zaya ss: mujhe haq hai(thread 2 *chapter 17 up(18/3)) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
update asap
waiting 4 it ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello friends
here comes part b
i hope u all will like it
...

Sangeet a beautiful ceremony both for to be bride and to be bridegroom

Music,dance, teasing from the relatives and close friends..

This ceremony becomes a very beautiful part of the memory as once shares how they danced on the beats without knowing how to dance..the only they know is the happiness of their kids and with out any shy they do it..

Today is finally the day...their sangeet..the day finally when zain and aliya will meet each other after a long gap of 13 days

Haider's villa

Zain was trying his wedding dress again and again

Today along with his sangeet there was also a special moment

It was zain's barat also..

Haider villa was fully decorated with flowers and lights

Guests started coming to be a part of barat ..

As tomorrow finally zain and aliya were going to unite..

Nafeesa who was packing zain's stuff saw him checking himself in the mirror

Nafeesa: bas karo zain..kitni baar try karoge.. kahin ese na hojaye ki barat toh nikal jaye and dulhe raja idhar hi chuth jaaye

Zain huffed

Zain: esa nahi hoga..bas ek baar aur dekhna haipls bhabhi

Nafeesa : okey my dewar ji

Saying this a smile formed on his sweet face

On the other side in abdullah's house

Preparation was on full swing

Osman was standing out with his munim rehan khan..a barat was coming from the end of the road..

Seeing barat usman eyes started filling with tears as he remembers that tomorrow his aliya will go away far from him

Osman: munim ji dekhiye yeh waqt kaise behta hai..kal joh choti si baachi ko main iss ghar mein laaya..jisne mera damaan khusiyoon se bhaar diya kal woh jaa rahi hai mujhe chodke ..yeh betiyoon ka bhi alag hai..jahan palti hai jahan yeh badi hoti hain wahan se sab chod ke kahin aur palne chali jaati hai..kiski ki maa yaa kiski ki patni...kitne roop hai iske..phir bhi samaj mein betiyoon ko janam lene se pehle hi mar diya jaata hai...

Rehan: ji osman shahab..app sahi keh rahen hai..

Osman: dekhie aaj yeh barat apni dulhan ko leke jaayegi aur kal joh barat aayegi woh mere bittu ko

Tears started falling

Aliya who heard all this started crying and ran to her room

Barat was now going in front of their house..

All were burning crackers..

Suddenly a rocket took a reverse direction and entered aliya's room

Aliya who was crying her heart out didn't noticed that rocket that entered her room start setting curtains into the fire

Rehan walks into the room to call aliya for some ceremony and sees her room in fire

He started shouting fire fire fire

Cooks who were cooking got panicked..

The stove was thrown away in running and everywhere it was fire oil cmes out from the container and fire burns more..

Everybody started running out for their lives

Osman and suraiya came out of the house and saw their beautiful home turning into a fire ball

osman : yeh bittu khahan hai

he started looking here and there

aliya who heard her mamu shouting shouted mamu mein yahan hoon

osman ran inside her to save her

he brought her down with care

suraiya who was already tensed now looked more tensed as she didn't found ayat around

suraiya: meri baachi meri ayat khahan hai

all neighbours tried to stop her but she went in

suraiya: osman shahab hamari ayat

osman: kya ayat

hearing that ayat was inside only aliya ran insdie quickly

osman tried to stop her but all his request went in vein

aliya who was looking for ayat here and other found her lying in a sub conscious state

she went inside fighting with the burning doors and gates

she wrapped ayat around the blanket and carefully brought her down

suraiya was speechless seeing how much aliya cares for ayat

they were standing just under the burning wooden frame roof

suraiya sees it falling and was shocked to see aliya and ayat standing their only

suraiya:aliyaaa

she shouts in top of her voice

...

here it ends...

next update pata nahi..

hope u liked it..

priya

Edited by iluvuzaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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yippee I m first
lovely chp priya.
waiting for the next 😊
Edited by SparklingEyes29 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SparklingEyes29

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yippee I m first CONGO
lovely chp priya.THANKS
waiting for the next 😊

HMM
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Posted: 10 years ago
it ws amazing
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

it ws amazing
loved it
plz cont soon

thanks dear
yes i will
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ui just wanted to say that is this story based on amrita and shahids story vivah xuz I was watching it and all of the events that happened their is reoccuring here the next part isn't a surprise for me as I know what's going to happen BT don't worry I'm no spoiler
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sofia786

Ui just wanted to say that is this story based on amrita and shahids story vivah xuz I was watching it and all of the events that happened their is reoccuring here the next part isn't a surprise for me as I know what's going to happen BT don't worry I'm no spoiler

yes it is..
i already said about it on first thread..
but i said ending is not going to be same
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chudail kahin ki ..
Ab update jaldi karna ..
U left me hanging priyu ..
Amazing chptr
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Posted: 10 years ago
Continue soon Pepita ! It was a good chapter zain in his usual style . Poor aliya .

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