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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...osm teaser :-)
waiting 4 part
n congo 4 new thread :-D
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Geet was fussing ever since they left Delhi for the princely state where the coronation was to be held. She was just sitting besides Maan but her hubby was busy playing, chatting and singing with their daughter who had totally forgotten about her poor Mumma who loved her more and right now she wished tat Maan would have been driving the limousine rather than the driver.


Koi hain she knocked on the black tinted window glass of the car but it was waste as the Daddy-Maansi duo were so busy tat they hardly looked at her. Hey babaji why did you give me such a useless husband and daughter. Koi acha wala nahi de sakthe the kya. She complained thinking they would give her attention but poor she was still sitting thinking about ways to have them look at her.


Aahh she suddenly yelped in pain and tat was it, her hubby and daughter immediately turned their heads and looked at her in concern. Jaan.. kya hua.. why did you cry?


Haan Mumma.. why cryl.. you pain kya. Maansi questioned the same in her own cute way and Geet smirked evilly. Jaan kya hua bolo..


Kuch nahi she cut Maan and he glared at her the moment she answered. Wat kuch nahi..and why the hell did you yell haan. Do you know how scared I was?


Really. She squinted her eyes in question you worry for me.. aisa tho nahi lag raha hain. She said passing a look at Maansi who was staring at her. You were so busy..


Uff Maan sighed and grabbed Maansi and sat her in his lap. Don't start it all over again. Come on Jaan you should not be jealous of your own daughter.


Why not huh? She pulled her leg and crossed it on the seat turning her body towards him. Why should not I haan? The moment we stepped out of KM you have been ignoring me.. just tell me wat was the last word you said to me..isliye maine kaha tha I will come with Dad and others in their car par nahi Maan Singh Khuranna ko apni biwi chahiye apne paas sirf naam ke liye. She huffed saying everything.


Is Mumma angrly Daddy. Why she look red. Is she sick? Maansi asked titling her head and looking at Maan.


Yahi baaki tha.. ab grrr I don't love you anymore. Saying so Geet shifted to the corner and rested her head on the window not wanting to even look at them. Maansi looked with a puppy face at Geet and then at Maan and asked Mumma angrly on Maansi baby Daddy.


Seriously Jaan. Maan pulled Geet grabbing her arm. Ab aisa muh banake Maansi ko rulaya mat karo baba. Geet struggled to free herself but Maan held her tight and then placed Maansi on her lap and pulled Geet into him. Ab theek hain.. and haan just wait until its night.. tab dekhta hoon how much attention you can bear.


Chi Geet smacked his head kuch bhi kehte hain kahi pe bhi.


Ab maine kya galat kaha haan.. you want attention na so I will give you tat to all naked. Geet blushed hearing his words unknown tat Maansi was looking at her. She slowly raised her small hand and touched Geet's cheeks tat turned red-pink.


Mumma you look all red.. why so red Mumma. Maan giggled and Geet wanted to so much hide herself hearing her daughter question her why was she blushing even though she did not know wat blushing was. Daddy see na Mumma all pink red.. why Maansi no pink red like this.


Baby Maan cupped Maansi face you are very pink red just like Mumma. He said softly caressing her cheeks wanting her to believe and tat was enough, her daddy's words were the last words for her and seeing tat Geet rolled her eyes. Their whole journey continued with fun and soon they were at their destination.


Finally Maan murmured as the car stopped. He hardly visits the palace and after Geet had left this was the first time he would be setting his feet along with his wife and daughter and tat to for the most precious moment of his life. Jaan..


I'm scared. Geet said with nervousness. She was feeling odd as this time she was just not Geet but someone who was a part of the big Khuranna family and with tat came many responsibilities. I'm scared. She's so small Maan.. this all she won't..


She is Khuranna Jaan. Maan pressed her hand to assure her tat Maansi was big enough to understand everything and we'll be there for her. All are there so please yeh nervousness nikal do apne mann se.. You know na Dadima and Dadaji are waiting for you. She simply shook her head and next moment they heard another car being stopped behind their indicating tat Vicky, Yash and Naina too reached. The driver walked out and opened the car for them and they stepped out one by one.


Wherel are we Daddy? Maansi asked as they stepped out of the car in front of a big palace. Maansi was thrilled to see but then suddenly she hides herself behind Maan seeing so many eyes looking them.


Maansi..


No they will take me away. Maan looked confused as to wat Maansi was saying and his eyes sort for Geet who instantly looked at Vicky and then made run to him. Geet.. yeh...


Mumma says.. more people take Maansi baby away.. so Maansi no looking. Maan was cut by Maansi cute voice but wat he got to know from her, he was shocked. Sure enough his Jaan had fed shit into Maansi's little brain about everything and now he has to pay for all her lies. I swear Jaan.. I will kill you for sure.


So Maansi no looking ok.. you ask them go away. Maansi ordered her Daddy hiding behind him. Maansi no coming front ok. They take Maansi away.


Baby Maan tried to pull her in front but she held his legs tight from behind hiding herself. Maan cussed Geet for all the things tat she had fed her as everyday Maan would learn something new and he had tough time to make Maansi understand but he even loved it. Maansi they are all here to meet you baby. Come on say hi to them.


No they take Maansi baby away.. so no coming out ok. Maan sighed and looked at Geet for help but she was hiding behind his father and Vicky who were grinning at him as if he was a fool who looked out of the world. Why don't you clap for this and make it an entertainment picture?


Off course Bro. Vicky walked towards Maan and Geet hid behind Yash and Naina now.Geet ne tho bahut acha kaam kiya hain. Must say she is so intelligent tat even the most intelligent man on the earth would have complex..right Geet.


Oye tu chup kar.. bekaar ka ghee mat daal aag mein.. khados pehle se gusse mein hain aur khado mat...


Maan. Hearing the voice Geet shut her eyes. Tat voice was sharp and she knew whom it belonged to and she immediately straightened and coming in front and ran to stand next to Maan as it was a tradition in the family tat a husband wife whenever they enter inside the palace they had to stand together and she knew about it.


Dadaji Maan smiled and in a swift move pulled Maansi in front and scooped her in his arms. He gave Geet a look and both walked in front to take his blessings along with Dadima who stood next to her husband.


How are you Dadaji? Maan asked after they were blessed. Dadima aap theek hain na?


Haan hain hum theek. Waise bhi itne saalo baad aaya so you have to do your formalities na. Dadima as usual complained but Geet felt as if it was a taunt for her but in real she knew it wasn't. Anyways m not here to meet you but my Geet and great granddaughter.


Yeh rahi aapki Geet aur Maansi. Maan said with a smile but Maansi hid her face feeling scared and shy of new people. It was just not the two but there were many standing around behind as they all were gathered for the coronation. Maansi baby.. see here..


Na.. they take me away. Dadaji and Dadima frowned hearing while other chuckled making her more tensed and she was on the verge to cry. Jaan..


Maansi Geet softly called but she refused to even see her. Geet sighed and looked for help and Yash and Naina along with Vicky came forward. They knew Maansi would take time to gel with people.


She is just scared Maa. Yash said after touching their feet for blessings followed by Vicky. She takes time to mingle.. thodi der ke baad khudhi aa jaayengi aap ke paas. Yash tried to convince but seeing his fathers's face he knew something was not so good.


Theek hain. Waise bhi itni der se wait kiya hain aur thoda time hi sahi. Dadima said touching Maansi head but she shook it understanding it wasn't the touch tat she knew. Smart hain poti humari. Dadima commented understood tat it wasn't someone whom she knows. Maan chuckled.


Once you know her, you will say she is your nani Dadima. Dadima's eyes widened and then she smiled then its good.. bahut dino baad koi takkar ka milega hume. Everyone laughed at Dadima's words and soon they were inside one by one meeting them and greeting but Maansi was still hooked to Maan scared of even looking at Geet.


I think you all can rest now. Dadaji said standing on his feet. He looked at Yash and eyed him to follow while others left for their respective work as the coronation was a big affair and had many rituals and traditions to be followed.


*****


Geet looked scared as she sat next to Naina. Her hands were sweaty with unknown fear gripping her from insides. They had been ordered by Dadaji to meet in his personal study where no one was allowed to enter or even be near it. She raised her eyes a bit and could feel tat Dadaji's and Dadima's eyes were on her while Maan he was sitting opposite him as clueless as she was.



Geet. She jumped hearing her name being called and Maan hissed at his Dadaji for scaring his Jaan. She was still fragile and vulnerable and here his Dadaji was scaring her but before he could say anything Dadaji sharp words shook Geet even more. I want to hear about Rajveer Chopra and You.. Everything from start.


Dadaji tats ridiculous. Maan growled in anger. He has nothing to do with this coronation and I don't want you to question Geet on anything tats not important. Dadaji looked at Maan for few moments and then looked back at Geet who was almost shivering. I asked you something Geet.. and I...


She won't say a word Dadaji. Maan retorted in anger while Dadaji's eyes filled with anger seeing Maan cutting him in a way he did not like. So you..


I don't want any problem Maan so shut your mouth? Maan's Dadaji was harsh but he could not reframe himself from being. He had a name and anything tat would tarnish it would destroy his whole family. And I want every little detail from her. He said pointing at Geet who sat with her head down. It was not like she never met Dadaji. She had been fed by him but right now he was the Ranjeet Singh Khuranna.


But Dadaji it will..


I said I don't want you to open your mouth? Maan looked at his Dadaji with furious eyes but he could not say a word more. Rajveer Chopra is alive and she is still his legal wife Dadaji squinted his eyes at Maan and here I don't know wat I should do? I can't go forward with the crowning unless you both are traditionally married.


She's Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khuranna. Maan's roar filled the room but it did not have any effect on his Dadaji while his Dadima and his parents tried stopping Maan but in vain. So don't you call her HIS wife.


Maan..


Don't. His furious eyes met Geet who called out softly. He was in rage and anyone calling her HIS wife would be literally dead in his hands. She is mine and only mine.. and dare anyone say she is tat b****** wife I will kill. His words were as powerful as his eyes tat proved he would kill anyone saying she does not belong to him. She was his life and will only be his.


Maan Yash tried to calm him down but his anger was rising and he had no control on it. You..


Don't Dad.. don't you dare justify and defend him. He said eying his Dadaji who was looking at him like a hunter. How dare he says she is his.. tat b******.. how dare he says she is his wife and not mine.


Maan Geet tried to call him but her own voice was a whisper and wasn't audible. Dadima looked at Geet and saw how she was shivering and she was instantly at her side trying to calm her down. Geet..Geet beta you ok.


Woh Maan..


I will kill him Dad.. I will


*Thud* The study echoed with the slap. Dadaji had enough of Maan and next he was slapped by him. He had been calm by now but Maan wasn't understanding wat he was trying to say. Gusse per kabool karna seekha nahi abhi tak.. wasn't this the same anger tat forced you to torture her and forced her to marry you. Dadaji yelled pointing at Geet. And still you haven't learnt a thing from it Maan.


No I haven't. He did not deny neither did he soften. And I will not if anyone says shit like you did.


Maan Yash grit his teeth hearing his son talk like tat to his father. None raised their voice in front of him and here his own son was arguing in a way he should not. Don't forget he's your Dadaji.


But he forgot tat she is my wife. Maan said with pure anger in his eyes. No one had right to question her.. not even him.


She's just not your wife.. but a Khuranna bahu too.. do you get... the mother to the princess who will be crowned. Dadaji tried to put sense but Maan was beyond it. But the truth is truth.. she is still married to Rajveer Chopra and I can't deny it.. kal agar koi sawaal uttaya tho.. wat should I answer them.. bolo wat should I answer them.


I.. did not.. it was a fake marriage. Geet's murmur forced them to turn and look at her and they saw him taking steps towards them. Rajveer.. ne.. nakli..pandit.. he confessed...it..he did not marry me..woh sab.. shaadi jhoot thi...jhoot.. thi and she fell her head at the edge of the table with blood pooling besides her.


Jaannn


Geeettt everyone screamed rushing towards her.


Precap: Life's beautiful...


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NEXT : PART 14

Edited by sdlife19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
lovely part
the car journey was fun
dadima is stern yet sweet
and dadaji...now i know maan ka gussa kahan se aya...but apna maan toh gusse mein dadji se bhi age hai..
interesting

oh she fainted?? or someone just slapped her??
i got confused?
cont soon
Edited by sahibasharma - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read in one go
Omg interesting story
Loved it
How Rajveer did drama and mansi omg damn cute
Maan nd mansi kaise irritate krte hai geet ok
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Geet angry maan maansi did not give her time they had fun in car
Maansi scared of more people
Darji question about rajeva
Maan so angry
Geet got hurt to head
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Edited by suni_104 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i don't know whom i love most Mansi or jaaan?both of them r so cute.i loved how maansi pronouce her every word with L.maan nd mansi r alwz remain busy otherside geet feeling bore.dadaji nd dadima r nice person.though maansi feeling scare to see new people.dadaji wanted to know about rajbeer chopra.so geet nd rajbeer s marriage is fake.loved the part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Starting was amazing. Maan and mansi were lost in their talk and ignoring geet. Poor geet was only cribbing and then she started her drama to get attention which she got also. I loved their family moment. Maneet reached on palace and mansi get scared seeing lot of people. last part was shocking. Dada Ji wants to know whole truth from geet about her past but maan is not letting her to speak as no one have right to ask any question from her jaan. Maan was getting more angry as dadi ji was adamant to know whole truth because it's matter of their prestige. Geet reveled truth but suddenly she get unconscious. What happened with geet. Waiting for next dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely
maan and maansi ignored geet 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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spectacular update! well written! Geet cribbing as Maan n Maansi r busy! Maansi scared! Dadi seems nice! dadaji talks abt Maaneet nt being married! Maan angry! Geet reveals tht is was fake marriage! she hurts her head! Maan tensed! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dadaji really scated the hell out of geet omg geet hurt

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