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( THANKU SHRUTHE DII FOR UR LOVELY BEAUTIFUL BANNER)



- 135

Maan stood shock to see his Misty sitting showing her back..his breath struck in his throat seeing her in tat dress.. his mouth hang open to ground seeing his Misty clad in te red colour dress and sitting like angel descend from te heaven..he didt imagine she will look so gorgeous in tis dress.. she was look breath taking, even though he te one who brought for her..he look here and there to see some one is there as he don't want to any one to see his possession and then chilled himself tat she have given whole km leave

His legs carried him slowly towards his angel, his mouth went dry and his gaze just struck at her one side bare arm, where her soft skin shining in moon light..he cursed himself for getting tis dress for her but wat to do after he saw tat dress he cant control, himself , he know today his Misty dressed to kill him.. He lean on te near by tree and watching her, just lost in his angel..He was just drowning in her beauty, drinking her beauty with his eyes.

Maan just stood lost in his angel but suddenly his trance broke wen he felt some thing hit his face..he look down and saw a crushed paper..he saw te paper on te ground, he bend and took it..he open te paper and read it was love msg

Love is rainbow have all te colours, another paper hit his face..love is like

He saw te paper and then at GEET, he wonder wat she is up to..another paper was hit on his face and saw his Geet who was playing paper ball..without making any sound , he just slowly moved and stood behind her..he peep thru to see wat she is trying to do..Geet was sitting in front of te lappy, he read te lines,its was for propose..

She came to oh and saw everything is ready, suddenly it strick tat she didt practice wat to talk with him,how to confess , then she just thought to search in net before he cums..she wrote it in paper and wen she read it,she felt yuck and throw te paper and which hit Maan head..

Maan chuckled seeing her seeking help from google baba for words..Geet searched some thing and wrote it in te paper, she read it

Geet : chi yuck wat kind of msg is tis, Love is like a ring ring roses chi..no one know to write a proper love msg, reading all tis i didt feel like im confessing my love rather than saying some dialogue for drama, wat i will do ,wat i will say to me, looking up babaji help me naa

Maan smiled seeing his MISTY ki crib, he want to kiss her cheeks, but just bend little closer to her ear and whisper : just say I LOVE U

Geet eyes twinkle : haan it will be correct she turned to say thanks to te person, but seeing Maan standing in front of her,folding his hands to his chest with a smirk..her smile vanished and open her mouth gapping at him like seeing ghost

Maan folded his hands to his chest and smirking seeing her expression: wat happen Geet u standing like u saw some ghost

Geet : u r not less than a ghost always scaring me,with a glare

Maan frowned : wat is tis, Geet u will be te only person to accuse ur BF as ghost on ur date, with sad innocent face

Geet , then only it clicked her tat she have to give surprise for him, but he gave her a shock, but how he know tat she was here,yaa he would have seen her note but who ask him to cum so soon, as per her plan he have to cum after she call naa, no MSK only know to break rules, kallulimangan..she saw him who was smirking at her..she made a baby cry face and started to smack him

Maan try to hold her : Geet pls yar, don't spoil my reputation..Geet stop and gave him a look, then wat wil people think tat te great MSK got beaten up by his GF on his date, so pls,looking her and there

Geet pouted : u ruined everything , who ask to cum here , u cant wait for few more mins naa, kallulimangan , wait how u know all tis, with a confused look

Maan : MSK know everything, with a attitude

Geet mimick him : MSK know everything, u r RSK, don't think tat one, tis one is Rakshashan Singh Khurana, u ruined everything,..i think tis surprise word wont suit for me, first u thought to give me surprise i ruined it,pointing to him, then i thought to give u , pointing to herself, u ruined it, looking up babaji why all tis for me, haan with baby pout face

Maan rolled his eyes seeing her crib, he just pulled and placed his finger on her lips : chup bikul chup

Geet pout and flattered her eye lashes seeing him standing so close,

Maan : how much u talk haan, save ur energy for tonight

Geet bite his finger

Maan snap it : ouch , Geet

Geet : i was so eager to see ur expression wen u see my surprise, but u spoiled it , go i don't want u

Maan smiled and pulled her to face him, she frowned, he cupped her face..Geet stare at his eyes where love was oozing out from his eyes for her..she was just drowning in his eyes..Maan kissed her forehead and rest his forehead on hers, standing so close to her

Maan : im impressed Geet, Geet was shivering with his breath falling on her..i didt know tat my Misty will impress me like tis

Geet felt happy hearing him : really u like all tis, Maan node yes yes..but i didt say any words naa

Maan still holding her and her hands was around his waist

Maan : no need of words Geet wen u r eyes is enough to convey all ur love for me..Geet was just staring at him..i lost my heart to ur eyes long back


Ennavale Adi Ennavale,
endhan idhayaththai tholaiththu vittaen

Oh my dear, oh my dear!
I've lost my heart

Endha idam adhu tholaindha idam,
andha idaththaiyum marandhuvittaen


The place where I lost it
I forgot that place as well.


Both staring at each other..Geet's heart was beating so fast with his closeness,..Maan also was not less his each cell carving to hold his Geet

Geet : Maan

Maan who was lost in her eyes : hmm, whisper

Geet : where u get all tis lines

Maan trance broke : wat

Geet : where u get all tis lines i searched so much in net but i didt get anything, Geet pouted seeing him chuckling

Maan know only his Geet will get like tis thought in they most romantic moment : u Misty, seing ur eyes , u r love for me

Geet : but why i didt get any feelings seeing u

Maan : really, with a smirk, today i will make u to feel for me, don't worry

Geet : how, actually naughty Maan was hinting her some thing but Geet baby didt get it..

Maan smirk : i show u tonight

Geet : ok but now leave

Maan got confuse : leave why

Geet : u already spoiled barging , now pls go out for ten mins and cum wen i call u

Maan : wat is there i have already seen , then

Geet : pls only ten mins, she nearly pushed him out and Maan sighed and went out..she checked some thing and got ready to give a surprise for her Maan..

Maan cant control his urge, he just barge inside but startled to see it was dark..he wonder now only te lights were on wat happen to te lights suddenly, he thought to check, and moved inside..

He took te same light path and moving inside searching where his Geet went..te lights came,Maan felt awe seeing te decore, he look at te oh and surprise to see oh was decorated according to his taste, white and red..he slowly move inside..

He was awe to see te decors, he saw flower bed with heart shaped on either side,te whole place was decor with lights and flowers , obivously his fav orchids..he saw lights where hanging from te tree.. candles were placed in heart shape showing love symbol..he wonder why she have decor with so many lights , but it was very beautiful..he wonder its night or day seeing te place

He was moving inside to spot Geet, but suddenly he felt flowers on him like shower,

( priya dii love u so much )

Geet : welcum MAAN

Maan was shock and surprised seeing tis and hearing her voice : Geet

He slowly started to walk but suddenly he felt some thing soft under his feet and saw a flower path was lied towards outhouse..He walked on te path, on either side of te flower path, words were written with flowers..

He didt imagine his Geet will do some thing for him..its not some thing..its look like a heaven..he want to see his Geet, but she was not seen any where, he was moving inside wen he heard her voice

Geet : welcum to our Love Paradise, i don't know to say or form words to confess my love

Maan smiled hearing his Misty ki voice, he moved inside her listening her sweet voice

Geet : did u like it , if u didt also , u have no other choice with a cute giggle, making him chuckle

Geet : Maan i want to say a story, abt Maan no no Geet , noMAANEET and they Love

Maan heart was jumping hearing her voice, he was looking here and there to spot his Geet but she was playing hide and seek with him

Geet : there was a girl called Geetanjali, who living in her dreamy world enjoying her life with so much colours

Maan smiled hearing her : Geet where are u

Geet : but one day she met a man who was totally opposite to her, arrogant attitude, dd, who only know to get angry, Maan frowned hearing her cursing, they both became friends

Maan was searching her

Geet : but one night it changed everything, WITH HIS ONE TOUCH HE BURNT HER UNTOUCHED SOUL AND LEFT HER WITH TE FEEL OF BLOSSOMED GIRL, she never thought she will fall for a guy like him with a giggled,

Maan : Geet enough cum out

Geet : but wat to do , they fate tied te north pole and south pole together for all births and they LOVE BLOSSMED

Maan node his head like accepting her words

Geet : i don't want to give words to my feelings , as i want u to feel my love for u which exist even after my breath

Maan : Geet, he saw a shadow near te curtain he pulled it, but no one was there

Geet : today i don't want to confess my love but i want to hearMy Maan ki love for his Geet..

Maan stood still listening to her at her

Geet : yes tis is Maan ki date for his MISTY arranged by his Geet

Maan felt overwhelmed hearing her words and he was falling for his angel more

Geet : wat naa My Maan don't know how to arrange a date , so his Misty took tat work, with a giggle

Maan frowned : Geet

Geet : Maan u wondering naa why so many lights looking like a day time,

Maan node yes yes

Geet : i want to be light in ur darkness..i want to light ur heart and soul..this lights will show there is another world is present, where only MAANEET AND THEY LOVE EXIST

Maan frozed hearing her words, his throat chocking with over flowing emotions, he know his Geet loves him so much but he cant bear her unconditional love for him..he was scared thinking did he deserve his angel

Geet : Maan dare u think u deserve me, if u didt deserve me then no one, coz im ur Geet , MAAN KI GEET

Maan was shock how well his MISTY reading his mind, he had enough now he cant wait anymore to see his Misty, he want to hug her and bury all his worries inside her

Maan : pls Geet where are u cum out

Suddenly he felt a pair of hands entangle his waist from behind..he know whose hands was tat,he hold it and pulled her so close to him

Geet : im always here,pointing to his heart..Maan lean his back to her holding her hand..he took her hand and kissed it..they stood like tat for some time

Undhan kaal golusil adhu tholaindhadhadhendru
undhan kaaladi thedi vandhaen

Thinking that I would have lost it in your anklets
I came searching for it at your feet

Kaadhalendral perum avasthai endru ,unai kandadhum kandu kondaen
Endhan kazhuththu varai indru kaadhal vandhu iru kan vizhi pidhungi nindraen.


I realised that love is agony after I saw you.
Being filled with love upto my neck I now have my eye-balls bobbing out!

Maan broke te hug and brought her in front to face him.. Maan was mesmerized seeing her , he was looking at her from head to toe like burning her with his gaze, she look gorgeous in tat red dress..his breath struck in his throat seeing her , he never thought his Geet will kill him with her innocent beauty..Geet was so nervous to see , so she avoid to look at him

( love u priya dii..me speechless seeing tis pic..still i didt close my mouth)

Vaai mozhiyum endhan thaai mozhiyum indru vasappada villaiyadi

Both my power of speech and my mother-tongue, are not in my control today.


Vaitrukkum thondaikkum uruvamilladhoru urundaiyum urulaudhadi

I feel a lump bobbing up and down between my stomach and throat

Geet was just blushing and tilt her head down..he know she was blushing,he slowly kept his index finger on her chin and raised her to face him.. Maan chuckled seeing his Misty blushing and her cheeks turning red due to her shyness ..he want to talk so much but seeing her beauty, he felt speechless


Kaathirundhaal, Edhir paathirundhaal oru nimishamum varushamadi

When you are waiting and pining for your love, every minute seems like a year


Kangalellaam enai paarpadhu pol oru kalakkamum thondrudhadi

I have this overwhelming feeling that all eyes are staring at me

Geet too not less, she practise so much,but now she stood speechless,she felt really shy feeling his burning gaze which passing thru her soul making her whole body shiver..he saw her eyes was closed, but he want to see his love on her eyes

Maan in huskily tone : Geet open ur eyes, Geet node no, pls Misty


Idhu swargamaa? narahamaa? Solladi ullapadi
Naan vaazhvadhum, vidai kondu povadhum un vaarthayil ulladhadieee...


Is this heaven? Or hell? Please tell me as it is.

My life or dead is only with ur words

Geet slowly open her drooply eyes, Maan was startled to see so much love oozing from her eyes..he don't its real or dream feeling all tis..he just lost himself in her innocent soul..he cupped her face and just staring at her eyes and drowning in tat..he just cupped her face and kissed her forehead, rested her forehead on her, feeling they breathe on each other faces

He slowly kissed her nose, then saw her who was lost in him..his lips was slowly traced her cheeks and kissed her cheeks, Geet was staring at him and drowning in him, she didt react anything she didt know wat to do , to push him or feel him, so she stood numb, her heart was pacing so fast,

Geet was shocked feeling all tis, she already felt his touch but tis one is very new to her , her heart beat started to raise ,something started to roll in her stomach, making her vunerable..she holds Maan hand , try to pull it, but his hold was so strong, then he came near her ears and nuzzle it with his nose, kissed her hairs , then her ears, Geet close her eyes and crushed his shirt in her fist

He nuzzles her cheeks with his nose and moving to her jaw giving goosebumps all over her body..she was shivering with his touches..her toe was curling her , she felt butterflies flying inside her tummy..

Maan parted and saw her whose whole face was flushed and turned into scarlet red..her face was glowing in te moon light , he turned her and gesture her to see te moon..Geet wonder why he asking her to see..Maan gesture with his finger tat moon is not so beautiful than her making her blush

Maan turned her to face him, Geet didt dare to face him still..Maan slowly traces her corner of her lips with his thumb, Geet felt shudder..she pushed him and run away holding her heart..she sat on one of te flower bed , holding her heart

Kaathirundhaal, Edhir paathirundhaal oru nimishamum varushamadi
Kangalellaam enai paarpadhu pol oru kalakkamum thondrudhadi

When you are waiting and pining for your love, every minute seems like a year
I have this overwhelming feeling that all eyes are staring at me

Maan smiled and chased her, he saw her sitting on te flower..he slowly circle te flower just staring at her..


Idhu swargamaa? narahamaa? Solladi ullapadi
Naan vaazhvadhum, vidai kondu povadhum un vaarthayil ulladhadieee...


Is this heaven? Or hell? Please tell me as it is.

I have to live or die, only with ur words

Geet cant face him and just tilt her head..he slowly went inside and sat beside her..Maan slowly placed his hand on her shoulder, she felt jolt, he try to pull her but she just lean on his shoulder like flower

Gokilamae nee kural koduththaal, unnai kumbittu kann adippaen
Gopuramae unai saaithukondu undhan koondhalil meen pidippaen

Oh Cuckoo! if you were to give me a call, I shall bow before you and wink at you.
Oh temple tower! I shall tilt you and try fishing in your long tresses of hair


Maan saw her shivering form and slowly took his finger and started traced her arm moving up tracing her bare arm,giving gossebumps to her..he was just teasing her sense,it all new for her, she lost her sense..she cursed herself for arranging tis date..if she would have known tis will happen, she never in her dream too cribbed for date

Vennilavae unai thoongavaikka undhan viralukku sodukkedupaen
Varuda varum poongatraiyellam konjam vadikatti anuppi vaippen

My Moon! to put you to sleep, I shall massage your fingers
I shall then filter the breeze that comes to caress you and then send it across

Maan finger was doing magic on her skin, he slowly tracing her arm to her neck and to her skin behind her ear , moving up and down, making her shudder with his delicate feather like touches.. she hugged him and hiding herself inside him..Maan smirk seeing his effect on her and his hand move down to her bare back and caressing it

Maan finger was playing with her sense expressing his love making her vunerable..she cant bear tis much intensity from her Maan..

Geet broke te hug and glare at him..Maan frowned for breaking his trance..Geet stood and turned to move but she trip coz of her heels and she was abt to fall, But Maan hold her placing his hands on her waist, Geet hands where placed on either side of his shoulder..as Maan was sitting on te floor still and Geet was leaning on him..

Both were looking at each other..Maan hold was pressing her waist , breaking her sense, she try to move, Maan hold her and stabled her to stand properly..he saw her heels and gave her a look

Geet pouted : Anni ask me to wear tis,

Maan smiled scooped her and carried her in his arms to make her sit in te near by chair.. he slowly placed her on te chair and kneel in front of her..he took her leg and slowly removed her heels..Geet was just staring at him, holding her dress on her calf..Maan look at her, Geet got startled to see so much love oozing out from his eyes..his eyes was turning into dark with intense

Geet pushed him and run away, she is really shy feeling all tis things which making her shiver..she have read all tis in her ffs but feeling in real she felt some thing churning in her stomach..Maan saw her running holding her dress..he smiled

Geet stood away from him, but suddenly felt his hands snaked around her waist, hugging her from behind..he hugged her and caressing her cheeks with his stubble..she kept her hands over his hands on her waist , she lean on him, both stood like tat

Suddenly there was snow fall, Maan wonder how cum snow fall in delhi..Geet giggled

Geet : i arranged , i saw in drastic serial ,

Maan chuckled seeing her crazy for serial

Geet : in tat serial Guru will arrange all tis for his drasti..but see in real im doing all tis for u

Maan : Geet i too arranged for u

Geet : but in ur taste , in some hotel i didt like it

Maan :shh, i want to enjoy all tsi moment with My Misty

Geet hold his hands which was on her waist, he don't want to speak anything now..he just want to feel tis moment..he just pulled her thru her waist and hugged her more..her back was gue to his chest and both stood feeling te snow on them..feeling their BLOSSOMED LOVE

En kaadhalin thevaiyai konjum kaadhukkul odhi vaippaen
Un kaaladi ezhudhiya kolangal
siru kavidhaigal endruraippaen.


I shall whisper the needs of my love in its ears as well
The patterns which your toes make on the sand
I shall call them tiny poems

Maan hands was caressing her her waist over her dress, making her jolt..she twisted her tummy inside..she just turned and hugged him, Maan hold her tight and both glue to each other..she just kept her ear on his heart and hearing his beat which is beating very fast


(without priya dii, envi dii i would have not done tis..thanku so much diis..bechari diis i was bugging them)

(love u priya dii for ur editings ,muah..)

(love u envi dii for ur pics,muah)


PRECAP : MAAN OPENING HIS HEART

NEXT PART: 136,PG - 80



Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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FIRST TIME I TOOK SOME THING..I DONT KNOW HOW IT CAME..U ALL WILL LIKE OR NOT..FINGERS CROSSED..WAITING FOR UR RESPONSE




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yey yey...m frst bychnce i guess as thght u will updte in prvs updte
bt m so happy...😆😆

n abt updte...totlly loved it dear...
acttly date ws really magical spclly fairytale type...the way geet decorated the oh...
n the edit made by priya wd drashti in red n in backgrnd decrtn...it ws lookin so real...i checkd twice...hehehe

eagrly waitng fr maan confssn...wat he felt...

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waitiing eagrly fr updte😉
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Awsssmmm update nia dear loved it
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maan memorized her beauty he don't know his misty kill him wearing his selected dress ...his thoughts broke feel on the papers in his face conti...he peeped what his misty doing geet searching google how propose him... maan words ilu corrected her but she get angry he spoiled her surprise but he knoe how his misty handle any time how many times she called so many names i loved this line geet asked him how where he get lines you don't worry dear he will teach you how told feelings expressions their heart maan stunt and amused her arrange date foot flower path candles,lights so many i can't belive geet was blushing he didn't control himself kissing her geet shiver maan closeness i think both are soon break condition lovely song you selected nalini she complain him anni asked wear the shoes he was j she told seeing serail arranged snow fall amazing update
nalini you did amazing update
priya di you did rock edit work




this is for you nalini





Edited by envi - 10 years ago
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best date ever waiting for maan reaction grat update please do update ofen thanks dear for great works please do continue
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Nice part
Geet searching love quotes in google
Maan asks her to say ilu
GEET chides him for spoilispecialdate
Date was super
Geet shy n her stomach doing summer sault

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