ArHi FF: An Anatomy of Angst [Complete] Interlude #1 14/Aug - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Raila1014


Do you know why I love your stories? For this exact reason, we cannot expect the expected with you. Since you asked, here's what my crazy mind came up with, there was a natural disaster (earthquake, disease, ...) which did not discriminate between rich and poor. Hence he lost and she lost. I think they will be losing more and they will be the only 2 left. Ok I am not serious about them being the only 2 left but there will be hope at the end of the tunnel, no? Maybe not, may be they will all die and this will be the end . .



Not too badly done! Its bit of that and more of something else. Hang around for 30 minutes and you shall know a little more than yesterday!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: greenteaholic



Not too badly done! Its bit of that and more of something else. Hang around for 30 minutes and you shall know a little more than yesterday!


For you, I'll hit the snooze button on bedtime. Bring it on.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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06. Pillaging of Survivals

The old and the very young die first; even those who were still in womb.

Anjali's breathing becomes little easier when she hears it was nature redefining the rules for its inhabitants. Arnav buys every possible flower and vegetable seeds available. Anjali stocks water.

Payal ponders if life is really a gift. There are fewer people now. Many are at home, grieving. At the store, Khushi scoops packets of all types of pulses.

The world had changed in a span of two weeks. They will realize days later that it was only the first wave. Worst was yet to come.


Note: I will start updating in the evenings from today onwards.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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They are dying of famine? Is this why the grains and seeds are being scooped up? To plant for the future. Anjali and arnav are working as a team whereas Kushi is all by herself while Payal muses on life. Worst is yet to come is scary. Sounds like Apocalypse now. Been a long day for me, I am off to bed.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's so scary to even think of Apocalypse.
Will they survive?
Everyone is trying to live with what ever they left. I am scared for them.

Too good.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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07. Beginning of end

It's three weeks since the death of old and new. The news anchor says it was an airborne virus. And that it's all over now. No new deaths were reported because there were no old or a child left. She hasn't seen anyone under ten or over fifty on the street.

She finds nature's way of revolting truly repulsive; no old to guide and no young to hope for. It was Mother Nature saying a giant "f**k you" to humanity.

People worry. They aren't fully panicking.

Payal calls Khushi paranoid. A neighbor aunty says the grief has turned her insane.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice format! Actually very challenging one... and i see u hv already mastered it.
would love to read further :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's so terrifying to even think that all old and young one had died. Mother Nature can teach lesson in her own way to people for meddling with her.
Who else will not go insane in such condition.
Brilliant update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Who wouldn't go insane in such dire circumstances...


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Posted: 10 years ago
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But it is going to be survival of the fittest now, physically and mentally too. People will either be depressed and give up or lose their humane side while trying to survive. On a positive note, they will need to reproduce quickly, so you gonna get Raizada in touch with the Blood stained Gupta girl soon? Could not resist this one, sorry.

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