Jalal's Diary.... Entry 8 updated....(16/3/15) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: _akdha.forever_

awesome update sonai!!

poor hamida..😒
khan baba and his teachings...😵jalal has no heart
update entry 5 soon dear😳


thanks shree!!!
me too felt bad for hamida!!
will continue soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update do continue👏
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Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

lovely entries di read them in one go continue soon

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thanks swara!!
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Wonderful update do continue👏


thanks meera!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ENTRY 5
Today while I was taking a round of the war camp, I saw a soldier sharpening a sword.. My eyes caught the sharpened edge of the sword.. It was not as much sharpened as my one.. I went to him and said that the sword is not that much sharpened which I want in my sword. I told him to sharpen it more.
After sometime I made up my mind to go to Amer... I wanted to see the land once before conquering it.. This visit also had some other significance which I'll tell you later..
As I came out of my tent and told my soldiers to prepare for my visit to Amer, they started denying me. They told me not to make a trip to Amer. But I had made up my mind so the soldiers had to prepare for my visit. When I was about to climb up the horse, suddenly from the corner of my eyes, I saw a soldier running with a open knife in his hand, and guess.. he was running towards me. Before I could react, he threw his knife and the sharp edge of his knife pierced the skin.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Don't worry.. His knife pierced the skin of the snake which was just in drone of me.. Thus he saved me..
I was very much pleased by him.. I then said to him that I'll always remember his honesty and bravery.. Then I told him to tell Khan Baba that I'll be off to hunting.. I didn't want Khan Baba to know about my visit to Amer coz once he comes to know that, he won't let me go there thinking about my safety..
While going to Amer, I had a strange feeling, it was as if Amer was calling me.. I don't know why I was feeling like a iron piece getting attracted to magnet, which is Amer..
May be Allah has something for me here.. that's why he brought me here..
Oh I forgot to say, my best friend Abdul is accompanying me to Amer... So there goes the city of Amer... It's view is just a beauty...
Me and Abdul were above a cliff, and we were watching Amer from there..
It was full of people, may be because of the gangaur festival..
I was mesmerized by it's beauty...

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Edited by Sweet_sonai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Abdul didn't seem to be having good vibes about me visiting Amer without forces.. But I was fully prepared to go inside the city..
Thus I donned a Rajvanshi man's attire and dressed up like a proper Rajvanshi... I knew the Rajvanshi language, that is proper Hindi... I learnt it for such visits...


I praised about Amer, but and said that Amer looks beautiful but Abdul said it looks like a devil..
Then I picked up a handful of mud from the ground and said to him that then I'll visit the devil alone...
Saying this I jumped down from the cliff to the main city leaving Abdul alone on the cliff...
I remembered that soldier's description of the Amer princess Jodha...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Entry 5 is updated...
hope you will like this one also...
I'm waiting for your feedbacks!!!!
Enjoy reading...
Barnali aka Sonai...
Edited by Sweet_sonai - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Resss...
me first... ll unres..on sat
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's very nicely written sonai
i really enjoy reading this

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