Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 22

really beautiful chapter
finally they gt married
loved it
pls cont soon

Wow zaya married and GULLU agreed...that was fast...

Osum part finally zaya r married


One request plzz make it 20 parts plzz sumi n tanu .

N sumi tu hai toh romance toh banta hai na ..
Update soon
Thnks for da pm

Part 14

Aaliya : kya hai zain?? Kyun knock kar rahe ho?? Mei shower le rahi hoon.. Wait karo bahar*zain keeps knocking*
Zain : MEZ plz yaar jaldhi karo.. Mujhe washroom jaana hai
Aaliya : 10 mins ruko
Zain : god Aaliya.. Shower ke paas parda hai nuh.. Usse use karo.. Mei tumhare paas nahi aaunga.. Apna kaam khatam karke nikal jaaunga... Plz plz plz jaldhi karo*literally begs*
Aaliya : par
Zain : plz aaliya i beg u
Aaliya : theek hai .. Par ek shart par
Zain : shart?? Kaisi shart?
Aaliya : tum shower ki taraf na dekhoge aur na hi mere paas aane ki koshish karoge.. Manzoor?
Zain : manzoor*smirks and rolls his eyes*
Aaliya : mei darwaaza kholne ke 5 min baad andar aana tum*comes n unlocks the door n runs towards the shower n pulls the curtains to cover her*
Zain : shauhar hoon tumhara koi qair thodi jo itna sharmaa rahi ho.. Aur waise bhi sab kuch toh maine already dekh liya toh ab kya chupa rahi ho??*smirks n enters the bathroom*
Aaliya : shut up zain.. Apna kaam khatam karo aur jaao yahaan se*scared*
Zain : Nahi gaya toh??*smirks*
Aaliya : zain plzz.. Shower ke paas mat aana
Zain : aur agar agaya toh??*stands on the other side of th curtain*
Aaliya : Zain no plzzz*clutches her towel *
Zain : agaya*hataofies the parda n luks at her...*
Aaliya : zain chale jaao yahaan se??
Zain : kyun??*gets into the shower*
Aaliya : zain agar tum nahi gayye toh mei ..*keeps moving backwards*
Zain : toh tum??*keeps moving towards her*
Aaliya : toh mei tumhe geela kardungi*threatens to open the shower*
Zain : tum aisa kuch nahi karogi*keeps moving towards her*
Aaliya : kar diya toh??
Zain : nahi karogi
Aaliya : itna aitbaar mujhpar?
Zain : khud se bhi zyaada
Aaliya : toh theek hai*opens the shower*
Zain : what the*shocked.. He's all drenched*
Aaliya : kahaan tha maine paas mat aana*runs away from the bathroom.. Zain runs behind her n they fall on the bed*
Zain : kahaan jaaogi mujhse bachke?*tucks her hair back of her ear*
Aaliya : aaj kal tum kuch zyaada hi naughty hogayye ho*blushes*
Zain : ab toh license hai mere paas tumhare saath naughty hone ke kiye*pecks her lips.. Aaliya blushes*
Lo agayi kabab mei haddi*phne rings*
Aaliya : shut up zain*gets up n recieves the call*
Asalam wa alaikum Ammi..kaisi hai aap?mei bilkul theek hoon.. Jee dinner?? Mei zain se poochleti hoon ek min*keeps the phne aside*
Zain ammi keh rahi hai ki aaj raat ka dinner hum unke saath kare
Zain : okay*smiles*
Aaliya : jee ammi hum aajayenge.. Nahi abhi colg jaane ke kiye tayyar ho rahi thi.. Hum aajayenge raat ko.. Allah hafiz*keeps the phne*
Aaliya : zain abdullah.. Tayyar hojaaye.. Pehle colg phir ghar.. Busy day*winks*
Zain : aur hamara honeymoon*makes a baby face.. Aaliya comes towards him*
Aaliya : Raat ko manaayenge.. Aur kal colg bhi nahi jaayenge*kisses him on his cheek n runs to the bathroom to change.. Zain grins*



COLLEGE

Ayesha : hey Mr&Mrs. Zain Abdullah..*hugs aaliya*
Aaliya : di.. Stop*blushes*
Ayesha : mujhe toh laga ki tum dono agle ek mahine tak colg hi nahi aaoge aur tum dono toh doosre hi din aagayye?? Majra kya hai*winks*
Zain : kuch nahi.. Tumhari behn ko nikaah ke baad padhai ka shauk chada hai*makes an ajeeb face*
Ayesha : toh tum kya chahte ho ki woh kya karre?*
Zain : ghar par mere saath rahe aur bacche paida kare*grins*
Aaliya : zain*hits him and ayesha laughs*
Ayesha : chalo .. Family planning baad mei karna.. Abhi class jao
aaliya : jee.. Allah hafiz.. Raat ko milenge*leaves*


Aaliya : tum pagal ho kya?? Di ke saamne kya bole jaa rahe the?
Zain : kya bola maine?
Aaliya : kya bola tumne?? Maarungi aainda kisi aur ke saamne aisi baate ki toh

Yasmeen : hey.. Congratulations.. I'm sooo happy for u guyz.. Finally.. Mr&mrs. Zain Abdullah huh?? God *grp hug*
Aaliya : thanx yasmeen
Zain : tum kab mauka dogi hume yeh sab karne*winks*
Yasmeen : shut up zain.. Class chalo sab tum dono ka wait kar rahe hai.. Chalo chalo chalo*they enter the classroom*



CONGRATULATION*all of them scream in unison and burst balloon*
Zain-Aaliya : thanku thanku*hugs everybody*

Zain : this is embarassing.. Saare teachers bhi "have a happy married life" wish kar rahe hai
Aaliya : tumhe hi jaldhi thi nikaah karne ki.. Ab bhukto*laughs*
Zain : haan tumhe toh kuch farak hi nahi padhta nuh
Aaliya: ab jaane do zain.. Ghar chalo.. Ready hokar ammi ke yahaan jaana hai*


Zain : kya pehno mei??*stands in front of their wardrobe*
Aaliya : dhoti kurta.. Pagal ho kya.. Formals pehno.. *combs her hair*
Zain : shaadi ke baad pehli baar tumhare ghar jaa rahaa hoon.. Acha toh lagna chahiye nuh
Aaliya : tum kuch b pehno ache hi lagoge.. Chalo go n change*pushes him into the bathroom*


Zain : aaliya mujhe dar lag rahaa hai
Aaliya : mere parents hai.. Sher nahi jo tumhe khaa jaayenge.. Chill zain.. Kuch nahi hoga.. Chalo*they enter the house*

Shabana : aap kya iraada kya hai ghulam sahab?? Woh log aate hi honge
Ghulam: aane do.. Bas 4din ki chandni.. Uske baad aisa jaal bhijaaunga ki unki zindagi nei andhera hi andhera hoga*evil smile.. Zain aaliya shocked*

Fantastic update!!
Dusre din hi college bhej diya:-(:-(
Ghulam...urghh...
Awesome update
Continue soon

Amazing update ...
Shaadi ke baad hi colg and evry1 wishing :)
Hate ghulam ...urghh
Continue soon !!
N thnxx for pm ...,,!!

Chapter 12- 14 its nice.

Osum update sumi ..
Shadi k doosre din hi college

This ghulam i hate him more now
Update soon
Thanks for da pm

finally ZaYa are married now.
love their little romance.
gulam and shabana hate them hope ZaYa understand their plan now.
thanks for pm.