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Nice chapter...thanks for the PM

Part 54


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"Kyun Khawabon Pe Tere Saayein Hain"
Sleep seemed miles away from them, as redemption swept away the sleep of him and pain drenched her sleep with pain. They didn't have romance, they had the solitude in the company of pain, they didn't have silences, they had words which spoke too loud to be heard.
Maybe their love was refuge of pain, eternally beautiful pain, which continued to haunt their souls, since the time forgot to remember. There were profound feelings, which can never be expressed in words but those feelings longed for an expression. There were actions, which seemed sinful, but those actions were made pure by them. There were dreams, which they knew can never be fulfilled but those dreams, refused to be shattered.
Was it a love or a conflict?
It was eternal forsaken question, which always demanded an answer.
Their love was a double-edged sword, where proximity seemed showering them curses and distances seemed too painful to resist. Neither did the pain let them unite, nor did the love let them separate.
What was this vortex of feeling called?
The answer to this question, could never be found. To answer it, experience was required, and when experience comes, everything would seem vague.
Their dreams had imprinted each other on them, but the hindrance was that the ink with which it was imprinted with, was the combination of her tears and blood of his heart.
--FLASHBACK--
The damsel dressed in red, waiting to be swept off her feet by her prince charming, was looking at the suitors who arrived for her.
Her heartbeats paced, while her breaths raced looking at the best archer the world has ever seen. All her deformed dreams, now took his form, to make realize of her soulmate.
Her gaze searched for him, as she lost his sight, unknown of the fact that her pair of eyes, will keep searching for him, but the man, whose identity was by a bird's eye and fish's eye would not be able to see the longing in her burning gaze.
--FLASHBACK ENDS--
Stuck in the vortex of love, which only sucked out every bit of energy and patience they had, they could only find each other in their dreams. THose dreams, which could never be fulfilled.
Pain which became an inseparable part of their love, was a play of the Almighty. What kind of play did the god create as a play? A play in which they got colored in each others colors, and got drenched the colors of pain and angst.
--FLASHBACK--
The lady whom he had won, the lady who was his official wife, was the lady he had always dreamt off.
The etching found their solace, only to feel their hearts being broken.
His dreams which always had her form, shattered and her dreams, which always searched for his form, continued to do the same, once and for all.
One of the most god forsaken words, which made their dreams, wet their tears even in sleep, were spoken by his mother.
And there it began, the search for solace in a battlefield.
--FLASHBACK ENDS--
Those dreams still haunted them, his unspoken words still broke her dreams while the shadows of her crying form on his dreams, always make sleep impossible for them.
Will they ever find the solace of love in the battlefield of pain?
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I don't why but I just loved this part!
TBC
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NOTE

Nice part Devranijee!!
The pain nd torment Yagya is goin thru is making her think nd question about her love!! It was well described darlingg...well done!
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Abt that note!
U r true ki u dnt get the number of likes u used to! Bt that doesnt mean the quality of ur updates is decreasing!! U r doing fabulous job here... Go thru the pieces u have written once again nthing has changed Devranijee! Nd y shud the number of likes nd comments decide the future of ur FF?? I understand likes nd comments r important bt u know there is a feeling of satisfaction once ur work gets completed! Nd it always hurts to leave nything incomplete as nly we know how much hard work is into it! Writing a story is nt at all easy job!!
Plus about plaigarism I know how it feels to see ur work copied😡 nd the shit who has done it is a big looser😡 whether u use ny of the forum codes, give warnings or no these scraps will find a way out!!! It nt nly hurts the original master of the work bt also makes him to go in diffrnt state of mind!!!

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

Nice part Devranijee!!
The pain nd torment Yagya is goin thru is making her think nd question about her love!! It was well described darlingg...well done!
...
Abt that note!
U r true ki u dnt get the number of likes u used to! Bt that doesnt mean the quality of ur updates is decreasing!! U r doing fabulous job here... Go thru the pieces u have written once again nthing has changed Devranijee! Nd y shud the number of likes nd comments decide the future of ur FF?? I understand likes nd comments r important bt u know there is a feeling of satisfaction once ur work gets completed! Nd it always hurts to leave nything incomplete as nly we know how much hard work is into it! Writing a story is nt at all easy job!!
Plus about plaigarism I know how it feels to see ur work copied😡 nd the shit who has done it is a big looser😡 whether u use ny of the forum codes, give warnings or no these scraps will find a way out!!! It nt nly hurts the original master of the work bt also makes him to go in diffrnt state of mind!!!

Originally posted by: Radhar

Its amazing..

Beautiful yaar amazing.. By each passing chapter, the writer in you is growing.. Superb dear hats off..

I loved the way you described the ardi love. You are absolutely ryt regarding the reference double edged sword.. I feel it like that.. They had this amazing connection. Several still see it as a fiction borne romance. But i see it as a romance beyond the understanding of conventionals. Its divine. Born out of respect, appreciation and pride. Its the courage in bot that reflects their smile but the pain, the dreams behold the sense of freedom which make the forsaken question an arrow to the heart piercing it and shattering into a 1000 pieces. Still she loved her irrovacably with al those 1000 pieces. This simple truth underlines their unconventional love.

If i didn't stop here i ll go mad.. "Laal ishq" is ringing in my ears.. 😆 in short i loves it to the core


Regarding note
Who the mother f**king bas***d copied ur creation. It takes real pain to write amazing pieces like these...
And yes i know i m one of who makes demand for hot updates.. It coz at times the pain will be too much yaar. Sometimes i feel i wont be able to read it. I know pain so it pricks more yaar. Hot updates are like ads. A small relief and i feel why cant it be simple. Its love na.. But then its ardi. Even simple things call for a alot a pain for them.. Nothing, not a simple thing in a normal couple's life was simple fir ardi and thats the beauty of it..

Go in dear.. Now i m ready for pain coz it's ardi. Pain is love and love is pain for them

And oye.. Comments n like doesnt define who u are.. All you need is a couple of genuine heart felt comments.. Rest chad de..

Real ppl will comment.. If ppl remain silent reading such amazing piece they are not worth looking out dear.. Let them go...


Btw go comment on mine.. I can complain n compel u na!!! 😆

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

Beautiful yaar amazing.. By each passing chapter, the writer in you is growing.. Superb dear hats off..

I loved the way you described the ardi love. You are absolutely ryt regarding the reference double edged sword.. I feel it like that.. They had this amazing connection. Several still see it as a fiction borne romance. But i see it as a romance beyond the understanding of conventionals. Its divine. Born out of respect, appreciation and pride. Its the courage in bot that reflects their smile but the pain, the dreams behold the sense of freedom which make the forsaken question an arrow to the heart piercing it and shattering into a 1000 pieces. Still she loved her irrovacably with al those 1000 pieces. This simple truth underlines their unconventional love.

If i didn't stop here i ll go mad.. "Laal ishq" is ringing in my ears.. 😆 in short i loves it to the core


Regarding note
Who the mother f**king bas***d copied ur creation. It takes real pain to write amazing pieces like these...
And yes i know i m one of who makes demand for hot updates.. It coz at times the pain will be too much yaar. Sometimes i feel i wont be able to read it. I know pain so it pricks more yaar. Hot updates are like ads. A small relief and i feel why cant it be simple. Its love na.. But then its ardi. Even simple things call for a alot a pain for them.. Nothing, not a simple thing in a normal couple's life was simple fir ardi and thats the beauty of it..

Go in dear.. Now i m ready for pain coz it's ardi. Pain is love and love is pain for them

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

And oye.. Comments n like doesnt define who u are.. All you need is a couple of genuine heart felt comments.. Rest chad de..

Real ppl will comment.. If ppl remain silent reading such amazing piece they are not worth looking out dear.. Let them go...


Btw go comment on mine.. I can complain n compel u na!!! 😆