zaya ss: mujhe haq hai(thread 2 *chapter 17 up(18/3)) - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh god I couldn't see Poonam in pain nor aaliya in pain
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amaaazing 🥳 I think ab suri ki nafrat pyaar mein badal jaayegi alu ke liye... Haina???? Jldi update karna OK na bbye take care
Annie
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing parts !!
Zain keeps trying sherwani ...lolzzz
Aliya's house on fire :(
Very intresting ...
Continue soon ..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was nice update
why u have stopped there😒
God plz save Aaliya from
continue soon😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zaya2

Amaaazing 🥳 I think ab suri ki nafrat pyaar mein badal jaayegi alu ke liye... Haina???? Jldi update karna OK na bbye take care

Annie

THANKS ANNIE..HMM SHAYAD
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

it was nice update THANKS

why u have stopped there😒 I AM A BIT LAZY
God plz save Aaliya from HMM
continue soon😊YES I WILL

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Posted: 10 years ago


hello guys..

sorry for the late update...

was busy in some work...

hope u all will like it..

...

CHAPTER 16

Aliyaaa-suraiya shouted

Aliya who was standing there looked first at suraiya then at the direction where suraiya's eyes were pointing

She saw roof going to fall on them

Being a pure soul by heart, the one who cannot see anybody in pain she quickly pushed ayat to safer side and stood there waiting for her approaching death ..

"ahhh" the loud scream filled the house reflecting the uttermost pain...

The blazing fire could not cover the scream..

The painful scream of two voices

Ambulance was called..

Fire brigades were doing their best to control the fire while on the other hand cutting the crowd there came ward boys caring two stretchers

On one lying aliya fully covered with sheets from toe to her chest..only her beautiful pale face could be seen and on the other zain

Yes zain

When zain was getting ready for the barat he felt weird ..weird in the sense that something soon going to happen wrong.. something wrong to his dear one

Suddenly a loud wind blew and aliya's frame kept on the table fell suddenly

Zain who was already in deep thought saw this and he remembered the scene happened before his mother died

He took his car keys and informing about this to nafeesa he quickly started his car

Driving his car in the top most speed he reached madhuban

As he reached there he saw abdullah's house in fire

He was shocked to see all this

He quickly entered inside to see the roof soon going to fall on aliya

He ran to reach her but it was too late for this

The roof fell on aliya and as zain was near some burning part fell on him also burning his hand and leg a little

Zain and aliya were carried to hospital followed by Abdullahs ...

Zain had minor burns while aliya had major

She was carried to emergency room

Doctor came outside

Doctor: patient ka father kon hai???

Osman: ji main

Doctor: aap mere saath aayiye

Osman: chaliye

IN DOCTOR'S CABIN

Osman: ji doctor boliye

Doctor: mr.abdullah yeh aap bhi jaante hai ki agar hame thoda sa bhi burn ho jaye toh bahoot pain hota hai.. apki beti aliya ke upar toh ek burning wooden frame gira hai toh aap samaj hi sakte hain dard kaisa hoga.. she has got 3rd degree burns.. yeh aap uski aachi kismet samjhe ki her face was safe

Hearing this osman was fully shocked...his sweet daughter who never thought any thing bad about other was lying on the death bed..

Osman: par doctor bittu ki kal shaadi

Doctor: ese time mein toh apne bhi saath chood dete hai toh bhahar ke logon se kya umeed rakh sakte hain

Tears pooled around his eyes

Osman: kya main ek baar use mil sakta hoon

Doctor : haan jaroor

Doctor: nurse pls get him ready to meet the patient

Osman entered the room where aliya was admitted

Ayat and suraiya too followed inside..

They were standing a little far

Osman moved to aliya's bdeside and nurse switched on the lights

Aliya opened her eyes as the light fell on her eyes

Seeing osman she tried to get up

Aliya: mamu

She tried to get up a little but due to the extreme pain she couldn't

Tears pooled aroung both mamu and bhanji's eyes

Osman: aliya tum aaram karo

Aliya: par mamu

Osman: aliya meri bahadur baachi tum bahoot jaldi thik hojogi

Saying this he left the room

Ayat and suraiya too followed

Doctor: mr.abdullah app sign Karen

Osman: okey

As he lift up the pen to sign on the form ..the corridor is filled with loud noise of a bang..it was of clock showing the time.. the clock struck 11

He looks at rehan

#flashback

Rehan: osman shahab bas aur do din aur issi time mein app apni beti ke nikkah mein gawah banenge

#flashback ends

He started crying

As he touched the tip of the pen to the paper the cute flashback of little aliya when he adopted her after his sister died in a fatal accident.. her cute expressions when they used to have little fights.. all the sweet memories were running like a movie in front of his eyes

"rukiyeee" said a man from behind

...

Who is the man??

Aliya's lover or someone else??

Will zain accept aliya???

Stay tunned for the next chapter

Lots of love

priya

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wooden frame fell on aliya :o
Hope zaya wont get seperated :(
Waiting to read more ...
Continue soon ...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my poor Aaliya continue soon I hope they reunite !
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chapter
beautifully written
really loved it
pls pls cont asap

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