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Posted: 10 years ago


Hi indu


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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update...
waiting for next...
P.S. also liked Geet's dress...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago



Hello Indu dear



waiting...
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Part - 48


Same day Morning... KM...

All had their BF and sat leisurely.. Veer left for his office and Ali took Angel to her school...


The Ladies were discussing about the Roka ceremony of Rohan and Anu...


Dadi is giving them instruction and others were noting down ...


Sometime later only anu and meera were left...


Meera didn't talk to anu directly after the the incident at the dining table the day before.. Anu thought to clarify...


Anu - Mb... I think you are angry with me for telling bhai..

Meera loked at anu but didn't say any thing...

Anu - I just want to let you know about bhai's point of view in geet calling him by his name... and I know bhai would not be happy the way u r treating her in our house... he will surely not like it...

Meera - You could have said to to me directly than raising the topic before all...


Anu - would you have listened... I was not sure.. and I said about me being confused and didn't bring you name...


Anu - Mb... I said this to bhai coz you way of talking to geet is not normal.. I can see .. u r not comfortable with her... and neither happy ..


Meera at once became alert... Is it so obvious.. she thought... She said..


Meera - but don't you think you are favouring an outsider more that your bhabhi...


Anu - I am favouring my Bhabhi only... What would have happened if Geet had told about your words to dadi and bhai... Do you think they will toolerate someone insulting geet... Geet is Gayatri Handa's Grabddaughter and Dadi or Maan bhai will not tolerate a word against her... I dont know whether you know or not.. but Bhai slapped RB... whom he consider a kid till now and his favourite sibling for hurting geet in that prank... and I dont think Bhai or dadi will take it lightly now..


Meera just hummed but didn't say anything..


Anu - Geet is a part of our family now.. and everyone like her very much...She is very good Mb... Saying this anu left from there.. Leaving meera in her own thoughts...making her more jealous...

Same day night... Shimla... Hotel Room.. after Party...


Geet entered the room followed by Maan after the party...


Geet - Party was nice.. I enjoyed talking with different people.. You know Maan.. there were people from all over India... I enjoyed talking to them.. their accent is different and I found it funny but they are warm too ..

Maan just hummed...which geet missed... He is watching geet... she is talking doing her work.. she first kept her clutch on the table.. then moved to the dresser and pulled off her dupatta and threw it on the chair...she then removed her bracelet and watch.. and removed her over coat...She stated to remove her earrings and turned around to see Maan as he is not responding to her talks...


Maan was standing at the door... looking at her with love and admiration... Geet stopped removing her earring and stood in trance... Maan slowly walked to geet and stood opposite to her with minimal distance..

Geet - What happened maan... is there anything on my face...


Maan nodded... Geet checked her face with her hand... but couldn't find anything...


Geet - what is it Maan..


Maan - its on you face...


Geet - What I couldn't fine any thing.. you tell me where it is or you yourself remove it...


Maan - I don't want to remove it...


Geet - What... you don't want to remove it... why.. and what is there on my face... she tried to move and see in the mirror.. but maan held her hand and stopped her from seeing the mirror...


Maan - don't move...


Geet - but Maan let me see.. you said something is there on my face ...


Maan - yes ..


Geet checked her face once again...- Now I seriously doubt ... but I don't feel anyting on my face.. you must be kidding.. you are playing with me ..


Maan - I m telling you the truth Geet..I can see such a deep impression of serene beauty on your face which can not be erased even you try your best to remove it..




Maan moved forwards to kiss her.. Geet dowsnt know how Maan makes her weak with just a few words and with his love filled gaze.. She accpeted his advances and they both transported to another world of their love and passion...



When they broke theor kiss ..Geet shied lowered her eyes... and said ... Maan you are making me feel like a teenager who got her first compliment from the person she likes...

Maan - Even I fell like that geet... When ever I see you I feel like a teenage boy in love... he said in a teasing tone... Geet becake a red apple and hugged him...


Maan hugged her and they stood there for some time... Geet came out of the hug and said... Maan.. I will change and come... and moved a little away from him.. but Maan tightend his hold and said.. How about I help you in undressing...


Geet - what .. No...


But Maan didn't hear her and pulled the strings of her dori looking deeply into her eyes.. geet couldn't move... as Maan had tied her with his eyes...


Their moment was disturbed by the ring og his mobile... Both came out of their eyelock and Geet pushed him and ran to change...


Maan - Why Me always... Sone one will surely disturb.. when I am with geet.. Babaji.. whay only me always...


Maan attended the call.. It was from Veer... Veer filled in the information of office and then Anu's Roka ceremony... They discussed some more time.

Geet came out after changing and Maan went for a change...

Geet sat on the couch flipping a magazine..Maan came after changing and joined geet.. He told her about the discussion with veer ...


Maan - I wish Rb was here too...


Geet - Why? Is he not coming.. asked a surprised Geet..


Maan - Rb is not coming as he is in notice period and he will not given leave in that period...and the ceremony was on week days too.. so it's impossible for him to come...


Geet - Humm...


Geet - Maan .. I want to ask you something...


Maan - Yes .. you need not ask permission geet.. you can directly tell me what ever there is in your heart and mind..


Geet hesitated but finally said - I know this is a very private ceremony.. but r u inviting mamma and papa for the ceremony...


Maan didn't respond.. he didn't think about this till now... He is sure Veer and naina would have informed naina's parents about the roka and invited them... but what about the Hands's... should they invite them... if they invite.. what about meera... how will she react seeing them.. what if she reacted other wise... and if they wouldn't invite them then it would be insulting Handa's and Geet... and could he see that... and how can he not invite his inlaws...

Geet saw maan in deep thought... she called him softly... Maan...


Maan was brought back from his revive and he looked at geet...


Geet - Did I say something Wrong...



Last Precap Holds for this one too....

Note


Hello Friends... Sorry for the super Late update.. was busy last month.. First my daughter's exams and then packing for our little vacation😳... I am going on a small vacation.. just for 2.5 months to US😆... So i can't promise you anything about Updates😳... but I will surely bank updates and will try to update one or two😃... but no promises.. as I am very poor at keeping them...🤢 😆


Happy Holidays Friends...😃😛

Plz ignore Mistakes of any type

Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
MONIJA78 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the update and have nice holiday enjoy the time and keep us update please thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part. Anu's talk made Meera more insecure, I think. Enjoy your Vacation.
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy holidays dear

awesome update yaar

let's see maan has to invite geet's family

but meera usko toh chupana padega inhe
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maneet are enjoying their life... chalo yeh achha hua.. Anu n Anu ki gol gol batein definitely Meera ko samjh.. nahi ati hogi... chalo at least Maneet are enjoying their mini honeymoon.. 😉 Anu ki shadi coming up.. n Geet asked maan abt her parents.. now what..?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear Mann is in deep though that how can you will not invite geet parents

Enjoy your holidays dear but don't forget to update in between I know it's imp but try dear
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Posted: 10 years ago


enjoy ur vacations with ur family...Family comes first...

there Maan-Geet are enjoying and here Meera is getting jealous...any girl would become jealous observing the importance given to other girl by her own husband and in-laws...

it is good if Handas will come to attend function...they may have some understanding left to tell her the truth so that she can come out of this horrible life where she is suffering from uncertainity each and every minute passed...

good update...

thanx for pm...


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