ArHi FF: An Anatomy of Angst [Complete] Interlude #1 14/Aug - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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its really amazing how u play with words and leave such effects . just loved your writing
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Originally posted by: Raila1014

But it is going to be survival of the fittest now, physically and mentally too. People will either be depressed and give up or lose their humane side while trying to survive. On a positive note, they will need to reproduce quickly, so you gonna get Raizada in touch with the Blood stained Gupta girl soon? Could not resist this one, sorry.



:-) You will know in 30 minutes!
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08. Him and Her

She is clutching a large pack of toothpaste when he sees her across the aisle. His legs take him there, the stuff in his cart rattling in symphony.

"You should stock batteries too." He winces at the inanity of it. Her eyes catalogs his cart.

"And medicine," she replies. "Are we paranoid?" She asks.

"Are we insane?" He counters.

"Maybe both." She wonders.

"Perhaps not enough." He shrugs.

"Maybe everything is indeed alright." She hopes.

"Maybe it's the end as we know it." He smiles.

"Arnav." He says.

"Khushi." She replies.

They walk away after exchanging address and phone numbers.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's the end of the world as we know it - yeah R.E.M.
Love the crossing of their paths once more. Somehow out of grieving, they are into survival mode now as they grab everything they can get their hands on. Laughed at the battery one as I have one obsessive hubby for those stupid batteries. But they come in handy. They exchanged info. Would you look at how quickly that happened? Something about surviving a nightmare makes you grasp each moment as they occur.
I am still awaiting the next calamity.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am afraid of what happen next.
But they meet again, glad they exchange numbers and address this time.
Let's see where time will take them.
Brilliant update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh damn...An epidemic...! So many deaths.
I love how you have described in a few words what each person is feeling. Anjali has no tears left, Arnav is trying to get involved in mundane tasks, Khushi is preparing for the worst while Payal is still trying to come to terms with things, I guess.

I don't know how accurate it is but here, it does seem Nietzsche was right, "What doesn't kill you, makes you stronger."

I love how they meet again and how different the meeting is. In their earlier encounter they shared grief and pain. Here, there is an underlying acceptance of the tragedy; they are just trying to figure out, what comes next and how to deal with it...

P.S.: I like the pseudonym for the story :D
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It gives the feeling that the worst is over and new beginnings are going to be made
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A tale vivid and evocative her pen yields,
while wordy superfluity chucked to oblivion weeps.



(Thats summing up in 15 words, what a treasure I hit today)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Also, caramel, chocolate, Bournvita, whisky, brandy, honey and now cinnamon. Arnav officially owns the most delicious eyes. 😆

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