrong..I called you gudiya..sacchi main" held his throat swearing.

Geet "no you did call me gundi"

Vicky "gundi ...i mean gudiya I am sorry. I won't call you GUNDI ever ever again. Please maanbayya ko matt battav warna bayya will make me to write sorry 1000 times again"

Both continued to argue each other and Vicky finally pleading gudiya not to tell bhai while walking towards the corridor where dev, pari and bani were waiting for them.

Pari, Bani and dev were wating for them at the corrider talking about their results..

Dev "pari what about your result"

pari "7^th rank "

Dev "Oh that's better than last time. Keep it up"

Pari "thank you..and yours?"

Dev "I am the topper of 7^th grade"

Pari "Aww I want ice cream for treat"

Dev "bani what about you?"

Bani "I got 10^th rank"

By then gudiya and vicky met them and exchanged their results congradulating each other.

Dev "bhai ko abb takk tho aajana chahiye tha hamey pick karnekeliye. Challo hum neeche wait karte hain"

When they came down, geet saw maan and a girl standing near a piller which is 20ft far away from them. Geet got curious looking at her bunny actually talking with some stranger. Coz maan never talked more than two words with a girl who is not family.

Gudiya " pari didi main abhi aayi. Wo mujhe navya se milna hain" walked away from them. geet tiptoed behind the piller without getting noticed and hid there peeking at them chori chupe listening to their conversation.

Roma "you have a girl friend?"

Maan immediately said yes coz he knew there is no other way to stop her stalking him "Yes ..yes I have a girl friend so please. I am sorry rama"

Roma "Roma"

Maan"Sorry roma. I do have girl friend and I really like her." .

Gudiya coudln't here their whole conversation but only bits, She heard roma-girl-friend-sorry. Gudiya's super active mind connected the bits and assumed that roma is maan's girl friend and maan likes her. That's it she recalled what her friends were talking about girl friends - boy friends are and what they do.(now when I say what they do, you reader's mind straight away goes to where it shouldn't ...Naughty Naughty Readers. But its geet aka gudiya, she is extremely unpredictable)

Maan was shocked to see gudiya there. He wasn't worried about rama or roma anymore coz he have a bigger problem at his hands. He don't know what type of questions going to rain over him . "Gudiya? What are you doing here behind the pillar?"

Geet just ignored maan eyeing roma curiously from top to bottom and shooting dagars at maan with her accusing eyes. Only gudiya have the guts to ignore maan like that or else if someone is in gudiya's place maan would have showed them what happens when they ignore maan.

Roma was first surprised and then looked curiously at the 3 and half feet, fair skinned, cutely annoyed curly haired girl standing with her hands on waist, fuming at them especially at maan.

Maan rolled his eyes at gudiya's ignorance, he asked her irritatedly "Gudiya..maine kuch pooocha tumhey? What are you here? You should be in class right now."

Gudiya "Haa tho? "Replied rudely snapping at him.

Maan knew she is angry now or else gudiya would never talk rudely with him without a reason.

Roma "Who is she maan?"

Maan rubbed his forehead looking at gudiya who was still eyeing rama or roma whatever. I didn't want roma anywhere near to them specialy right now when gudiya is in attacking mode. He knows how wild and physical she can get at sometimes.

Gudiya "I am his gudiya and you?" replied to roma's question flatly.

Roma taken back at her reply; she thought what maan said that he alredy have a girl friend. She observed the girl who is very young maybe 7 or 8 years, too young to be a girl friend. And then realized maybe she is related to maan or maybe she is the sister of maan where other girls talking about and how he is protective of his siblings.

Roma "I am maan's""before she could finsh the line. Gudiya finshed her sentence.

Gudiya "I know you are my bunny's..I mean his girl friend" snapped at her looking at maan accusingly pointing at him.

Roma and maan both said "WHAT?" the look on their faces is worth watching.

Maan took a step forward "Gudiya aisa kuch nahi"" Gudiya didn't let him finish.

Gudiya voice trembled and she is about to cry "aisa hi hain.. that's why you are not giving me gifts and chocolates anymore"

Roma looked at gudiya confused what she is talking? It didn't make any sense to her or to maan. Maan wondered abb gifts aur chocolate kaha se aagai beechmain.

Gudiya started to cry loudly "you always gave me gifts and chocolates every weekend but since one month you are not even talking to me"

Maan wondered and confused how come she didn't get any chocolates. I always made sure to leave her favourite choclote on her study table everyday since our exams started. He may be busy at studies, making preparations for his London trip and couldn't get much time to spend with her or any of his siblings but he always made sure to check on them regularly.

Maan "But I always left chocolate on your desk" replied confusingly.

Gudiya "jooth...jooth jooothhh" screamed at him and wacked him on stomach coz she couldn't reach his face.

Roma looked at gudiya and then at maan, not getting a clue whats going on here. Maan is sure gudiya would never lie and he must find out what happened to the chocolates he left for her table. He will deal with it later now he must console gudiya before she start throwing her jhooti at him.

Gudiya "all along you were giving my gifts and chocolates to your girl friend and nothing for me" She used her school uniform shirt to wipe her running nose still crying.

Maan watched her red rimmed eyes, running nose and flushed face. He took out the hand karcif from his pocket to give gudiya. But gudiya ignored him. He reculantly moved closer to gudiya, lifting her face up holding her chin. He wiped her tears slowly and then squeezed her nose bit hard.

Gudiya's nose hurt and she wacked him again. "ahhh chodo mujhe. Main katti hoon tumse. You are so mean and bad..aur meri naaq dukhrahi hain.." Maan made a sorry face "I am sorry ...Gudiya tum mujhse katti nahi karsakthi. Kasam se maine rama ko kuch nahi diya hain."

Roma "err.. its roma"

Gudiya "I don't want your chocolates or any gifts. I don't like you. You are mean and I hate you.." pushed him back and ran away from there without looking back crying.

Maan "Gudiyaaa..you don't mean it" he totally lost it. He felt like hiting someone or something.

Roma "how rude! That girl arghhh...she don't--"

Maan "Don't you dare say a word against gudiya" warned her menacingly. "Not a word. LEAVE" maan walked in the direction of where gudiya ran without giving roma a second glance..

Roma's jaws dropped open and watched maan leaving. She couldn't comphrehand what has just happened. She just got rejected by the only boy she ever liked. She was confident that no one can reject her. Roma thought she had a fair chance at making maan to leave his whoever that girl friend is by her charm. But now she cursed gudiya for spoling all her plans.

In car

Gudiya sat with dev, in front seat far away from maan trying her best to not to look at him. Everyone eyed her sitting quite which is so unlike her and they know its her don't you dare mess up with me now mood.

Maan watched her from back seat. Raj was seating beside maan asked "abb tumne kya kiya?"

Maan explained everything happened with roma and what gudiya heard and why she is angry. He rubbed his eyes and leaned back on the seat. "She thinks that I gave chocolates and gifts to rama"

Raj "Rama? Oh roma"

Maan "whatever, i just hate that name"

Raj "don't worry, Of all the people She can't stay mad at you for so long."

Maan "Abb main kaise manavo use?"

Raj "Give her a chocolate. Problem solved"

Maan "Its not that easy. You know her very well"

Raj "I know she is stubborn but after papa, she only listens to you"

Maan "yaar you are no help"

Khurana Mansion

Evening Maan walked into gudiya's shared bedroom looking for her. "Gudiyaaa ...Gudiyaa...dekho maine tumhareliye chocolates lekhey aaya hoon" Maan checked everywhere, under the bed, closet, under table, balcony, under the mountain of toys, bathroom but she is nowhere to be found.

Maan thought to ask his maa and ran to his parent's bedroom.

Maan walked straight into their room "Maa.. Maa".

Amrutha was sitting on bed and reading some office files and looked up at maan "Maan.. kya huwa?"

Maan walked to the bed and laid down keeping his head on amrutha's lap. "Maa ...gudiya isn't talking with me"

Amrutha brushed his hair from forehead "Q aisa kya huwa. Wo tho tumse bina baat kiye nahi rehsakthi"

Maan always shared everything with amrutha. He never hid it with his mom, his confusion, his restlessness, what bothers him and what makes him happy. Amrutha always treated him according to his age. Maan is almost 15 and amrutha knew this is the age where most of the teenagers feel their extreme emotions.

Maan kept silent wondering how to explain the situation, his confused feelings and his helplessness.

Amrutha "Maan you know ...you can tell me anything."

Maan "Maa I am not sure about London school."

Amrutha knew that's not what is bothering him. "Maan we have already talked about that like 100 times in this past month and I know that's not what bothering you. You can't fool your maa. Now common speak up. Is it gudiya? You know she is still a baby. You shouldn't take her words to your heart. Wo bahut gussewali hain per wo tumse zaada dher takk naaraz nahi rehsakthi"

Maan "I know maa but I also know this is not the first time she is angry with me or something. But why is it bothering me this time? Wo tho mujhese bhi zaada gussa karti hain" Maan explained what had happened today at school and how mesierable he felt when gudiya said I hate you.

Amrutha smiled at him exactly knowing whats bothering him. Its not about the roma or gudiya's naraazgi. Its about maan and his changed feelings towords gudiya. She is confident that maan will make gudiya talk with him again. He just needs to sort out his confused feelings first.

Amrutha "Maan it's too early to name your feelings but I know it is really something special to you and its making you restless and confused. You need to understand that gudiya is still a child and she can't understand your restlessness or your feelings. You should learn how to handle it for both coz gudiya will always make or say something which may hurt you but you both need to grow up physically and emotionally and I know gudiya will understand you and your feelings someday when she is mature enough. This age is so confusing and sensitive which often leads one to make mistakes. Aap mera samajdhaar bte ho. Mujhe pakka ekin hain aap kabhi aisa kaam nahi karoge jisse kabhi kisi ko chot paunche."

Maan felt light at heart and relived after talking with his maa. Now exactly he knew what that tingling feeling in his heart is whenever he looks at gudiya.

Maan "Thank you maa, I love you" he hugged her inhaling his maa's natural aroma. Amrutha "I love you too baccha "

Maan got up and ran to door but stopped hearing his maa calling him.

Amrutha "Maine pinapple cake banaya hain, Tumhari gudiya ki favourite. Use dedo...phir dekho uska gudda kaise pyaar main badal jaatha hain." Maan grinned at her running down to the kitchen.

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Author's Note:

Here is your two updates for the day. Hope you all will like it. I haven't read the update after typing. If you find any grammar or spelling mistakes please ignore. I am too lazy to read it again or make corrections. eagerly waiting for your responses.

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Jhaanvi

Next: PRECAPE

Vicky leaned closer to gudiya and whispered something her ear "yayyy abb maanbayya yaha nahi rahangey tumhey mere hathon bachane keliye. Abb kya hoga teri gudiya.. ha ha ha ha"

Gudiya couldn't sit there anymore hearing vicky's threat. She glared at him and eyed at the hot dal in a bowl on her plate.. she lifted it and silently poured the hot dal over vicky's lap.

Vicky yelped suddenly feeling the hot dal burn on his lap. Daadi "Vicky kya huwa? Why did you scream like that?"

Vicky wouldn't dare to tell what just had happened to him. Coz maan still sitting opposite to him and if gudiya tells them that he just threathened gudiya. Everyone including daadi will make him murgi for whole night.

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Raj stoop up and walked at maan slowly like he is walking on ramp(catwalk) ..playing with his fingers twisting like a girl "Maan babu mujhe chotkar matt javooo ..main tumhare bina nahi jeesaktha."

Maan's eyes poped out and surprised what the hell is wrong with him?

Raj dind't stop there, he held maan's shoulder and pulled him closer keeping head on his shoulder "Maaan main teri bacche ki baap bannewala hoon.. tum aise mujhe chotekar matt javoo ...main tere bina marjunga" he sniffeld

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