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Posted: 10 years ago
Feeling sad for both Maan and Maahi

nice part ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: leenukiguru

Amazing update
maan saw geet
continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: idunno

I think in accident she was not dead and she has been saved by dr and she lost her memory so doctor has kept her as his daughter.


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we have no word saying anything now
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: love2_soma

geet sab kuch bhool gayi hai shayad...feeling bad fr maan n mahi...

superb update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Drashtilove

maan saw geet but geet didnt reconised him nice part thnx 4 pm


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Part 9

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Maan is so restless after seeing geet alive...he is so happy, he

get own life back, but she is so far from me ...why ????????????

My heart knows she is my geet

Wo khi nhi jaa sakti

Mujhe yu akela chodke

.

Fir wo kyun mujhse baat nhi kr rhi

.

Par mahi se toh krti hai

Mujhse nhi

.

Mujhse ajnaabi sa behavior kyun

.

Kya mujhse koi galati ho gyi geet

So tum apne maan se itna naraaz ho

Usse ek baar pyaar se dekh bhi nhi sakti

.

Usse itna ajnaabi kyun bna diya

.

Geet tumhe jwab dena honga

Is baar tum durr nhi jaa sakti mujhse

.

2 saal bitaye hai maine aur mahi ne akele

Ab aur nhi

.

Mein mahi ko akele kaise smbhalu

Aur nhi raha jaata tumahre bin

Jo sja deni hai, km se km meri karib aake do

Yo durr rhke nhi

I can't live geet.

Mujhe kissi bi tarah tumhe apne karib laana honga

***********

Two more days passed, he tries to contact her, reach her. But she is not available for him.

Now, enough geet

His phone buzzed

Maan : kya news hai

Sir I find out about priya sighaniya

She is younger daughter of Dr. Sushant

Maan : tum mujhe wo batayo jo mein janana chahta hu

Sir priya paris mein hi bdi huyi hai

She complete education from here

Maan : anything suspicious

No sir

Asa toh kuch nhi hai

Par

Maan : par kya

Sir priya apni final year exam se phle india aayi thi

College ka koi tour tha

Maan : toh isme khas kya hai

Sir uske baad wo kbhi college wapas nhi gyi

Maan : kyun

Sir am trying to find out more , give me some time

Maan : do din mein tumne bs yhi pata lagaya hai

Sir

Maan : mein tumhe aaj ka waqt aur deta hu

Mujhe sb kuch janana hai

And mail me other details

.

Yes sir

**********

Adi fix my meeting with Dr. Sushant and meeting Outhouse mein

hongi...

.

Ab dekhta hu geet

Tum kaise mujhse dur jaati ho

*********

Sushant, sid, priya come for meeting in khurana outhouse...

Hello Dr. Sushant

Sorry for inviting you here

Actually my daughter needs me today

She is not well

Sushant : it's ok

Priya : hum meeting kal bhi kar sakte the

Aapko mahi ke pass rhehna chaiye

Usse kya huya hai waise

Maan : fever hai

Now she sleeping

Already I postponed your meeting two days

Work mein delay nhi hona chaiye

Now let's start meeting

********

Sasha start presentation, sushant & sid carefully listen her

presentation.

But priya

Priya also try to concentrate, but not know why she feeling so

different today...

Ek ajeeb sa ehsaas ho raha hai

Kya hai ye

I can't understand

Another side maan seeing her continuously, notice her

expressions.

He feels, she is little disturbed...but why?

Maahi ke baare mein jaanke

Ya khi meri wajh se

Par kyun geet

We love each other na

Fir kyun tum mujhe nhi dekh rhi

Priya held sid hand & tell something to him...

Maan not liking this, she sharing the thoughts with another one...

Before maan says, sid speaks "sorry, interrupting you

Priya not feeling good"

Maan : Mr. sid

Ye baat wo khud bhi kh sakti hai

Sasha held MK hand & announce the small break.

Sasha : let's have lunch, then we continue the meeting

All move outside from hall for lunch, now only maan , sasha, adi

left.

Adi : sir she is not our geet

Sasha : yes Mk

Aapne dekha na

Usne humari taraf dekha tak nhi

Ydi wo humari geet hoti

Toh kya aapse durr rhti

Maahi se dur rhti

Maan : leave

Sasha : Mk

Maan : adi , sasha

Leave me alone

************

Sushant : priya bte tum thik ho

Priya : yes dad

Pata nhi ek ajeeb si bechani ho rhi hai

Koi ehsaas hai

Jo mein smjh nhi paa rhi

Am feeling

Koi cheez mujhe khich rhi hai

Par kya hai wo

Mein nhi jaan paa rhi dad

Sushant : relax priya beta

Ye bs environment change ki wajh se ho raha hai

Aur kuch nhi

Priya : hmm

Sid : priya tum jaake lunch kro phle

Fir medicine bhi leni hai

Hum dono abhi aate hai

.

Sid : uncle ridz shit hi

Hume priya ko yaha nhi lana chaiye tha

Wo kitni pareshaan hai

Sushant : sid

Thodi se pareshaani ydi priya ko

Uski nightmares se bahar nikal de

Toh kuch bura nhi hai

Ye hume bhut phle krna chaiye tha sayad

Par koi nhi

Sid : par uncle

Sushant : sid lets go inside

*******

Priya beta

Tumne lunch start nhi kiya

Priya : dad mein bs do minute mein aayi

********

Priya : mahi kaisi hongi

I want to meet her

Mr. khurana

Whi mujhe mahi se mila sakte hai

Priya ask about Maan from servant & after knowing his where

about she go towards garden area.

.

Priya : Mr. khurana

Sorry to disturb you

Hearing her voice, he turns to see her, but he not liking she

addressing him Mr. khurana nor maan...

He takes step towards her...

Priya : wo mein yaha aapse

He come so close to her & whispers near ear " tum mujhe kbhi

disturb nhi kr sakti misthy"

Priya : misthy

She takes one step back; try to maintain little distance...

Priya : mr. khurana

Mera naam misthy nhi

Priya hai

Maan : don't call me Mr. khurana firstly

Am Maan for you?

Priya : for me

Mujhe kuch smjh nhi aa raha hai

Am going

He pulls her by wrist & encircled hand around his waist...

Maan : don't go again

Mt jaayo misthy

She sees some pain in his eyes, why she feeling pain seeing him

in pain...

Maan : tum mujhse durr kyun jaa rhi ho

Kyun tumhari aankho me mujhe apne liye wo ehsaas nhi dekhte

He caressed her cheek ...

She lost in his voice & whispers his name "Maan"

Maan : ha jaan

Firse bola na mera naam

Before he hugged her, Deepak came...

Deepak : sir Maahi

Deepak also shocked to see geet in front of own.

Maan : kya huya maahi ko

Deepak

Tum bol kyun nhi rahe

Deepak : geet madam

Maan : mahi ko kya huya

Priya : mahi kaha hai

Deepak : apne room mein

Maan held priya hand & take her to khurana mansion ...

Priya not able to take more step ...

Ye kya ho raha hai mujhe

Why am not able to give name of this feeling

Ye kaisa connection hai

Maan : kya huya misthy

Tum ruk kyun gyi

Before priya says some, maahi voice interrupt both.

Maahi coming down from stairs & crying continuously...

Daadi : maahi beta

Ruko

Maahi : dadda

.

p...a.ss jaana

maan : mahi dada yaha hai

maahi sees priya here

she taking fast step from stairs...

maan : mahi beta aram se

dada yhi aa rhe hai

priya : mahi whi ruko

maahi stops in between..

now daadi notice priya

daadi : geet

priya came near to mahi & scoop her in arms...


Edited by priya_21 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
happy holi friends...

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part geet is feeling something seeing maan n hearing about mahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice ud
maan collecting info about priya
but his man gave incomplete
he get anger and told him in one
day collect all info
maan called meet at OH and geet
become restless in this place she
feeling something but can't explain
also she wants to meet mahi
maan calling hr mishty she correct
him that she is not mishty
daadi deepak also saw geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
hope geet remember her past

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