ArHi FF: An Anatomy of Angst [Complete] Interlude #1 14/Aug - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: greenteaholic

Dysania and Insomnia

She picked up a string of bright orange flowers orphaned in a lonely mantap. Her eyes scanned the area in search of her expensive earring. Lord of chaos had reigned that day when the groom and his wedding party walked out on her sister wedding. Nightmare had become a reality.

The party was mythomane of Shyam's ego and Anjali's potentate on Arnav. The shadows welcomed Arnav deep into its womb and soothed his bubbling irritation in its quiet embrace. He took a lingering sip of whiskey and wondered if this shadow was slowly becoming an anthropomorphization of his dead mother.


Honestly, I googled 5 words out of your 100.

But I got the essence. Picture me in a lounger beside Arnav embracing shadows and sipping the amber liquid. Poor Khushi!

Side note - Alcohol consumption is taboo ...amongst the middle class. People drink but pretend they don't. Where as the lower classes and upper classes drink openly.
Edited by AquaSandhya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant, amazing update.
How beautiful you have written. It's true living is luxury for them, they just have to survive.
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Posted: 10 years ago

13. Custodians of morality

They travel in two fully loaded SUVs; Arnav and Akash drove each. The sisters parted by taking different vehicle. They saw few survivors on their way. Neither vehicle stopped when people on the street waved or screamed.

"Why didn't you stop?" Khushi yelled, wide eyed.

Arnav clenched his jaw. "How do you know they won't take away our cars and supplies and leave us stranded?"

"How do you know they would?" Khushi challenged.

Arnav accelerated faster, leaving the city in its agony and whispered softly. "Because I would do that to them if it means saving us." He chuckled mirthlessly.


See what one of my favorite Youtube channels uploaded

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AgCQStTSMuk[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by greenteaholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arnav is right somehow. Everyone is trying to survive if it's they have to kill other one.
Where are they going ?
Interesting. Thanks for updating.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Stark contrast between the male primordial instinct to protect his own and the female one to nurture. Or in their case, the difference between dil and dimaag.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sigh. I need to know my Zombies more. Have absolutely no idea in that area. 😆
Some lovely bits of writing! I like how it's so..raw. All pretences stripped down. Just a struggle for survival. This is what makes it so special.

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Posted: 10 years ago
He's bloody right man, save yourself first b4 you save others. It may sound cruel but that is what survival is all about. I have to agree with another reader further up, man takes complete control of the situation without any emotional stirrings which cloud women's judgement sometimes. Divide and conquer another great strategy to ensure at least half of them will have a fighting chance. now we know why he came for her and yes I am glad he is not an infected zombie or is he RB?
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Posted: 10 years ago

14. On the road

"My sister, Anjali, was gone one morning. I searched as much as I could but..." Khushi nods. "Akash, my cousin, came in few days later." He adds.

"Payal likes him." She makes an observation.

"He is likable." He doesn't say anything further. "Easy on the pedal," he guides her while she drives for the very first time in her life.

The cut on his forehead and sprain in his shoulder was from a fight with two men guarding a petrol bunk. They were unwilling to share. Arnav didn't care.

They have been on the road for nine days now.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Those dreadful parasites, rather the dreadful bio-chemicals those parasites produce! 🤢

Also I have a tiny doubt. Though the title has Apocalypse so I presume the virus is infecting people all over the planet or is it only region specific as of now?

And though Paropkar paramo dharma, but not during a Zombie apocalypse. Certainly not. I am with Arnav for now, I'd tell those people "Next time when we meet fellas i.e if we all survive, till then Hasta la vista baby."
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Posted: 10 years ago
And now that the hero has also delivered and taken some punches and kicks, this becomes full fledged Hollywood material.

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