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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Angel since everyone is bombarding you with lots of questions regarding this FF...May I asked you a question?😳 please😛

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: GUYCAN
Angel since everyone is bombarding you with lots of questions regarding this FF...May I asked you a question?😳 please😛

As long as it is related to this ff 😆

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: erikalui

Yea, Pakhi was nice initially but after Ragna started, her character became an irritating one. After that she turned totally psycho and I hated her to the extent of madness 😡😆

The disappointment from ema cvs... Has left me burnt... If and when I watch a show... There is a sense of detachment.

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ArthunaAlive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Yippee !!! Angel muah for changing your mind😳 But let them marry for love and not out of some sense of duty . I so wanted their marriage then so if not then wat bout now ? 😉 Btw you are a real sweetheart that you even take our crazy ranting so positively . Luv you for this great attitude . 👏

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
Yippee !!! Angel muah for changing your mind😳 But let them marry for love and not out of some sense of duty . I so wanted their marriage then so if not then wat bout now ? 😉 Btw you are a real sweetheart that you even take our crazy ranting so positively . Luv you for this great attitude . 👏

Thanks Hun... I understand... The ranting... I shall try and see if it is possible for a love marriage... No promises.

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lovelybubbly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: angelpureness
Okay I have been thinking... I might change Ragna's journey... Where by instead of separating... They unite... Maybe I shall get them married... Both thinking that the other is marrying them out of a sense of duty... And then use their marriage to get them to fall deeper in love and eventually admit their feelings.
And my dear Pakhi will say goodbye😭 I love Pakhi, but for you guys I shall shorten her journey in the ff 😭

Wow lots of comment just because of Mrs Pakhi Singhania. 😳 Kya impact hai uska.Kuchh to gad bad hai Daya kuchh to gad bad hai. 😆😆Look she forced a silent reader to comment 2nd time.🤣

Thank you so much for considering we RAGNA fan's feeling & Lots of ❤️ for handling criticism with such a g8 positivity. As a writer you put your story here & some will love you & some will be repelled by your concept & here as a die hard RAGNA fans we can't connect with Pakhi as Raghav's wife but other way the concept your story is fabulous 👏 Angel I,m genuinely sorry to have hurt your feelings.

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Fuzz! You are back! Girl, you have been so busy , writing updates one after another. It's good to have you back . Try not to disappear for long... We miss you a lot!

Another awesome story ! How do you keep getting all these wonderful ideas in your head? You are too good. It's like you have cast a spell on us. Even when you are not updating frequently, once we read a story of yours, then that's all I can think about.

So Raghav is married to Pakhi but now he realised that the love of his life is Kalpi. I think he's not aware of Kalpi's love for him. He thinks it's one sided, which makes him more guilt ridden. Torn between two women , Raghav is immersing himself in work more and more, his heart and mind in a constant battle. He knows being a married man, he should love his wife but his heart beats only for Kalpi. Adding to the guilt is Pakhi, who loves him and the fact that she cannot be a mother. Also I think since Kalpi always talk about her dreams and aspirations, he wouldn't want to complicate things for her. His heart is another story altogether.

Kalpi loves him without knowing his love for her or does she know? Has she always been in love with him ? But she doesn't want to voice it out. She would be thinking he's so out of her league since she's the nanny's daughter. Neither does she want Raghav to leave Pakhi just because she can't get pregnant.

Pakhi is relatable too. One minute she had everything going for her and the next moment, she comes to know she can't be a mother. Lately she is aware of her husband's lack of interest in her. So she's in a panic mode , constantly wondering whether her husband is leaving her .

Can understand the angst of the readers. The moment I read Pakhi Singhania, I thought " Fuzz is going to be in trouble " 😆 Had you taken any other name instead, I'm sure everyone would have understood. It's just that Pakhi will always be the other woman in the case of ragna. Any Eena, Meena, Deeka would have sufficed. .

Mwah

Edited by Kiaraah - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#118

Since there is a slight amendment in Ragna's journey... There will several sections... Where things will not flow realistically nor logically... Take it as a blooper I am going to try to fit in a Ragna marriage much earlier than planned.

Since and Ragav and Pakhi moments is going to create disharmony... I am going to rush through these bits... Because I don't want no chappals

So I am going to leave out any emotions that Ragav and Pakhi feel... Conversations... Depth... Everything... And rush towards a Ragna marriage...

I must say... I am really surprised... I did not pm anyone... Yet somehow you guys found this ff so quickly... Wow really happy... And don't have to worry about pm in future.

Need to add something... My love for Pakhi will never come at the cost of Ragna. So never worry about it.

Chapter 5

Several months later an excited Pakhi walks into the kitchen. She hugs Kamla maa from behind and says, "guess what... Everything has been finalised... I am going to be a mommy soon."

Kamla turns to Pakhi and gives her a tight hug as she congratulates her on her impending motherhood.

Neetu calls out from the entrance, "I need a hug too Kamla... We are going to be dadimaas soon."

Kalpi, who was silently helping her mother, says softly, "where's my hug?" Pakhi smiles and walks over and hugs her tight, saying, "I hope you are looking forward to being an aunt."

Ragav walks in just then... Seeing Kalpi's radiant smile... All his doubts over his impending fatherhood vanish. Grabbing her attention from across the kitchen, he mouths, "happy?" Smiling, Kalpi nods as she mouths back, "yes." His conscious kicks in straight away, "you are asking the wrong woman!"

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A month later, a crying Pakhi runs into the house With a concerned neetu following behind her. "I think you should come home," she says into the phone. Seeing Kalpi studying in the dining area for her finals, she calls out, "kalpi. I have called Ragav. When he comes, ask him to see me first and ask Kamla to see me."

Concerned, worried that something could have gone wrong, Kalpi rushes to look for her mother.

Hearing the sound of the car, Pakhi races downstairs and hugs Ragav tightly, saying, "it didn't work. The surrogate is not pregnant." Ragav murmurs comforting words, "... Don't give up... Be strong... We shall try again..." Seeing Kamla maa, Pakhi goes to her, seeking comfort.

Ragav walks towards the dining area... To where Kalpi is seated there... Stunned over hearing what she just did... Silent tears falling. With a weak smile, Ragav wipes a tear as he traces his finger from chin to eye and says softly, "tears?" The gesture releases Kalpi into action... She whispers, "I am sorry. You won't give up, will you." Shaking his head, Ragav says, "no. We shall try again."

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Several days later, neetu says, "Kalpi beta. I have been thinking that you should have a check up with a gynacologist... Just to make sure that everything is okay." Not meeting her gaze, neetu adds, " I have booked you an appointment tomorrow. We shall go together." Smiling, Kalpi agrees and heads out towards the outhouse.

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Two months later, while everyone is enjoying ice tea in the garden... Neetu says, "Ragav, Pakhi... I have been thinking. I can't take this anymore... Kamla and I are too old for this kind of stress. I think tomorrow should be our last try. If it fails this time... We should just accept the fate God has dealt."

Ragav looks at his mum in surprise, "tomorrow." Looks to Pakhi and says, "when did you book this session." Confused, Pakhi says, "I didn't. We are travelling to the London tonight." Neetu, says, "the doctor called this morning. I was surprised too. Maybe we forgot, or there was a miscommunication... Don't question it and take it as a good sign. Maybe this time we shall be lucky. Looking at Kalpi, she adds, "and don't worry. You two continue with your plans. I shall go to the hospital with Kalpi."

Neetu quickly looks away, guilt eating her for she knew that what she had planned since these last two months was wrong in every level. She says a quick silent prayer, "please forgive me God... For being selfish and greedy for a grandchild." Her heart heavy over the deceit that she has planned for Kalpi tomorrow. Forcing herself to calm down, she thinks, "this is not the time to grow a conscious Neetu."

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Neetu and Kalpi are sitting in the doctors office... Neetu crying uncontrollably... Seeking comfort from Kalpi... "What do you mean, the surrogate refused... Bring another surrogate... This is our last chance... Please doctor... Do something... Kalpi tell her to do something... I want my grandchild."

Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: lovelybubbly

Wow lots of comment just because of Mrs Pakhi Singhania. 😳 Kya impact hai uska.Kuchh to gad bad hai Daya kuchh to gad bad hai. 😆😆Look she forced a silent reader to comment 2nd time.🤣

Thank you so much for considering we RAGNA fan's feeling & Lots of ❤️ for handling criticism with such a g8 positivity. As a writer you put your story here & some will love you & some will be repelled by your concept & here as a die hard RAGNA fans we can't connect with Pakhi as Raghav's wife but other way the concept your story is fabulous 👏 Angel I,m genuinely sorry to have hurt your feelings.

Totally understand the emotions... Cvs have left Ragna fans traumatised with their shody script and misuse of Pakhi... I just never realised the depth of the sense of betrayal Ragna fans are still feeling. It is cool... And you have not hurt my feelings... Don't hesistate to voice your opinion.

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angelpureness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Kiaraah
Fuzz! You are back! Girl, you have been so busy , writing updates one after another. It's good to have you back . Try not to disappear for long... We miss you a lot!

Another awesome story ! How do you keep getting all these wonderful ideas in your head? You are too good. It's like you have cast a spell on us. Even when you are not updating frequently, once we read a story of yours, then that's all I can think about.

So Raghav is married to Pakhi but now he realised that the love of his life is Kalpi. I think he's not aware of Kalpi's love for him. He thinks it's one sided, which makes him more guilt ridden. Torn between two women , Raghav is immersing himself in work more and more, his heart and mind in a constant battle. He knows being a married man, he should love his wife but his heart beats only for Kalpi. Adding to the guilt is Pakhi, who loves him and the fact that she cannot be a mother. Also I think since Kalpi always talk about her dreams and aspirations, he wouldn't want to complicate things for her. His heart is another story altogether.

Kalpi loves him without knowing his love for her or does she know? Has she always been in love with him ? But she doesn't want to voice it out. She would be thinking he's so out of her league since she's the nanny's daughter. Neither does she want Raghav to leave Pakhi just because she can't get pregnant.

Pakhi is relatable too. One minute she had everything going for her and the next moment, she comes to know she can't be a mother. Lately she is aware of her husband's lack of interest in her. So she's in a panic mode , constantly wondering whether her husband is leaving her .

Can understand the angst of the readers. The moment I read Pakhi Singhania, I thought " Fuzz is going to be in trouble " 😆 Had you taken any other name instead, I'm sure everyone would have understood. It's just that Pakhi will always be the other woman in the case of ragna. Any Eena, Meena, Deeka would have sufficed. .

Mwah

Hi hun... What a pleasant surprise. I was debating whether to pm you... After my initial feedback, I thought to wait until I create some Ragna moments... Have been updating back to back... Coz want readers to see the direction the story is heading.

i chose Pakhi coz I wantned her to have that character growth and self realisation that she didn't get in the show... Felt so betrayed by the cvs. True, have learnt my lesson... Never will I pair rakhi... Even temporarily. My poor Ragna fans are still suffering from the impact of the trauma.

Your summary is so beautiful... Am so glad to read your post... Really wanted your opinion... Mwah