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Important Dialogues:

1. "Ammi, abbu, I was supposed to come back to New York 4m Paris next week. How I am in hospital dat also in India?" asked Zoya shocking her parents n the nurses.

2. Asad wipes his tears n says wid determination, "I don't how much different u will be but I will again make u fall in love wid me. It will be tough for me but I will face all d challenges.

Part 39

Asad's eyes opened n he saw Badi Bi, Ayaan, Zahira n Anwar awake. He lukd at his watched n saw d time 7am. Ayaan saw him woke up.

"Bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

"How is Zoya?" asked Asad.

"She is still consciousness. An hour ago, d doctors said dat if she remains unconscious like dis for some more hours then she will go in coma," replied Ayaan.

Asad is shocked on hearing dis.

"Dat Tanveer does not knows wat a big mistake she did," said Asad in anger.

Just then, Asad got a call 4m unknown number.

"Hello," said Asad.

"Hello Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan, I am d manager of Ruby Hotel. Ur wife Zoya Ahmed Khan's car was parked in our parking 4m last night n she was missing. We waited for d owner of d car till d morning. We then enquired abt her number n came to know dat d car belongs to ur wife. All d car tires r punctured," said d manager of Ruby Hotel.

Asad was shocked at d information.

"Thanks for informing me abt dis. Plz, call d mechanics to take d car to garage for repairing," said Asad.

"Okay Sir," said d manager n hung up.

"Bhaijaan, who was it?" asked Ayaan.

"He was d manager of Ruby Hotel. Zoya had gone to d hotel n all her car tires r punctured," replied Asad, "Wen Zoya may have gone inside d hotel to luk for me, Tanveer n her goons wud have punctured her tires so dat she cud not escape. Tanveer can't fight wid Zoya alone as Zoya is a black belt in karate so d goons wud have attacked her then Zoya wud have fought back n ran to save herself. Dat godown is not so far 4m d hotel. So, she may have hid there to save herself. But Tanveer n her goons wud have found out Zoya. Then they wud have again attacked her. Cuz of dat Tanveer, Zoya is in dis state."

Asad got up n saw Zoya thru d round seeing glass on d door. His eyes became moist on seeing his Zoya unconscious wearing an oxygen mask. He got back to his seat.

"Dat bitch has not done right in doing dis to my daughter," said Zahira in anger.

"She is a very cheap woman who cud go any lengths to get wat she wants," said Ayaan.

Others too woke up.

Scene shifts inside Zoya's room. Zoya opened her eyes n sat up. She luks around n luks clueless on how she landed in d hospital. She lukd at the 2 nurses.

"Excuse me, how am I here?" asked Zoya, "U both luk Indian. Where am I?"

"U were in critical state. And u r in India," replied d nurse.

"How come I am in India?" asked Zoya, "I was supposed to be in Paris."

D nurses got shocked.

"Wait, I will call ur parents," replied another nurse.

D nurse comes.

"Only Zoya's parents plz come inside. Zoya has regained consciousness but she is talking sumthn weird. Plz, come n talk wid her abt d problem," said d nurse.

All r happy dat Zoya has regained consciousness.

"Wat problem, doctor?" asked Zameer.

"Dat u both have to talk wid ur daughter," replied d nurse.

Zameer n Zahira went inside wid d nurse. Zameer n Zahira saw Zoya sitting on d bed lukn lost. They went n sat before her.

"Zoya beta, how r u feeling?" asked Zahira wid concern.

"Ammi, abbu, I was supposed to come back to New York 4m Paris next week. How I am in hospital dat also in India?" asked Zoya shocking her parents n the nurses.

"I have to call d doctor," said one nurse.

She went out n came wid dat female doctor in some time. D nurses n Zoya's parents explained d matter to Zoya. D doctor came near Zoya to see d problem.

"Zoya, wat is d present month n year right now?" asked d doctor.

"Its April 2012," replied Zoya.

"Wat do u remember last?" asked d doctor.

"I remember shopping wid my friends in d mall in Paris on 2nd April n then cumn back home in d evening n taking a little rest. After dat, I don't remember anything. I don't know how I landed in d hospital. I don't know how I am in India in d 1st place," replied Zoya.

All r shocked wid Zoya's replies.

Scene shifts outside Zoya's room. All r waiting to know wats d matter wid Zoya. D female doctor comes out.

"I am sorry to say all of u dat Zoya is suffering 4m Retrograde Amnesia. She has no memory of past one year," said d doctor.

All especially Asad r shocked hearing dis.

"Wat?" asked Asad shockingly, "Dat means Zoya does not remembers me n my family cuz she knows us 4m only 5 months. How can she get cured, Dr. Jaya?"

"Zoya needs a lot of care in dis condition. It may take time for her to recover like it can take days, months or even years to regain her lost memory. U all sud try to make her remember d moments she spend in those times slowly by slowly. But u all sud not stress her too much as it can make her condition worse," replied Doctor Jaya.

"Why Allah is doing dis to me? Ain't I have been punished enough?" asked Asad sadly.

"Asad, we r all there na. We will try our best," replied Dilshad.

"I and my family can't even come before her for some time as she will not recognize us," said Asad disappointedly.

"Mr. Khan, u all sud stay away 4m Zoya for a little time. I think 2 weeks will be better. Then after she recovers a little 4m her injury her family can tell her abt her marriage. But u all can talk abt her everyday wid her family widout her knowledge," said Dr. Jaya.

"2 weeks?" asked Asad shockingly.

"I understand ur sorrow dats why I have said as less time as possible, Mr. Khan. Dats for ur wife's well-being only," said Dr. Jaya.

"Doctor is saying right, Asad. We can't take Zoya wid us right now. She needs some time to know some of d things dat happened in her life in d last 1 year," said Rashid.

"I agree wid d doctor. We can't take Zoya wid us for 2 weeks wen she don't even knows me n my family," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, u can still go n see her everyday wen she will be sleeping," said Ayaan.

"U all can ask us abt her everyday cuz she is a part of ur family too," said Zeenat.

"Anwar, Zeenat, atleast u both can go n see her," said Dilshad.

Anwar n Zeenat goes inside wid d doctor.

Scene shifts to SM. GaZiaRin r in GaZia's room.

"Zoya is out of danger. Even she died we wud not have gotten her property. D lawyer in New York said dat there were some more clause which we did not knew. D clauses were dat if Zoya dies then dat property will go to d trust. If Zoya wants to transfer d property to anyone, her husband also has to approve for it," said Gaffur.

"Wat?" asked Razia shockingly, "Dat girl came of no use."

Flashback for only the readers: A day after Zoya falls sick n Ayaan revealed as Asad's real brother, Asad, Zoya, Dilshad n Najma discuss abt dealing wid Zoya's dat part of d property issue for which GaZiaRin tried to kill her.

"We need to talk wid d lawyers in New York n tell them to tell lie abt more clauses in d will so dat wen any of these 3 talk abt d will, they will be told lies abt some more clauses. Wat sud be d clauses?" asked Asad.

"D clauses sud be dat if I die then dat property will go to d trust n if I need to transfer d property to anyone then my husband's approval will also be needed," replied Zoya.

"Zoya, ye property tumhaare liye hai," said Asad.

"It does not matters, Asad. Tum mere pati ho. Isliye, ye property tumhaara bhi hai. By d way, these 3 will be shocked even to think abt ur approval," said Zoya.

Dilshad, Najma n Asad r happy hearing wat Zoya said.

"Okay, ur idea will be used," said Asad. :End of the flashback

"We can't even kill her. Wen she regains consciousness then she will tell to everyone wat we did wid her," said Shirin shockingly.

GaZia r also shocked.

Scene shifts to d hospital.

"How will we tell Najma abt dis?" asked Dilshad worriedly, "She will be very sad."

They went to d window of Zoya's room. They saw her talking to her family.

"I can't believe I am in India in dis way," said Zoya.

"Zoya beta, u lost ur one year's memory. Its April 3 2013," said Zameer.

"Wat? U mean Retrograde Amnesia?" asked Zoya shockingly, "Its not true. I can't remember my entire one year. Wat all happened wid me?"

"Zoya, u need rest," replied Zeenat, "We will answer all ur questions slowly by slowly. If we tell ueverything now only then ur condition will become worse."

"Wats more worse than losing my one year's memory right now?" asked Zoya.

"Zoya, u stop talking all dis. U sud eat sumthn now," replied Anwar.

"Wen did I straightened my hair?" asked Zoya shockingly lukn at her hair.

"U straightened ur hair 10 months ago wen u decided to go back to ur old hairstyle of a little longer n straight hair widout any red streaks," replied Zeenat.

"Dunno why I changed it back. I will again go back to my curly look," said Zoya.

"I think u sud have food n rest instead of talking abt ur hairstyle," said Zahira.

"Luk at her condition, Asad. Now u understood na why she needs to be away 4m us for some time," said Dilshad.

"Its too sad dat we all can't even go n meet her," said Asad sadly.

"She even don't know dat she is married," said Rashid.

"I sud call Najma n tell her everything," said Ayaan.

Scene shifts to SM. All were having breakfast. Najma, Nikhat, Nuzhat n Humeira were reluctantly having their breakfast as Dilshad told them in d morning to have their breakfast while GaZiaRin were eating normally. Najma gets a call 4m Ayaan.

"Hello," said Najma.

"Najma, Zoya has regained consciousness but she has suffered 4m Retrograde Amnesia. She lost her memory of one year dat is she don't remember us," said Ayaan.

Najma was shocked n sad.

"Bhaijaan, dis can't be true. Zoya bhabhi can't forget us," said Najma wid tears in her eyes.

Others r shocked to see her crying.

"Najma, I know dat u and Zoya were very close but dis is only d truth. She will live wid her family for 2 weeks till her family tells her abt her marriage," said Ayaan.

"I can't believe dis, bhaijaan. Zoya has to become alright soon," said Najma.

"We all want d same, Najma. U all take care," said Ayaan n hung up.

"Wat happened, baaji?" asked Nuzhat worriedly.

"Zoya bhabhi has regained consciousness but she forgot her one year memory. She has suffered 4m Retrograde Amnesia," replied Najma.

Nuzhat, Nikhat n Humeira r shocked while GaZiaRin gets happy. GaZiaRin r relieved dat Zoya can't remember her one year so she can't tell wat they did to her.

"Dis can't happen. Asad bhaijaan may be so shattered," said Nikhat.

"Whoever did all dis to Zoya, Allah will punish them in a very severe way cuz whoever did dat to Zoya r not humans. They r monsters," said Humeira in a serious tone.

GaZiaRin r shocked to hear wat she said.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. Zoya is eating food.

"I don't want to live in d hospital. I want to go home," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u will be discharged in d afternoon," said Zeenat.

Asad was still watching 4m d window while others were sitting. Dilshad came to Asad.

"We sud go home now. They will take care of her," said Dilshad.

"I will wait till d afternoon till Zoya is discharged," said Asad.

"Oka but now eat sumthn. See, Zoya is also eating," said Dilshad.

"Okay ammi. U all also eat wid me," said Asad.

Anwar n Zeenat went home as Alisha n Zain were only wid servants 4m d night.

In d afternoon, Zoya gets up after resting. Anwar n Zeenat returned after some time.

"Zoya, have ur lunch. After dat, we will go home," said Anwar.

"I brought a cloth for u to change before leaving," said Zeenat.

Asad remained sitting outside d room. In between, he tuk details 4m d doctor for Zoya's medicines along wid her family. He lukd at her 4m d window 4m time to time. Zameer n Zahira came wid d food for themselves n Asad. They saw Asad still there.

"Asad beta, have lunch," said Zahira.

"Okay ammi," said Asad.

Zameer gave Asad's food to him. They went inside n gave foods to Zoya, Zeenat n Anwar. They came back outside to give company to Asad as he was alone.

"U both sud eat wid Zoya," said Asad.

"Anwar n Zeenat r there wid Zoya but u r sitting alone here. U r also suffering a lot due to Zoya's condition," said Zameer.

"Take very good care of Zoya. Let us know abt her everyday," said Asad.

"We know dat it will be hard for u to live widout Zoya but its just a matter of 2 weeks. Then Zoya will be back wid u. U need to start wid friendship wid her. She was different in some ways till a year ago but still she was a very nice girl like always," said Zahira.

"U all have to hide her cell phone n I-Pad for 2 weeks till she comes back to ume so dat she does not comes to know abt some important things all of a sudden," said Asad.

"U r right. Dis is d time for her rest as much a possible cuz she is very weak," said Zahira.

After lunch, Zoya got dressed in d white t-shirt n blue jeans dat Zeenat brought for her. She came out wid her family. Asad saw her while hiding behind a wall. Zoya n her family then went in Anwar's car. Asad too went in his car after Anwar's car drove away.

Scene shifts to FM. Zoya comes to d house wid her family.

"Afsana khala, bring tea for us," said Zeenat.

Alisha n Zain saw Zoya's condition n started crying. Zoya saw them crying n rushed to them before d couch. She kneeled down n touched both of their shoulders wid love.

"Alisha, Zain, stop crying," said Zoya.

"Khala, u have got so much wounds n bandages," said Alisha while crying.

"U r not alright, khala," said Zain while crying.

"I am alright. Stop crying, my bacchas. Wen I left u all for Paris, u both cud hardly talk but now u both have grown so much. Smile for me now," said Zoya wid a smile.

Zoya wiped their tears. Alisha n Zain managed to smile a little.

"Dats like my good bacchas," said Zoya wid a smile.

She kissed both of them. They also kissed her back. Zeenat went a little far n informed Asad in a low voice so dat Zoya cud not hear dat they have reached home.

"Khala, we all have shifted here so we all will live here only," said Alisha.

"Dats very nice," said Zoya wid a smile.

She knew a year ago dat they will shift in Bhopal after a year. Zameer, Zahira, Anwar n Zeenat did not wanted their convo to go on for longer to avoid Alisha n Zain blurting abt Zoya's husband dat is their khalu.

"Zoya, u go to ur room n freshen up. Then I come n give u sponge bath along wid bringing ur tea," said Zeenat.

"Okay aapi," said Zoya n went inside.

Zameer, Zahira, Anwar n Zeenat came near d kids n explained them not to tell Zoya abt her husband n their khalu till they tell them. Alisha n Zain agreed after some explanations given to them by 4 of them widout scaring them too much.

Scene shifts to Asad's room. He has bathed n changed his clothes. He goes near his n Zoya's bedside table n picks up their wedding photo frame(2nd wedding) which was kept there. He caresses his hand on d photo frame n kisses Zoya's photo.

"Zoya, I am already missing you a lot. U have forgotten me n others," said Asad wid tears falling on d photo frame.

He wipes his tears n says wid determination, "I don't know how much different u will be but I will again make u fall in love wid me. It will be tough for me but I will face all d challenges.

Precap: #Asad sees curly n red streaked hair Zoya in d market n flirts wid her. Zoya scolds him n threatens to beat him wid her shoes if he ever comes in front of her.

#At night, Zoya gets to know d truth of her marriage. Next day, her family takes Zoya to Asad's house to live there. Zoya is shocked to know who her husband is.


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Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Superb, magnificently powerful, brilliantly executed!
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A/N: One more promo as a surprise after a depressing part😊.


Promo 15: Asad is shocked with a different Zoya

Asad take Zoya to his room. Zoya is shocked to see d whole room in a mess wid many things here n there on d floor, bed n couch.

"Yaha koi bacha rehta hai kya?" asked Zoya.

"Zoya, we r only married for 4 months n we met only 5 months ago. To shaadi se pehle bhi kuch kiya ho jisse baccha ho fir bhi itni jaldi humaara baccha nahi ho sakta hai," replied Asad wid a laugh.

"U fool, besharam kahin ka. I am not talking abt our kid but any kid dat lives in d house," said Zoya annoyingly whacking his head.

"No kids lives here," said Asad.

"Then who messed d room?" asked Zoya.

Zoya started clearing out d mess 4m d sofa, couch n some little things dat comes in her way. She keeps those things in d corner of d room n table. Asad is shocked wid her question. He messed it hoping dat Zoya will remember sumthn on how she changed a lot 4m 9-10 months even messing around things. He did not liked her doing even a little work like dis dat also wen she just returned. But he was glad dat she is not OCD like he was earlier.

"I did it," replied Asad.

"Wat?" asked Zoya shockingly, "U r such a grown up man n also a married but u still mess around things. U guys r like dis only who mess around things even after growing up."

He wanted to retort to her on how she was like 4m 9-10 moths till before their 1st marriage but dis was not d right time. Wat else he has to see of dis different Zoya?

In d afternoon, all r in d hall.

"Asad, did u had any other girl in ur life before me?" asked Zoya, "Look, I don't mind if u had any other girl in ur life before or u even slept wid her but wat matters to me dat right now only I am in ur life. We have just met so we sud know more abt each other."

All were shocked wid her question n even her bold line of Asad sleeping wid another girl.

"No Zoya, there was no other girl before u," replied Asad.

"Even I had no other boy in my life before u but my family says dat I was engaged to marry wid a guy named Akram but I ran 4m my wedding cuz I felt dat he was not a nice guy as I found his relatives n friends as goons. His relatives n friends even ran after me to force to marry dat bas***d but they failed to catch me. Later, me n my family broke dat alliance cuz we did not wanted me to get married wid dat goon. Don't know who d hell was dat Akram. I told u abt me. I never made any boyfriend in school n college cuz I did not wanted to fall in love. I have many guy friends but never had a boyfriend. Luks like u too never had a girlfriend before me. So, we have dis thing in common," said Zoya.

Asad was again shocked dat she told him abt her after asking him so dat they both know whether there was someone else in their life before each other.

"I can't believe I started wearing short clothes, feminine tops, skirts, salwar-kameez n even sarees. I don't have problems wid short clothes but I am comfortable in only these tomboyish clothes. Among short clothes, I wear only casual n nightie shorts. I wear femine clothes very less. I saw in my rooms dat there r some photos of me n Asad where I wore all types of clothes. In some clothes, my clothes r micro-mini dat I hardly wore in New York. But in dis only me n Najma wear modern clothes," said Zoya.

"Zoya, all girls have choices na. Only u and Najma like to wear modern clothes," said Asad.

"Well, I am going to call my family n tell them dat Asad had no other girl before marrying me," said Zoya.

Asad got embarrassed while Dilshad, Najma n Ayaan laughed silently at him. Before Zoya cud get up, Asad spoke to stop her.

"Zoya, Zoya, Zoya, ur family already knows abt it. Now u will ask dat why did not they told u. For dat, I have answer. They knew dat u will have a talk wid me regarding dis so they thought dat rather than them teln it will be better if we both have a talk," said Asad.

"Ohh," said Zoya making Asad sigh in relief.

At night, Zoya is sleeping on d couch wen Asad enters.

"Zoya, why r u sleeping on d couch?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Asad, I am sorry. I came n just slept on d bed dat also in ur room. Dunno wat happened to me? I sud not have slept on d bed. Its ur bed na," said Zoya.

"Zoya, its not my but our room. U r my wife. Did u forgot so soon?" asked Asad, "Now go on d bed n let me sleep on d couch."

"Okay then now u sleep on d bed. I will sleep on d couch. We will take turns of sleeping on d bed n on d couch. I have already told u dat I need time before we both sleep 2gthr on d bed. Its awkward for me now as we have just met. I have even arranged d pillows n blanket properly taaki tum ye na kaho ki maine sone k baad bistar thik nahi kiya," replied Zoya.

Asad was shocked wid her reply. She was so different. After their 1st marriage, Zoya has changed herself in many ways becumn like her old self of wat she was till a year ago like not messing things around, eating properly, not being so much of a chatterbox till its okay but dis Zoya is a lot more different than dat. How he will handle dis Zoya? She reminds him a little of his earlier self but still she is not bad n unpleasant like he was earlier.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 10 years ago
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Hii Juhi... 😊
Thanx for the P.M... 😛
Well written & good part... 👏 ⭐️
Come to think of it...this twist have really given a new angle and direction to the story...and iam liking it... 😃
Don't mind me asking , I was wondering...that you could have ended this story with Zoya's brutal Accident...like you did with LYWOCMP...and then come again with A Season 2 and then it will have ASYA new love story & Zoya's revenge...just thinking like that.. 😳
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Thanks for the pm...Nice update though sad that she has forgotten everything!
Well, opportunity to romance again :-)
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Nice update
Feels so sad for Asad
He has to suffer again
Love the clause put into zoya will
Continue soon
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Superb part
Zoya lost her memory that's sad
Poor asad he can't meet zoya
all members are sad but that gaaziarin hate them
Wow asya going to meet in next part
Excited for it
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Wow promo in in surprise
Zoya is so changed after accident
Excited for next part
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awsome
make zoya soon remember everything
asad misses zoya so much
update soon
thanks for update and also pm

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