Broken Promises ~ Collab Tanya N Sumaiya (Chap 16 n 17 Updtd 18th Apr) - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing part ...
Finally aliya found out d truth ...!!
Zaya nikkah...wow...
Waiting for next part ...
Continue soon ...!!
N thnxx for pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part..
Why did u left there..
Urgg ye ghulam ab kya karega..
Cont soon tanu..
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
finally aaliya knows her parents n zeeshan's truth
waiting 4 d next part
do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh shit y did u left it there

Awsome update lovely chptr

Thnks for da pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally Aaliya knows the truth
ShaLam are so disgusting
Awesome update 👍🏼
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh no...
Why did u end it there?????
Oh god... it is so intriguing...
Amazing chapter Sumaiya!!!!👏
Loved it...
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nikaah Hall
Aaliya's POV

"Qu-" I was about to say that word when I heard a familiar voice interrupt. I looked around to see my Abbu standing. Ammi stood beside him at the door holding his arm as if trying to calm him down while she steamed in anger.

"Ruk jaiye Qazi Sahb! Yeh nikaah nhi ho skta. Aap hi bataye, mei iska Abbu hu, kya yeh ladki meri marzi ke khilaf nikaah kr skti hai? Kya yeh munasib hoga?" Abbu asked as he walked into the hall.

"Nahi. Yeh bilkul nahi ho skta." Qazi Sahb replied.

"Qazi Sahb, kya ek Abbu ka do pyaar krne waale ko alag krna munasib hai? Kya ek Abbu ka apni beti ka zabardasti nikaah krwana munasib hai?" I said crying. I broke down. Zain came and held my shoulder. I hid my face in his chest.

"Nahi beti. Bilkul nahi. Jodiyan toh Allah banate hai. Humara kaam toh bas unhe milane ka hai. Sahb," Qazi Sahb turned to Abbu. "Aapko inki shaadi se ab bhi koi pareshaani hai?"


"NAHI." I pulled back from Zain's embrace at Abbu's words. I ran to Abbu and hugged him tightly. Zain followed and Abbu hugged us both together.


H.E.A.V.E.N



5 Days Later
Aaliya's POV

"Zaaaiiinnn" I squealed as it was already 9. I had to go to college remember? And yeh mahashe mere upar se hatne ka naam hi nahi le rhe the. "Please jaanu, uth jao. We have to go to college also na baby. Chalo, utho!"

"No sone do na." He held me closer and trapped me beneath him. I heaved a sigh. Agar yeh Zain Abdullah hai toh mei bhi Aaliya Zain Abdullah hu! One extra word than him!

"Jaanu, agar abhi uth gye toh pkka kiss milegi." I said smiling. He immediately rose his head from my neck and looked into my eyes.

"Tum itni khoobsurat kese ho?" Zain leaned in and kissed my forehead.

"Tumhari wajah se." I smiled. "Now get off me Zain! Mujhe jaana hai. It's already late. Class miss hojayegi. Pls, uth jao!"

"Pehle kiss." He demanded.

"Zain! Kitni kiss? Jaldi chalo pls!"

"Nahi. Pehle kiss me!" He demanded again.

"Pls Zain. Bahaut late hogaya-" He smacked his lips onto mine. That was the most divine kiss we ever had. A 5 minutes later I pushed him and walked into the bathroom to get ready. Whilst he sat on the bed smiling at me.



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Ok Sumaiya, over to you.
Guys, sorry for late update.

There will be 15 or 20 parts, if Sumi is ready.
Or if she isn't, we will stop at 15. Ok?



Lots of love,
-Tani. <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cute update
Do continue soon plzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb chapters girls , finally they got married and please if you continue it till 20 parts , i would love to read it !

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