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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9


akki i remember that...but ussey kiss karne ke baad realise hua to kaisa rahega...he should think antu is the most deserving and right person for that...😳

Agree..!!
in next update i'm gonna clear almost all confusions and dilemma they are having..😳😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9


i feel happy when u get lost in the story...kyonki after reading ur update we get lost in that😆

haha.. that means the most for me,..😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

Agree..!!

in next update i'm gonna clear almost all confusions and dilemma they are having..😳😳


yeah coz i love ANTARA from IIH...she is ideal girl/woman a man would dream for...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasika9


yeah coz i love ANTARA from IIH...she is ideal girl/woman a man would dream for...

Aw! thank u so much dear..
i'm so glad that u mentioned it.. means a lot to me..
because i started writing this story keeping antara as central and main character..
for me, this whole story revolves around her..
how a woman is ready to give up her happiness, her needs, her whole life, her career, her dignity.. only for that one man she loves the most..
this whole story is actually inspired from a few lines i read in a hindi comic..a long long time back..
and it touched me so deep..that i came up with this story..
i had this idea from like 3-4 years.. but never pen it down for any character.. then i joined DDEJ forum.. i luvd u guys so much.. that i finally posted that idea here..
and i really was on 9th cloud when it was appreciated..
so i'm really very happy that u like "Antara" from this story..thanks a lot.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
I'm done with a scene.. which itself can be posted as an update..
should i update it only after writing anniversary celebration part...??
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

I'm done with a scene.. which itself can be posted as an update..

should i update it only after writing anniversary celebration part...??

Neki or puch puch! Post Karo na akki ji!
BTW so sowie!! I haven't done the reviews! Busy with studies and all!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: honeybees22

Neki or puch puch! Post Karo na akki ji!

BTW so sowie!! I haven't done the reviews! Busy with studies and all!

haha... let me try.. if i'm able to finish anniversary chapter by tonight.. otherwise i'll update that part tomorrow morning..
yeah! i was waiting for ur comments..😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: DeadDevil

haha... let me try.. if i'm able to finish anniversary chapter by tonight.. otherwise i'll update that part tomorrow morning..

yeah! i was waiting for ur comments..😳

Okii ji!
I wanted to comment! Time nai mila! School health travel urghh!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
i can understand Hina.. no problem..
i'm glad that u at least read them.. (=

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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 36- RaNtara's anniversary (1)

happy reading..

You know, just one minute is remaining...she said in excitement...
yepp!! I do...
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10 seconds...
she started the countdown
10
9
8
7
6
5
4
3
2
1
a...nd
happy anniversary... he held her chin and placed a deep kiss on her cheek...
her cheeks turned crimson but her brows were frowned..
i wanted to say that first...
but u didn't...
she hit him on his shoulder...
arey!!
she pushed him away slightly..
aaj bhi ladna hai...?
she shook her head in no..
to ab wish to karo...
mujhe pahle karna tha...
next year, tum kar lena.. i won't mind...
she hugged him... "happy anniversary..."and kissed him just above his jawline...
he hugged her back... "let's celebrate.."
yeah!!
there is box i kept in fridge.. bring that.. i brought cupcakes for us..
u go..n bring that...
why?? he pouted..
its our wedding anniversary.. u remember how much tired i was on our wedding day..and when we reached here...
r u kidding me...? he looked at her in surprise..
NO!! not at all...
she wounded her arms in his neck... do u remember.. u brought food for us that night..
u bring those cakes.. i'll be sitting here and we can re-live that moment.. she said and sighed...
there is one more thing we can re-live...though tonight in another way...he brushed her hair flicks with his finger.. and said..
she looked at him and he smirked...
shut up and go...she said pushed him away to hide the blush that appeared on her cheeks...
he arranged those cupcakes in a small tray and placed a candle one of those..and came back after 5 minutes..
as soon as he entered in the bedroom... his eyes were wide open...
in these 5 minutes she had put so many stuffs around his side of bed.. he kept that tray on table and walked towards the bed to take a close look at those things..

it were paper cutting in different shapes...some stars, some hearts, circle, cartoons.. hanged via colorful threads...
she had written different messages on each of them...
their special, emotional, funy every kind of moments they spent in this last one year...
he noticed there were same papers in shape of a face with horns.. he looked at her as he read the text..
those were from the time whenever he had a fight or argument with her...
he chuckled reading one text where she mentioned about his novels..
he was curious to know what had she written in heart shaped papers..
and he smiled after reading those.. whenever he took care of her and made her feel that he is always there for her...
he ran towards her and hugged her tight...she hugged him back...
phew! i can't believe...its been a year.. she sighed..
he scoffed and hugged her more...
u know what.. this gift looks a bit girly..
she patted on his shoulder...i know..
but i loved it...
thank u so much...
now i'll prefer to read these rather than novels.. i hope u won't complaint then...
she nodded in approval... and they both laughed..
they both cut the cake and fed each other...
i really hope next year we won't fight as much as we did this time..
yeah! me too..
have you mentioned those cozy moments also.. i would love to read and know what you think about those..i think we did have some...right??...
and she put more cake in his mouth...which made him laugh..

acchha...listen.. i wanted you to go to get those cakes because i also had something for u.. which i wanted to put here before u come..
she looked at him with curiosity..
wait a second..
he opened the bed storage and brought a big frame..
"u hid it here.. u could have keep it inside ur closet.." she laughed and said..
where u could have easily found it..
hmm..
what is it..?
last week i realized that we don't have our wedding photo in our room or this house..
yeah! because nobody clicked one...u know how it happened..
yep!!
he gave that frame to her...she looked at him..
tell me.. u managed to get one..
he nodded in yes..
how..? we really had no pic from our wedding...
your shaitan bhatija clicked one.. he gave me this a few months back..
why didn't you show me.??..
umm.. i think we were not talking that time..
oh!!
now stop talking n open it..
yeah!
she opened the packing.. it was their pic when he filled her maang..
she looked at him and her eyes welled up...
don't start crying.. i'm telling u.. even ur crying face ruined this only pic we have from our wedding...
she hit him on his shoulder.. i'm not crying..
and its not ruined..its beautiful...
thank u so much... she looked at the pic and said...
give it to me.. i'll put this on wall..
yeah!
once he stepped down from chair and stood beside her.. they both looked at their pic and sighed..
he encircled his arm over her shoulder and hugged her from side..
he deserves a treat.. doesn't he..?.
yeah! he does...
..
..
hmm.. now what..?
nothing...
nothing..?
yeah! what else..
c'mon.. it's our anniversary... wedding anniversary.. are we just gonna sleep now..?
tomorrow.. i hv office..and a very important presentation before lunch... n u also hv some work in college.. right..?
yeah!..
its already 12.45..
but yeah! i promise..!!...tomorrow.. we will go for dinner..and will celebrate..
ohk...??
she nodded in yes...and was about to leave when he held her hand from behind and pulled her into him making her spin..
she bumped into his chest..closed her eyes in fear and held his shoulder for support..but pulled it back immediately as he was only his vest..
he took his mobile from his pocket..and played some soft instrumental music and kept it back in his pocket...
she looked at him in awe..he was staring at her..as soon as their eyes met..he winked slightly...
she lowered her fluttering eyes and a smirk appeared on his lips..
sliding his one hand on her waist and holding her one hand in his..he started moving very slowly..
she moved back and forth with him.. he held her hand and placed it on his shoulder..
he danced with her very slowly.. she kept looking down..and he kept staring at her...
without moving his gaze from her face he bent down and placed a gentle kiss on her eye...
she closed her eyes and caressed her soft fingers on his shoulder and biceps...
he bent down again and placed a wet kiss near her lips..
her heart skipped a beat and she opened her eyes only to meet them with his...
he kept dancing with her slowly and then very slowly..
seeing her cheeks turning red with his touch...a smiled appeared on his lips..
he made her wound her arms over his neck and caressed her arm...lifted her chin with a folded finger...
before leaning forward he looked into her eyes.. she wasn't scared but her hands were trembling..what he felt from her loosened grip...
he held her waist firmly ..pulled her very gently into him.. without any force..
she followed his gaze..she wanted to lower her eyes.. but she couldn't and kept looking at him..
he bent down.. she felt his hot breath on her lips..
holding her chin with his finger..he brushed his lips with hers..without touching them...which made her to take a deep breath.
he once again brushed them and she parted her lips..
his grip got tightened on her waist..
she closed her eyes feeling his breath on her lips and hands roaming on her waist...
seeing her parted lips..he got an urge to claim them..seeing her closed eyes he took a breath and finally captured those into his...
her love for him..wish to be getting first kissed by him..being in his arms...all her emotions took over her in a moment..and warm tears rolled down from the corner of her eyes with the thought that he is doing all this despite of the truth that he doesn't love her...
those lips tasted to him like honey.. he closed his eyes and pressed his lips on hers more..
for minutes, he kept sucking her lips..
feeling her trembling figure in his grip he held himself back...but without breaking the kiss he looked at her face..
though she was shivering... but seeing her closed eyes.. feeling her shuddering fingers that were making patterns on his neck..
he licked her lower lip and captured it in his lips..
he kissed her very gently.. and slowly.. and so for long...
soon they both were out of air.. she gasped.. so did he...and he again took her lip into his...
while sucking the juice out of it.. he nibbled on her soft petal.. bit it from the corner and pressed under his teeth..
she gasped in pain and clutched his hairs in her small fist..
as little blood oozed out from her lip.. she licked it.. and he also licked the blood to sooth her pain..
and that's when their tongues got touched with one another..
she opened her eyes and looked at him..he also rubbed her lip with his thumb and looked at her..
she held herself back.. it was mutual..so she didn't feel embarrassed for it.. but she also didn't want to go further with it...he also nodded and loosened his grip on her..
he was doing everything for her happiness.. he wasn't a guy who will claim his rights on his wife.. or will do any such thing just because of a mere attraction..
he thought about everything a lot.. and decided to move this relation forward.. for both of them..
he wanted to give their relationship a chance..
every time he came closer to her he felt that she also needs love in her life..love of a husband...and she deserves that..
being a friend of him had become a curse on her life.. her happiness.. she started living in a shell like she has no needs.. and her life is now devoted to him only...
he didn't want her to spend her life with a void left in her heart..
but since he married to her.. he made her to marry him.. its his responsibility to give all those happiness.. all those rights that she deserves..
a girl whom you don't love as a husband.. who doesn't love you as a wife..
getting closer to her.. being intimate with her.. he definitely didn't want to do that..
in 7 years of his relationship with Sheetal.. he never touched her with such intimacy..
but now, with Antara.. if getting this closer gives a chance to their married life.. and they start feeling something for each other.. he was ready to do that..and being with her gives a strange feeling to him..
he looked at her once again and pecked on her lips...
she didn't say anything to him..but kept looking at him with a meek smile on her lips...
he gently held her head and placed it on his chest... she hugged him very gently and he patted on her head...
they both continued dancing slowly...her eyes were teary.. he kissed on her hairs.. and she clutched his vest tight in her small grip.
soon she dozed off...he turned the music off.. and lifted her in his arms..
... made her lie on bed and covered with the blanket..
after switching the lamp off he slipped in her blanket...
"today, i kissed you..you did not protest or denied.. but you also did not respond..." he caressed her hairs... and thought..
i am scared.. if tomorrow you will get happy or upset with my surprise..
you never tell me what you wish for.. if you really are okay with the decision we took..because i don't want to force you into this..
..
..
that night when you cuddled in your self while i tried to come closer to you... i thought earlier you agreed because i said so...
..
..
but today... now at this moment..you gave into it. i know you don't express your feelings but somehow i feel that you want it too.. because i never found you uncomfortable with me...
..
..
[he sighed!]
i really hope u want this too..or i won't be able to meet my eyes with you...
he kept looking at her...caressing her hairs..and kept thinking about her...until his eyes were closed in sleep..

please hit the like button and leave ur comments.. (=
loadz of love..
-Akki
Edited by DeadDevil - 10 years ago

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