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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: raksha1886

awesome update👏
continue as soon as possible😊

love raksha❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

Chapter 14..

Oh priya.. oh priya..
Beautifully written!!
Loved every line...
Yeh mami ki nafrat
Waise saif is very mischevious!! Becharae zaya...
Loved every line...
What fate! What dirty trick... I ll wait... holding my heart!!
Thanks for pm...
All the best for exams chudail!!

thanks dear...
Love u
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: urvisaini

Happy New year dear !

Awesome updates

Congo for the new threads

Looking forward to the twist. ...

But I hope the trauma that you are planning is of short duration.

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

happy new year..
Thanks..
I will
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello guys..
since u all have decided me to complete this story so i will..
only three chapters left for this story to come to an end..
i hope u enjoyed till here
the next update , i have started working on it..
so hopefully update by sunday
for pm buddy me
love
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Posted: 10 years ago
hello friends..
please mujhe maaf kar dena for this short update par i am really very short of ideas..
tomorrow i will give a big one pakka..
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CHAPTER 15 A

Mehandi a part of jewellery for the bride ..every girl who is getting marriedis excited for it..for writing the name of their love on their hands..waiting for the dark red color to see how much your partner loves u..

Aliya mehndi ceremony was a simple one but was also filled with drama thanks to suraiya..

During the ceremony when mehndi was being applied to her suraiya came out of her room in kalla liwaaz

Their neighbours were also invited

Artist who was applying heena to aliya said in teasing tone "saiyaan ka naam kya hai"

This made aliya blush

Everybody laughed seeing her red blush

Ayat: arre baas karo meri di ko, bas mera hi haq hai

Saying this she elbowed aliya making her blush

The hall was filled with laughter till suraiya passed from nearby

Neighbour to suraiiya: arrey bhabhi ji aaye na..mehndi lagaye

Aliya smiled and shifted a littleso that suraiiya could sit by her side

Suraiya: nahi..woh mein jaada der baith nahi sakti..i have pain in spinal cord ..

She said in a taunting tone

By saying this she left

Aliya who is sensitive by heart, a tear made its way from her eye and before it could fall ayat qucikly catched it

Ayat: nahi appi yeh aason bahoot precious hai..aaj aap nahi royegi

Aliya: aare bhudho eye mein kuch chala gaya tha

Ayat: aap tho ese bol rahi hai jaise i don't know the real thing

She side hugged her

Aliya: bas bas senti na hoo..mehndi kharab hojayegi

Ayat: oops sorry

After the ceremony she waited for heena to dry up to see the color

And her wait turned out to be beautiful as she wanted..it was deep red color

She was very happy seeing it

Ayat: appi zaara mehndi toh dikhana

Aliya: yeh dekho

Aliya showed ayat her mehndi

Ayat: oh ho appi .. itni red.. abb pata chala apke unn dino red red lips ke raaz

She smirked while aliya was completly shocked

Aliya blushed heavily remembring the kiss

Ayat: hoye hoye itna blush

Aliya: toh jayegi yaa mami ko bulaon

Ayat: acha acha mein jaati hoon

Ayat left leaving behind a smiling aliya

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Aliya: allah maine kabhi bhi aapse kuch nahi manga..kabhi bhi apse shikayat nahi ki..kabhi bhi aapse iss baat pe nahi roothi ki aapne mere ammi abbu ko mujhse chin liya par allah meri inn kkhusiyoon ko nazaar na lagne dena

Main bas yahi dua karti hoon bas allah..app meri dua qubool kijiye..main nikkah ke baad apke dargah zain ke saath chadar chadne zaroor aooongi

She sent a quick prayer to allah tallah and slept

...

Sneak peak for 2morrow update: zaya sangeet and zain and aliya dance

Hope u all liked it..

Love priya


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Posted: 10 years ago
Update finallly! 😛
Resss 😃 *innocent face *
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful chapter
loved it
oh so next zaya dance cmng up
excited 4 it
do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really amazing ...priyu
Cant wait for da next .
Thanks for da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Priya amazing update
Can't wait for next part.
Luv
Zayahangover
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update
Loved it
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

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