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Posted: 11 years ago
So Maan's training ...?ha ha ha...(punishment) already started...cha cha cha poor boy dadi ne kya haal kar diya bicharne ka...? ye kaam hai ki uprise us geet pagali ne use uksa daya aur maan ne sara gusa uspe utar diya bechari ko chupa chup do chante maar diya ye to achha hua masterji bich me pade aur use chudwa le gaye nahi to geet ki to kar nahi thi but after hearing her story even maan feel sorry about her ...wait and watch aage aage kya hota hai...? hota hai wohi jo munjure sonia hota hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for PM dear update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dear just now I saw this gd awesome starting loved the Maan character and dadi she is too good awesome starting and superb update
Prt 2
Loved MAAN stubborns so sad for servants awesome and dadi awesome decision and there deal superb upDate
Pls give blog link and. Password for other update I ll love to read more superb ff
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Posted: 11 years ago
Have to make the pm list..waiting for other regular readers..till than I gonna post the chapter here in a short while...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sonia 🤗...hi dear...sorry for the late comment...was busy last few days...coming to the update...poor Gopal became the scapegoat for Maan's anger...but he does so much nautanki he gets irritating too 😆...that too when Maan is still adjusting and is very frustrated with the new conditions...loved Geet's intro...haww she stole his closthers and ran away...but hitting her was to much...poor thing was so scared...hmmm she is Masterji's niece and they call her pagli Geet...wonder what happened to her...plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago




Chapter 5


"Ji Beta ...Pagli...She is not in her senses...She is mentally unstable ..." Kamalji disclosed the face...



"But Uncle how...If I m right she is not like this from birth...I know the people who get some mental disorder by birth ..they have special facial features too...Aur yeh Ladki I haven't seen her face fully due to darkness..But ya itnaa sure hai she is just like any normal person ..." Maan took just few moments to judge that she is not an abnormal girl by birth...



Kamalji stamped it..." Maan beta you estimated right...Geet she hasn't only normal features as any other normal girl of her age but she is exceptionally beautiful ...Beta per Geet ko kya faida is khoobsurti ka...When the ugliness of her destiny has ruined every beautiful phase of her life.." He sighed...



"Means...Uncle ?" Confused Maan said..



" First of all stop calling me Uncle okey...Chacha ji or Chachu..theek hai beta...Now you are in village thats why...yahan k rang main rang jaao..." Kamalji corrected him and then continued .." And beta if we talk about Geet's mental state...that is a long story...we will discuss later...now lets go its really late now ...Aapki Chachi wait kar rah hogi khaane per..." He encircled arm around Maan's shoulder...



Even Maan thought it better to leave the topic and both moved toward the house...



After having dinner Kamalji accompanied Maan to Khuraana House from his home...WhereGopal was already waiting for Maan...busy in making beds for himself and Maan in courtyard...To control this hot and humid weather at night there was just a standing fan in front of Maan's cot and Gopal's cot was next to him...Where Gopal had placed bricks under four cot legs to raise the height bit so that he could get little air from fan...



Maan had taken shower already in Kamal Ji's house so just changed to his night wear a vest and capri...His eyes popped out after finding the sleeping arrangements..."Are you mad !!...I can't sleep like this... in middle of courtyard..."



" Shaab ji yahi option hai aapke paas...Pleash(plz) sho jaao na shaab ji..We have to get up early in the morning...Mujhe khet (fields) jaana hai...and you are going to the village school with Kamal Shaab ji...as he told me.." he raised his hand in helplessness and dropped self on cot...



Dragging his feet in hopelessness Maan sat on the cot...He was not willing to sleep here but the whole day's efforts by him made him that much tired ...he had no option than to take rest...



In the morning when Gopal tapped at Maan's shoulder to wake him up...It was already 5:30and sun had risen..."Shaab Ji get up take youR bath...I came back from fields but you are shtill shleeping.."



" Shut up Gopal let me sleep.."Maan jerked off his hand from shoulder..



" No Shaab ji uth jaaea...after bath and breakfast...aapko shkool bhi jaana hai..and have to meet Mashter ji before shkool starts at 7:30 " Some how Gopal remained successful in his attempt...


Kamalji accompanied Maan to Master ji's home which was next to school only...



" Uncle...oops sorry Chachu...I think I should feel sorry to Master ji and His niece too...Mujhe patta hota k wo mentally ill hai...then main usko slap na karta " He regretted due to what he did last night..



" No beta don feel bad...You were not aware...and if you want to say sorry..I will say you should atlast that girl also has some dignity...If an educated boy like you takes such initiative by adopting different approach toward people like Geet...then yeh society he badal jaaegi fir..." He rolled hand over Maan's back and encouraged him...



At Main Door of Master Ji's House


Kamal Ji called aloud for Master Ji standing there " Master Ji are you home ? "


Master Ji was already out locking the inside door of his house...He replied in same tone..." Ha Bhai Kamal...aabhi yaih hun...jaa he rahaa tha...bas abhi aaya ...chalte chalet bata karate hai..."



But what Maan noticed ?...Same Girl Geet ..She was tapping at the window vigorously from inside..." Mama ji ...Mama ji...please let me come out...Don't lock me..." She was screaming crying bitterly ...



If Geet was at home..Why Master Ji locked her like this when she was begging in front...This was too shocking for Maan..He moved hurridely toward Master Ji..."Master Ji whats this !!...I know I did wrong last night but at that time I was not familiar with her condition...But you are like father to her how could you do this with her...Usko kyo lock kar rahe hai..." Maan burst...



Master Ji knew him so no introduction needed.."Khuraana.. saab fir kya karru main...Aap itne bade ghar k bete hai...and with God's grace totally well...but even then your Daddi took this decision for you to send here...Unhone bhi dil per pather rakaa hoga...Think about me...ek greeb.aadmi...uper se pagli beti ka baap...For bread and butter I have to work and due to this I remain outside home for whole day...I can't take her with me...and can't leave her in open ...Yeh duniyaa noch noch k kha legi isko ...Aapne dekha na khal ...I was at home in the evening and was cooking for her...kaab bhag gayi baahar patta he nahi challa ..So tell me if u have any other option ..." Wiping his eyes Master Ji said...



" First of all I am sorry for last night...I m really ashamed of me...Master ji If you I say can ask Kamal Chachu ..wo Daddi se bata kar sakte hai...She will defiantly help you in shifting Geet to asylum...also will help you financially...Where Geet will get security and good treatment ...its quite possible wo theek ho jaaye..." He suggested..



Master Ji petted Maan's cheek " Beta ji you are really down to earth person...Even my thinking about you was else as a spoiled brat...But you are such a kind hearten man...Per isse hum asylum nah bhej sakte...She was been there before but many times ran away from there..." He sighed..



" Maan what you think we haven't done anything for her...But no effect...Just any miracle can work now..." Kamal Ji intervened...



Maan was talking with the men but his whole attention was with Geet...Who was crying ...yelling for help..😭



"Beta lets go...we are getting late...this is a everyday affair now...Iska khana banaa k rahk diya hai ...jaab thakk jaaegi kha legi..." Master Ji said and showed them the way toward school...



With heavy heart Maan accompanied them to school where he was going to start his work as teacher...the first day of the deal with Daddi...But even before starting his work ...This utmost bitter reality of life and society shattered him to pieces...What was the reason behind this girl's such a miserable condition...



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Edited by Sonia.KN - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice story
maan is diffrent here
geet is mental ill
poor she

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Posted: 11 years ago
Excellent Update

Something happened in Geet's life to have changed her mental stabilty
she is also young and she does deserve to live a normal life so yes I
do agree with Maan that she does need help , I understand she ran away before from asylum but their try again .
now I'm really curious to know how did Geet get to be like this .
Maan its difficult for him now to live a life as a common person and he is certainly not used to it but there is something about Maan even though he refuses still he accepts the situation , in my eyes I truly don't find him as a spoilt brat rather a very down to earth person yes someone that was accustomed to luxuries it will be difficult to adjust
in a poor man's shoes and thus far Maan is doing great
looking forward to seeing him teach

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Posted: 11 years ago
feeling bad fr geet...why she is like dis...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

continue soon d nxt prt...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet she is mentally retarded not by birth buy some incident of her life has make her like that.there are so many cruel people around us who don't know their limit and out of jealousy out of ego out of power do such horrendous work that there is no limit to their evil work but in end who suffer an innocent person who is not doing wrong is suffer and the person who is responsible for their situation roam free in society, for ex rape victim ,set up on someones life, wrong allegation, with the help of power wrongly tarnish someone's name to the point that person sometimes commit suicide but our society with cold hearted will see all the tamasha.
and our society doesn't allow to live in peace those victims who had suffered by others did,or accidental things in whatever way they will make joke of their situation,they will laugh on them,they will call them sinner and some times person doesn't tolerate all this torture and looses their sensibility and becomes insane.

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