ch52 pg 124 - hate me today, love me tomorrow 2

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zindgidilse

@zindgidilse

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Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Sorry forThe late comment fuzz.,

i just read last three chapters in one go...wow.,superb mundblowing fuzz..

kalpi's reaction after the news of her replacement was worth to see.,. As i was going to read line to line, my reaction was.,whats going to be the next moment,.. I was desperate at that moment.

nd then kalpi's direct entry in Raghav office was superb nd her question "how dare u replace me" .. U know fuzz there was a big grin on my face reading her questioning line in update...

Nd then her warning "just try nd replace me ",,,wooo our tigress kalpi...

raghav was happy to know that she is still interested in working with him nd kalpi was in two ways turmoil where one side she unknowingly reacted to the situation of her replacement unaware of her hidden love for him that she still love him and other side she don't want to be strong not wanting to show her emotions to raghav.

avantika part was nicely presented nd the nerdy young man...hahahaha.,i m feeling like rofl on his condition.

wow.,now raghav can sacrifice everything for kalpi but doesn't want to hurt her more...i love this side of raghav.

another blunder raghav caused by keeping marriage certiface so carelessly...love to see that he can't see distrust in her eyes...now he wants to see love in them but he knows what he have done to her it is impossible to see it again. He can accept his hatered but can not see her going away from her.

kalpi was again hurt thinking he is married...she burst out her frustration in washroom nd thought that she is nothing infront of those girls...somehow she again composed herself to been strong.

I love under table part the most in that update.,what love leads us to...is shown here...

oh gosh.,she was so weaken after their kiss that she pleaded him to release her from the contract...nd raghav saying her that he can't do that nd don't want her to leave him. He loves her so much.,but what he have given to her is now recieving from her...

raghav trying to think of way to stop her nd kalpi reminding him that he is married again nx again..

wow fuzz..now finally he said to her that she is also married nd gave that marriage certificate to her which she had teard apart nd which raghav joined it again using sellotape .

u know fuzz , i m in love with this story amongst ur all creations. I m mad about this.,the much i read my heart say..one more update..one more update.,so this time also.

pls fuzz one more update.,i can't wait.,pls pls pls pls pls.

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ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

What an atom bomb of an update !!!!!! Took me on an emotional roller coaster !!!! You totally ROCK👏 dear ANGEL 😳 Kalpi the wounded tigress and remorseful raghav WOW just loved them !!!!!!😃

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leelu

@leelu0001

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

lovely update angel thnk u, just keep falling more in love with raghav as kalpi

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angelpureness

@angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Out by the sea and thought to peep... Am glad you are all enjoying the twists and turns in Ragna's life. Priya I was thinking along the same lines... Blackmail or threaten.. but the Ragav in my head was against it. He couldn't bring himself to take such a step against her again. I think deep down he wants her to choose to be with him despite everything.

Now a sweet warning... Pakhi shall be introduced in this chapter... But you need to trust me and allow me to write... No @Shonali, my Pakhi's will never be a vamp... My Pakhi has her partner Ayaan Mehta 😉... Guys we need to find him a face... Coz I am always going to pair them up together... They were supposed to get paired in heartbeat😭.😆

Yay Ayaan has a face... Karan Wahi... Thank you @Santhi... Oh bless I am liking sunyy's option of Husein from KKK... I like his friendship bond with Ashish. Okay final face of Ayaan 😆 is Husein.

@zindagislife I love this ff the most... It is exhausting writing it... But it is so... I just love their journey. The second one I love is oyster... Though there are several very boring chapters in there😆

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Brb off to photograph duty... Back... Yawn

I am still processing my thoughts over this chapter. This update might be a little slow... I think I am going to let the characters take over and just write.

A polite note... Please don't make posts with a message for me... Coz I very rarely visit the forum... I just update my chappy and check my pm... You are better off sending a pm.

Chapter 32

Priya rushes to Maya's office, trying to keep her voice free from worry, she says, "Maya ma'am, you are needed at Ragav sir's office." Maya looks up, wondering why Ragav or Kalpi didn't call, she says skeptically, "you came personally to call me. You could have called me on my extension." Flushing, Priya implores, "please ma'am, come."

Feeling anxious, Maya asks as they walk over, "what has happened Priya?" Not wanting to betray Ragav or Kalpi's privacy, she replies, "Kalpi was crying when she left. I thought maybe Ragav sir might need you." Frowning, Maya looks around the office floor... Stops... It was empty... She says, "where is everyone?" Feeling uncomfortable and unable to meet her gaze, Priya replies, "I sent them to the canteen for break. They will not come back until I call." She darts her gaze towards Maya for a split second and adds in a rushed voice, "it was needed."

Concerned Maya rushes into Ragav's office... Stops... Stares... Horrified... The floor was covered with broken glass... And Ragav was where Kalpi left him... On his knees... In front of a now empty chair... Maya shuts the door behind her while Priya remains outside... Not needing to be told that her duty would be to make sure this floor remained empty.

Maya walks up to Ragav, calling out his name softly... Not wanting to startle him. Slowly she places her hand lightly on his shoulder as she calls out his name... Ragav turns... Looks at her... Dazed... Lost... It was as if he had just woken up from a deep sleep. Not ready to share, he walks up to the window... His mind replaying earlier events.

*flashback begins*

He hands her their marriage certificate, saying, "so are you." She looks at him... Confused, asks huskily, "what is this?" He relpies, "why don't you take it and see for yourself." Kalpi hesitates momentarily... Seeing the paper taped... She is scared. Her hand trembles slightly as she takes the folded paper... Running her finger tips over the Sellotape. Her eyes wide... Filled with vulnerability... She looks at him... Feeling overwhelmed... Anxious... Realising that this is what she was looking for just moments ago... Her heart racing, thinking, "his marriage certificate."

Opening the paper... She stares in disbelief... Next to his name was hers... Her heart racing... She amends her last thought, "our marriage certificate." Recollecting everything between them... Her eyes water up... Tears slide down her cheeks... She whispers with a heavy heart as she caresses their names on the certificate... "You married me to hurt me... To hurt my aai... For revenge..." She lifts her gaze from the paper... Looks into his eyes... His filled with regret... Hers with pain.

Chocking with guilt, Ragav says, "Kalpi, I..." "Not another word, Ragav," Kalpi says soft but deadly voice, "not another word." She continues, "you were never going to tell me... Were you?... Obviously there is a reason to this marriage... You were going to discard me when I was no longer of use... Weren't you?... I was just a tissue paper to you wasn't i?... Once used, it is thrown away." Ragav stares at her silently, his eyes filled with regret... With pain for having her hurt her so deeply. Kalpi takes a deep breath and continues, "You destroyed all my dreams... You left me with nothing to dream about... My career... My marriage... Everything. You took away my right to choose my partner... You took away my parents right to approve of my partner. You bound us in a marriage where there is nothing holy... No blessings... No celebrations... No happy memories... This is what relationships mean to you... This is what marriage means to you... Just a signature on a piece of paper."

Ragav holds her hands in his and says imploringly, "please forgive me Kalpi. Please... Everything has changed... I love you so much... Please give me the opportunity to heal the wounds that I am responsible for." Shaking her head, Kalpi says softly, "what if you had not fallen for me? What if when you fall out of love? I am to forgive you because you fell in love... I am to forget everything because you fell in love... What of my aai and baba... Should they forgive you because you... The pain... The hurt... The sleepless night... Should they forget everything too..." Releasing one of her hands from his hold, she caresses his cheek... Needing to touch him one last time... She whispers brokenly, "you know what I feel? I hate you for making me fall in love with you... I hate myself for loving you... Goodbye." She gets up and leaves.

*flasback ends*

Note:

Oopsie, thought Pakhi was going to be introduced in this chappy... Guess not... Next chappy it is.

Completing chappy here... Emotionally and mentally drained.

Goodnight.

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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sonali

@S0nalii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#225

is pakhi is going to be vamp?

After so much of things happen between ragna, its excited to see what will story going with pakhi.

Though we r realy enjoying current track so much, bt it is definitely going to be thrilling after pakhi's entry, m sure.

We trust u Angel, go on.
And thanks for sweet warning😳

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FALAK_SKY

@FALAK_SKY

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

It's ok angel i trust u i know u will not separate our Ragna...may be pakhi make kalpi more jealous...but in last scene u have shown Raghav gv der marriage certificate to kalpi what about that I'm confused will kalpi not blvd on him or der is another twist...or Raghav make another plan to jealous kalpi by entry of pakhi...

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: angelpureness
Out by the sea and thought to peep here... Am glad you are all enjoying the twists and turns in Ragna's life. Priya I was thinking along the same lines... Blackmail or threaten.. but the Ragav in my head was against it. He couldn't bring himself to take such a step against her again. I think deep down he wants her to choose to be with him despite everything.

Now a sweet warning... Pakhi shall be introduced in this chapter... But you need to trust me and allow me to write...

Brb off to photograph duty

we do trust you dear fuzz. .

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Anusuya

@akshara82

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Posted: 10 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: angelpureness
Out by the sea and thought to peep here... Am glad you are all enjoying the twists and turns in Ragna's life. Priya I was thinking along the same lines... Blackmail or threaten.. but the Ragav in my head was against it. He couldn't bring himself to take such a step against her again. I think deep down he wants her to choose to be with him despite everything.

Now a sweet warning... Pakhi shall be introduced in this chapter... But you need to trust me and allow me to write...

Brb off to photograph duty

So d Vamp is gonna make her entry huh..
hhhmm is she d vamp or a name sake vamp
but I trust U Angel..
U know how to tackle pakhis plot..
Looking frward to read it..
Update Soon.. 😉