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Ashlok Dark FF

My Ransacked Heart



Chapter 34

The Ice Princess

My delightedly frozen heart

Laying peacefully still

Dodging pain and sorrow

Defusing my iron will.

My polished frozen heart

Comfortably in denial

Blind for the world

Mistakenly peaceful

My blissfully frozen heart

Resting so willingly

No wandering thoughts

Logic would disagree

My pleasantly frozen heart

Shockingly cold

Forgetting the truth

Beautiful lies to hold

My lovely frozen heart

Silently giving up the fight

Someday it will be shocked back to life again

Just not tonight.


I may not be there yet ~ but I am closer than I was yesterday ~


"Father look mother is not telling me the end of fairytale", Shlok pouted, tugging at his father's arms. "Anjali why are you teasing my boy, look tell him the end at once or I'll...I'll", Niranjan started with a stern look towards his wife, but when she turned her face towards him, glaring at him admonishingly at his interruption, he melted right there. She looked lovely whenever she got angry. The anger added a radiance to her face and a sparkle to her eyes...

"Or you'll what?", she asked sternly, looking at him through narrowed eyes. "Nothing", Niranjan scuffled like a love sick boy. "Your boy is not listening to me, I told him to drink the milk first then I'll tell him the end, otherwise I won't", she faked a stern look, but a winsome smile was tugging at the corner of her lips."Father, I won't drink, I don't like milk", Shlok snorted. "Very bad son, milk is very good for health, and growth and you do want to become a strong police officer, don't you, when you grow up", Niranjan ruffled his hair...

"Yes father but milk", he pouted but when both Niranjan and Anjali both threw him a stern look he obediently took the glass from Anjali and drank in one go. After drinking it he made a fake horrible retching noise, which made his parents rush towards him with a worried look on their faces, he burst out laughing when they asked him that was he alright?...

"Shlok", Anjali admonished him. But he batted his eyes so innocently at his mother that she couldn't help herself but smile at her son's antics. "Your son is just like you Niru, remember you too didn't like to drink milk in our earlier days of marriage, you used to be so arrogant", she smiled lovingly at her husband. "Yes, but see I am a transformed man now, your love changed me", he drew her lovingly at his side...

"Here they go again", Shlok rolled his eyes and Anjali blushed. "Brat", she smacked playfully at her son's back. "Mother I am going inside, when you and father finish your coochie cooing, please tell me the end of story, I am waiting", he smiled at his father who had a naughty glint in his eyes. "Shlok", Anjali warned. "Okay mother, father I am going", he shared a conspiratorial wink with her father and went inside, whooping and skippering.

"Now you where were we, yes you were asking me that I'll do what", he threw her a naughty look from the corner of his eyes. "Yes you'll do what", she smiled lovingly at him and began to slide her arms around his chest. "Yes that's what I like about you my lovely wife, you always read my mind so well", he flicked playfully at her small nose and then lifted her chin to gaze in her deep ocean like blue eyes.

He didn't need to tell her that how much he loved her. He could see the reflection of his love gazing at him from her warm eyes. "I know, you are the prince of my fairytale", she whispered, and going on tiptoe she curled her arms around his neck. He wrapped his arms tightly around her, crushing her to him, absorbing all her love and warmth inside his body. "My petite princess", he whispered affectionately, before bending his head to kiss her smiling lips...


"Wake up sleeping beauty, the fairytale ended", someone mocked, clicking his fingers infront of her shocked eyes. She squeezed her eyes once, thinking that surely it was her dream and that she would wake up anytime now. But when she opened them again she was still stuck in the same nightmare, the room was the same, her father was still struggling to free himself from his bindings and the Mafioso was still standing infront of her and sneering down into her face...

She tried to speak, but nothing save a croak came out of her dry and cracked lips. Everything was rushing past her, her memories of her childhood, playing with her daddy, enjoying the picnic with him, sitting on his lap, even the first word that came out of her mouth when she started to speak was dad.

She wanted to grab the collar of the sneering man and shook the life out of him, for introducing her to her life's bitter truth. She wanted to scream until the rafters shook or the sky burst open with her pain. She wanted to cry, till all the rivers in the world overflow with her tears. But she did nothing just stood there on jelly legs, gazing at the prince of her own fairytale who had cursed her into a stupefied state, a stone princess with her tears forever frozen on her eyelashes...

She had paid a great price for her belief and trust...


"Don't you want to know princess what I am going to do next?", he was asking. Shlok was calm now like the storm that had vented all his frustration, all his anger and had left only destruction in it's wake. Not a single word left her tongue, his storm had sucked in her ability to protest. Her lips looked as if sewn together, her poise of a vanquished one. "Cat got your tongue princess", he was mocking, trying to provoke her. But destroyed houses don't speak, only their condition shows what had been done to them and what the storm had taken from them...

"Fine with me don't speak a word, but aren't you curious that what I had done with your uncle Anksuh?", he questioned sardonically. He need not tell her that how much he hate them all including her, it was all there for her to see in his eyes, which were shooting venomous sparks at her...

"Okay I'll tell you what I've done with him, infact I'll show you", he was getting irritated with her nil response. He had thought that she would again become a snarling spitting kitten and would tear him to pieces, but here to his disappointment she had turned into a stone statue, with her dilated pupils staring transfixed at him. He could guess nothing whatsoever from her expressions, that what she was feeling now.

He took out his tab from his pocket and then searched for something. Finding it, he gave a soft whistle of triumph and shoved the tab into her lifeless hand. Her frozen pupils contracted and her clenched lips parted, she brought the trembling hand near her face to see what he wanted her to see. Nothing escaped her throat escape a gurgling sound, but her eyes widened with horror when she glanced at the screen...


"How did you like my creation princess, I changed his design, I know it's a little peculiar but still, I loved editing his anatomy, so meet your newly designed uncle Ankush", his laughter was laced with dark humor.

She looked at the picture with disbelief, it was Ankush she had recognized him from his boat shaped lips, the only part of his face that wasn't changed. All his face was disfigured beyond recognization. His bruised and swollen eyelids were closed and his hands were no longer there attached to his arms, someone had brutally destroyed his eyes and hacked of his hands. And on top of that he was sitting on the bare earth, with a shiny new begging bowl placed infront of him...

"What did you do to him?", at last she whispered hoarsely. "Nothing princess, changed a little of his interior, sent him to a new wonderland far away from this city and introduced him to his new profession , that is begging", he smiled sarcastically.

When she looked horrified, he clicked his tongue impatiently and drew her to him, by holding her numb arm. "He won't be coming back princess I sent him very faraway from here, nobody would recognize him now, with the way I have edited him", he wrapped his arm around her shoulder and began walking her lifeless form towards a sobbing Avdhoot...


"So tell me now princess, what should I do with your daddy dear, should I kill him right there or should I design him as Alice and send him to a new wonderland", his lips twisted in mock humor. Avdhoot's eyes had widened with fear at seeing bloodlust reflecting from his enemy's eyes, and he had again started to create a ruckus.

"No don't kill him please and what do you mean by designing him as Alice", she backed away from him, a feeling of unease was spreading down every inch of her trembling body. An expectant glint had begun to form in Avdhoot's eyes at his daughter's reply...

"You still defending your swine of a father", he bit out through clenched teeth. "You only have shown me the ring, if you knew about my father, you could have easily made a copy of it for you from any shop", she answered in a low voice, her mind had already accepted her father's crime, but her heart was still defending him.

To accept her father's crime was to kill her heart with her own hands. "Yes princess I could have but you must have seen it in his finger in older pictures, or in your childhood but not in newer pictures, he lost it long ago, near my mother's corpse", he snarled angrily.

Astha pursed her lips but said nothing. "And how the heck did I know that it was his ring princess? That was because he came two times to our house, first time was when I saw the ring on his finger and the second time he dropped it near my mother's corpse. I was only 8 years old then, you tell me how a child could make a copy of the ring and that too without seeing it", he defended himself angrily...

Astha fell silent a feelings of betrayal and defeat were beginning to seep through her bones. She staggered, but before she could fell, Shlok had caught her arm in one hand and with his other hand he removed the cloth from Avdhoot's mouth who had started to curse him hoarsely...


"I want to hear you scream while I hack off every part of your body", Shlok said cold-bloodedly. "So princess from where should I start? How about castrating him first, and converting him into Alice?", he threw a dangerous smile at her and took out a penknife from his pocket...

Before she could utter a single no, Avdhoot spat at him. Fear of castration and torture was tightening it's tentacles around him. Torture or painless death he had two choices so he chose the latter one. He wanted the man infront of him to kill him right there so he would be free of torture. "I loved shagging your sister you know, she moaned like a little piglet beneath me", he laughed nervously...

Shlok's jaw tightened painfully and he socked him in the face. Astha gave a horrified shriek, looking at her father as if he had somehow sprouted wings...

"And your mother didn't even put a struggle, when I stabbed her right through her heart", he laughed spitting out the blood from his mouth. Shlok gave him another punch on his face and then put the penknife on his throat, digging it in the throbbing vein which gives life. "No daddy, don't say that", she wailed and her knees gave way beneath her.

"Shut your mouth you f*****g b*****d", Shlok bit out through clenched teeth and dig the point of knife deeper in his skin, until blood droplets began forming on the pricked portion. "Kill me and end it right there", he spat out. "No, I'll not make it easy for you, you w***e son", Shlok smiled cruelly. "Kill me just like I killed all your family and destroyed all your dreams, kill me now", he shouted desperately, his eyes were glinting with maniacal light, spittle was forming on the corner of his lips...


"Stop it daddy", Astha moaned, covering her ears with her hands. "Do you know your father was a stubborn a*** he took a long time to break and when he broke down, he screamed only for his wife and son, tuh tuh, poor man", Avdhoot laughed hysterically...

"Provoke me as much as you want Avdhoot Kirloskar, I will not kill you , you'll beg me for it, but I'll not give you death", Shlok clasped his jaw in his hands, a murderous rage was contorting his face, making him look monstrous, inhuman...

"I took everything from you, your daughter is not your own now, your wife is almost dying, you are stripped of everything, but I promise you that you'll live, but that living will be more tortuous than death, you'll rot here till the end of your life", his whispered words said in a calm tone but there meaning was chillingly obvious...

"What did you do to my mother", Astha scrambled to her feet. "What the hell you did to Kalindi?", Avdhoot shouted desperately. "Nothing, I did nothing to her", he shrugged his shoulders nonchalantly.

"Whatever happened to her, you were the cause of it, she fell down the stairs and is now in coma", he continued in a flat tone...

"No I don't believe you", Avdhoot sputtered but Astha tugged at Shlok's arm. "Please tell me what had you done to her?", she asked tearfully. "I told you nothing, she is still in the hospital and for how long she will be alive I don't know and I don't care", he said exasperatedly, shrugging out of her hold.

"You are not human are you, you have not an ounce of compassion or sympathy inside you", she asked hoarsely. "No princess nothing, I feel nothing, thanks to your saintly daddy", his voice was brittle, lost like a person who had lost the treasure of his dreams and now no longer had a hope of finding them ever...

"Money talks you know, it was easy for me and to get everything and now your house, your father's business and everything of your's is mine, even I had bought Commissioner Siddarth Mehta's silence a long time ago, he won't interfere anymore in my matter, infact he was the one who told me about your whereabouts and helped me capture you from Prabakhar Joshi's house", he dropped another bomb in the shocked silence...

"My best friend", Avdhoot gasped with disbelief...

Astha felt as if someone was trying to gouge out her heart from inside her chest, tearing at her arteries and veins with a scalpel, replacing the warm blood with freezing ice. She was weightless sinking in the river of her own grief and despair, it's surface frosted over her head and encasing her forever in it's crystalline depths. She touched her chest to feel her beating heart, but it had turned into a block of ice, no longer beating, no longer giving life and no longer warm...

She turned her agonized eyes towards the Ice prince who was looking down at her with a knowing smile on his cold face. It was then that she realized that he had cursed her for a lifetime...

She wasn't Astha anymore, he had taken away her identity, her pride, her trust...

She was the Ice princess the captive of Ice Prince...

She was him...




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Edited by mahirmukhtar - 11 years ago
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Thanks a lot dear superb update!!!!!

Truly exciting, n thanks for the pm

plz plz plz update soon dear.
from the whole week, i was eagerly waiting for ur update,

thanks dear again for everything.





well done, waiting!!!!! 😉 😛
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Originally posted by: mizanoor

Thanks a lot dear superb update!!!!!

Truly exciting, n thanks for the pm

plz plz plz update soon dear.
from the whole week, i was eagerly waiting for ur update,

thanks dear again for everything.





well done, waiting!!!!! 😉 😛


Aww thanks sweetie! 😳 Thanks a lot for your appreciation buddy!

I also updated dear one day ago chapter 33! 😆😉

Will update soon sweetie! 😉

Thanks dear for the rose! 😳
Edited by mahirmukhtar - 11 years ago
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Ausum update:) thanks for pm:)
Sorry like button is not working:( actually i'm accesing with mobile:(
Anyway 1st part shlok's happy moments:) really nicely writtten:)
Next astha has truly become ice prices:(
so shlok is quite successful what he wanted to do with her??:(
So ankush is dead:):) i'm quite glad:)
avdhoot was provokig shlok to kill him bcoz he knows shlok won't be killing him so easily:)
I appreciate shlok idea u know:);)
but poor kalindi and astha:(
now he has taken everything from avdhoot like bussinesd,etc??hmm
Bomb on avdhoot, his best frnd cheated on him to save his own back:):)
I was enjoying on avdhoot condition:)
So what happens now? What will shlok will do with astha after this???
Bcoz what he wanted his mission is almost accomplished?? i guesd
astha mind has agreed but her heart is defending her dad:(
What happened to other 10? I hppe thet r no more:)
Thanks for the darkest dose evil witch:):)
i really liked the last line:)perfect:)
update soon:)
A big hug:)

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liked the part Astha ask Shlok about the ring...it can be duplicate ring...can't blame her ..her trust for her dad and her dad's love on her...

can't wait to know what Shlok going to do with Advoot and Astha...
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Originally posted by: maitydeblina

Ausum update:) thanks for pm:) Thanks deblina, my pleasure dear! 😳

Sorry like button is not working:( actually i'm accesing with mobile:( No problem buddy! 😉

Anyway 1st part shlok's happy moments:) really nicely writtten:) Thanks dearu! 😳
Next astha has truly become ice prices:(

so shlok is quite successful what he wanted to do with her??:( Yep he succeeded to turn her into cold and emotionless!

So ankush is dead:):) i'm quite glad:) No dear Ankush is not dead, but is begging somewhere, with no eyes and hacked off hands!

avdhoot was provokig shlok to kill him bcoz he knows shlok won't be killing him so easily:)
I appreciate shlok idea u know:);)

but poor kalindi and astha:( Yeah dear they are his family after all and can't see Avdhoot in this condition! these bloody criminals should be banned from having families! 😡

now he has taken everything from avdhoot like bussinesd,etc??hmm
Bomb on avdhoot, his best frnd cheated on him to save his own back:):)
I was enjoying on avdhoot condition:) Yeah dear just like he bought Prabakhar's silence, Shlok bought Siddharth's silence! 😉

So what happens now? What will shlok will do with astha after this???
Bcoz what he wanted his mission is almost accomplished?? i guesd Yes dear what he wanted he got, now the ball will be in Astha's court, and what Shlok will do with her! 😉 It will be disclosed in the next update!

astha mind has agreed but her heart is defending her dad:( Yeah he is still her dad, that is the fact that she can't change ever that she is linked to him by blood!

What happened to other 10? I hppe thet r no more:) Yes they no longer live!

Thanks for the darkest dose evil witch:):) My evil pleasure buddy! 😉
i really liked the last line:)perfect:) Thanks a lot deblina! 😃
update soon:) Will do so dear! 😉

A big hug:) Hug accepted dearu! 🤗

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Originally posted by: vj3072

liked the part Astha ask Shlok about the ring...it can be duplicate ring...can't blame her ..her trust for her dad and her dad's love on her...

can't wait to know what Shlok going to do with Advoot and Astha...


Thanks a lot VJ! 😃 Yep Astha's questions were right, she couldn't bring herself to trust Shlok so easily on top of her father. For every child there parents are perfect but parents are only human beings for other people! They make mistakes. Everyone is a parent somehow but still the world is not perfect!

Will update soon dear! 😉
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Thanks dear! 😃
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Thanks dear! 😃

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