MG FF -Tum Mille......THREAD 2 LINK ON PG 1 APR 12 - Page 45

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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely emotional cute superb update..te way maan asking geet to join again and geet too agree as she want only my maan ki happiness, really she is innocent angel..te way my maan thinking how easy she forget te incident and accept his words..he wonder how can be she so innocent was lovely..te way geet want to bring all happiness in my maan ki life thinking abt dadi and brought flowers and seeing my maan she got scared and my maan ki concern seeing her hurt was lovely emotional cute..te way my man searching and got shock seeing her working without having lunch and his authority on her and his words tum tho be mine was lovely cute..i love te update so much
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Posted: 10 years ago
maan is changing...good going geet...

lovely update...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

continue soon d nxt prt...

eagerly waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
geet saw the other side of maan
he gives her full liberty to work on her own
she is happy when he agreed to help her
maan n geet going 2 have lunch

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update maan trying to mend his mistake geet is confused waiting for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part..
Geet presented Maan roses..
Maan kept one rose for himself and bandages her hand also..
Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part dear...maan is changing slowly slowly...
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Part - 43

Maan takes the lunch bag and serves for both...

Geet looks at her plate and looks at Maan...

Maan is just looking at Geet...

Geet waits for him to start, but Maan just wants to see her eat...

Maan: kya dekhthi ho? shuru karo

Geet starts to eat...

She finds it very spicy and she couldn't do anything as Maan is sitting infront and watching...

Geet tries to finish off soon...

She hurriedly eats her food and tears run down her cheeks as she couldn't bear the spice, it's too hot for her ...

Maan is puzzled and finds Geet struggling to eat the food...

Maan finds that something is wrong and he catches hold of her hand and takes a bite himself...

Maan couldn't swallow a bite, it's too spicy...

He takes the water and gives it to Geet...

Geet grabs the bottle and finishes it off...

Maan: ye toh bahut hi teeka hai

Geet nods her head ...

Maan: tumne pehle hi bathaya kyun nahi

Geet again nods her head but this time the other way...nahi nahi...

Maan: Geet, mein tumse kuch pooch raha hoon

Maan gets angry...

Geet takes a paper and writes...

Maan: aaj tummari maun vradh hai kya?

Geet nods her head...

Maan: Geeet

Geet shows the paper...

Aap ne hi mujhe chup rehne ke liye kaha hai, ek aur sabt nahi...

Maan: what? Geet, tum toh abhi bhi bachi ho, ab tum bol sakthi

Geet: ho haaa ho haaa, aap itna teeka kaise kathe ho? issiliye aapko itna gussa aatha hai, mein DAdi se kehthi hoon ki kal se aapko bina mirchi ke khana banaye, tabhi aapka gussa kam hoga, haina babaji, ab aap ko khana hai toh khalo, mein isse nahi kah sakthi, mujhe na lassi peena hai, ohhh

Maan thinks that it's better she keeps her mouth shut...

Maan: ye khao, teek ho jayega

Maan gives her Cadbury silk...

Geet: mein kya bachi hoon?

Maan: haan, tum toh badi bachi ho

Geet snatches it from Maan and enjoys it like a kid...

Maan keeps admiring her joyful expressions...

Maan could keep on watching her like this for his whole lifetime...

That's what makes him happy and satisfied...

Maan ko aur kuch nahi chahiye, Maan bas Geet ki iss Hansee ko kabhi khona nahi chahtha...

Geet finishes her lunch with the chocolate itself...

Geet: bahut achchi hai

Maan: tumme pasand hai?

Geet: bahut pasand hai

Maan: ab jao, apna kaam karo, ab tera dimag bahut achche se kaam karega

Geet: par aap ka dimag abhi bhi kaam nahi karega

Maan: kya?

Geet: aap ne kuch bhi khaya nahi haina?

Maan: ab toh mera phet bar gaya

Geet: kaise?

Maan: jab mann kush ho jaatha toh phir aadmi ko kuch nahi chahiye, khana bhi

Geet ko kuch samaj mein nahi aatha...

Geet: toh mein chalthi hoon

Geet leaves...Maan has forget his meeting...

Adi knocks...Maan is still sitting there thinking about Geet...

Adi: Maan sir

Maan: haan Adi

Adi: aapki meeting'maan looks at his watch...it's 3 pm...what was he doing all this time?

Maan: Adi, tum jao, mein aatha hoon

Maan hurries to the meeting...he has never been late...

First time he is late, all thanks to Geet handa...

But Maan is only happy to be late for he wouldn't miss the time he spent with Geet for any stupid meeting...

Now Maan knows his preferences...it's Geet and Geet only...not his boring work...

Maan turns into this romantic hero...but Geet doesn't understand his feelings...

She is still immature and doesn't know what's happened to Maan...

Maan keeps calling Geet often...

Sometimes for his black coffe which Geet has now mastered to make credit MSK himself...

And as usual Geet keeps bumping into Maan and Maan enjoys all those moments very much...

Once when they had a head bump Geet immediately repeats it...

Maan is loving it...and is puzzled...

Maan: Geet, ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: sir, aaise dubara nahi karthe toh aap ke shir se woh nikhal aayega

Maan: woh kya?

Geet: woh heer, ghay aur janwaron ko hotha haina?

Maan: horns?

Geet: haan, horn, you will grow horn on your head sir

Maan: so, you don't want to have a single horn

Geet: kya?

Maan: dubara issiliye karthe haina ki do do horns grow hojaye

Geet: aap toh buddu ho sir, aaise karne se sab teek ho jaatha

Maan: achcha?

Maan deliberately bumps his head on Geet's...

Geet: sir

It's hurting na?

Maan: Geet, ab dubara nahi karni?

Geet: sir, ye kya kar rahe ho aap?

Maan: sach mein Geet, socho tum ek horn ke saath kaise dikhoge? Bahut achchi

Geet: Maan sir, aap bahut bhure ho gaye ho

Maan: mujhe kuch nahi hoga, lekhin tum sochlo Geet

Geet: kya?

Maan: mein toh ye sab ko nahi mantha, issiliye mein bach jaoonga, lekhin tum toh raat bar sochthe rahogi aur kal subha patha nahi kya ho saktha?

Geet knows that Maan is trying to fool her...

Geet: aap joot bol rahe ho

Maan: toh teek hai, tum jaa sakthi ho

Geet hesitates...

Maan: kya hua?

Geet: kuch nahi

Geet leaves still thinking about that...

She is little scared...agar aaisa kuch ho jaatha toh...

The whole day Geet thinks only about her horns!

Nahi, babaji, ab mein kya karoon?

It's time to leave...

Geet waits for Pinky to come...

But Maan comes to see her...

Geet : aap?

Maan: Geet, ye kya ho gaya hai tumme?

Geet is shocked...

Geet: mujhe kuch nahi hua hai?

Maan: hare, ye tummare shir mein kya hai?

Geet bahut pareshaan hojaathi...

Maan comes near her and Geet looks at him in confusion...

Maan gets closer and closer, he loves such chances, he can merily admire his Mishty, itne paas paas aane se Maan ko bahut maza aatha...

Maan looks into her eyes...her beautiful eyes...

Maan takes off a piece of paper from her head...

Geet is relieved...ye th kamakaam mujhe darathe rehthe hai...

Maan: tum toh bahut dar gayi ho, haina Geet?

Geet: nahi toh, aaisa kissne kaha?

Maan: ye tere ankhen ne mujhe batahdiya ki tum kitna darthi ho

Geet: nahi nahi

Maan: tum ab joot bhi bolthi ho?

Geet: woh, babaji mujhe maaf kardo

Geet closes her eyes and murmers...

Maan is enjoying every bit of this...

Geet babaji se maafi mangthi hai...

Maan uses this opurtunity and makes it even...

He has hit hard in his anxiety and Geet gets angry with him...

Geet: aaah, Maan sir, ye bahut galat hai, aap bar bar kyun takrathe ho? aur mera shir dukh raha hai

Maan: bahut dard hotha hai Geet?

Maan is worried...

Geet: haan

Maan: dikhao mujhe

Maan looks at her swollen head...

Maan bahut pareshaan ho jaatha...

Geet: kuch nahi hoga

Man: Geet, isse aaise hi chodoge toh blood clot hoga, aao mere saath

Geet: mein teek hoon sir

Maan: tum aaise nahi manoge

Maan lifts her in his arma and takes her to the pantry...

Office hours katam ho gaye toh koi nahi hai...

Maan takes the ice cubes and applies on her swollen head...

Geet: aaah

Maan: Geet, kuch nahi hoga, bas do minute, teek ho jayega

Geet feels the chillness of the ice and she shivers...

Maan takes off his coat and covers her...

Geet loves the concern and she wishes that Maan remains like this forever...

She wants this attention, she wants this comfort, she wants to be loved by Maan for the rest of her life...she wants to stay with Maan forever...

Maan: ab kaise hai?

Geet doesn't feel the pain at all, aal her pain vanished the moment Maan touched her...

Geet: ab teek hai

Maan: chalo, aaj tum mere saath hi aao

Geet: mein chali jaoongi

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Ab tum kudh mere saath aathi ho ya?

Maan steps forward to lift her...

Geet steps back...

Geet: nahi, aap jao, mein aathi hoon

Geet follows him and Maan takes her with him...

Part44

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan wants to be with geet😊
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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely very superb wow cute update..te way my maan having lunch with his geet and felt and seeing her eating mirchy and his concern and geet ki mouna vrath was lovely cute..te way my maan drooling his geet eating choco,wow my buddhu maan ki shell broke coz of of his geet ki innocent now he became love sick puppy.. bechari geet , maan u scaring her with u gussa too and now with soft side..te way my maan hitting her head and scaring her with horn, bechari got swell, maan u having a hard steel body and hiting u r geet baby..i love they cute little scenes..i love te update so so much yar
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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