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ishq2051

@ishq2051

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey...

The prologue was very interesting and attractive..

Loved the first chapter...

I think the doc will tell that the baby is a girl and he shud abort her..

And that is why he'll start hitting the doc...

Harshu-sanyu u are doing an amazing and fab work...

Keep going girls...

And haan update sooonish..

Lots of love...

P.s:do i have to tell u to pm me??

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ishq2051
Hey...
The prologue was very interesting and attractive..
Loved the first chapter...
I think the doc will tell that the baby is a girl and he shud abort her..
And that is why he'll start hitting the doc...
Harshu-sanyu u are doing an amazing and fab work...
Keep going girls...
And haan update sooonish..
Lots of love...

P.s:do i have to tell u to pm me??

hahaha no

im gonna send u a request now accept kr lena lol

aapko sab ko yesa kyun lagata hain k sanyu is pregnant!

jo bhi hain, nxt chap mein apko pata chal jaega

agla chap jaldhi post hoga

spell bee k state level thi jo aaj khatam ho gyi...ab type nearly ho chuka hain, will post ASAP

ab main pm kr dungi

par ek shart par

yese hi lambe wale comments karte rehna lo!

lots of luv

harshu-sanyu

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SADDAHAQFAB

@SADDAHAQFAB

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ishq2051
Hey...
The prologue was very interesting and attractive..
Loved the first chapter...
I think the doc will tell that the baby is a girl and he shud abort her..
And that is why he'll start hitting the doc...
Harshu-sanyu u are doing an amazing and fab work...
Keep going girls...
And haan update sooonish..
Lots of love...

P.s:do i have to tell u to pm me??

thank u!

what is ur name but??

and can v call u dii??

coz every1 here is older thn us

love

harshu

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SADDAHAQFAB

@SADDAHAQFAB

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: -Glitz-
cute lil SanDhir moments
N end is scary

yeppp *popps the p*

n thanx

love,

harshu-sanyu

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Hellow ji!!

Me, sanyu, aka the laziest updater ever, is back with an update!!Plus, today, i have some dedications! *rubs hands in glee*Owkaie, so this chapter is dedicated to VRINDA DII( vrinda65) and @ Ishq2015 ( u didnt tell me ur name!)And thats coz their so excellent brains threw up such a wonderful guess tht i dont even need 2 updatr nowDUHbut i will anywayz!

sorry 4 d delay, and to make up, here i am with a LAMBA UPDATE!!!

so here goesCHAPTER#2:RECAP: Sandhir go for a movie. Sanyu faints. Rd takes her to a very down-market doc. Nurse says that she has bad news.AB, AAGEY-"Aapko doc saab bataenge".Randhir, by now, was very scared. Scared of the so called bad news. He followed the nurse inyo the cabin, in a trance-like state. Inside the shabby cabin lay sanyu on the examining bed, still asleep. The doc sat at the table and signalled rd 2 take the chair opposite to him."Mr. Randhir singh shekhavat" he spoke. "Aapke liye ek buri khabar hain" Randhir stared at the doc, the fear in his eyes quite evident. Finally, after what seemed an eon, the doc continued."Mr Shekhavat, aapki wife pregnant hain."Randbir's face lit up with an inexplicable joy. He pinched himself to make sure he wasnt dreaming. But why, then, did he say 'bad news'?? Was ...was it a complicated pregnancy?? Was there any chance that Sanyu might get hurt?? Numerous such questions ran through his mind, and he looked at the doc, just as blankly as before.The doc,by then, was trying to read his face and decide whether to tell himthat blank look introduced itself as sadness to the doc, and he continued" Buri khabar toh yeh hain, ki aapki patni ke kokh(womb) mein ek ladki hain.Now rd was on the 7th heaven of delight. He nearly couldnt believe thay another princess was gonna enter his life. But he was still confused about the bad news part.the doc, removing the last scrap of confusion, said"Magar aap chinta mat kijiye. Jyese yeh ladki apke patni ke kokh me ayi hain, wese hi nikal denge. Aap chahe toh apki patni ko pata tak nhi chalega. Aap as rokda(cash) tayar rakho"Randhir got the picture now. Not only had the doc revealed the sex of the foetus, but was also suggestingabortion. This was too much 4 him. "How dare he" rd thought " mere bacchi ko marega yeh!"Randhir being randhir, anger was in his blood. And now,without sanyukta to control him and calm him down, he was bound to go berserk.He got up from his seat and aimed a carefull blow at the doc.The doc, now thoroughly confused, got up and looked at him angrily."Tum meri beti ko marne ke baareme soch v kyese sakte ho!!? Itni ghatiya soch kuese ho sakti hain kisiki!" Randhir said, punching the doc with bloodshot eyes.Suddenly, a sound of sum1 crying penetrated the (rather one sided) fightthey both looked around to c sanyu crying.

SANYU'S POV-

I opened my eyes to find myself in a strange room and a strange bed. I believed i had fainted. I Wasn't scared though, coz even though i cudnt c him, i felt randhir's presence sumwhere around me. Then, all of a sudden, i heard him shout. I sat up. I was already feeling weak, and now, seeing randhir so hyper, i got really scared. I started crying badly

END OF POV

Seeing sanyu crying so hysterically, Randhir got worried. He let go tje doc's collar amd rushed to Sanyu. As he came near, she sat up properly and hugged him tight. He held her trembling body in his arms as he drew patterns on her back and tried to get her calm

"sanyu...sanyu kya hua?? Sanyu tum theek ho?? Kya hua batao mujhe!"

" T..tum dono lad kyu rahe ho? Kyun maar rhe ho issey tum?" she said, still hysterical

"shh...sanyu its okay...shant ho jao...sanyu plz chup ho jao. Kuch nhi karunga main, ok?(wipes her tears with his hand) Ghar chalo ab. Tumhe kuch batana hain"

He felt a hand resting on his shoulder. He turned around n saw the doc

"Aap plz do min bahar ayenge?" he said

Randhir went out with him.

"Kya hain?? Kyun bulaya mujhe yese??"

The doc started his story

PRECAP: The doctor's PAST

OK, i end the torture here

i was gonna post more but as m doing this on the mobile, it is getting exhausting. It takes a lot of hardwork to type all this on a mobile, plz comment

INCASE V DONT GET MORE THAN 20 COMMENTS, THIS FIC WILL BE DISCONTINUED

Hope that scares u

And 'res' is not a comment

Nor are one liners

Baaki u all r smart enough

Bonn ane

Edited by -MysticAura- - 9 years ago

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Tamanna

@Angel__Tamanna

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Res 🤣

Unress
First of all toh sholly for late unress
but m bhulakad right

Actully after reading this part,my anher is increasing towards these kind of people (Doctor) aise logon ko to imputent paida hpna chahiye,jo hamari society ko apni.ghatia soch se ganda karte hai 😡

Coming on update, it was awsm chotu
bohat courage chahiye ek ladki ko aisa likhne mein 😆 Ssly yaar

Update soon
thank u yaad dilwane k liye

p.s- forum elections mein sada adda party ko hi vote karna chotu .. Its ur sister's party na 😆

Edited by Angel__Tamanna - 10 years ago

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ishq2051

@ishq2051

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Hey...

U dedicated this chapter to me...

Yayyy...

N i am first one to comment...*dancing in happiness *(ignore the res na)

Loved the chapter...

And oh god??Ur pm karne ka stule is so damn funny yaar...

Even if u wud have written chap 2 hum sabh zaroor kholte yaar...

Update sooonish,

N btw im ananya..

Lots of love

Ps:see im smart..

Ask y??

Because u told not to comment in one lines n i did not🤣

And btw its ishq2051 not ishq2015

Edited by ishq2051 - 10 years ago

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ishq2051

@ishq2051

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Keep dedicating chapters to me n keep getting long comments from me...

I know im rishwating u...but cant help it u know...mein paida hi badmaash hui thi u know...

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Sanyukta

@Mystic_Aura

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ishq2051
Hey...
U dedicated this chapter to me...
Yayyy...
N i am first one to comment...*dancing in happiness *(ignore the res na)
Loved the chapter...
And oh god??Ur pm karne ka stule is so damn funny yaar...
Even if u wud have written chap 2 hum sabh zaroor kholte yaar...
Update sooonish,
N btw im ananya..
Lots of love

Ps:see im smart..
Ask y??
Because u told not to comment in one lines n i did not🤣
And btw its ishq2051 not ishq2015